Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 92

dibs me 1st! hehe

oh no... angad met simone before kripa... i am sure simone is going to ruin everything. also, did angad notice rhea calling simone aunty and not mummy?????

eventhough angad did not complete his sentence, kripa's mind completed it...

will wait eagerly for the next part..

Originally posted by: na2339

dibs me 1st! hehe

EDITED:

Oh God Dr Bheegi now you have me anxiously waiting for your next part.. Simone's back to ruin everything 😭

Im so happy thought that Kirpa has decided she'd rather have true love then some film contract... who's to say Simone won't after getting Kirpa and Rhea to do what she wants won't just leave them to fend for themselves...

Please please please update soon Di (btw loved this update 😃 just in case my comments didn't that on hehe)

luv Lubna😳

Thanks Lubna...good to 'see' u back after a long time. U know it took me so long to write this part as I was having a hard time getting out of the twisted mesh I had weaved for myself😆 I am glad u liked this part...will try to update one more time before I leave for India😊

[quote=abhilashasharma]oh no... angad met simone before kripa... i am sure simone is going to ruin everything. also, did angad notice rhea calling simone aunty and not mummy?????

eventhough angad did not complete his sentence, kripa's mind completed it...

will wait eagerly for the next part..[/quote]

Thanks abhi...ur right, dil ki baat tho dono samajh gaye lekin Simone ab kya karne waali hai? will her reality show ruin things for AK or will they listen to their hearts??😕😊 And Angad did not hear Rhea's conversation with Kripa😕

AWESOME UPDATE!!

I m really sorry, I got your PM.
Part 13
It was awesome , well scripted and gr8 planning. And my jaws feel down to knees, with the Simone's plan to ruin Angad. I was so pissed of with her evil thinking... and also Kripa was involved. Awwww. She is all set for avenge w/ Angad. I hate her. (her character). BUT, I like the way to you set the climax. Lots of Drama and very suspensive. Great script. and setting is awesome.

Part 14:
Kripa's dilemma what she did? even b4 thinking what would be the result she signed the contract. And I felt sorry for Rhea, she is orphan, not even Simone's daughter. Gosh!!! Mishti, Anita, and everyone is playing the evil role.

Besides, that Dance performance was good and AK were fabulous. After dance, Kripa finally made her mind that she can stay with Angad and Rhea and also with dysfunctional family, but will not break Angad's heart. It is so irony that Simone is going to create the rift between AK; She will use Rhea. I hope not!!!

I think Angad will be mad blue angry with Kripa and break all ties with her. And then Naina (Angad's mom) will bring both together, as well Rhea, too.

Both Parts were Awesome and really nice scripted.
Thank you for the PM. I try to follow up all my hobbies, but sometimes everything doesn't go well as we plan. That is life.... We learn new things everyday, even smallest thing we learn is always adds up to our experience.

Take care,
Krina...(Keep up with Marvelous Script and the movie is going well) Shall we Dance and Definitely Yes, Maybe is better than Slum dog Millionaire.!!! I like Slum dog millionaire. good movie to watch. Life is all about hardship, but how to overcome is more adventurous. !!!!!
lol

nyc part

wow! definitely great part! im scared for angad though!!! its going to be so sad when they break his heart!!

tht was cool part something wrong with somine reha is opera child not somine i am wondring what going now

hey bheegi great part... can't wait to read more... continue soon

hii di! thanks for the pm!