Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ladoo645
reserved!!

okie it late @ nite have wrk tmrw, will give a lonnng commet tmrw! promise LuVVed it!

-NAts

Thanks Natasha😊

[quote=vallanki]AHH felt short, bheegi!

Ak have to play to each other tunes...that's mandatory...come what may😉

Misthy is so nice giving them/us a chance to enjoy them more😆

loved the way Rhea and Angad made friends. His intention to kep Rhea is genuine and loved it. Wish Simone accepts him as is and no other demands.

Kanan is always smart and Gouri played it so well in kyph.

hope, Kripa has no serious problems behind her family!!

more romance wanted b/w AK, tho in oposite direction😉[/quote]

Thanks vallanki....it was a long part yaar😆 but i think we can keep reading about AK forever😳 AK have been forced to dance with each other. The result can only be explosive😆 Yes, his intentions with Rhea are definitely genuine now. Will find out about Kripa and her family in next part. AK nok jhonk shall continue😳

[quote=musicdiva]IM LOVIN' IT!

loved the bond between angad and rhea.. and the part that was most unexpected was how angad wants to keep rhea forever and take care of her speciall he says "i bet she's MINE"... that was truely touching!

and man after reading the TOUCH ME part, i think I need AC now.. u just burned up the screen!

i could just imagine the 2 of them dancing sensuously!

cont soon!

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Thanks simi. Yes, angad's feelings towards rhea are def genuine now. He he...sorry to burn ur screen...it's all AKs fault😆

[quote=angadzgirl]Awwww di........its veryyyy Awesoem part...😉👏

i loved the way Angad n Rhea made the friends...n also Angad wants to keep rhea forever and take care of her......thats was sooo cute...😛

Awwwww Angad n Kripa scene was soooooo....😉😳

cant wait for more ROMANCE bet them...😳[/quote]

Thanks shweta. Yes angad is getting closer to rhea by the day. AK will continue to be hot and cold with each other😳

[quote=kvn1983]waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one di⭐️ so sweet😊 angad is changed so much😊 so kids can change any one😊😛 they can make a spoiled one to responsible one so touching😛 and its nice to know that angad thinks to have reah after simon😊 as her daughter😊😛😃 and now he dont need DNA😊👍🏼 and dance with reah and kripa is cool🤗😎 and specially touch me touch me song waoh😍 plz continue it soon😊

thanks nidha...yes angad not caring about the DNA test is a big leap in his relationship with Rhea😊

"jo aansu na hote aankho me
to aankhein itni khubsurat na hoti
jo dard na hota dil me
to khushi ki koi qeemat nahi hoti
jo bewafai na ki hoti waqt ne
to wafa ki kabhi chahat na hoti
agar sochne se hojati mohobbat ki muradein
to DUA ki kabhi Zarurat na hoti!"

wonderful sher👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal
hey di it was awesome part can't believe angad ask rhea to teach him dance haha

i hope he don't hurt kripa and her feelings

i feel sorry for simone hopefully she get better or may be she can bring angad and kripa togheter pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal

Thanks mittal. Angad will do anything to achieve his goals😕...so he is using Rhea but at the same time he has started caring for her too😊

well, let's see who ends up hurting who😕

will find out more about simone later

[quote=me_iq]aww

tht was another worth reading part...

i loved it how angad is going close 2 rhea...

bechari simon...last stage of cancer??thts really sad horrible it also happened to ma relativ aunt..n she died 2 yrs bak!!

i loved ur song selection too!!!

aww n loved these lines!!!

He just shrugged his shoulders and whispered in her ear, 'waise ek gaana aur add kar sakti ho iske saath.'

She stepped away, 'kaun sa gaana?'

He picked his towel, dried his damp back and then hummed softly, 'zara zara touch me touch me touch me''zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss me.'

awsome prt...cont asap😳

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Thanks Iqra....yes poor simone but hopefully now rhea is taken care of😊 I am sorry about ur aunt😕. cancer is indeed a deadly ailment. thanks 4 liking the songs and the dialogues😊

