My FF-Abhiyaan-updated part5-Tragedy Behind Secret

Hi Guyz,

I?m gonna start my own FF. Plz read and comment on it later.

My FF?s name will be

Abhiyaan-The Mission

Description:-

This story is about a prince who has lost his kingdom owing to certain circumstances. It is a story of Adventure, Bravery, Wit, Romance and friendship.

Characters:-

Dharam- he is the only son of king Aryawardhan and is very responsible and good tempered prince.

Veer- He is a prince but lost his father and domain at a very less age. And son of Niviriti

Niviriti- She is the mother of Veer and is very protective towards him. She lost her husband when her child, Veer was very small. After being betrayed by her own brother, Jaiwardhan she had gone to her another Brother Aryawardhan to let her son be safe.

Aryawardhan-He is the father of Dharam and is the brother of Niviriti.

Vikramadatiya- Father of Veer and the king of Vaishali.

Jaiwardhan- The betrayer of King Vikramadatiya and was the commander in chief of the army of Vaishali.

Ananya-She is the Daughter of Jv. Her attitude will change as the story will proceed.

Less important characters.

Sunanada- Head Maid of Niviriti and spy of Jaiwardhan

Asthika- Maid of Niviriti and knows more about Sunanada than Niviriti and also wants to tell her that Sunanda is the spy of Jaiwardhan.

Ram Shastri- The main betrayer of Vikramadatiya and the head minister of Vikramadatiya and there are also other ministers.

(As the story will proceed accordingly more characters will be included)

obviously u should continue....

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

obviously u should continue....

i liked your introduction.........i'll be waiting for u to continue

Part 1: The Betrayal

When the mist cleared, the reflection of the Golden Palace of Vaishali emerged on the still, clear waters of the River Vaishali which drained the city.

It was celebration time in Vaishali as their Queen had a baby boy, who'd be the heir of the throne. People flocked to the palace to have a glimpse of the Prince. Joy and happiness was in the air.

(King Vikramaditiya= King V.)

(Queen Niviritti) =Queen N.)

King V.(Talking to his ministers)-Aaj bohot khushi ka mauka hai. Garibon ko khana aur paise baate jaye. Ram Shastri, hum chahate hai ke tum ye sab tayariyan karna shuru karo

RS-(smirking) Ji Maharaj!

Queen N- (cuddling her son) Mera chand sa beta, Mere aankhon ka tara

Sunanda- Lagta hain aap bohot khush hai, Maharani

Queen N- Kyun nah ho, humara beta Kitna sundar hai!!

Asthika-Hain maharani ji ye kitna sundar aur pyara hai…. Aap iska naam kya rakhengi???

Queen N- thoda soch vichar karna padega,.....

Sunanda- Kya Vikram Theek rahega.....

Queen N- NAHIN! Hum soch chuke hain!! Iskaa naam hoga………..

King V -VEER! Kyun humne theek kaha na????

Queen N- Aap Yahan??

King V- Kyun hum yahan apne bete ko dekhne nahin aa sakte??

Queen N- Nahin Aisi koi baat.....

King V- toh! Dikhaye hume humare bete ko..

Queen N-lijeye....

King takes Veer in his arms..

King V- Kitna sundar balak hain humara!

Queen N- Hain theek kaha.

Sunanda in Jaiwardhan(Jv)'s Chamber.

Sunanda- Are aapko kya yeh khabar mili ke Rani ka beta hua hain???

Jv- haan. Mere jaise raja banekhe khuaish tooth gaye…

Sunanda- Chinta maat karye maharaj!

Jv- Maharaja??!!

Sunanda- Mujhe pura vishwaas hain ke aap he raja baneinge….

Jv- KAISE??!!!

Sunanda- Kyunke maine bohot phele se hi soch rakha hai.

Jv-Kya????

Sunanda (Whispers) :Aap sab sainiko ko Raja ke viruddh lalkarenge. Mantri to humare saath hi hain.

