Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 10

Originally posted by: yyyy

The update was fantastic...

naina had kept vrath 4 raj that's so sweet...raj had planned very well first her gruha pravesh and then their first night haiii.....but who is that man my guess is abhimanyu..and that lady maybe sonia..u never know...but i hope these 2 doesn't spoil RN's night.

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

arwa yaar

main kafi dino bad comment ker rahi hun

aur sach to ye hai i wat to thank you

you know why last week mera kafi emotinal gujra hai infact mera mood ab bhi khrab ... main chah ker bhi apni use prob se alg nahin ho pa rahi actually vo prob nahin hai vo bas thoda aa..

pata nahin

kahir jo bhi bas itna ki vo baat har samay dimag mein ghum rahi thi ...per becoaus of this update jitni der mein maine ye update padi main utni der k liye use baat ko bhul gayi... i laughed with rajeer cried with naina and done action with R2 so i just wanna thanks for meking me fogrt my prob for a while ... kuch pal khushi k dene k liye

aur mujhe shayd ab ye kahne ki jrurat nahin hai shayd ki loved this update from my heart

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priyanka(pinka)

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey dear

i truly apologize fr nt being able to comment on ur fic for so many days... i realli dont knw wat to tell u... jus tht i have been so busy.... so occupied...

now cmin back to the fic....... its realli advancing well... so finally our dear raj has met abhi...... wonder wat new twist lies ahead....... i wonder who this person is who is trying to shoot raj... and how cme he knows his every move...raj has to definately be careful... i was realli upset tht ninas karva chauth gt spoilt due to tht idiot on the building.. bt im sure raj and naina will hav the last laugh sum day or the other...

thanks for the pm tooo... realli appretiate it....

First of all A BIG SORRY for replying so late.

The Update was..................

AWESOME................

SUPERB.................

ROCKING.................

AMAZING....................

MINDBLOWING...................

INTERESTING................

WONDERFUL.................

OUSTANDING...................

BEAUTIFUL....................

LOVELY................

FANTASTIC..............

JUST TOO GOOD............

OUT OF THIS WORLD...............

And truly filled with the most UNEXPECTED chain of events….

I do not think that any reply which I manage to write will do justice to your writing….you are so skilled at it that one can visualize each scene while reading it….and the flow of the events is so well tuned that it just seems that it could not have happened any other way…..

Raj and naina are very romantic….speacially raj he does not miss a single chance to flirt with is wife….and unfortunately our poor alekh gets caught in awkward situations.

Alekh is indeed very clever…..the way in which he saves our couple…loved him for this….

Naina turning into one of those strict and over protective wives is just tooo funny to imagine….but none the less loved to see her concern….

You can count on raj to cheer her up in any situation….he is the perfect husband….

But who is this trying to kill raj…..has bhargav discovered the truth…..God I hope not….please let raj succeed in his plan to trap uncle tom

Bhargav and his timing to ruin our couples romantic moments are just implacable……

Raj bhi na…..naina ke sath romance karne main itna kho gaya ke apni shirt he bhul gaya……sooooooooooooo cute…..

It was a relief to know that Abhi is the informer…..this way raj can get some more help…..and abhi's marriage was yet an unexpected surprise…..now do tell us who is he married to…..

Raj was broken when he found out how Uncle Tom is planning to trap R2 by getting raj's death certificate made….the way in which he speaks with navin shows how much pain he is experiencing…..

The Karva Chauth prepartions were just toooooooooooooooooooooo perfect……so appreciation that I give will actually do justice to it sooo I am not going to say anything except that it was a DREAM COME TRUE in every sense.

Raj keeping a fast for niana…..well how could we have thought that he would let naina do this alone…..

Yeh beech main koun aa jata hai…who is this person trying to kill him….and how did he know where raj was…..please is suspense to jaldi se clear karo

A PERFECT AND GRIPING STORY

Please do update soon as we are all waiting eagerly

First sorry for the late reply…and thanks for the long part 😊

Along with romance this part was full of mystery and surprise ..so in all a part that should be praised a lot.👏⭐️

Tell me one thing u made them so busy in romancing that Naina forgot to give Raj the first aid after getting shot by that bullet!! …surely they are mad in love😆😆

Arey aery Naina…you forgot to say hello to your hot dad-in law…😛

But Bhargavji!! Why did u disturb them!! Bad manner…😆

Hehe the way you said that In movies suddenly a hero gets surrounded by goons n fights with them ....was really funny 👏

Abhimanyu!! he is back in the picture😲…nice surprise….and he is married to whom?? That's a mystery…but good that he is also trying to be a good hubby …and Raj thank him as he gave you the info of that special day…by the way nice conversation between Raj and Abhi…I liked it….but still Abhimanyu's entry n what he said to Raj was not very much convincing to me ..lets see what happens next..