[quote=teri_susan]Rhea is Angad's dance teacher,that's nice.He feels sorry for Simone,but can't accept his mistake,really bad.Kannan is good,she manages Angad wonderfully.Kannan is really curious to meet Kripa since she matched Angad's attitude😉.Angad is nice to Rhea but will he be nice to her,even after he confirms that she is his daughter?😕So Kannan is going to handle mishti,that will be perfect.So Angad is learning dance to match Kripa,but he have to learn more😉.AK always share a good chemistry.U r right,if for not thier fights,one would have guesssed them as a passionate couple.They were so engrossed with each other that made others to watch them and applaud thier dance.Nasty Mishti trying to make money with Kripa's talents and troubling her for that.Kripa remained to be hard,but she slowed down when Angad layed behind.Flirty Angad asking Kripa to dance for zara zara touch me.......😉.Hope Angad enjoyed his dance with his enchantress.Kannan was right she would not be able to expect good hospitality from Kripa if she went along with Angad.Will Kripa help Kannan? [/quote]

thanks susan. right now it seems that everyone is using the other perosn ...like mishti is using kripa, angad is using rhea. kanan is using angad's desire to dance to improve his image....let's see how i can answer all ur questions in upcoming parts😕

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Posted: 16 years ago

#503

hey bheegi di...completely luvd this part the interaction btwn Angad and Rhea was very touching and how she was his dance teacher just luvd that part and I am so thankful to Mishti for making them dance together and the touch me dance was mind blowing...A seems to be falling deep and deep day by day...K is also reacting but resisting ah hope to see more AK romance in the next part and I think the part that just stood out to me the most was when Angad says to Kripa that how about you add another sequence...."zara zara touch me touch me, zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss me'" I could just see the whole scene and it looked quite hilarious 😆
please continue soon cant wait to read more
Love,
Heena

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: mahi4u
hey di

wowwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

di dat was relllllllllllyyyyyyy a AWESOME prt😉

oye hoye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

angad ji is becommingg sweeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeee😆

grt prt di👏

cont super soooooooooonnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

thanks mahru....love does that to people😳

[quote=saridena]

hi bheegi di

thks for the pm di

mindblowing part

angad is slowly changing

angad and kripa's dance was superb

angad and rhea relationship is sweet

update sooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya[/quote]

thanks soumya....yes he is changing but let's see how AK finally get close to each other😳

[quote=monikaseth]

awww sooo sweet part sangeeta thx for pm.

Wowow angad reha ke aur kareeb aa rahe hai soo sweet.

hahahahaha Misty ko ab kanan maza chakhayegii tab angad aur kripa ka aur romance aage aaayega .

I love it angad wants to keep reha with him forever soo sweet.

angad aur kripa ki shaitani aur chiye .

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thanks Monu. hope u had a gr8 diwali. Mishti is so greedy that she won't see what is happening between AK😃 AK ki shaitani??😆 let's see if kripa is ready for that yet😆

[quote=sea_nyx]

wow!!!!👏 like mishti said, some one turn on the AC⭐️, that was just mindblowing, talk about sizzling😳[/quote]

thanks sea_nyx. I am sorry to increase ur ac bill😉😆

[quote=nishttha]gosh.. i luved it!!!

when angad told her another song.. wht i could remember was, the background music "kaisa ye pyar hai", which they used to play in after any dhamakedar scene of angad... LOL

ud soonnnnnnnn[/quote]

thanks dear😊...yeah i loved that background music. i wish we could insert background music in our ffs😆...that would make them so much more real😃

[quote=sonihinnu]part 6

angad worse than a pole how rude looool
what dance is kripa teaching...is it salsa???

yes that's what i am imagining while writing😃
lmao hahahahahaha anagd lifting her up before hte music that part had me in splits🤣🤣 he is too eager😆
awwww yay finally kripa is starting to fall for him abit! bechara dil kya kare😳
awwww angad holding her and theyre both thinking abt eachother....so cute!!!
awwww bechara angad only got a chance to hold her once lol...he looked despo to holdher again hahaha
hHAHAHA EVERYONE SAW THE DANCE!!!!
i hope the pic comes everywhere:P:P
awwww prithvi is injured...that means angad will get more chances:P:P
6 weeks is enuff for kripa to fall for angad:P:P
hahaha pappu cnat dance...poor angad🤣🤣
i just knew she was gonna play an embarassin song for him!!

but did she realize that he doesnot like to be challenged
kripa is so mean:@....rhea is tooooo sweet hehe!!

