Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Update was worth waiting😊..Update was fantastic,superb,rocking,amazing,wonderful,mindblowing,outstanding,excellent,beautiful....!!!!(Now i am short of adjectives).........Ha ha....👏
Loved the way Raj n Naina were romancing but Naina got angry ...again...😆
Who was dat man who targetted Raj???????😡Alekh came at right time..
This scene was too funny"
"Take off your shirt!" she demanded already pulling onto his buttons.

"Naina, kya karahee ho?" in a naughty tone, "not here atleast."

"I'm serious." there was no sign of amusement on her face.

"Uh..sir I'll leave." Aalekh knew it was his cue to leave as

it really was between husband and wife. He knew that Naina

wanted to be alone with him.

"Dekha, phirse embarass kardiya na bechaare ko." he looked

towards Aalekh and was laughing as Naina removed his shirt"

Alekh always come at wrong time😉.....They both love each other immensely n draw strenghth from each other.😃😃😃.Even at such a point they r busy romancing..😍😍😍Cute pair indeed!!!!!...

Raj is playing both the roles really well 👏......Their romantic moments r ruined by none other dan Ms. Arwa....😉
It was gud to see Chauhan back n he was so angry on Raj dat he
didn't told him the truth abt him..Both the friends were happy at this re-union ..Abhi is married..But I have this gut feeling that even Abhimanyu is suspicious..God knows why but i think so..😲
So Naina was reminding Rajveer for Karva Chauth..This Maj Bhargave is 1 sick man ..😡Feel like hitting him
hard..Wat cheap plan is going in his mind..Raj shud steal those death certificates as fast as possible..Who is this secret boss??????Whom does he plan to kill ..I think he is planning to kill Raj..Who was dat man n women in the building who were clinging on to each other(Kahin Sonia n Abhi to nahin)😲😲😲.....Naina was as usual angry on Raj but she was right..😭She has fasted for him n he had not turned up once...
Raj has planned a very gud surprise for Naina with help of
Sameera 😛..He wasthe 1 who escorted Naina to that building..Naina was fuming with ager n hunger n he was enjoying it..naughty Raj(He duisguises himself really well.😆)... ..He got a flat for him n Naina..such a shocking surprise for Naina n it was so romantic....Sameera performed the pooja..Raj then carried Naina to the bedroom..similar to 1 she saw in her dreams..😉Room was decorated beautifully n she got such nice presents..😳Raj is always lost whenever he sees Naina 😉😉😉..He too kept the fast for her..He is a perfect hubby..☺️☺️☺️..The scene where Naina touches Raj 's feet n he hugged her was really emotional..It is indeed a very traditional custom but highlights the rich Indian culture..👍🏼..It was a real sweet part n I was smiling while reading it.😊..But who is dis man who again targetted Raj???😡


Twist is too gud..n story is really moving in a fast pace..😎😎😎
Please update soon now..U r n exceptional writer dear....👏
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mystified your interview was really cool...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Thank you very much mystified, sweta2005 and fanatic 21 for your lovely comements.
@mystified - i loved the exclusive interview idea as it was a good way of commenting. Wow each and every character praised me in the same way as i've portrayed them.
@fanatic 21 - thanks for appreciating the KC part.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Update was worth waiting😊..Update was fantastic,superb,rocking,amazing,wonderful,mindblowing,outstanding,excellent,beautiful....!!!!(Now i am short of adjectives).........Ha ha....👏
Loved the way Raj n Naina were romancing but Naina got angry ...again...😆
Who was dat man who targetted Raj???????😡Alekh came at right time.. - hey thanks a lot. I'm glad u appreciated their omance once again. Hmmm thats the new twist now isnt it. Yeh he did come at the right time.


This scene was too funny"
"Take off your shirt!" she demanded already pulling onto his buttons.

"Naina, kya karahee ho?" in a naughty tone, "not here atleast."

"I'm serious." there was no sign of amusement on her face.

"Uh..sir I'll leave." Aalekh knew it was his cue to leave as

it really was between husband and wife. He knew that Naina

wanted to be alone with him.

"Dekha, phirse embarass kardiya na bechaare ko." he looked

towards Aalekh and was laughing as Naina removed his shirt"

- thanks for loving this scene and finding it amusing
Alekh always come at wrong time😉.....They both love each other immensely n draw strenghth from each other.😃😃😃.Even at such a point they r busy romancing..😍😍😍Cute pair indeed!!!!!... - yeh both of them are each others strength. they sure cant get enough of it.

