Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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krina

@krina_17

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Posted: 16 years ago

#481

Di.... this is awesome tooo

i loved it the noak-joaks of AK

there are the Best OF the Best Today.... Dancing with rhea and Kanan was the Best

Sorry I couldnot reply long as i m getting late..

But this is so so much awesome. whenever i read this FF-- To Err is a Human AK's noak-joak comes to my mind....

- esp. from that FF I became a fan oF AK.. though I read urs FF of AK and other couples there were also has same feeling.... but some how TO err is a human FF gave me more of them. ANd more visual fights and romance.... that was the best.....

thanks Di

Krina

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armaghan

@sidra01

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Posted: 16 years ago

#482

interesting oved wow kanan seems to work as his conscience everything was great hate mishti really want to know more about kripa great part

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namelesssr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#483

[quote=bheegi][quote=namelesssr]Does Kripa have a history that we'll learn about as the story unfolds... somehow her reminder to herself that he had no right to see her tears, nor her weaknesses makes me think that she does 😕 I'm sure she'll find peace when Angad turns over a new leaf in her pyar 😊
Thanks, Bheegi![/quote]thanks namelessr....u always find the statement which predicts something about the future....wiat and see as the story unfolds😉[/quote]Ahaaa... twist queen to unleash more twists on us poor unsuspecting readers😉😆😆

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#484

WOW! Beautiful update...Loved the dance session between Angad and Kripa---the detail of the dance left me mesmerized as I imagined AK in my mind dancing to the "Touch Me" song---I love that song, it has a very latin beat to it! Makes me want to dance every time I listen to it...Lovely song selection Di!!!

LOL...I could teach Angad how to dance as I love to dance...Me and my friends auditioned for our school talent show and got picked = D..

Aww, its cute to see Rhea teaching him how to danceee! Angad Rhea ke ungleeyon (fingers) pe nach raha hai...LOL..Nice to see the bond growing between father-daughter = D

YAY! Kanan's backk..I missed her..LOL...I love her dialogues Di..You do a fab job with them!

Dialogue of the Update:

"Looks like you are getting obsessed with her," she picked her bag and papers and walked towards the door.

"No way…..I just want to break her arrogance."

Kanan chuckled and then muttered under her breath, "wonder if she is planning the same…..good match! Better than a cricket match for sure!"

LOL..It sure is better than a cricket match! You bet it is! LOL..I love the one-liners! You're the best at them di! Kripa is all ready to break his arrogance...LMAO!

Oooohhhh what detail Di!

The dance detail was like "WOAH" ...Di you are doing a fab job with ittt! I told you before that the way you describe the dances are like out of the world!!

YAY! My name is in the update..LMAO! But you are alluding to the Anita in KYPH, I know..LOL..Still, at least I'm a small part of it..LOL!

Is it me or are you like updating both FF's at a fast speed? LOL..

Continue DYM soon and then this!

Happpy Early Diwali!!! I hope you enjoy yourself with your family!!!

-Anita

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 16 years ago

#485

Aww shuxs, no problem of sharing the song, I guess I connected as a reader to your FF.😳😳😛

Aww loved the connection building between father and daughter, LOL loved the seeing Angad sweating to imitate steps from the dance show LOL. Man rhea is one smart kid!😉

Hmm this Simone Character looks suspicious....... i dunno i could be wrong, but love suprises!

WHOA......what a dance u wrote Di!!! Man she had to take of da glasses, phew.....It not feeling so cold here in Canada, after reading ur part lol. 😆

Hmm entertaining I bet for the learners.......Di this part was amazing!!!

Hope u have a beautiful Diwali!

-Natasha

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sameira

@AKForever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#486

heyy wow great part..
continue soon..

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 16 years ago

#487

hahaha..pretty entertaining! gr8 part :)

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...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#488

hi di

gawd dat so much, the air around was jst sizzling wid chemistry nd d song also jst suited dem though i liked angad's suggestion 2😆 y krips always hav 2 b so prickly around angad nd wat's wrong wid her family? does she really need financial backing? apart frm angad nd krips chemistry angad rhea's chemistry is quite gud 2 so she is his dance teacher nd he her reading teacher dats so cute i jst love rhea nd another new entry anita nd manan loved it di update soon love anshu

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Rima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#489

fab part

wow rhea, the teacher, not bad

kanan is hillarious

dance was amazing

mishti is so money minded ugh

love the cute teasing between AK

do cont soon when you can

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aspatel2

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Posted: 16 years ago

#490

Hey bheegi di............... Awesome partssss

i like the way kripa and angad fights.... like cat and dog. their dialoges are awesome tooo a

reaha is so cute angan and her jodi rocks... i see some animal becoming human.. hahaha.....

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-Axita
PS trying to catch up with commenting... promis i willl comment regularly asap..