Now the most important part …who's that leader?? I'm sure that they were talking about Raj..but who were they?why they want to kill Raj and most important question whom they want to shoot Raj or R2? I hope that this time, Raj doesn't gets backstabbed by someone whom he trusts!! That man n that lady who were in the same building ..who are they??… Huh!!! So many questions…😕

Now the most charming and sweet part of this update….karvachaut….both Raj and Naina they are really cute ….the gift that Raj gave Naina on this special occasion was just too sweet and overwhelming …that mangalsutra and sindoor thing was just perfect….I loved it…😳

You also narrated the Karvachaut ritual so well….really it was really nice⭐️

Argh!! I will kill that person…why people can't let them enjoy!!!! at least on a special day like karvachaut 🤢

Originally posted by: diya7000

First sorry for the late reply'and thanks for the long part 😊 - its okay and ur welcome

Along with romance this part was full of mystery and surprise ..so in all a part that should be praised a lot.👏⭐️ - thank you very much

Tell me one thing u made them so busy in romancing that Naina forgot to give Raj the first aid after getting shot by that bullet!! 'surely they are mad in love😆😆- oh yeh i did mention she gave him first aid as he tried to cheer her up but i think it might not have been clear.

Arey aery Naina'you forgot to say hello to your hot dad-in law'😛 - hehehehehe

But Bhargavji!! Why did u disturb them!! Bad manner'😆 - he has no manners honey

Hehe the way you said that In movies suddenly a hero gets surrounded by goons n fights with them ....was really funny 👏 - yeh i didn't want to make it very serious and heavy scene

Abhimanyu!! he is back in the picture😲'nice surprise'.and he is married to whom?? That's a mystery'but good that he is also trying to be a good hubby 'and Raj thank him as he gave you the info of that special day'by the way nice conversation between Raj and Abhi'I liked it'.but still Abhimanyu's entry n what he said to Raj was not very much convincing to me ..lets see what happens next.. - yep Abhi is back and let's see what wonders he does to the story.

Now the most important part 'who's that leader?? I'm sure that they were talking about Raj..but who were they?why they want to kill Raj and most important question whom they want to shoot Raj or R2? I hope that this time, Raj doesn't gets backstabbed by someone whom he trusts!! That man n that lady who were in the same building ..who are they??' Huh!!! So many questions'😕 - well there's a lot of mysetry surrounded to this segment and it'll get even more intersting and there will clues and I'm sure some might even pick it up.

Now the most charming and sweet part of this update'.karvachaut'.both Raj and Naina they are really cute '.the gift that Raj gave Naina on this special occasion was just too sweet and overwhelming 'that mangalsutra and sindoor thing was just perfect'.I loved it'😳 - thanks for enjoying this segment

You also narrated the Karvachaut ritual so well'.really it was really nice⭐️ - thanks once again

Argh!! I will kill that person'why people can't let them enjoy!!!! at least on a special day like karvachaut 🤢 - yeh that person is certainly the spoiler but it's part of the twist

So do update soon'😊

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!! Arwa!!!😛
A biiggg sorrrry for replying late...😭
With exams and other stuffs..it sometimes become very difficult....😭 - its completely alright hun i understand.

Wow!! Now what an update!!!
Mindblowing!!!! As I always say "You rock dear" - thank you very much
Now....Raj was nearly shot!!!!😲!
Thank God or...should I thank u😃😉 that he is fine...😃 - hehehe i think u shud thank both
Ab koi na koi...ya phir kuch na kuch zaroor hota hai...jisse unke romantic moments
spoil ho jaate hate....😡😭 - they're cursed
Wow...finally it's time for Karwa Chauth!!!!!😛
aur phir se kisine goli chalayi!!!!!!!!🤢 - i know its very sad isnt it

Who is behaind all this??????
Hmmm...the suspense is mounting....👍🏼 - i'm glad u find it so

Absolutely brilliant👏
Oh...it's definitely worth waiting...Arwa.......👏
👏You are a ⭐️ - thanks lot for appreciating dear
I wish that u keep on writing like this forever.......
Thanks for such a rocking update.....
Take care...
Continue soon.... - if i continue having ur best wishes then i certainly will continue writing like this

👏😛
With lots of love and best wishes.....

Riya......

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Raj is lying in Naina's lap and she is caresssing his hair lovingly!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳How romantic!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😍 😍 😍 😍

Raj phir mazak kar raha hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒No wonder Naina got irritated!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ab toh uske manane par bhi nahi maan rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is very smart!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Usse jaise hi pata chala woh Raj aur Naina ko inform karne chala aaya!!! 😊 😊 😊

