My FF-Abhiyaan-updated part5-Tragedy Behind Secret - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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interestin intro...sounds intriguin!...btw love the FF name! plz conti yaar...x

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Posted: 16 years ago
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FANTASTIC so far !! please do continue .. great start
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great start please continue.
this is awesum..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashah03

heyyyyyyyy

nice nice.... pls continue soonn
request: could you pls note down in ur title whether u updated ur part and which part it is.......... thnxxx...
and plsssssss continue soonn.....

YA! I noted all the page and the part no.down at the introduction.
Plz check!
And thanx.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieA

interestin intro...sounds intriguin!...btw love the FF name! plz conti yaar...x

ok if intriguin i'll make it intersting😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok i will continue on tuesday
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg...ur part 2...wooow...da betrayal..argh JV...tut tut...shame on u! lol...awesome update huni 🤗...update soon! x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part-3-The Journey to a new home

The soldiers of Aryanagar recognized niviriti is the Queen of Vaishali and the sister of King Aryawardhan. They immediately brought her and Veer to the palace. Aryawardhan was really shocked to see her in this state.

(Aryawardhan=Arya)

Arya- Arre ye sab kaise hua??? Ye sab kisne kiya??

Vaid- Are ab inhe thodhi aaram ki zarrurat hai.

Next morning, Aryawardhan comes to nivi's chamber and asks her all about her condition. Nivi tells him every thing that has happened to her.

Arya- Par Bhaiya ye sab kyun kiye. Unke aise karke ke rajya hathyane ke kya zarrurt thi.

Nivi- Ye toh hume hi samaj nahi aa rahi hai..

Arya- Jo bhi ho unhone tumhare sath gaddhari ki hai. Hum un par abhi hamla nahi chala sakte hai kyun ki wo humse badhe hai aur takkathwar bhi.

Nivi- Ji.

Arya- Par tum fikra na karo tum aur tumhara beta yahain aaram se rah sakte hai. Mera beta aur tumhare bete ko eek sii siksha milegi. Aur Dharam bhi bada ho raha hai aur Veer bhi toh unh eek dosth ke rup mein sahara payega.

In Vaishali their Jv was very happy by thinking that Prince and the Queen had died and will never come back to attack him and his family. And he was also having a daughter almost the prince's age called Ananya, who was going to be the future heir.

Jv(saying to his wife)-AAj mein bohot khush huun. Mere sarre dushman ka khatma ho gaya.

Surali(jv's wife)- Hain bilkul. AAp hi sirf nahin hum bhi aaj bohot khush hai.

After 15 years. Passed. In vaishali

Rajkumari Ananya was dressing and in the same time was chatting with her maids.

Maid in waiting 1- Rajkumariji aap ko toh aapke pitaji mehel ke bahar jane hi nahi dete.

Maid in waiting 2- Hain aur aapko bahar deekh bhi liya toh saaza humko milti hai.

Maid in waiting 3- Par isme rajkumari ka kya doosh hai rajkumari toh dikhtihi itni sundar hai.

(rajkumari Ananya= Ana)

Ana- Nahin hum jabhi bhi pitaji se is gulami ka kaaran puchte hain toh hume nahin batate. Paata nahin kyun….

Maid in waiting 1- Haan!

Maid in waiting 2- Aur…

Just then Ananya's mother came in..

Surali- Haan! Aur kabhi jane bhi nahin denge.

Ana- Par kyun maaa??!

Suarli- Aise hi.

Ana- Par kyun!

Surali- Aap apne pitaji se pucheye.

Ana- par hum jabhi bhi unse puchte hain toh wo humme batane se mana kar dete hain.

Surali- Acha! Rajumari Ananya aaj toh aapko yaad hai na ki aapke pitaji ka janam din hai! Aur door door rajyo se bohot log ayenge.

Ana- hain! yaad hai isliye toh itna saaj rahe hain. Aur hain hum toh bhul hi gayi aaj bohot bahar se loog aayenge. Hum un sab se milenge.

Surali- Saab se nahin kuch jano se.

Ana- AAyojan mien bhi uusool manna padhega????

Surali- HAAN!

Ana- par

Surali hum aur kuch nahin sunna chahati.!

And saying this sentence surali thunders out of the room.

And in Aryanagar now also niviritti does'nt go and mixes with the people because if Jv comes to know about this then he is going to kill them(nivi and her son) A letter comes to aryawardhan.😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ur anusha got tme to read today n its just fantastic
loved ur ff
Do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its great !! but Ananya is Veers cousin now ?? 😕

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