Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144 - Page 9

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

yaaaaaaar mindblowing....i m so happy dat my plan of going out of town got cancelled due to some reason otherwise i would hv missed dis superb ud........ - thats gr8 that u got to read this ud. and thanks alot

aaj raj ki kismat kharaaab hi lag rahi hai....bechaara romance karna shuru karta hai...kuch na kuch beech mein aa jaata hai....3 baar aisa hua hai.....mujhe to taras aa raha hai bechaare par.....karwa chauth ka idea bhut acha tha....and d way u hv written it was exceptional......raj's surprise was so sweet.....only a loving husband like him can do such a thing..❤️. - thanks a lot or loving the whole idea and ha wo beechaara hee hai. lagta hau kuch or inezaar rna parega ose romancekarne ke liye.

..i loved that idea of name plate where it was written naina and rajveer singh shekhawat.....agar main naina ki jagah hoti to wahin rone lagti.....😳...aur wah yaar tumne bhi raj ke bday ke ek din baad karwachauth rakha.....isss baar to actual mein aisa hi tha....16th ko raj ka bday aur 17th ko karwachauth...... - hmmm looks like ur a sensitve one 😃 ha I know that's why i included it that way. Aakhir Raj ka b'day kese bhool sakte hai

par yaaar ye raj ki jaaan ke peeche koi kyun pada hai....jahan tak mujhe lagta hai ye abhimanyu hai.....pata nhn may be i m wrong but i hv astrong feeling ki vo abhi hi hai..... - mmm interesting speculation

aur dekho raj ki suhaagraaat phir se beech mein reh gai.....bhut bura kiya tume arwa.....kisi ki suhaaag raaat mein vighan nhn daaalte yaaar vo bhi raj ki???????????????????😡sab RN fans tumhein peetne ka plan banaaa rahe honge....i can bet on dat...kyunki maine to poora mann banaaya tha tumhein peetne ka.😡 - oh no yeh kya hogaya. Yeh to bhrak gaye sab log. Lagta hai kuch jaldi karna parega khush karne ke liye.


....aur haaaan yaad aaya....aalekh ka scene bhut accha tha jab vo naina ko kehta hai ki usne baat karne ke liye badi sahi jagah doondi hai.......ab vo bhi kya kare yaar raj ki biwi hai kuch na kuch to asar hoga hi...vo bhi to romance karne ke liye store room lekar jaata hai..😆....aur aalekh ka naina se kehanaki karwachauth par vo kya karega jo bhi karna hai raj ko karna hai....it ws toooooooooooo fuuny...😆........arre yaar main mention karna bhool hi gai...raj ,aalekh aur naina ka vo scene jab naina raj se kehti hai "take off ur shirt" aur apna mahaan raj kehta hai"not here atleast"....that ws hilarious.😆 - thanks for having a ball at those scenes as they were meant to be light. Ur right pati ka asar to hona zaahir see baat hai


aur raj jab naina se kehta hai ki naina ne aalekh ko phir se embarass kar diya....i just couldnt control laughing.....raj is so sweet yaar naina ko aisi situation mein bhi hasaane ki koshish kar raha hai....and i loved that line....actually mu fav line...."then he turned around to see wat he hated the most in d world"....tears in naina's eyes.....it truly described his love for naina😊😊😊 He certainly is very sweet. Hmmm I gess I'll use that quite often then.

............plzzzzzzzzzz ud sooooooooooooooooon......iss baar zyaada intzaaar mat karwana yaaar..... - yeah sure i'll try and do it quick this time

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

Ye kya Arwa, jab bhi romance karte hai koi na koi goli chala deta hai!!! and seeing how well Raj had decorated the room, i was soo sure this was "the" day. and tht stupid man ruined it 😡

the scene where she does his arm is soooo cute! Mogambo ko bhi ussi time phone karna tha 🤢

I feel Abhi is responsible for all this, i also feel that Bhargav or somebody else knows Raj's true identity and now will use this against him.

Pl dont make Abhi the villian here, Raj will be shattered 😭

and where is the Veet scene u were going to include here? 😉

Originally posted by: mystified

Thanks arwa,ashi,suhana for liking that interview😳'well I am saying thanks in arwa's fic'it sounds weird😉😆😆'. - hehehe sometimes u shud take the glory everywhere

Looks like I am the late lateef this time'but I have done a detailed analysis this time'.

Coming up'

the longest ever comment by me*sigh* phew! wat a long part!!!

*clap* *clap* gud job arwa and yes it was totally worth the wait'. - thank you my dear

First of all the title is too apt'*still feeling dizzy after reading *I mean this part was totally filled with unexpected events'. - i'm glad u found it so

The hubby wify talk was ohhhhh sooo cute *blushing* .And then there is apna aalekh'saviour of all times'kehna padega very sharp senses'haha..he suspected somebody climbing the next building and immediadetely alerted the love birds'.kya timing hai' - yeh well he was trained by the best.

