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Part 3 NJ, 👏 was full of action!!
Really felt for Armaan in the beginning when he was with Chirag, the way that whole scene was described made me feel like I was actually in the room with them!! Beautifully written NJ!!
Its great to be able to feel what a character your reading felt and the opening scene of Armaan and Chirag was just superb. The way Chirag explained how serious the cut was. And Armaan explaining what had happened between them for lovely to feel the way she did! And do what she did; I was just in complete awe of this whole scene. It showed me just how much Armaan cares for lovely even though he does not love her but he is still with her, and the fact that she is 8 years elder to him, I was like aww!! Never read Armaan to be so vulnerable!!
Lovely attempting suicide, it seems as though her condition is beginning to get worse!
Loved the Chirag and Ritu scene, though they are side characters, they do have a lot of importance within your ff already!! Schemeing minds think a like!! Shame they aren't together, although judging by Chirags flirtatious behaviour I am sure they will be together soon lol
The meeting in Ridz office that was brilliant, when I was reading the sentence of the nursery, I was thinking already that lovely will have something to say about it, and she did saying that it was a mistake lol, Ridz quietly accepting the mistake which wasn't her fault on behalf of Armaan showed just how much she still understands Armaan's words unsaid through his actions, just loved the way you described that scene too!!
Eager to know Ridz reaction when she finds out the truth and wanting to know what else Armaan is hiding, what was the real reason he married lovely??
Awesome part NJ, rocking update, eager for the next part, thanks for the PM
Sania
p.s your siggy, really sweet!!
Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 17 years ago
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