Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: musicdiva

awwhhh what a sweet part bheegi!!!

totally love the ultimate change in angad's character!! he's super sweet!!!! specially how he is actually friends with kripa and not just lusting after her!

and love the fact that he understands that to be happy, she needs a friend not a loverboy!

and finally, we get to know about her family! seems like she does have some heavy burden on her shoulders!! hopefully her brother straightens up and gives her a helping hand!!

but she's already gotten help by her new friend's care towards her! u described that soo well!

cont soon! hoping so see some romance blossom between these two!

thanks simi...yes angad is def changing and fortunately kripa is melting towards him too. now the dance sessions will be even more fun😉

[quote=missypatel]Kripaz fized image abt angadz changin..nice!!

luved angad in tis 1....he nt bothered abt his own srlf...but is concerend for krips....hmmmm!!

more dancin..with no games tension..yayy!!

grt update!! =)

btw..never mentioned..luv yur sigz for AK n AR!!

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Thanks missy...yes they both have changed opinions about each other...let's see how their dance sessions progress now😳Muniza was kind enuf to make those siggies for me...thanks 4 liking them

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di

awesome, wonderful and lovely part finally looks like that kripa is melting towards angad and so is angad i hope angad don't hurt her feelings and help her with financial problems

i think rhea will bring angad and kripa togehter and hopefully they become one soon

angad changed so differently all of sudden he started developing feelings for kripa and hope fully solve her all problems and love her which she needs right now

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon di

love ya di

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Thanks mittal...yes love has def changed angad😳 hopefully, kripa will open up in front of him too. Let's see what happens with all of them😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction
Awsumm part---
laughed at so many parts and i liked the language or shud i stay style of writing like shabbir saying ke he'll hav to ask kanan ke yeh kya MAAZRA hai-- lol--
oh and also the scene in the car-- that ws really nice-- esp the part where they were talkin bout how similar they are--
oh and the part where she saved him from the crowds-- it really brought out her ''strong woman'' personality--
really nice part-- !!
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update jaldi pls =)

thanks sweetoo....i am glad i could make u laugh😆 yes, kripa is def a strong woman....let's wait and see how their romance blossoms😳

[quote=kvn1983]waoh👍🏼 di its superb⭐️ so sweet😊😉 and mind blowing😊😍 both r awesome❤️ and their tastes r so simila😊😛😉 and angad also changed😊 with their co-players so cut😊😛 plz continue it soon😊
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Thanks Nidha....yes they are similar in a lot of ways. fortunately, they are changing their impressions about each other now😳

[quote=namelesssr]Thanks for the super looonng part, Bheegi 😊

And enjoyed reading this update too... with AK warming up to each other... guess it won't be long before Kripa opens up her heart to Angad
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Thanks sup. as i had promised, i will give a long Ak part😆 i hope i didn't bore u though😆. well, let's see when and if kripa opens up to him completely😳

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Niyati Joshi

@noyonika

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#523

wow!!! what a cute part!!!! i loved it!!!

u are getting better and better with every update of yours.... :)

i really enjoyed the verbal duel that angad-kripa keep on having....looks like mr. arrogant angad will soon have to bend his ways for the love that's coming in his life....hehe....

the genuine surprise in angad seeing kripa effectively handle the media is also a treat!!!! bechaara angad got so tattered by the mob!!! but when kripa actually helped him, i was shocked!!! it was totally unexpected!!!! :)

will be eagerly waiting for the next update as i always am...hehe....i guess DYM will be first so i guess it wont seem like such a long wait...neways..

btw, i forgot to wish u happy diwali and a new year....may u and ur family be bestowed upon the season's greatest happiness forever.....

love u!!
Niyati..

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Arra Dollie

@insia12

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#524

heyy dii...

wao tht was awsome... i liked shabbirs expressions described lol...how he got suspicious tht angad has changed!!!😆

i mean wonderfull...how they were fighting a few hours bak...

then suddenly they were laughing like friends!!!

awwwwwwwwww rhea is very cute..i wish i hav a niece lyk her...*fingers crossed*

wow...shez perfect....i mean very intelligient...

just in a min she shouted n awl d crowds vanished!!!!

awwwwww poor angadz clothes got torn...poor him..

does it actually happen wid cricketers...lol

aww i feel sad seeing kripaz current position!!!!

cont asap

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#525

hi bheegi di

thks for the pm di

mindblowing part

bechari kripa her family condition is very worst state

kripa also is attracted to angad

angad is changing slowly and all his team menbers r shocked

rhea is sweet

shabbir is going to become a detative

angad and kripa car jorney was fun

update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#526

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! bheegi yaar, truly today u outdid urself. that update was truly awsome and the way AK are coming closer to each other was heart-warming, poor kripa, i feel so sorry for her. she needs someone she can lean on for a change. question is is angad mature enough to be that someone?????????😔 well i guess we'll just have to wait and see.

the prob is bheegs, u scare me, ur ffs are never predictabe, espcially the AK ones, whenever we the readers think everything is fine, something happens to mess everything up

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#527

great part bheegi di....the chemistry is getting in to the swing mode now, awsome job...rhea still my fav lolzzz....and somehow somewhere i think hsabbir may become more than just a filler for ur fic!!!

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tehreem

@tehreemm

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Posted: 16 years ago

#528

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was such a gr8 part i luved it AK are soo cute and sweet thanx god kripa is being a normal person not the 1 who is always angry and btw i luv tht jane kyun song its soo gud continue soon waiting 4 ur next part

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#529

awesome update!!

i guess the wall is slowly fading from Kripa to Angad!!

lol at the scene when Angad gets mobbed

and finally a smile on Kripa's face, i hope there will be

more smiles to come

looking forward to the next part

thanks for the PM

Sania

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Vijaya

@vallanki

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#530

I cdn't watch youtube..address is not right.

wonderful part as always. Thanks for writing lengthy one.

So Angad decided tohave her in his life!!! Interesting development and quick confession. Now kripa hs to wait for his arrival in next class!! She is unusually happy relaxing mood so she will also confess soon that she needs his presence in her life.

Hope they understand soon and confess openly.

Angad knew kripa will melt when the topic comes on to Rhea..Angad knew kripa has soft and tender heart unlike other women he used for his time pass.