'The Haunting of Ms. Kripa'.Last pt,Epilogue/pg181 - Page 6

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Pallu Di!

That was an awesome part! Your vivid descriptions of the dark, isolated forest had my heart skip a beat as I imagined it all in my head--the leaves scrunching under AK's feet as they walked, the owls hooting and all...It was very well penned down!!! I've told you before Di that you are a very imaginative and talented writer...Everything was in perfect ambiance...

I'm seriously loving the way you are taking this story...

Hmm...Ek hi mulaqat mein AK can't resist looking at each other...lol..I can't wait for the sparks to fly between them!

Awww..Kripa held on to Angad in the forest..LOL...So cuteee! I loved the line he gave after that " Agaar app chahte hain, then you can hold on to me"---I know I would hold on to him..lol...

WOW, that part where Kripa felt a cold hand touch her gave me like goosebumps...If I was in place of Kripa, I would have fainted..Kripa sure is strong and brave...

Hmm..I wonder what happened to Tina...How did she dissapear and all..is this really all Kripa's imagination? Too many questions you have to answer Di as the story unfolds..

Beautiful Di! Continue soon! I will be looking forward to your Multistarrer FF when you finish AJT.--Who are the other couple making their appearance in the FF--give us a hint na please? LOL..I will make time to read all your AK fics too!

I hope you continue whenever time permits! Please pray for me as I submitted two of my Uni apps...I hope I get into Baylor U...I need best wishes from everyone! 😊

Anita

why is shimla always involved in a scary story lmaoooo
hhehe i knew itttt...angad is incharge of tinas case!!!!
wooooo ak met!!!!
woo love at first sight:P:P
hahaha hes prolly finkin kripa is insaneeee
but theyr elookin for her together...this will b fun...i hope she gets scared and hugs angad:p
wooo she gt long eyelashes lyk meeee:p
omg they found tinas scarf:O:O:O:O but did she really feel someones fingers/?
ak spending the night in the forest...that wud b cute:P:p
haha gosh im loving the suspense in this ff man...with every part i get mre hooked!!!

fab part di

Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey....fabbb part....loved angads entry....hot as always...hmmm both a-k cnt resist admirin eachoder.....omggg the forest part was reli kreepi...surrounded by trees n darknesss ....awwww poor kripa skared walkin ryt nex tu angad.....n angad being cheeky telling her hi dont mynd if she clung to him.....hmmmm tinaz scarf...wnda were da leads to....cont sooon plz

oh my such an awesome part

Hi,

Just started reading you ff...amazing part...loved it....

Do continue soon... Could you plz PM me when you update your next part?

Take care,

Pari

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks Jake! Its good to see u here! 😃

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

I can just imagine angad as a detective.....his persona fits his character really well...

finally AK meet...and they were admiring each other at the first meeting....boy are they going to have hard time concentrating on the case loll..

Kripa really seems like a confident woman....its not easy for everyone to act smart by noting down the place and everything in a situation like this....but Kripa was intelligent enough to not act hyper and actually use her brains at that time and note down where she saw Tina...

Looks like Tina was just like any other teenager...who hates following rules...and live in imprisonment...Of course one reason of her not following rules and getting trouble all the time is because of her father's wealth...but i think there is more to Tina's like than that....Maybe somewhere along the line her father wasn't able to give her the time and love she needed....since he already has soo many responsibilities being the mayor and all...I wonder if he even had a clue about his daughter's social life....maybe that lack of love also played a role in Tina becoming a spoiled brat....well we'll just have to take a closer look into her life to know everything...

Kripa is not only smart but she seems to be really observant...i bet she can even pass as a detective herself loll..

aww..lol..poor kripa was getting scared..well who wouldn't....but it was soo cute when she looked at Angad and felt relieved by his presence ...and then Angad teased her when she was getting scared and holding on to him ...loll

I really liked the following description of the scene :

Pine, Fir, and birch trees loomed above their heads, towering high in the dark sky. Their foliage prevented any moonlight from seeping down to the forest floor. An occasional snow owl hooted somewhere in the woods. The entire place was silent, eerie and frightening.

it was kinda cute how angad called kripa by her name first then called her Ms. Sharma after a while ....loll...I guess he kinda got confused...

It seems like Tina is giving hints to both Angad and kripa....by letting them feel her presence and leaving clues behind.....

lol...Kripa is really stubborn...however her stubbornness is full of concern and fear at the same time...

wonder how the night will go for both Angad and kripa😉😆

great part as alwways....cant wait for th next one...continue soon and keep up the great work👏...

OMG!! Awesome! Loved Angad's entry. I hope they get together soon cause i can see some progress happening alreday. Pm me when u update. :)