kripa is mean to angad only because of what he did to simone
hmmmmm angads promise...i cnt wait to see what happens:P

part 7

hawww peanut sized woman...thats mean angad haha

tit for tat
bah woooo...thanks for including my favsong:p

i knew u would like it!😃
awwww i love rhea and angad scenes...they are the cutest ever!!!! both helping eachother!:D yes angad has become more comfy with rhea...rhea hai hi aisi😊
awww im glad rheas opresence has made angad a better person and more responsible!
lol jdj i used to watch the first season of that!! i watched the first two
awww poor simone i think she wiull die:(:( let's see
grrrr kripa dont change the song:@:@ arghhhh!!!! i wanted angad to pick her up again!
awwww dont touch me...love that song...and so appropriate for kripa...haha....i wanna see them dancing!!:P but u wrote it so well that i cud imagine it...:O he he thanks hinnu
haha manek and anitah are in da same boat...but obv less pasionate then ak;)
haha mishti saw it too....i thought she wud b jealous! but even she thinks they were hottt:P mishti would do anything for fame and money😡
mishti is just tooo greedy...but she aint that bad;)
hahaha yeah i wud luv dem to dance to zara touch me song...i lub it:D kripa would never do it...atleast now😉

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[quote=sweet_honey]heyyy awesome part.......loved a-ks dance performance too hot......awwww didnt like it wen angad sed to kanan that he will keep rhea with him 4abit....lyk his using her......but then l8a on he strtd tinkig nicley bout her n hw if she cud stay wid him.....hmmmm glad dat angad dlted them adult channels......a hope angad doesnt jus wna seep with her to break hre arrogance n den leve ha.....wnnda wa kripas famo probzz r? cont sooon

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thanks dear...yes right now angad is using rhea but deep down he is fond of her....do u think kripa will let him get that close? kripa's family problems will be highlighted in next chapter😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

theyre relations get better after each part so cute

angad will teach rhea how to read while she teaches him to dance

haha seems she is a good teacher...afterall angad dance on touch me was super awesome...and loved angads line on the zara zara touch me touch me part...haha his usual flirtatious side which even kripa is slowly but surely falling for;D

thanks for the PM bheegi

and do cont as soon as you get the time

love

tanu

thanks tanu. yes, ur right AR are genuinely getting closer with time but AK...lets wait and see😃

[quote=deeya123]thanks for the pm di simply fabolous,fantastic was too hot....

luved it[/quote]

thanks deeya😊

[quote=spln]oh bheegi di i realized i forgot to comment here....it was a fab part...i totally enjoyed the dance...like reading the description was good as seeing it n feeling the intesnsity great job there....i adore rhea of course, um alwaz saying that she the pick for me in each update...kudos!!

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thank NJ...yay Rheais a charmer for sure😊

thanksstars shine

[quote=armannridz4eva]amazing update!!!

man its so weird, cos just before i read your update, i

was watching the music channels on TV, and

"Touch me dont touch me" was on lolz

anyways i cant wait for the next part

and i hope Angad changes his using ways!!

Rhea is such a sweet heart!!

thanks for the PM

Sania[/quote]

thanks sania...really? what a coincidence. it has a gr8 beat altho abhi baby can't dance😕

[quote=sheldev]

Hi Bheegi;😆

OMG....was it ever hot in that dance room......wow......mindblowing...😳😳

the passion this couple share is like no other...what a great update Bheegi...fanstastic 👏👏

Rhea & Angad are a little more comfortable with each other and their teacher-student dancing scenes were so cute..😊😊.I feel bad for Simone though..poor her.😭..I don't like Mishti very much🤢 but I am so glad she had the sense to get AK for one more passionate dance...haila..😉😉😉

Boy oh boy..I can't wait for more passion filled scenes of AK....and ohhh!! that line Angad said to Kripa..."zara zara touch me touch me..." was like OMG😳😳😳...sexy.....wow wow...love him....😉😉

Thanks for PM and pls continue soon....you are awesome, fantastic, simply superb!!...Thanks...👏👏

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thanks shel...yes no one can share the passion and intensity of AK...at least 4 me😳...and thanks 4 ur wonderful compliments😊

[quote=krina_17]Di.... this is awesome tooo

i loved it the noak-joaks of AK

there are the Best OF the Best Today.... Dancing with rhea and Kanan was the Best

Sorry I couldnot reply long as i m getting late..

But this is so so much awesome. whenever i read this FF-- To Err is a Human AK's noak-joak comes to my mind....