Hmmmm so who is this new guy planning to kill our hero'*switching to my detective mode*does bhargav suspect things already'. - new mystery in the story is all i can say

Somebody tell raj to be serious for sometime yaar..kahin bhi shuru'uff and there is my poor sidekick aalekh worried and embarrassed all the time'somebody help him'.and naina turning into a strict wife'wah kya baat hai'very funny to imagine'. - well he has spent a lot of time being serious so now he always has the cap of R2. Yeh Naina has to be the dominating one sometimes and our poor Aalekh is just destined to be in the middle of it all.

"Or me yeh tumhaare aasoo bardaasht nahi karsakta, jaanti ho na?"
wah dialogue ache maar lete ho kabhi serious bhi bano yaar' - this was a serious dialogue

*annoyed tone*if anybody is searching for a person to spoil a romantic moment pls call our uncle tom...he he love him and his wits...well on a second thought hate him and his wits...see the effect u r creating on me...i am full time confused... - yep he is the mood killer.

btw nice plaaning to send someone else cover up for jai'though I'd prefer to have uncle tom summon both r2 and jai together *evil smile* that would be fun' - u really want to see Raj into trouble dont u

now the next bit was too romantic that I am finding it hard to comment*blushing harder*

next time they r alone advice raj to turn off his cell phone completely that should help*sheepish smile*'but I have a doubt does bhargav know that r2 is with naina, if yes then its obvious that he suspects naina too as everybody knows naina loves rajveer and only him' - hmmm not really.

aha my dear raj forgot his shirt in his hurry*smiling*'very funny'. - ab kya kare jab bhi Naina ke saath hota hai sab kuch bhol jaata hai

Then there is this spooky alley *oooo exciting* and wat a fight u r right it was kinda like watching a movie'I mean'hero single handedly fighting with goons, punching them hard and knocking them down'good that u mentioned else I was gonna say it was filmy*grinning* so u read my mind..good - hehe we have a writer's colony in which nearly all writers think alike

And then u brought abhi back*staring at the screen*''''..woah unexpected again'I was wondering wat happened to him??? And all that reunion of old friends was nice' - gud I'm glad u liked it

So abhi is the informer..gud to know that'.and he is married too'.well I am shocked to know that'why do I have a feeling that I know his wife'is it'well it can't be'I mean it shouldn't be'.but still*banging my head on the pc* is it sonia by anychance'wonder wat made me think that'but it is ur fault, u have been giving me too many twists that I am forced to think in all the possible ways and impossible ways*grinning*' - hmmm many people have been thinking the same thing. For now all i can say is carry on guessing...

So uncle tom is planning to murder r2 I mean raj! Again!'*triumphant tone*well sorry mister my hero already knows abt it'. - yes this time he definitely has the upper hand

I din get even a bit of that HQ conversation'is that bw abhi and his wife'I hope not'but something tells me it is'u have to stop giving all these shoks yaar..*scared* the poor readers are gonna have sleepless nights - i luv to shock my readers as its just more fun.

The karvachaut planning was good 'u r sticking to current affairs like first it was rajveer's bday and now this'good going'- yeh well i wud have to otherwise it wud be back dated

This part had me in splits'
'I guess so.' She sighed, 'pata nahi or kitne shocks milne wale hai.' She thought over that and attacked him again, 'wait you don't have any children do you?'
can't blame the poor girl'*sympathetic tone*we've been there and have received some shocks of our lives'so it is natural to suspect raj and naina'*winking*well the twistmaster too - hehehe as i said before i just love shocking my readers so thought why not include the same effect in my characters too

now I remembered something suddenly'u mentioned abt nair meeting someone in the dark and discussing something in one of the previous updates'was it gehlot'.see how much I am hooked to this story'. - hmmm u certainly do know this story quite well as i sometimes forget the parts i write. ahhh interesting speculation but keep guessing

Ohhhhh myyyyyyyy godddddddddddddddd the karvachaut preparation'the house'the name plate'the planning''..too good''I din know raj was sooo romantic or even better *winking*the twistmaster is too romantic'.aur bechari sameera ko saas ka role de diya lol '. - im not that romantic well atleast i think im not but im glad u loved the part. Actually when it cum to Raj my mind just rolls onto the romantic path.


I knew that they were planning to keep vrath for each other'.*gushing* oh such a sweet couple'.bohat hi senti dialogues the naa*sniff sniff* I am having happy tears'. - aaaaw that is so sweet

*staring at the screen* what!!! *jaws dropped* the same man'..oh come on not again'.i am just taking some random guesses here'either it is abhimanyu who is working for bhargav(which I hope is wrong) or it is jai, the original one, who somehow escaped from raj's grip and is here on bhargav's order or this man is someone sent by gehlot'do tell me wat u think about all my speculations' - keep guessing

well this was certainly a long comment'*sly tone*it s a gud thing that I had an off from coll and *happy tone*I have commented on almost everything u have written'.all in all great update as the story is getting better and better'hey did u ever think it would all turn up like this when u first started lost (just curious that's all) - thanks once again for the loooooooong comment and i appreciated reading it and replying back. To tell u the truth i had no idea i wud reach till here when i first began and now that im here i hope i can continue winning all ur hearts.