Jv- PAR KAISE??!!

Sunanda- Bal aur buddhi se. Aap to Senapati hain. Mushkil nahin honi chahiye.

Jv-Mushkil aur mujhe??!!

Then they both laugh wickedly..

One year later it was again the prince's birthday. His birthday was celebrated with a lot of pomp and show. But as it grew darker everything scrambled up. The soldiers and the ministers attacked the King. To save his life he put on a brave front. But was badly outnumbered. He fell down to the swords of the traitors. His body was thrown in the well. As Niviriti was sleeping with her baby she didn't know anything.

Jv:-Raja to gaya. Ab uske bete ki bari hain

Lovely start.It's very interesting fic.

Originally posted by: anusha_123

No body likes me....😭

Part-2-The Escape

Jv- jaldi chalo humare haatho se kahin wo chut na jaye

Ram Shastri- Haan!

There Queen nivi was sleeping quietly with baby Veer then only Asthika came

Asthika- Raniji utheye…..eee…utheye……raniji

Queen N-(In faint voice)-Kya hua Asthika tum hume kyun utha rahi ho???

Asthika-Wo raniji Jaiwardhan hum par hamla kar chuke hain….

Queen N. Kya aisa……nahin….wo….mera bhai……ye kya…….maharaj….kahain??

Asthika- Itne saare swalo ka javab nahin de sakti ….chaliye……

Queen N- Par kaha jaye????? VEER ka kya hoga !!!??????

Asthika- Hume pata hain kya karna chahiye aur Rajkumar Veer ko bhi apne saath le aaye.

Queen N- Theek hai ! Par....maharaj ?? Kahan Hain ?

Asthika- Jaiwardhan ne aapke pati ko maar dia aur Abhi aapko bhi marne aa rahi hain..Sunanda bhi unke saath hain. Aur koi sawal maat pucheye. JAAYEY !

The queen understood the gravity of the situation and started fleeing from the palace from the back door.and then only Niviriti said

Queen N- Par agar Jaiwardhan Veer ko khojne ke koshish kare toh !!

Asthika- Phir ek hi raasta hai !

Queen N- Kya ???

Asthika was also having a baby boy almont Baby Veer's yrs. Slowly Asthika exchanged her baby with Veer and kept in the bed. Queen Saw all this and said

Queen- Nahin ! Tum ye kya kar kahi ho ???

Asthika Jo kar rahi huun Rajya aur aapke bhalai ke liye kar rahi hoon !

Tears rolled from Queen's eyes.

And then only Veer in Queen's hand started crying and then Jv and Ram Shastri traced Queen And Veer.

Ram Shastri- Balak ki rone ke aawaj aa rahi hain. Aawaj wahan se aa rahi hain ! Jaldi chalo !

The sainiks started running towards the direction of the source of the voice.

Asthika- Jaldi chaliye !!

Queen N.- Jaa rahi hoon !

Asthika- Aage mat badhiye ranima koi jaal hain dusre raaste se chaliye..

They started runnig towards the opposite direction and then only a Sainik came in front of them and then he was going to kill the queen and then Only Asthika came in between and gave up her life. And the Queen gone from the back with her son crying at height of his voice.

Queen was runnig and runnig.

And atlast crossed the boundary of her kingdom and reached her brothers Aryawardhan's Kingdom and stopped and felt some what safe but she was panting terribly.

And then started runnig towards her Brother Aryawardhan's palace but due to panting miserably and not getting to inhale a lot of Oxygen(cuz of panting)She grew unconcious.

And the baby fell from her hand and then only a sainik of aryanagar found the baby and the Queen and took them to the Palace of Aryanagar.

wow anusha u ff is too good👏
i really liked it😛😛 u really started well 👍🏼
jv and sunanda are soo cruel
thank good the queen and baby veer are safe and reached to aryanagar palace
plz continue

heyyyyyyyy

hey it's really good i love plz do cont asap.