- esp. from that FF I became a fan oF AK.. though I read urs FF of AK and other couples there were also has same feeling.... but some how TO err is a human FF gave me more of them. ANd more visual fights and romance.... that was the best.....

thanks Di

Krina[/quote]

Thanks krina...i am glad u like AK fights too...i love writing those😆

thanks sidra....will elaborate on kripa's life in next chapter

[quote=namelesssr]Ahaaa... twist queen to unleash more twists on us poor unsuspecting readers😉😆😆 [/quote]

couldn't hold myself i guess😆😆

thanks sameira and angullgrl

[quote=anitamalik]WOW! Beautiful update...Loved the dance session between Angad and Kripa---the detail of the dance left me mesmerized as I imagined AK in my mind dancing to the "Touch Me" song---I love that song, it has a very latin beat to it! Makes me want to dance every time I listen to it...Lovely song selection Di!!! thanks anita...me too...i love that dance😊

LOL...I could teach Angad how to dance as I love to dance...Me and my friends auditioned for our school talent show and got picked = D.. wow...so ur a dancer too...👏

Aww, its cute to see Rhea teaching him how to danceee! Angad Rhea ke ungleeyon (fingers) pe nach raha hai...LOL..Nice to see the bond growing between father-daughter = D he is dancing to both rhea and kripa's tunes now😆

YAY! Kanan's backk..I missed her..LOL...I love her dialogues Di..You do a fab job with them!

u know how to make one feel good😃

Dialogue of the Update:

"Looks like you are getting obsessed with her," she picked her bag and papers and walked towards the door.

"No way…..I just want to break her arrogance."

Kanan chuckled and then muttered under her breath, "wonder if she is planning the same…..good match! Better than a cricket match for sure!"

LOL..It sure is better than a cricket match! You bet it is! LOL..I love the one-liners! You're the best at them di! Kripa is all ready to break his arrogance...LMAO!

Oooohhhh what detail Di!

The dance detail was like "WOAH" ...Di you are doing a fab job with ittt! I told you before that the way you describe the dances are like out of the world!!

i am glad u liked it anita

YAY! My name is in the update..LMAO! But you are alluding to the Anita in KYPH, I know..LOL..Still, at least I'm a small part of it..LOL! yeah...anita just has a small role here

Is it me or are you like updating both FF's at a fast speed? LOL.. it's you...because in reality i have slowed down😕

Continue DYM soon and then this!

Happpy Early Diwali!!! I hope you enjoy yourself with your family!!! thanks...and i have updated DYM😊

-Anita

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[quote=ladoo645]
Aww shuxs, no problem of sharing the song, I guess I connected as a reader to your FF.😳😳😛

Aww loved the connection building between father and daughter, LOL loved the seeing Angad sweating to imitate steps from the dance show LOL. Man rhea is one smart kid!😉

Hmm this Simone Character looks suspicious....... i dunno i could be wrong, but love suprises!

WHOA......what a dance u wrote Di!!! Man she had to take of da glasses, phew.....It not feeling so cold here in Canada, after reading ur part lol. 😆

Hmm entertaining I bet for the learners.......Di this part was amazing!!!

Hope u have a beautiful Diwali!

-Natasha [/quote]

thanks natasha....cough cough cough....my lips are sealed😉. he he i am glad i could thaw the freeze in canada...or rather AK could😉 Thanks for the diwali wishes...hope u had a good one too😊

[quote=someanshu2008]
hi di
gawd dat so much, the air around was jst sizzling wid chemistry nd d song also jst suited dem though i liked angad's suggestion 2😆 y krips always hav 2 b so prickly around angad nd wat's wrong wid her family? does she really need financial backing? apart frm angad nd krips chemistry angad rhea's chemistry is quite gud 2 so she is his dance teacher nd he her reading teacher dats so cute i jst love rhea nd another new entry anita nd manan loved it di update soon love anshu
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thanks anshu...all ur questions will be answered in due course😊 anita and manan are just props right now😆

[quote=rima791]fab part
wow rhea, the teacher, not bad

kanan is hillarious

dance was amazing

mishti is so money minded ugh

love the cute teasing between AK

do cont soon when you can

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thanks rima....i am glad u liked it. will continue tonite or tomorrow nite😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: aspatel2
Hey bheegi di............... Awesome partssss

i like the way kripa and angad fights.... like cat and dog. their dialoges are awesome tooo a

reaha is so cute angan and her jodi rocks... i see some animal becoming human.. hahaha.....