Too bad the man escaped!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒But Raj got hit on his arm!!! O no!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina taking off his shirt and Raj taking it in a different way and teasing her was hilarious!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh nika gaya waha se!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bechara jab dekho galat time pe inke beech phaas jata hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina roh rahi hai!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Kehti hai she can't tolerate to see him get hurt!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kitna pyaar karti hai Raj se!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kehta hai ke woh uske aasu bardaast nahi kar sakta!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj kehta hai jab akhri saans bhi hogi tab bhi nahi chorega aur kahega bhagwaan se ke usse uske saath lele!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right ke usse behtar pagal deewana Naina ko koi nahi milega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj yeh do do roles kar raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Do nau pe ek saath sawar hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina are so romantic and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Bhargav had to ruin it by calling at the wrong moment again!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡And he is calling Raj somewhere!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Ufff!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj kehta hai Naina se dur jaane ka mann nahi karta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Whenever he is down Naina fuels him up again!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is truly his better half!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Accha huya he promised not to disappear this time!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh aise hi jaa raha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Jab Naina ko dekha uski shirt ke saath tab jaake yaad aaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina is sure acting mysterious and not telling him ke kal kya hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Good for her!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Wakai woh jagah bilkul film jaise hi thi aur wahi huya bhi jo filmon mein hota hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Ek gang aaya and cornered him!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj bhi sab janta hai aur bhaag gaya aur enemy ko divide karke and finished them all!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally jo aaya woh Abhimanyu tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Usne Raj ko punch kiya kyunki Raj ne usse andhere mein rakha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Abhimanyu Bhargav ka secret informer bana huya hai and has come to catch R2!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Raj R2 hai yeh jaan kar Abhimanyu toh bilkul shock ho gaya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Abhimanyu now said that he is with Raj!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!! 😊 😊 😊

Raj said ke none of the guys was a capable component!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He said he is the best!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He started again with his boastful self!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Abhimanyu ki shaadi ho gayi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wakai bahut kuch ho gaya hai ish saal mein!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko Abhimanyu se pata chal gaya ke kal karvachauth hai aur woh sochne laga how Naina will look as his bride again!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Bhargav is obtaining death certificates of him and Navin!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Kaam hone ke baad woh R2 ko phasana chahta hai!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡O no!!!

Raj ne gusse mein mirror tod diya!!! Maj.Bhargav is one sick man!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yeh boss kaun hai??😔 😔 😔 😔And who is the man who was with the woman in the building??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕Aur yeh log R2 ko kyun marna chahte hai??😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Is it Abhimanyu and Sonia??😕 😕 😕 😕And is the boss Gehlot??😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina wants to have one night with Raj when he will be only Rajveer and nothing else!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aalekh was too funny when he said kya jaga dhundha hai baat karne ka aur apun kya kare jo kuch bhi karna hai woh toh Rajveer Sir ko karna hai naa!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj ab soch raha hai ke woh Naina ko aisa surprise dega ke woh itni khush hogi ke sama nahi payegi!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sameera toh sun ke shock ho gayi ke Raj and Naina are already married!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛I loved her dialogue you don't have any children do you!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj should steal those certificates as soon as possible!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He feels like strangling Bhargav!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛No wonder!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha hai Aalekh is there to help warna Naina kaise manage karti food aur water se dur rahena sara din!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Evening tak Naina ka koi contact nahi huya Raj se!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Poor Naina aur yeh bhi keh rahi hai ke she will sleep hungry magar usse dhundhne nahi jayegi!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh Raj bhi naa!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ko aise bulaya aur upar se usse gussa dekh kar usse mazza bhi aa raha hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jaan bujh ke usse tang kar raha hai aur pooch raha hai ke kahi usne karvachauth ka vrath toh nahi rakha!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina roh rahi hai aur usse haasi aa rahi hai aur keh raha hai ke he doesn't see Naina's worth aur uska gussa aur bada raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ke flat ke name plate par Raj aur Naina dono ka naam!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Really it is a precious moment for her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj phir se usse tease kar raha hai and she is getting annoyed!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bahut tang karta hai Naina ko woh!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sameera ne Naina ka grihapravesh karwaya aur Naina fell in love with Raj again!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab Raj usse gode mein uthake bedroom mein le gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina is feeling nervous ke kya plan kiya hai Raj ne!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The room is decorated with flowers and candles!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

This is exactly like her dream!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina's husband is so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj kehta hai ke woh aaj ka din kabhi nahi bhool sakta kyunki yeh Naina ki zindagi ka sabse important day hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊And he has got a beautiful red saree and jewellery for her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh Naina ko dekhta hi rahe gaya and the match nearly burnt his finger!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina ko dekh kar toh dard bhi chala gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiiiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Jab Raj ne Naina ko sindoor lagaya and he put the magalsutra around her neck she almost started crying!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊But Raj stopped her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This is so romantic and so beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina jab pao chhuti hai toh kehta hai uski jagah waha nahi Raj ke dil mein hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Haaiiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ne bhi Naina ke liye vrath rakha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is just so sweet and so loving!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is the best husband a girl can ever want!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He surely would not let her keep the vrath alone!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This reminds me of Shahrukh in Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar kisi ne unpe goli chalayi aur thaali ko lagi aur Raj uske peeche gaya hai!!! I hope he catches him this time!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