DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ektay11

its gr8

plz cont soon

dont worry. will update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh so cute ma-beta relations😛😉...too funny😆...
lovely update anusha..keep it up...plzz update soon..&send pm too😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
**i'm still reading so reserved***
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_sweet

oh so cute ma-beta relations😛😉...too funny😆...
lovely update anusha..keep it up...plzz update soon..&send pm too😳

thanks for appreciating. dont worry. will always let you know when i update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: generator

**i'm still reading so reserved***

ok. magar comment karna zaroor.
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Posted: 16 years ago

yaar !

is pe koi serail banayoo..
chaloo gals mil kar hum sab apna ek production house kholte hain...
donation sab log mil kar mang lenge..
par anu dear..ek request hai pls ises common college love story mat banane dena..somewhere in my heart dislike college love story..plzz don't get my chotu veer distracked too much..ok..
after aal i'm worried abt him..
aur vo agni..anay ke peeche veer se pehle mujhse maar khayega..
nivi mom completely kiran kher...
liked her aatitude..
and anaya's temper line jammen and aashaman was truly realistic...
well done girl keep it up !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
i liked very very much this part!! it was so sweet, cute,and adorable!! so loving!! 😳

Originally posted by: anushababli

PART 7:-

HOME SWEET HOME

Veer finally reached his home. Dharam had already reached and had parked the car in their private lawn. Being born in a very rich family, Dharam and Veer never had to worry about anything. Neither did Dharam's dad have to worry about any business problems like recession etc. Dharam and Veer got whatever they wanted whenever they wanted. But they never showed off their wealth and preferred going to a public college instead of a private one.

uhm.. wat 1 question, do DV live in the same house? 😛 i mean, the whole family, in the same home? it wud be really nice.. ⭐️. well, so their life is stressless, better said, their parents life is stressless and peaceful, thats nice 😃
Veer closed the gate behind him and entered their private bungalow (Something very difficult to possess in Mumbai.) The bungalow was a beautiful looking four storied white coloured house facing the sea. As Veer went inside, few girls having their daily jog looked at him and kept staring (No wonder!!!)😉. Veer was used to girls looking at him and so was Dharam. But Veer never had any feelings for them. He was least bothered about girls. All he wanted was an empty road to ride his bike😆. Dharam never liked anyone before Sia.
woooww!! facing the sea.. so beautiful! 😍 u see, i dont have sea even in ma town.. .. anyways, looks like a nice house. 😛. 😆 girls starring at veer, nothing new. 😆 again.. the bike omg!!.. his 1st and true and only love.❤️ his bike.. 😆😆
and dharams 1st crush.. thats so sweet. 😳

Veer walked inside still very angry with the way Ananya was behaving with him. (Well he better get used to it!!)😆. Veer entered the house, threw his bag on the enormous couch in the gorgeously furnitured living room and went into the state of the art kitchen having all the equipments any top chef would need and opened the glossy silver door of the refrigerator, removing a bottle of ice cold water. He began to drink when all of a sudden someone screamed in a melodramatic voice, "Beta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........."

hey.. im noticing that u put more dedication to the scenario description and all right?? 😛 👏 well, well done. 😃 along wid inspiration a story also needs technical care. 😃 ⭐️
haila.. "beta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:.............." 😆😆😆
Veer almost spat the water which he was about to drink. He turned back and shrugged. It was his very filmy mother, Nivriti or Niv as she liked to be called.😆
🤣.. "NIV!!???"
frankly speaking, i also imagined a modern type of mom for veer. 😛; but less dramatic and filmy.. 😆😆

Nivriti:- Beta!! Kahan gaye the tum? Tumhe pataa hain main kitni ghabaraa gayi thi? Tumhare bhai toh kabka laut chukka. Magar tumhe toh apni maa ki koi fikar nahin naa?

😆😆 wat the... 😕😆
Veer:- Maa.....

Nivriti:- Nahin, kuch mat kaho.... Jab se tumhare dad marr gaye tab se tumne meri baat sunna he chod diya.

oh.. [was my 1st reaction]
Veer:- Maa!! Dad mere paidaa hone se pehle he guzar gaye.🤣
omgggg!!! 🤣
well, besides of craking up, i felt happy for veer, at his attitude towards his dads death. 😛 i guess, he just got used in all this time. 15 years right?

Nivriti:- Chup kar badhmaash. Main kitna darr gayi thi. Ab tum mujhe kabhi chodke mat jaana beta.

😆😆😆 well..
Veer lied down on the couch.

