My FF-Abhiyaan-updated part5-Tragedy Behind Secret

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pretty_angel5

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

you started a ff, that is so coolllllllllllllllllllll😎

luv it, keep it up dear

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Wow ANusha...Great ff Hun! 👏

Btw the recent update is Owesum! VEER is shO Naughty & Ananya Curious to noe Everything, Lolz!

Aww VEER wud hav felt so bad dat Av called him Mantri's son!

Hmm But One thing - Dharam calls Ananya as his 'chacheri behen' then it means Ananya is even VEER's cuzin bro ! 😕😕😕
[ Hmmm Yew can better Change that AV and Vikramaditya were Frens and Jv and AV bros. ] - It was jus a suggestion as i think Ur ff is relli gud jus dis needs to be handled Out ! 😊

Anyways Great Update...👏....Please Post the Next Part soon, Am eagerly waiting for next part...😛

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 16 years ago

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

awesome FF lovey...sowie i didnt comment b4...no time :(...i love the story line!...update soon xxx

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Anusha

@anusha_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hey guys soory for the late update!!!

you will think she has not given update for arzoozes😳

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Anusha

@anusha_123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Abhiyaan part 5- Tragedy Behind secret

Surali- Ananya beti aap humare saath chaliye.

Ana-Par maa hum un dono se??..

Surali-Aap chaliye to sahi

Ana-par kahan?

Her mother drags her to her bedroom

Surali-Yeh baat kaan khul se sun ligiye agar aap ye kamre se pitaji ke janmdin ke samharoe mein ek kadam bhi aage rakha to hum aapko idhar bandh karwa denge!

Ana- aap humme janm se hi kamre se bahar nahin jane deti! Kyun maa? aur woh toh

hamare bahi hi hai....

Surali-Kyunki humare kuch ussul hain aur agar aap ne un ussulo ka palan nahin kiya to hum aapse nafrat karenge.

Ana-par...

Surali-Par var kuch nahin sunna chate hum!

like this she goes out of the room. Dharam Veer listens to all this. They are rally in a state of shock! They quietly go out of the place to the garden.

Dharam-Humme ek baat samaj nahin aa raha hai Veer unki maa unse aase kyun kahin?

Kya wo aapne beti ko bahar khule hawa main saas nahin lene dena chate?

Veer-Mujhe bhi uss rajkumari par taras aa raha hai.

Dharam-Wo humari behen hai

Veer- tummne bilkul sahi kaha.

Dharam-Humme unki madat karni hogi.

Veer-Pagal ho gaye ho kya agar ranima ko pata chal gaya to?

Dharam- To koi naye yojna sochni padgi!

Veer- Mein kahuin hum uski maa se baat karte hai phir wo agar maan gaye to acha hi hai.

Dharam- sahi bole tum

Veer had left Dharam with Av. Veer was alone walking when he heard a noise.

Veer- Kaun hai wahan

(A breeze blew)

Veer- Main phir dhauraraha huin KAUN HAI WAHAN

(A voice came)

Voice-Hum

Veer- Hum kaun?

Voice- Hum aapna naam uccharan nahin kar sakte, Varna tum...

Veer-Varna hum kya?

Then suddenly Dharam comes

Dharam- Kya hua veer chilla kyun rahe ho?

Veer-Vo maine kuch awaaz sune

Dharam-Ab tum phirse shuru ho gaye. Chotte the tab se bolte aa rahe ho maine sapno mein awaaz sune ab sach mein hi sun li.

Veer-Dharam ye koi mazzak nahin hai maa ki kasam hum saach keh rahe hein

Dharam- Thik hai mein maan liya aab challe??

Veer- Hain.Aur ye saab kuch hum maa ko batane jaa rahe hain.

And like this they go out of the particular corridor.

Ananya was sitting in the room*crying*

Ana- agar maa chate hum bahar na jaye to kya hum bahar nahin jayenge?

Lady in waiting- Yehi theek hoga

Ana- Pitaji bhi yehi sochte hain...humme samaj mein nahin aata kyun.

Lady in waiting-(jealously) Kyuki aap bohot sundar hain

Ana-Humme ye sundarta ki koi zaruraat nahin hai.

Lady in waiting-Aise batte nahin karte.

Speaking these lines she goes out leaving ananya in tears & ananya *sobs*

Then suddenly she see a shadow

Ana-Kaun hain wahan?(terrified)

The shadow moves and holds her hand

Ana- Maa!!

Edited by anusha_123 - 16 years ago

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

tha was mind blowing and horror brill...

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pretty_angel5

@pretty_angel5

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

veer heard a voice, wonder who it is???????

really nice dear, luved it

keep it up

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

nice update.

this story is getting interesting. yaar yeh awaaz kiski hai jo veer sunta rehta hai.

anyways do continue dear and also thanks for granting my request.

bye sumi