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-Axita
PS trying to catch up with commenting... promis i willl comment regularly asap..

thanks axita...yes Ak's fights are always as enjoyable as their love😳 angad is indeed changing😊 will PM u again when i update

[quote=coolpal]awesome bheegi di, loving it a lot, loved the songs u put in, and i could totally imagine everything, it was too good!! Liked Angad's dialogue at the end about the song zara zara touch me, lol!! Keep it up di!!

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thanks coolpal....i am glad u loved the songs and dances😊

[quote=angad-kripa#1]Soo cute!!!! I loved! Cont soon Bheegi! Ur friend Harjot. It was funy as well. I hope Kripa starts liking him soon.

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thanks Harjot....well let's see if kripa develops a soft corner for him in next part😳

[quote=arwa72]oh this was hillarious 😆😆😆

So Angad is learning dancing from rhea? thats funny. It'll be interesting to see how Kripa will hide her emerging feelings from him being so close to her

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thanks arwa....yes it's gonna be a difficult task for kripa...let's see how she hides them😳

[quote=jodubai]

Hi Beeghi

Thanks for the pm

This part was so funny...Rhea is such a good teacher jee!! teaching the star cricketer to dance.....

Angad already proving himself to be good to dancing.....Kripa dear, you need to watch for yourself!!

take care[/quote]

thanks Jo...yes kripa is in for some major trouble😳

[quote=noyonika]whoa!!!!! that was awesome!!!!

kripa's and angad's chemistry is incredible!!!! wow!! angad is a go-getter!!!

i love the way angad and rhea are bonding....i just love it!!!! the whole situation is soo beautiful!!!!

im looking forward to kripa's reactions now as the dance competion comes closer....im sure angad's creating havoc in her....hehe....

now i cant wait for the next part!!!! plsss update soon!!!!

love ya..
Niyati..
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thanks niyati....yes kripa is going to have to really fight her feelings as the dance competition gets closer😳 AR are def developing a genuine bond now

thanks hollister and shafoo

[quote=aish_punk]Hey bheegi...wt a cute n hilarious part!!

AK rivalry...wen iz it gonna end?? Angad will teach Kripa a lesson n Kripa will teach Angad!! kk teach oda a lesson n end dis rivalry game!! thanks aish...ladai ladai mein hi pyaar ho jaayega😳

Rhea is jus soo unnersanin...shez actually teachin him2 dance!! 😆 n tat Bachna Ae Haseeno sng wz jus apt 4 Angad....Im glad Angad is tryn 2 make Rhea read in return 4 her dance steps..n Rhea is soo funny...she made him watch Jhalak Dikhlaajaa..lol..I too hope Rhea bcumz a judge on one of dese shwz... Angad sure got 2 noe a lot abt Kripa thru her.... yes rhea is the link between AK in this story😊

Kripa gain tried 2 tease Angad.... gud selection of sngs bheegi..This Don Touch Me sng..wz a damn gud sng 4 d moment ...d dance btwn AK wz soo romantic... n jus described deir relation...no wonder evrybudy stud stunned @ em.... d hatred wz def nt seen....eva Mishti wz impressed!! bt tatz only cuz of d money....

yes...no one can ignore their chemistry....even their enemies😉

Angad's remark @ d end abt tat Zaara Zaara Touch Me sng did g8 Kripa rilli angry!! 😆 D class mst hv bn entertainin..obv wen Angad iz der wid em... angad will make sure to press her buttons each time😆

Plzzz cont soon....I'm lukn fwd 2 more afta dis update

Thnx 4 d PM

Aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: *MitiRasmalai*
Part 5

AWw....Angad already started dreaming about kripa...how cutee...
he has been dreaming about her since the time they met😆

and good riddance good thing that angad broke all his relations with Rosie...I mean i kind of do feel bad for her but then again she was fully aware of what kind of a guy Angad is and in a way she herself was also using angad for her own benefits.... yes she should feel blessed in a way😆

I am glad that Kripa is having an impact on him...and he is actually questioning himself..and the kind of man he really is... yes....she has def tapped his conscience

Even tho Angad isn't aware of this fact himself but its really sweet to know that somewhere or the other he is concerned about the little things associated with Rhea such as her education and all..

deep down he is not a bad guy and somehow their dyslexia bond him him with her as he went thru that in school

well we all know the reason to why angad has started looking forward to Rhea's dance class more than his own practice loll u bet😆

Aww...Angad actually being smart enough to not embarrass Rhea in front of other people by telling them she had problems reading was really sweet and considerate....He knows how hard it is to explain something so complicated to many people...since he himself had gone through the same phase....
exactly!
haha...awww Angad didn't wanna miss Kripa's practice loll...

