AK & Rankan in Kya yehi pyar hai? Ended pg32! - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
absolutely loved it plz update soon
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Update 10

Kanya is in her room, its night, nats comes there.

N: Kanya khana tayar hai.

K: [lost in her thoughts]

N: kya hua Kanya?

K: nats, mama mere liye itni hyper kyun hoti hai? Sometimes I think there is something she is hiding from me,

N: nothing like that, Kanya woh bas, tere liye pareshan rehti hain. She loves you na.

K: but she loves all of us, why doesn't she get excited if you, harry or poo di, get hurt?

N; Kanya tu zyada kamzor hai na isiliye, you faint every now and then, you are anemic and you are also her favorite she just doesn't show but she also wonders why you changed so much from a sweet simple girl to a show off.

K: whatever, anyways watsup, for dinner?

N: your favourite pizza!

K: wow, lets go quickly, just help me!

With great difficulty and nats help she goes down. Everyone gets really worried for her, On the dinner table they all make fun of each other and talk, everyone is laughing. Then Kanya gets up to get some water and faints. They all get worried they take her to the room.

Pam: dekha, aur aap kehte hain ke chinta na karoon, mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai

An: hum kal hi Kanya ko doctor saab ke paas le jayenge!

Pammi hugs anand and the scene fades.

Its 12 O'clock that means its Kanya and nats birthday. Everyone is sleeping.

Kanya is lying down on her bed thinking about her fainting all the time, pammi getting so hyper, whats wrong with her?

Natasha is also lying on her bed thinking about Ranbir. Just then her phone rings…

N: hello

The other voice: Happy Birthday to you! Happy birthday to you!

N: Ranbir!

V: this is vik, meri awaaz bhi bhool gayi?

N: VIK! Sorry, Thank you so much, tumhe yaad tha?

V: Obviously have I ever forgotten?

N: Thank you soo much vik!

V: waise yeh Ranbir kaun hai?

N: hes a good friend.

V: mujhse bhi acha dost?

N: no way, tumse koi acha ho sakhta hai? You are my best friend always!

V: Better be, ab darwaza khol ke dekho, there is something for you!

N: What, You are mad, okay hold karo!

She goes out and finds a small parcel there.

N: thanks so much vik! Par tumne yeh kaise?

V: Courier ka naam suna hai? Dumbo!

N: Oh sorry, im so excited. thanks again to be the first to remember!

V: ek aur bar thanks kaha na, to phone mein ghus ke maroonga.

N: okay baba, bye!

V: Bye!
Nats is really excited she opens the gift it's a beautiful silver pendent and chain saying, Natasha!

N: its sooo beautiful!

She wears it and goes to sleep.

The scene shifts to ranbirs room.

R: I wonder Kanya kaisi hogi, I hope shes doing okay, I hurt her so badly, I hope shes okay.

He phones Kanya.

K: hello.

R: hi!

K: whos that?

R: Ranbir.

K: [surprised] oh okay!

R: just wanted to ask if you're okay.

K: Oh okay, im fine you don't have to worry and btw how did you get my number? And how can you phone someone at this time?

R: sorry, I was just worried. But anyways, have a nice day. Bye!

K: bye!

K: [She looks at the time] does he know its my birthday? I wonder anyways let me sleep!

She also goes to sleep.

Next day

Kanya wakes up like a princess and sees around her room there are gifts on the table and everyone is standing there to surprise her.

Everyone: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR KANYA! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!

K: [really excited] thank you so much!

She tries to get up but cant, so they all come to her bed side and she hugs her sisters, brothers and mum, dad and shantu. They already wished nats as she woke up early. then she goes to greet her dadi in the room. Then all the party preparations are on the move, everyone is busy. Kanya is busy choosing her clothes with manshaa. Kanya is sitting on the bed and ordering mansha to take out everything she points at and show her. She is really frustrated because she was going to buy her outfit yesterday only if Ranbir didn't break her leg. Mansha is also frustrated by all the orders.

M: I think mama bula rahi hain, ill be back shortly. [she runs away].

Anand comes to her room.

An: tera per ab kaisa hai?

K: Its okay dad.

An: tum pareshan lag rahi ho, kya hua meri princess ko?

K: dad, I don't know what to wear, I was suppose to go shopping yesterday, but my leg now I don't have any nice and new outfit, what will I wear?

An: don't worry, princess maine apni dono betiyon ke liye kapde bhi kharide hain aur gift bhi!
K: oh yes, what is it dad? I am so eager to see my birthday gift!

An: chalo nich mujhe tumhe aur Natasha dono ko gift saath dena hai!

K: oh cool! Lets go!

He helps her to go down.

Then he gives both of them a small box gift wrapped,

N & K: ITNA CHOTA! [like small kids]

They all start laughing and both of them open the boxes.

K: [it's a Z4 car key] WOW, Thank you so much Dad! [she hugs him] ghadi kahan hai???

(Kanya loves sports cars while Natasha likes more simple looking cars)

N: [it's a Mercedes E class] thank you Daddy!

An: your cars are outside!

They both go outside, kanyas car is pink convertible, two seater, and Natashas is white.

K: WOW, DAD. You know my taste so well!

N: Thank you dad! [she goes and hugs him] I want to drive it now!
K: NOOOO!!!!

N: what happened?

K: I cant drive [making a crying face]

N: don't worry I'll take you on a ride.

K: but you are too slow!
N: Kanya, you are in a state that you cant do anything still so many nakhras?
K: okay, okay… But lets go in my car!

N: Okay!

They both go up and change, Kanya wears this: and puts her sunglasses on her head and hair loose.

They both sit in kanyas car. she leaves it open roof. They go to the ice cream parlour.

N: tu kya khaegi?

