Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 50

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome bheegi di, loving it a lot, loved the songs u put in, and i could totally imagine everything, it was too good!! Liked Angad's dialogue at the end about the song zara zara touch me, lol!! Keep it up di!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Soo cute!!!! I loved! Cont soon Bheegi! Ur friend Harjot. It was funy as well. I hope Kripa starts liking him soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh this was hillarious 😆😆😆
So Angad is learning dancing from rhea? thats funny. It'll be interesting to see how Kripa will hide her emerging feelings from him being so close to her
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Beeghi

Thanks for the pm
This part was so funny...Rhea is such a good teacher jee!! teaching the star cricketer to dance.....
Angad already proving himself to be good to dancing.....Kripa dear, you need to watch for yourself!!
take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
whoa!!!!! that was awesome!!!!

kripa's and angad's chemistry is incredible!!!! wow!! angad is a go-getter!!!


i love the way angad and rhea are bonding....i just love it!!!! the whole situation is soo beautiful!!!!


im looking forward to kripa's reactions now as the dance competion comes closer....im sure angad's creating havoc in her....hehe....


now i cant wait for the next part!!!! plsss update soon!!!!


love ya..
Niyati..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey bheegi...wt a cute n hilarious part!!
AK rivalry...wen iz it gonna end?? Angad will teach Kripa a lesson n Kripa will teach Angad!! kk teach oda a lesson n end dis rivalry game!!
Rhea is jus soo unnersanin...shez actually teachin him2 dance!! 😆 n tat Bachna Ae Haseeno sng wz jus apt 4 Angad....Im glad Angad is tryn 2 make Rhea read in return 4 her dance steps..n Rhea is soo funny...she made him watch Jhalak Dikhlaajaa..lol..I too hope Rhea bcumz a judge on one of dese shwz... Angad sure got 2 noe a lot abt Kripa thru her....
Kripa gain tried 2 tease Angad.... gud selection of sngs bheegi..This Don Touch Me sng..wz a damn gud sng 4 d moment ...d dance btwn AK wz soo romantic... n jus described deir relation...no wonder evrybudy stud stunned @ em.... d hatred wz def nt seen....eva Mishti wz impressed!! bt tatz only cuz of d money....
Angad's remark @ d end abt tat Zaara Zaara Touch Me sng did g8 Kripa rilli angry!! 😆 D class mst hv bn entertainin..obv wen Angad iz der wid em...
Plzzz cont soon....I'm lukn fwd 2 more afta dis update
Thnx 4 d PM
Aishwarya
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowowow what a amazingg partt i love it so much plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 5

AWw....Angad already started dreaming about kripa...how cutee...

and good riddance good thing that angad broke all his relations with Rosie...I mean i kind of do feel bad for her but then again she was fully aware of what kind of a guy Angad is and in a way she herself was also using angad for her own benefits....

I am glad that Kripa is having an impact on him...and he is actually questioning himself..and the kind of man he really is...

Even tho Angad isn't aware of this fact himself but its really sweet to know that somewhere or the other he is concerned about the little things associated with Rhea such as her education and all..

well we all know the reason to why angad has started looking forward to Rhea's dance class more than his own practice loll

Aww...Angad actually being smart enough to not embarrass Rhea in front of other people by telling them she had problems reading was really sweet and considerate....He knows how hard it is to explain something so complicated to many people...since he himself had gone through the same phase....

haha...awww Angad didn't wanna miss Kripa's practice loll...

Looks like Rhea and Kripa are really impacting Angad in a good way ofcourse...Lets see what other changes take place in Angad ....

Mishty is such a selfish and a heartless woman...i cant believe she can talk like that about kripa...she really is a greedy woman....she actually tried getting money out of Angad as well....shes really cunning as well..

Event tho Angad said some stuff about kripa...but he obviously didn't wanna make it seem that he cared about kripa...and even felt bad that Mishty was talking bad about kripa....I seriously hate her...

I am glad Angad backed off from Mishty's advances...but it seems like luck wasn't with him ...lol...Go knows what Kripa was thinking about him when she saw him n Mishty's cabin ...lol...poor Angad was soo embarrassed....and this time he didn't even do anything...haha...

Man I love it when Kripa leaves him dumbstruck by her smart remarks...serves him right...lol...now he knows who is is messing with...haha..

aww....he wanted to dance with her...I really liked the line when he's like: Even tho he knew nothing about dancing he was willing to become the best and most obedient student of his enchanting dance teacher lolll...

looks like his dream is gonna take the face of reality ...lets just see how his dance lessons actually go ..loll

Part 6

haha....looks like Kripa wa sin a deep shock...lol...

lol....Kripa said Angad was even worst then a pole??..loll....We'll I a sure she will be in for a surprise later on....lets just see how angad proves himself in front of kripa....or will kripa once again have a chance to humiliate Angad??...Or will angad give kripa a taste of her own medicine...let's just wait and see..