Veer:- Maa!! Kitna over acting karti ho. Kabhi toh dhang se acting kiya karo.🤣

😆 that one was very good.
Nivriti:- Arre!! Ja ja... Tumhe kya pataa acting kya hota hain. Jitna jyadaa emotion ho utna jyadaa accha hota hain.
really..?.. 😆

Veer:- Yeh emotion nahin, tension hain.🤣

😆😆😆 i can understand him
Nivriti:- Veer, tumhe kya pataa? Agar maine tumhe paidaa nahin kiya hota naa, toh Kajol ki jagah mujhe chunaa gaye hota Pyaar Toh Hona He Tha ke liye. Waise Kajol ne bhi thekh thakh kaam kiya tha.
😆😆😆😆 that one reminds me of OSO. 😛 😆 wat a mom.. fit for veer 😃

Veer:- Mom, agar aap chune gaye hote toh film ka naam Flop Toh Hona He Tha huaa hota.🤣

😆
Nivriti:- Tum aise he mera mazaak udaate ho Veer.

Veer:- But I still love you Mom.

He went and hugged his Mom. (Aww!!!!!!!!!!!)☺️

aawwww!!! and how not? who wud not love that mother 😳
Nivriti:- Bas Bas!! Mujhse accha toh tu acting karta hain. Ab yahan baith aur mujhe tere college ke pehle din ke baare main bataa.
😆 aaaaww!! 😳

Veer:- College accha tha Maa.

woho.. finally sumthing normal 😕😆
Nivriti:- Aur vahaan ke log?

Veer:- Bahut he confusing hain Maa. [😳😳😳]

Nivriti:- Kyun????

Veer:- Kuch log bahut acche hain aur kuch log bahut rude hain. [😆so cute! 😳]

Nivriti:- Ye kiske baare main baath kar rahe ho Veer?

Veer:- For example, there is Akshay and there is his very irritating twin sister Ananya. She is just behind me. Har baath pe mujhe irritate karti hain. And Akshay is so sweet on the other hand.

Nivriti:- Its alright Veer. You come across these kind of people. Just give her some time. Maybe, she will start appreciating you.

i thought she wud tell sumthing like pyar ka shuruat issi se hi hota hei aur sumthing.. but i like her in this way only 😃 i dont want veer and ananya falling in luv so soon, i mean, not realizing and accepting it atleast.
Veer:- Rehne do Maa. Zameen phathh jaaegi, aasmaan thuthh jaaega, magar Ananya ka attitude nahin badalega.🤣
😆😆 now whos exaggerating? 😆

Nivriti:- Itna melodramatic banne ki koi zaroorat nahin.

exactly.. 😛
Veer:- Main aap he ka beta hoon. Melodramatic he rahunga.🤣
😆😆😆 lol..

Nivriti raised her hand to hit him but Veer ran away from there.

Nivriti:- Chup badmaash. Jaldi mooh dholo aur khaana khaane ke liye aa jaao.

She looked at Veer's bag lying on the couch and shrugged.

Nivriti:- Yeh ladka bhi naa, kabhi nahin sudarega.

She picked up his bag and went to his room.

so loving and sweet!! 😛

anyways, next time i wont give u full edit 😛 just telling u. this time i gave coz i was suppossed to comment on sunday.. and forgot it.
anyways, update soon, as soon as possible. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: generator

yaar !

is pe koi serail banayoo..
chaloo gals mil kar hum sab apna ek production house kholte hain...
donation sab log mil kar mang lenge..☺️
par anu dear..ek request hai pls ises common college love story mat banane dena..somewhere in my heart dislike college love story..[Dont worry yaar. This isnt a stupid college love story. Heck, its not even a love story right now. Love story toh bahut door ki baat hain. Bahut saara mirch masala baaki hain] plzz don't get my chotu veer distracked too much..ok..[Hamara Veer aur distracted? Kabhi nahin. I would rather close the ff than side track Veer]
after aal i'm worried abt him.. [We all are dear]☺️
aur vo agni..anay ke peeche veer se pehle mujhse maar khayega.. [Usko maar khaane ke liye he paisa diya jaata hain]😆
nivi mom completely kiran kher...
liked her aatitude.. [Thanku. Didnt want to make a rona dhona mom]
and anaya's temper line jammen and aashaman was truly realistic...
well done girl keep it up !!

Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

i liked very very much this part!! it was so sweet, cute,and adorable!! so loving!! 😳
anyways, next time i wont give u full edit 😛 just telling u. this time i gave coz i was suppossed to comment on sunday.. and forgot it.
anyways, update soon, as soon as possible. 😃

Thank you so much. I love full edit comments. Love to read your reactions. But it is alright. You cant get that much of time all the time you know
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rahi jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to edit? Waiting.
Still waiting

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