K: Vanilla icecream. [Kanya never liked to eat chocolate ice cream in front of anyone else cause she would become a child when eating choc ice cream her favourite!]

N: Why don't you try chocolate, like you used to have before.

K: I told you I don't like it anymore, its too childish.

N: whatever, I'll be back just now.

Kanya is sitting there, listening to music, she puts on the song I just wanna spend my life with you! While listening to the song she gets lost in her thoughts, her hair is flying, her eyes are closed and she is looking beautiful. Just then Ranbir is on his motorbike, he also stops there and starts staring at her (as usual).

R: yeh ladki mujhe kabhi samaj nahin ayegi, shes just different. Kabhi itna jagar ti hai, kabhi itni sweet lakti hai, kabhi ghamandi lagti hai to kabhi is duniya ki sabse masoom ladki, love stories par ti hai, lekin chup chup ke.

The song finishes and she opens her eyes, she sees Ranbir on his motorbike stopped right by her side and staring at her.

K: HELLO! [she snaps and he snaps out of his thoughts]

R: oh hi!

K: ab tum yahan bhi agaye, cant you leave me alone? Kal mera per tod diya, because of you I couldn't go for shopping, and now again you are here?

R: haan, to yeh parlour tumhara to nahin hai, na? I can come here if I want!

K: ya u can, but doesn't mean you must stand here and stare at me!

R: who was staring at you? I was looking at the car!
K: I know its awesome but you can go buy your own.

R: NO WAY! Its ugly!, I mean PINK, [starts laughing] you must be kidding!

K: haa, HOW DARE YOU? You stupid GORILLA!

R: Ya sure, me and gorilla very funny

K: You look like a gorilla with your huge body and long hair, I wonder who would want to marry you, you'll crush them!

R: hazaron hain, tumse kaun karega, phook maroonga to udh jaogi!
K: just leave me you stupid IDIOT!

R: haa, jaa raha hoon, waise bhi time kiske paas hai, tum jaisi chipkali se baat karne ka!

He parks his motor bike and goes in the parlour.

Natasha, finally gets the ice creams and comes. She doesn't see Ranbir. She goes to the car and they drive back.

N: that was awesome na?

K: ya, bohot maza ayi.

Natasha helps Kanya inside.

K: thank you dad, its awesome!

An: YOU are welcome!

K: Love you! [she hugs him]

An: aur naatsha tumhe tumhari ghadi kaisi lagi?

N: oh dad, its lovely, I didn't get the chance to test drive it yet, it its too god. Thank you. [she also hugs him]

H: okay, ab daddy, what about my car? When will I get it?

An: not now!

H: why daddy? Please!

An: pehle tum exam mein pass ho jao phir ghadi milegi warna tum driver ke saath hi ash karo.

They all start laughing.

H: that's not fair, come on daddy! You cant do this to me!

An: kaha, na harry, pass ho jao phir milegi ghadi! Okay!

H: [frustrated] no body loves me! [he goes to his room]

N: daddy, dedo na, bechare ko!

K: ya dad, hes our ladla, and im sure he needs a car he was so used to it in US. Come on dad, don't do this to him!

An: maine kehdiya na, bas kehdiya! [trying to act angry]

They all laugh. The scene fades.

That means thats all for today, i know im like pulling the birthday party a bit too much, but i still have to think what will happen during the party. anyways, hope you all enjoyed it, even if you did'nt please comment!

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG i thought u came to reply to the comments😲. Hey hey today i am early to comment😲. awesome👏 i just love the way RanKan Nok Jhok Happens😊😊. Phook mArunga Ud Jaaogi😆. So we can expect a special surprise for the bday party na ? is tht why u posponing it?😉
thank you for the update dear.... hope to see ur next update soon😊

Edited by anjkhoney - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjkhoney

OMG i thought u came to reply to the comments😲. Hey hey today i am early to comment😲. awesome👏 i just love the way RanKan Nok Jhok Happens😊😊. Phook mArunga Ud Jaaogi😆. So we can expect a special surprise for the bday party na ? is tht why u posponing it?😉
thank you for the update dear.... hope to see ur next update soon😊

Hey thanx for being the first to comment, im glad you liked it, and about the surprise thingy not sure, but i have to make it good, i want some cute ran-kan moments in the b'day party but i'll have to try! will update soon!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
cate update loved it plzzz write more soon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
simply awsome
i really luved it
plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

1st of all sorry for commending so late...hectic schedule u see😃

now loved the ranbir buying kanya clothes part, their little agruments they have its so cute😳....
kanya getting hurt, ranbir feeling bad....feels like a movie I'm watching....cute lil scene of them...
man nats is falling for ranbir thats not a good sign.... vik sending pendant for nats was so cute😳👏 reminded me of someone....
I def think something is up wit kanya or else pammi won't get so hyper...I'm thinking iether she has some kind of illness....or its something else....
pink convert car lolz....so girly😆 ranbir def falling for kan....hope they both realize it soon....
keeping my fingers crossed...waiting for the birthday party....can't wait till ranbir finds out that nats n kan r sisters....😃
lovely update yaar....👏😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing nadia u have written such a cute nd amazin update!
I LOVE IT!
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Posted: 16 years ago
graet update plzz continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry, for being late to comment!! I had to work today so I didn't have time to sit and read!!😒 Anyway, now that I did read, I can say that this is an awesome update!! I can't wait to find out what is wrong with Kanya!! I have some guesses though!!!😉 She better not die in this story, nadz!!!😡😆 As usual, I loved the Rankan fights, they are soooo funny and cute!!! I can't wait to see what happens at the birthday party!!! I hope it's in the next update!!😉 I feel bad for Vik!! Anyways, please update soon!!! Are you going to update your other FF too?!!! It's ok if you can't!!😉 Thanks for updating!!!😃
Shreya

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