Looks like Rhea and Kripa are really impacting Angad in a good way ofcourse...Lets see what other changes take place in Angad ....

Mishty is such a selfish and a heartless woman...i cant believe she can talk like that about kripa...she really is a greedy woman....she actually tried getting money out of Angad as well....shes really cunning as well..
yes mishti is just after fame and money
Event tho Angad said some stuff about kripa...but he obviously didn't wanna make it seem that he cared about kripa...and even felt bad that Mishty was talking bad about kripa....I seriously hate her...

I am glad Angad backed off from Mishty's advances...but it seems like luck wasn't with him ...lol...Go knows what Kripa was thinking about him when she saw him n Mishty's cabin ...lol...poor Angad was soo embarrassed....and this time he didn't even do anything...haha... u know at this point kripa has such a low opinion of angad that i bet she was not sur[prised😆

Man I love it when Kripa leaves him dumbstruck by her smart remarks...serves him right...lol...now he knows who is is messing with...haha..

aww....he wanted to dance with her...I really liked the line when he's like: Even tho he knew nothing about dancing he was willing to become the best and most obedient student of his enchanting dance teacher lolll... he he...he is willing to change😳

looks like his dream is gonna take the face of reality ...lets just see how his dance lessons actually go ..loll

Part 6

haha....looks like Kripa wa sin a deep shock...lol...

lol....Kripa said Angad was even worst then a pole??..loll....We'll I a sure she will be in for a surprise later on....lets just see how angad proves himself in front of kripa....or will kripa once again have a chance to humiliate Angad??...Or will angad give kripa a taste of her own medicine...let's just wait and see..

Well obviously Angad will have this certain liking for kripa...after all she is the reason that angad is getting such an opportunity to be close to kripa...why wouldn't he be happy...

Looks like Angad is really confident that just like the other girls he has been Kripa will also give into his touch....We have already started to see what impact Kripa and her word shave on Angad...Now lets just see what effect Angad hold on kripa... i bet kripa was in for a surprise when she got affected by his touch

hahah...i think Angad was overly excited and eager that's why he held on to Kripa's hand soo hard lol....But i am sure he will learn to be fragile and gentle with him as their love blossoms...

haha....An overjoyed and impatient Angad lifting kripa up without even waiting for the music and then getting embarrassed was really funny...

Oh wow...so kripa even felt something when Angad touched her...well thats a start atleast...Lets see how long it takes for Kripa to admit that he does effect her.... knowing kripa in this ff...it could take forever

Omg I love and hate mishty at the same time...I cant believe she is taking full advantage of Kripa's financial state..and just to make more money she is spreading the fall news of Angad being in the show...But then again she is giving and and Kripa a chance to be together...whether kripa like sit or not...she's now stuck with Angad...Its really going to be interesting to see how and when AK' so called hatred changes into love..and how dance brings them both together.... mishti is a blessing in disguise 4 sure

haha...Angad got caught Again ..loll...Well lets see if he's able to change kripa's opinion about him .....

lolll...woww...looks like Kripa touched a sore spot by challenging his manhood ....which led Angad to react in such a harsh way with her.... angad hates to be challenged....that's what has made him a successful cricketer too

But then again at the same time both were going through mixed emotions while being so close to each other...lets see for how long kripa can deny her new formed feelings for Angad...and whether or not will angad succeed in changing Kripa's view about himself... wiat and see😳

part 7

Aww...Rhea teaching Angad how to dance and in return Angad helping out rhea with her reading...really sweet indeed...

But its sad that Angad is using rhea for his own benefit....I hope he regrets doing all this really badly....especially using rhea for his own purpose even if its just to prove himself in front of Kripa...Lets just see when Angad will start realizing his wrong doings...and accept Rhea open heartily without thinking about his career or the world....but just do something right for once... u know even tho on surface he seems to be using rhea, deep down he cares for her

The ff kinda reminds me oh hey baby...how that little baby helped change three men for the good...

i haven't seen that but can imagine as a child is man's biggest teacher IMO

Lets just hope Rhea plays the role of that baby in Angad's life and helps him change for the good...

