Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Jodubai
Hi NJ

do accept my apologies for the late response.....I got your pm's, but I was sick for 2 days, so couldn't come online

aawww um sorry to hear that hope ur feeling much better hun...

I write both part 2/3 now& must say you have some amazing writing skills, love the way you describe the situations, the atmosphere, & most importanly, the way you have all the chartacters involved in the FF, right from Gappu, his GF, Lovely, Ritu & Chirag & of course our AR

yeh um glad abt that, i wud not like to be told off for being biased to a set of characters they all matter equally to me here in the story at least!!!

Really felt bad for Lovely, that she has to suffer like this, but would very much like to know, why Arman had to marry her in the 1st place,

all in good time!!!

Ritu/Chirag are really good friends, doing so much to get 2 of their friends togather & at the same time, trying to get each other too, atleast Chirag is making advance towards Ritu

hehe yeh i thot atleast one outa the 2 couples shud behave normally!!!😆

Lovely plot, words carefully chosen to make the description even more vivid. I hope you do great with this project...

thnx Jo!

take care

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

heyy NJ😉!!!!!!!! late as ever😆😆 still just caught up wid dis part yaar😃 but lovely actually cut her wrist dat means serious problem naa😲

i luved chirag n ritu here !!!!!! but i would really luv to read ridzy's reaction wen she cums to noe of dis truth 😉 but lovely is 8 yrs elder to armaan ,haila😲😲!!!!!!! c'mon now itz getting truly interesting 😊!!!!!! but i'm dying to noe armaan's secret here 😭😭 would b sumthing really serious looking at d way he made up all his decisions😕!!!!!!!! ohk ridzy can't help herself wen ormaan is around now , can she😉????? well he would have d same effect on nebody...😆😆 n now i'm really looking for deyr first meeting after all dese yrs😛 hope it reveals sum secrets , rite😉!!!!!! although ridzy seems d dominant one here....😳 luv ya aravi

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chaiti!

@chaiti!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

Hey waitin to read what will happen when they meet the next day! Plz pm me when u cont! Tc!:)

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: aravi
heyy NJ😉!!!!!!!! late as ever😆😆 still just caught up wid dis part yaar😃 but lovely actually cut her wrist dat means serious problem naa😲
i luved chirag n ritu here !!!!!! but i would really luv to read ridzy's reaction wen she cums to noe of dis truth 😉 but lovely is 8 yrs elder to armaan ,haila😲😲!!!!!!! c'mon now itz getting truly interesting 😊!!!!!! but i'm dying to noe armaan's secret here 😭😭 would b sumthing really serious looking at d way he made up all his decisions😕!!!!!!!! ohk ridzy can't help herself wen ormaan is around now , can she😉????? well he would have d same effect on nebody...😆😆 n now i'm really looking for deyr first meeting after all dese yrs😛 hope it reveals sum secrets , rite😉!!!!!! although ridzy seems d dominant one here....😳 luv ya aravi

lolzzz yeh total role reversal here....this armaan is from a different planet, u wil know why sometim soon!!!glad u like the story hun!!!

@chaiti! thanx dear, i will PM for sure....

Edited by spln - 17 years ago

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prerna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#145

hey NJ😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
this part was cool dear
esp the last part where she asks him to clear up all the mess he created n meet her next day😆
im sure its gonna be fun next part
n then that chirag ritu part was hillarious 😆 loved it all
n then that lovely shes such a pain yaar😡 but i guess in a way shes helpin them out😆 but fell bad for her also at the same time😭 n poor armaan
update soon
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lakshmi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#146

kk i'm nt waitngg 4 d nxt prt 2 pst my comments.. here i go..
u gurl actually hooked me up in dis prt.....was in klg and had 2 do a reasearch on lehman bros n d only think i did was read ur prt..... i cld write a thesis on it....
one question do d malliks hav a baby or nt..... i'm little confused... i thought dey adopted one...
luvd d relationship btwn ritu n chirag... i jus luvd dem n i'm glad ammy landed up 2 meet ridz.....
bt armi seems 2 b a little dominating...... i want 2 read armis side of story......
luvd d prt.. thnxx 4 d pm... update soon.. (hopng d nxt prt wil b soonnn...)

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saira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#147

awesome part👏!

i hope ridz finds out about the truth soon😕😳

plz update soon😳!

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 17 years ago

#148

My apologies for not commenting on the last two part....firigg i hate being sick...

Hmm Minne-Guppu duo eh?, looks like u n me thinkin in the same track! hehe

Just read both parts and must say your portayin Armaan's psychological abilties very well, I must say!

Uh Oh.........Armaan is in for some big dodo :D

-Natasha

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#149

@prerna... thanx for the comments hun...glad u like the part...yeh i hope il make next part fun enough for u all....as n when i do post it...will try to make that soon....

@lakshami...hey dear! they dont have any kids at all....she believes in her hallucinations that they do n he lets her believe it, but then when she is normal she knows she doesnt have kids and that moment in the office with ridzishe was normal....so....well hope that clarifies...glad u like the part...
PS i love to know ur hooked to the fic, but wudnt want u to miss on work at all dear!!!