My FF-Abhiyaan-updated part5-Tragedy Behind Secret - Page 3

ya even me wanted to ask this now ananya is veers cousion

part 3 was goood! ma hindi is not so good so it lates me time hehe...oooo ur precap: is dt letter frm JV to invite AV n fam for his bday...kuuulll....like twinkle n Bhuvana said...does dis mean Ana is Veer's cuz? hmmm update soon x

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

its great !! but Ananya is Veers cousin now ?? 😕

Originally posted by: hiri

it's gr8 loved it

Originally posted by: itemshera

wow ur anusha got tme to read today n its just fantastic
loved ur ff
Do continue

anusha.....

I will udate today

Abhiyaan- A tour to home land

The letter was from Jv and was an invitation for Av and his family to come on his b'day.

Av- Humme toh unke koi chaal lagti hai…… Par humme jana hoga…

Nivi- Bhaiya jaise aapko pata hai hum nahin jayengi…. Par Veer ja sakta hai..Kyunki jai bhaiya ne use kabhi nahin dekha.

Veer entered Dharam's Room.

Veer- Arre Dharam! Tum yahaan itna saj dhaaj kyun rahe ho???

Dharam- Arre bua ne tumhe bataya nahin ki hum Vaishali ja rahe hain???

Veer- Nahin toh …..

Nivi enters…….

Nivi- Hain hum toh Veer ko batana bhool hi gayi !

Veer- Kyun Dharam ko bata diya. Aap usse jyada pyar karti hain kya??

Nivi-Nahin nahin beta… Aisi koi baat nahin hai. Tum dono hi mere aankhon ke tare hon…. Dono ko mein ek jaisa pyar karti hoon. Mera aur kaun hain is duniya mein tum dono ke sivaye…….

Veer-Phir se shuru ho Gayi. Ab jaldi kare toh accha hain.

The trio started for Vaishali. Veer was enchanted to see his own homeland. He felt a connection between the land and his people.(His mother had not told him about his real identity).

In Jv's room……

Jv- Woh dono aa gaye hain. Kitne saalo baad mil rahe hain

Surali-Arre do nahin par teen log dikh rahe hain…

Jv(stands up from his throne in welcome of his brother)-(in his mind) yeh teesra yuvak kaun hain…kabhi dekha nahin….

The trio enters the room and Av embraces his brother.

Jv-Arre humara bhatija kitna bada ho gaya hain. Yeh yuvak kaun hain. Humara doosra bhatija???

Av-Nahin nahin! Yeh toh humare ek mantri ka beta hain. Mantri ke dehant ho jane par humne use sharan diya hain…woh Dharam ka sabse accha dost hain..

Jv-Hmmmm… Arre thoda visram kar lo.. Bohot thak gaye honge..

DV- Thik hain.

Jv- ye naukar aapka kamra dikhayenge.

Av sits with Jv and haves some conversation, While Dv goes to their rooms to rest.

As they pass through the corridor DV have a conversation.

V(in anger)- Mein koi mantri ka beta nahin hoon. Mein Vikramaditya ka beta hoon jo yudh ke maidan mein shaheed ho gaye the!!!

D-Mujhe bhi samjah mein nahin aa raha pitaji ne aisa jhooth kyun kaha….

Suddenly a girl with hair like a raven's wing, appearance like some angel appeared through the corridor.

She was looking very curious to know abt the two princes…

Ana- Aap dono naujavan rajkumar kaun hain?? Mere pitaji ke janam din ke avsar par aaye hain kya???

D- Ji hain.. main aryanagar ka rajkumar Dharam Hoon..

V- Aur main mantri ka beta

D- Nahin nahin ye toh mera bhai Veer hain….. aur aacha dost bhi hain..

V- Hain Par tum kaun ho.. kabhi dekha toh nahin..

D- Iska matlab hain aap kaun hain..

Ana- Main idhar ke iklauti rajkumari hoon.

D- tab toh aap hummare chacheri bahan hui.

Ana- Humme apse se milke khushi hui.

V- Humme bhi…..

Ana asks them to tour the palace with her.

But as she was going a voice comes…

ANANYA!!!

loved it anusha do cont soon wow ananya and veer met gud but how will their lovestory start because they are cousin bro sis ain;t it ...

nice update lolzzzzzz
loved it
update soon ok me waiting