Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

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@hinu di...hehe...dont wory me a patient waiting person, dint u know that😆

@ ttimpy...haha no not at all hun....il have it done soon, um just as impatient as u guys, just the work been insane....

@palnika...awsome..yeh yeh....then i was taking it on the right track....it will work...u wont belive this but the next part actually uses alot of the info ur giving me now, i just assumed it wud all fit, n i guess most of it is...thats a relief....thanx a lot for the details....they make a great difference...just incase someone in my english class knows them as well as u do!!!..
ps:80% ppl have it..oh man...yeh well we all have those feeling at random moments...like u said its all abt how intense the case is...lovely is struck hard!!!!

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pal234

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

haila u updating abhi kya??? maine beech ke posts padhe hi nahi pehle....me waiting :)

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

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Posted: 17 years ago

#123

First of all,I'm really sorry 4 the late comment...As for the update:-

Awwww....Minnie and Gappu like each other?!?! Cho chweeeeet!!! Really!!! They're adorable!!! I wonder who Minnie's uncle is...For some reason,that bit caught my interest....

OMG Lovely's Schizophrenic?!? Wow...didn't expect that.I wonder why Armaan married her after all?? He still loves Ridz and is loyal only to her,then why did he get involved in this Lovely scenario?? Can't w8 to find out...

Hmm...So Ritu's actually trying to bring AR 2gether?? Wow...looks like we have our 1st cupid already...lolz... 😉

Do continue soon and thanks alot for the pm...Really appreciate it...

Love,

Ananya

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Avanti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

as usual i always have to read ur fantastic FFs!!!! 👏 so im back to reading this one!! i really love the concept.. its different and interesting.. i feel so bad for ridzi..especially when u explained her feelings u could tell how hurt she was!! and same with armaan.. they both had the dream to be with each other!! you've written it sooo well!! 👏 can't wait for your next update!! 😳

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

part 3 up ppl....enjoy reading..pm's later....

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pickytg

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Posted: 17 years ago

#126

ha ho!!!

i luved ritu n chiragz convo..it was 2 d point..yet full of story!! lol!

Rz last bit was niceeee...lovely suddenly livin reality n R bein balmed for it..dt had 2 get tem tlkin!!

bt again..yd lovely cut her wrist..was she in her real form wen it happened...cuz otherwise she wudnt tlk abt nt bein able 2 gve in 2 hiz ritez..hmmm!!

ohhh i lived Az part 2..minute details..wntd 2 tell her desp!!aaawwww!! u gotta put in more of those...even if ya dnt mke tem tlk..tis is a convo of its own!

i cud comment on every sent gurl ...luved it!! ur climbin on fast!!

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gurpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#127

wonderful part

just awesome

poor riddhima co confused

i wonder y armaan got married 2 her

update soon

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: missypatel

ha ho!!!

i luved ritu n chiragz convo..it was 2 d point..yet full of story!! lol!

hehe...yeh i dont want armaans side revealed yet, so um letting everyone else talk out their side of things missy!!!....its a bait, um hoping u guys will take it n not kill me for the suspense 😆

Rz last bit was niceeee...lovely suddenly livin reality n R bein balmed for it..dt had 2 get tem tlkin!!

haha...yeh....something had to be done....its being done now!!!

bt again..yd lovely cut her wrist..was she in her real form wen it happened...cuz otherwise she wudnt tlk abt nt bein able 2 gve in 2 hiz ritez..hmmm!!

oki i wasnt sure if this wud make sense, um glad u point il revise it for the submission tom, lovely was in her senses at night, she just had a spell of depression bcause of lack of her happy hallucinations..mental disorders..highly unpredictable...or so um making this one atleast!!!😆

ohhh i lived Az part 2..minute details..wntd 2 tell her desp!!aaawwww!! u gotta put in more of those...even if ya dnt mke tem tlk..tis is a convo of its own! ...

yup they have to be talking that way for a wile...or well...lets see how much i decide to make them talk next morning....now that hey are at it!!!!

i cud comment on every sent gurl ...luved it!! ur climbin on fast!!

thanx hun, glad u lik it.....i was re reading it now, so many typos.....ufff....sab sai karne honge before submission tom....

@preet916: thanx a lot dear glad u like it, will try to update asap!

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ttimpy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#129

brilliant piece of work..........naseem............such a different storyline.........

they are both hurting so much.............but circumstances will not allow them to disclose their hurt and their insecurities.............i hope that they have a decent convo tmrw..........

ridz did not like to be blamed for sumthing she had not done but gave in to a silent plea from armaan...........wud she have done the same for any other random client...........i was also thinking that had been any other interior decorator hired , wud armaan have taken that person into confidence about lovely's condition.........

btw..........i forgot to write about it last time but i loved that line u had written about his fidelity to the woman he had dreamed of having a family with............it was mmmmmmmmmmmmindblowing...............it made me feel that if he ever ever talks to ridz about it he is going to be so tender with her...........

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: ttimpy
brilliant piece of work..........naseem............such a different storyline.........

they are both hurting so much.............but circumstances will not allow them to disclose their hurt and their insecurities.............i hope that they have a decent convo tmrw..........

ridz did not like to be blamed for sumthing she had not done but gave in to a silent plea from armaan...........wud she have done the same for any other random client...........i was also thinking that had been any other interior decorator hired , wud armaan have taken that person into confidence about lovely's condition.........

btw..........i forgot to write about it last time but i loved that line u had written about his fidelity to the woman he had dreamed of having a family with............it was mmmmmmmmmmmmindblowing...............it made me feel that if he ever ever talks to ridz about it he is going to be so tender with her...........

aawww timpy that was such a cute remark....thnx a lot um glad u like the fic, n its difference!!!