Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#131

best luck wit yur submission darlin!! 👍🏼

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

really a nice one⭐️ too gud😊 but why chirag and ritu doing all this😕😕 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"chehre ki muskan ban jata hai koi,
dil ki dhadkan ban jata hai koi,
fir kaise jiyenge zindgi unke bin,
jab zindagi jine ki wajah ban jata hai koi."

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#133

hey naseem😊

thks for the pm

awesome part

ridz saw a glance of lovely's disease

go on make armi and ridz meet more and more i enjoying it

ritu and chirag r awesome

update sooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzz

👏

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#134

very well written! the story is picking up and is getting interesting! i cant wait to see the confrontation between ridz and armaan! sooo many questions at this point, but im looking forward to finding out the answers! continue soon!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

Hi Naseem,

Wonderful part.. a lot was happening..and should say it amde me sit and not let anyone disturb me.. was wantign to read each line as it flowed... I like ur descriptive way as well as if the whole situation was in front of me....

I liked the conversation it was real. so very real.. the way you let out words and slowly makign us know where and what had happened there is this beautiful way of writign you have which made us feel what what .. wait and feel OH.. this happened at this situation.. oh .. And thats how i felt abotu the whol eact of lovely cuttign her wrist and attemptign suicde.. btu have to say . i was feelgin terrible to read that .. ur writign skill were at best..loved the wrods which penned down ..felt terrible for Armaan.. and lovely.. and the Chirag and Ritu bit part was very cute... and the words conversation style fo writign very sweet and very affective in deed.. your assigment has to be a hit ..must say:)

Hope u continue the good work. will wait to read about Rizi and Armaan meetign each other..and sortign the thigns... it surely will make ridzii feel so mcuh for Ammy for sure..... like I do..

Bhoomi

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

great update Nj...

As for ur slient readers...just get them to click the thank u botton😳

Im like chriag in this 😍

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

hey amazin part..thanx fr PM sweety..😊

update next part soon..

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#138

Hi NJ

do accept my apologies for the late response.....I got your pm's, but I was sick for 2 days, so couldn't come online

I write both part 2/3 now& must say you have some amazing writing skills, love the way you describe the situations, the atmosphere, & most importanly, the way you have all the chartacters involved in the FF, right from Gappu, his GF, Lovely, Ritu & Chirag & of course our AR

Really felt bad for Lovely, that she has to suffer like this, but would very much like to know, why Arman had to marry her in the 1st place, Ritu/Chirag are really good friends, doing so much to get 2 of their friends togather & at the same time, trying to get each other too, atleast Chirag is making advance towards Ritu

Lovely plot, words carefully chosen to make the description even more vivid. I hope you do great with this project

take care

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: kvn1983
really a nice one⭐️ too gud😊 but why chirag and ritu doing all this😕😕 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"chehre ki muskan ban jata hai koi,
dil ki dhadkan ban jata hai koi,
fir kaise jiyenge zindgi unke bin,
jab zindagi jine ki wajah ban jata hai koi."

hey nidha....chirag n ritu are just being good freinds and trying to get AR together...they wanted to admit lovely so that armaan wud have to come n meet ridhima without being able to avoid, and they got that to happen, just another way! glad u like the story!

@saridena...thanx hun...yeh well the thing has come up between the two of them....hopefully something more will reveal itself soon, in my head, so i can have it on the thread!!!

@Robin_M thanx hun...um glad u like the track!....will update asap

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Catwoman
great update Nj...

As for ur slient readers...just get them to click the thank u botton😳....😳yeh i know...but the comments this time i need are not just as comments um really looking forwrd to ppl teling me wat they like n esp wat they dont like so i can change that accordingly for the assignment....😳😳😳

Im like chriag in this 😍...me too!!

@aarora: thanx a lot hun, glad u like it!

Edited by spln - 17 years ago