Well A t least Angad is willing to look after and take care of Rhea if something happens to Simone...and he has somewhere admitted to himself that he wouldn't mind if Rhea does really turn out to be his daughter...but that sure isn't enough.....he needs to fell the same way as rhea as a father does...if she is his daughter....which seems that he might considering whatever has been shown and told about both Angad and rhea..

Its always exciting and interesting to see AK bicker at each other...

and man what a dance....just mind blowing!!!!...I loved every single description of the dance...It really didn't seem like Angad had no clue about how to dance...it seemed so professional....fantastic!!!

angad is not such a novice at dancing but of course he is not a professional dancer. wo tho kripa ka jadoo tha jo wo uske kadam se kadam mila paaya

stupid mishty.....she's just thinking about making more and more money...and not even once being considerate about all the extra hard works an effort everyone will have to put in to come up with 2 acts in such a small amount of time....and its not even like kripa's getting extra pay for doing all this anyway...atleast i doubt she is since Mishty is a really greedy and cheap girl.. poor kripa....u will feel worse for her when u find out her life story in next part

haha...omg i just loved then ending when Angad hummed the zara zara song....just to irritate kripa...Now even I am looking forward to the dance lessons now...they sure will be really interesting.....

let's see who dances on whose tunes😆

great parts as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon..and keep up the great workkk👏

sorry for any mistakes or if anything didn't make sense.... didn't get to proof read....

thanks again for ur wonderful comments mita😊

[quote=aarohaangel]GO RIA!!! ek din mein jaadooo!! fii i could totally imagine them dancing!!! uve done a superb job!! i dont hknow what to say but then chem between them was soo intense.i actualy agree with mishti..i bet the room went HOT!!! i like how angad and ria are getting along and how he's thinking of hiring a nanny,but im sure in time he will be her nanny! ;) teddy is happy..im glad its too much for servants to handle too....and kanan's happy too!! that is cool!! awesome job!!

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thanks aarohaan...yes AK chem is always intense.....let's see how they all get close to each other

[quote=rabiah]oh my god Bheegi Ji

it was superb

i loved it like crazy

it was the best

i loved the cute dance lessons wid dance teacher rhea

lol very sweet father daughter scence

more hot n happening was AK;s dance.....

cant wait for more

one request

in future of this ff

if u can can u add this song or use it i would love to have a scene around this sond its one of my favorites...

bheegi bheegi raton mein by leslie lewis

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFgBiir64TI&feature=related

plz n thanks

if you dont want to i dont mind

but i would love it if you could add is somewhere in future update

cant wait till next part

rabiah[/quote]

thanks rabiah...i am happy u liked all the AK and AR parts. yes that is a wonderful song...actually a lot of AK ffs and VMs have been made on this song😳

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: wintersunshine
hey bheegi di...completely luvd this part the interaction btwn Angad and Rhea was very touching and how she was his dance teacher just luvd that part and I am so thankful to Mishti for making them dance together and the touch me dance was mind blowing...A seems to be falling deep and deep day by day...K is also reacting but resisting ah hope to see more AK romance in the next part and I think the part that just stood out to me the most was when Angad says to Kripa that how about you add another sequence...."zara zara touch me touch me, zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss me'" I could just see the whole scene and it looked quite hilarious 😆
please continue soon cant wait to read more
Love,
Heena

thanks heena. Yes, ur right, angad is falling hard and kripa has just started feeling something....so kuch kuch hota hai😳...let's see if next part brings them even closer😊

[quote=saridena]update soooooooooooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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sorry guys...still tired from the diwali celebrations. I will update SWD tomorrow 4 sure with a long AK scene in it😳....promise

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#509

All caught up and loving it! The freestyle dancing of Kripa and Angad sounded so passionate and HOT! Sparks are flying already. 😉 I'm also enjoying the bonding between Angad and Rhea. Angad is already changing. I guess it was inevitable!

Update soon!

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar
All caught up and loving it! The freestyle dancing of Kripa and Angad sounded so passionate and HOT! Sparks are flying already. 😉 I'm also enjoying the bonding between Angad and Rhea. Angad is already changing. I guess it was inevitable!

Update soon!

thanks Rabia. Looks like u really like this mayank guy from MJHT.

Thanks for reading the parts and yes, angad is changing- slowly but surely

Did u vote already?😃