Well obviously Angad will have this certain liking for kripa...after all she is the reason that angad is getting such an opportunity to be close to kripa...why wouldn't he be happy...

Looks like Angad is really confident that just like the other girls he has been Kripa will also give into his touch....We have already started to see what impact Kripa and her word shave on Angad...Now lets just see what effect Angad hold on kripa...

hahah...i think Angad was overly excited and eager that's why he held on to Kripa's hand soo hard lol....But i am sure he will learn to be fragile and gentle with him as their love blossoms...

haha....An overjoyed and impatient Angad lifting kripa up without even waiting for the music and then getting embarrassed was really funny...

Oh wow...so kripa even felt something when Angad touched her...well thats a start atleast...Lets see how long it takes for Kripa to admit that he does effect her....

Omg I love and hate mishty at the same time...I cant believe she is taking full advantage of Kripa's financial state..and just to make more money she is spreading the fall news of Angad being in the show...But then again she is giving and and Kripa a chance to be together...whether kripa like sit or not...she's now stuck with Angad...Its really going to be interesting to see how and when AK' so called hatred changes into love..and how dance brings them both together....

haha...Angad got caught Again ..loll...Well lets see if he's able to change kripa's opinion about him .....

lolll...woww...looks like Kripa touched a sore spot by challenging his manhood ....which led Angad to react in such a harsh way with her....

But then again at the same time both were going through mixed emotions while being so close to each other...lets see for how long kripa can deny her new formed feelings for Angad...and whether or not will angad succeed in changing Kripa's view about himself...

part 7

Aww...Rhea teaching Angad how to dance and in return Angad helping out rhea with her reading...really sweet indeed...

But its sad that Angad is using rhea for his own benefit....I hope he regrets doing all this really badly....especially using rhea for his own purpose even if its just to prove himself in front of Kripa...Lets just see when Angad will start realizing his wrong doings...and accept Rhea open heartily without thinking about his career or the world....but just do something right for once...

The ff kinda reminds me oh hey baby...how that little baby helped change three men for the good...

Lets just hope Rhea plays the role of that baby in Angad's life and helps him change for the good...

Well A t least Angad is willing to look after and take care of Rhea if something happens to Simone...and he has somewhere admitted to himself that he wouldn't mind if Rhea does really turn out to be his daughter...but that sure isn't enough.....he needs to fell the same way as rhea as a father does...if she is his daughter....which seems that he might considering whatever has been shown and told about both Angad and rhea..

Its always exciting and interesting to see AK bicker at each other...

and man what a dance....just mind blowing!!!!...I loved every single description of the dance...It really didn't seem like Angad had no clue about how to dance...it seemed so professional....fantastic!!!

stupid mishty.....she's just thinking about making more and more money...and not even once being considerate about all the extra hard works an effort everyone will have to put in to come up with 2 acts in such a small amount of time....and its not even like kripa's getting extra pay for doing all this anyway...atleast i doubt she is since Mishty is a really greedy and cheap girl..

haha...omg i just loved then ending when Angad hummed the zara zara song....just to irritate kripa...Now even I am looking forward to the dance lessons now...they sure will be really interesting.....

great parts as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon..and keep up the great workkk👏

sorry for any mistakes or if anything didn't make sense.... didn't get to proof read....


Edited by *MitiRasmalai* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
GO RIA!!! ek din mein jaadooo!! fii i could totally imagine them dancing!!! uve done a superb job!! i dont hknow what to say but then chem between them was soo intense.i actualy agree with mishti..i bet the room went HOT!!! i like how angad and ria are getting along and how he's thinking of hiring a nanny,but im sure in time he will be her nanny! ;) teddy is happy..im glad its too much for servants to handle too....and kanan's happy too!! that is cool!! awesome job!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my god Bheegi Ji
it was superb
i loved it like crazy
it was the best
i loved the cute dance lessons wid dance teacher rhea
lol very sweet father daughter scence
more hot n happening was AK;s dance.....
cant wait for more
one request
in future of this ff
if u can can u add this song or use it i would love to have a scene around this sond its one of my favorites...
bheegi bheegi raton mein by leslie lewis
plz n thanks
if you dont want to i dont mind
but i would love it if you could add is somewhere in future update
cant wait till next part
rabiah

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