Raj is playing both the roles really well 👏......Their romantic moments r ruined by none other dan Ms. Arwa....😉 - hehehe I luv to do it to my readers

It was gud to see Chauhan back n he was so angry on Raj dat he didn't told him the truth abt him..Both the friends were happy at this re-union ..Abhi is married..But I have this gut feeling that even Abhimanyu is suspicious..God knows why but i think so..😲 - hmmm maybe perhaps he does have a suspicious character thats why Raj didn't tell him anything before and he still has left things out

So Naina was reminding Rajveer for Karva Chauth..This Maj Bhargave is 1 sick man ..😡Feel like hitting him
hard..Wat cheap plan is going in his mind..Raj shud steal those death certificates as fast as possible.. - as sick as one an be.
Who is this secret boss??????Whom does he plan to kill ..I think he is planning to kill Raj..Who was dat man n women in the building who were clinging on to each other(Kahin Sonia n Abhi to nahin)😲😲😲..... - that mystery still remains to be resolved.
Naina was as usual angry on Raj but she was right..😭She has fasted for him n he had not turned up once... - she was bound to be
Raj has planned a very gud surprise for Naina with help of
Sameera 😛..He wasthe 1 who escorted Naina to that building..Naina was fuming with ager n hunger n he was enjoying it..naughty Raj(He duisguises himself really well.😆)... - he sure does
..He got a flat for him n Naina..such a shocking surprise for Naina n it was so romantic....Sameera performed the pooja..Raj then carried Naina to the bedroom..similar to 1 she saw in her dreams..😉Room was decorated beautifully n she got such nice presents..😳Raj is always lost whenever he sees Naina 😉😉😉..He too kept the fast for her..He is a perfect hubby..☺️☺️ - he loves her too much and wants to give her all the happiness he can give.
☺️..The scene where Naina touches Raj 's feet n he hugged her was really emotional..It is indeed a very traditional custom but highlights the rich Indian culture..👍🏼..It was a real sweet part n I was smiling while reading it.😊..But who is dis man who again targetted Raj???😡 - thanks for loving everything in the part ad the man is the new twist in the story as u know i jut love putting them in.

Twist is too gud..n story is really moving in a fast pace..😎😎😎
Please update soon now..U r n exceptional writer dear....👏 - thank you very much for the priase dear

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
aakhir aapne hame dhoondh hee liya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
dhoond to kab se liya tha magar tumhari narazgi ne rok diya he kya kare majboori he tumhe kuch keh bhi nahi sakte....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
woooooooooow simply super,tatz realy gud,

dialogues r rocking,


Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Aarthi thankyou very much for the appreciation
I'm glad u appreciated all the dialogues.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaaaaaaar mindblowing....i m so happy dat my plan of going out of town got cancelled due to some reason otherwise i would hv missed dis superb ud........aaj raj ki kismat kharaaab hi lag rahi hai....bechaara romance karna shuru karta hai...kuch na kuch beech mein aa jaata hai....3 baar aisa hua hai.....mujhe to taras aa raha hai bechaare par.....karwa chauth ka idea bhut acha tha....and d way u hv written it was exceptional......raj's surprise was so sweet.....only a loving husband like him can do such a thing..❤️...i loved that idea of name plate where it was written naina and rajveer singh shekhawat.....agar main naina ki jagah hoti to wahin rone lagti.....😳...aur wah yaar tumne bhi raj ke bday ke ek din baad karwachauth rakha.....isss baar to actual mein aisa hi tha....16th ko raj ka bday aur 17th ko karwachauth......par yaaar ye raj ki jaaan ke peeche koi kyun pada hai....jahan tak mujhe lagta hai ye abhimanyu hai.....pata nhn may be i m wrong but i hv astrong feeling ki vo abhi hi hai.....aur dekho raj ki suhaagraaat phir se beech mein reh gai.....bhut bura kiya tume arwa.....kisi ki suhaaag raaat mein vighan nhn daaalte yaaar vo bhi raj ki???????????????????😡sab RN fans tumhein peetne ka plan banaaa rahe honge....i can bet on dat...kyunki maine to poora mann banaaya tha tumhein peetne ka.😡....aur haaaan yaad aaya....aalekh ka scene bhut accha tha jab vo naina ko kehta hai ki usne baat karne ke liye badi sahi jagah doondi hai.......ab vo bhi kya kare yaar raj ki biwi hai kuch na kuch to asar hoga hi...vo bhi to romance karne ke liye store room lekar jaata hai..😆....aur aalekh ka naina se kehanaki karwachauth par vo kya karega jo bhi karna hai raj ko karna hai....it ws toooooooooooo fuuny...😆........arre yaar main mention karna bhool hi gai...raj ,aalekh aur naina ka vo scene jab naina raj se kehti hai "take off ur shirt" aur apna mahaan raj kehta hai"not here atleast"....that ws hilarious.😆aur raj jab naina se kehta hai ki naina ne aalekh ko phir se embarass kar diya....i just couldnt control laughing.....raj is so sweet yaar naina ko aisi situation mein bhi hasaane ki koshish kar raha hai....and i loved that line....actually mu fav line...."then he turned around to see wat he hated the most in d world"....tears in naina's eyes.....it truly described his love for naina😊😊😊............plzzzzzzzzzz ud sooooooooooooooooon......iss baar zyaada intzaaar mat karwana yaaar.....
Edited by watch rajeev - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ye kya Arwa, jab bhi romance karte hai koi na koi goli chala deta hai!!! and seeing how well Raj had decorated the room, i was soo sure this was "the" day. and tht stupid man ruined it 😡

the scene where she does his arm is soooo cute! Mogambo ko bhi ussi time phone karna tha 🤢

I feel Abhi is responsible for all this, i also feel that Bhargav or somebody else knows Raj's true identity and now will use this against him.

Pl dont make Abhi the villian here, Raj will be shattered 😭

and where is the Veet scene u were going to include here? 😉


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Originally posted by: mystified

Ok twistmaster,

Since urs is one of the longest running RN ff (atleast as far as I know) here is a special review'..I was interviewing the cast of ur fic and this is how they had responded'..

DISCLAIMER: the reporter is not to be held responsible for any statements made by the characters. This is meant for pure fun and no offence to anybody!!!!😆😆


Tidbits from the interview'.

Rep- so cadet huda wat do u think about arwa and her story 'lost''

Huda- ab mein kya bataoon aapko'.sasriakaal arwa ji'aap na bada changa story likhte ho'is story aapne mujhe villain nahi banaya is baat ka mujhe bohat acha laga'actually mujhe aapki story bohat pasand hai'arey mujhe hi kyun mere mummyji, daddyji aur mere bhais hena'.rajesh aur ram pyari unhe bhi aapki story bohat pasand hai'.waise main na aapke liye haas IF pe member banne waala hoon isliye kabhi kabhi hume bhi pm beja kariyega aur hum dono der saare baatein karenge aur'.

Rep- uh'thanku cadet huda'I think she got ur point'well cadet aalekh'aapka kya rai hai is story ke bare mein'

Aalekh-bole to'ye ishtory bohat rapchik hai'bilkul apun ka type ka hai'apun ko ish mein sabse zyaada sameera ka character pasand hai'lekin tu ye sab captain sir ko bolne ka nai'sirf humare aur apne arwa ke beech mein rehne ka hai'tu samaj rehi haina'ya phir mein tikk se samjaoon'

Rep-apun sab samajrela hai'um I mean I got it cadet aalekh thanku'.now cadet ali aapki kya rai hai?

Ali- hume ye kahani bohat pasand hai'.pehle hume r2 ke tarike pasand nahi the lekin ab jab hume pata chala ki wohi captain sir hai toh hume khushi hai, akhirkaar woh humare guru hai'phir bhi hame ye romances sab pasand nahi hai'haan par story achi hai'

(pooja grabs the mic from ali)

pooja- oye arwa tu na is ali ke baton mein mat aao'iska setting na hamesha standard mode pe hai'lekin teri story hit hai bhai hit hai'.mujhe toh apni veer zara ke bare mein padthe hi sharam aajati hai'lage raho'.ho sake toh is story ko na lifetime connection bana do'

Rep- thanks ali and pooja'.ab Major bhargav aapki kya rai hai.

Bhargav-(looks at the reporter, smirks, fixes his cap and walks away)

Rep-Some guys don't change do they??? Well sonia aapki kya rai hai?

Sonia-oh I love this story'especially the entry of R2 u know'that were the golden times and I got maximum scenes'nowadays my scenes are being cut short to accomadate for naina'.

Rep- but I think that was done on public demand'as hero is meant to be with the heroine'

Sonia- oh I disagree'.i think the writer is planning some twist u see'I am gonna come back with a bang and naina is probably gonna realize that soon'.

(suddenly a voice is heard but no one is in sight'a terrified sonia runs away from there leaving a helpless reporter behind)

voice- hey!! up here!!! I am here'

Rep- (looks up and smiles) hey yudi wat r u doing there??

Yudi- well I am roaming about as a spirit u see'.the writer, for some strange reason has decided to kill me'.am very upset coz of that'

Rep- so u don like this story anymore?

Yudi- are u kidding!!! This is my favourite'.it is lot more fun to be watching everybody from up here'.although I hope the writer is reading this and plans to bring me back'.

Rep- thanks yudi'I am sure arwa will respond to u soon'now to finally meet the lead pairs'.so Mr.R2 or should I say captain rajveer'wat do u think about the story and ur character'u know u r the star'

Raj- well I think the story is very good and I will work in a story only if it has potential'and it is the writer who made my character stronger'am only doin my job'(he smiles and leaves the reporter in a daze)

Rep- oh u r always so modest captain!! Anyways naina wat do u have to say about the story,R2 and sonia ?

Naina- well this story is really good'I am glad that it did not turn out to be like lrl where we were not able to unite..here I am Mrs. Shekawat and I am lovin it(gazing at raj)'I don want to comment on anyone who has hell lot of attitude in them(referring to sonia)well R2 is only fictious'besides I know deep down that he is always mine(looking at raj)

(Then they smile at each other'excuse themselves and r off romancing'yeh donon bhi naa'kahin bhi shuru!!!uff!!)

Rep- well u see twistmaster'ur story is loved by everybody and the characters are too happy'I am sure most of the readers would agree with me'so keep up the good work'.all the best and thanks for giving us such a wonderful fic'.

P.S- well since this is an exclusive interview'highlight it to read😉😆'..

erm'I haven't read the part fully yet'will comment on this part later'until then take care and enjoy'..





Sofi. loved ur interview 👏👏👏 it was hilarious, especially huda's and alekh's part 😆😆😆

also loved the RN part, how they disappear , romance ka mauka chahiye hota hai! 😉




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