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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry NJ that I couldn't comment earlier...Actually went through a hurricane this past weekend and my power was out for three days...It finally feels good to have it back...Anyways, getting back to your part...It was a real treat--both part 2 and 3.
Hmm..I figured the Lovely had some sort of a disorder--otherwise why would Armaan be compulsed to marry her...Feel bad for him though...Couldn't get the love he wanted in life...and he has to live with Lovely's hallucinations and delusions..Feel bad for lovely also..
Glad to see Ritu-Chirag teaming up to help both Armaan and Riddhima out...
Hmm...I'm waiting to see how AR confront themselves in private...
Continue soon NJ...and brilliant update..I love the way you explain their emotions..It's commendable indeed..
-Anita
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Posted: 17 years ago
@saira_1...thanx hun...gald u like the update!...truth in its own time :)

@natty: aawww i hope ur feeling better now dear....do take care of urself, n its nice to get ur comments whenever u right them coz u wana!!!!

@avanti...thanx dear will continue asap

@anita...oh man a hurricane...shoot hope all is well....n dont worry abt the delay i totally understand....pray all is good for u n stays so, glad u like the part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I agree with you...This part definitely had lots of action!! What with Lovely slitting her wrists and the whole scenario in Ridzi's office...Very well written!! You portrayed Lovely's mental disorder very well.It was a striking contrast to the previous part in which she was cradling her "baby".
Ooooh I really like our scheming cupids Ritu and Chirag(do I sense a love story between the cupids themselves?? Lolz). Loved their little scene!!
Do continue soon and thanks alot for the pm!! Looking forward to more...
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW!!! It definately had a lot of action I must say. Loving the story, but I'm getting very impatient to learn about their past. Please put some of it in flashback. 😳
And I just love CR, although I had thought u'll put RM there instead, fully knowing how much u adore the couple😆😆...waiting for their mission to ACTUALLY begin 😉😆😆
thanx for the pms...
Luv Shivani😳
P.S. Can u put a pic for Lovely for us plzz, coz i cant help myself to stop imagining the one in the show, and that makes me fall on bed rolling..😆
Edited by $h!V@n! - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
naseem.....naseem....u r gonna top ur english projct...

awesome....nd dat chirag ritu thing....luv u for dat....dey both r real angels.... :) i hope they succeed in their plan nd lovely also bcum all ryt....

btw sorry 2 bothr again abt d disease bt its the 'tranqulizers' dat are used not anti-depressants....nd person suffering from it does not really undergo depression attack...dey are diff attacks....jus thot dis is gonna help u in ur projct....nd 1 mor thick in dose attacks person can also be dangerous 2 near1s....really near1s 2....

ok ok coming back 2 d part....absolutely luvd d way u balanced d armi-ridzy-lovely convo in present nd past....awwww ridzy still remmbers his taste....dat ws absolutly lovely.....hope their meetin nxt mornin sorts out many things nd giv them some time alone 2....

thnx for d pm sweets...
nd pls cont soon....m srsly in luv wit it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nsm......wow wat an update...fab girl. Loved the Ritu-chirag scene....beautifully written with added touch of realism...excellent.....👏

And the office scene was great.....Ridz getting irritated and suspicious....and calling Armaan....brilliant strokes there. Looking forwad to reading more!!! Great update Nsm.

love
Jia
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pal_279

naseem.....naseem....u r gonna top ur english projct... oh no hun u hav no idea wat um up against ppl in my class are smart....especially with words!!!nywaz....thanx alot for the confidence....duno abt topping i just hope to get outa that class at the end of the term thinking iv improved 😳

awesome....nd dat chirag ritu thing....luv u for dat....dey both r real angels.... :) i hope they succeed in their plan nd lovely also bcum all ryt.... hehe....yeh RC....n lovely....they been more on screen than armidz so far!!!

btw sorry 2 bothr again abt d disease bt its the 'tranqulizers' dat are used not anti-depressants....nd person suffering from it does not really undergo depression attack...dey are diff attacks....jus thot dis is gonna help u in ur projct....nd 1 mor thick in dose attacks person can also be dangerous 2 near1s....really near1s 2.... oki heres wat i found....cant find the link again...it said acute mood swings, and like either lack or excess of emotion.....so i thot that could count for depression???like not officially the depression but like a real low tilt in mood???n arent traqulizers like pain relievers n sleep inducers????oh man...i need to study facts better...but thanx a bunch...il mend that...think il keep depression coz that has benefit of doubt, but il fix anti depressants!!....n yeh the dangerous thing i know....thats why i tried to start with one physicaldisplay of her reaction....more explanation abt her act as we go on in the story...she a key character here....somehow!!!

ok ok coming back 2 d part....absolutely luvd d way u balanced d armi-ridzy-lovely convo in present nd past....awwww ridzy still remmbers his taste....dat ws absolutly lovely.....hope their meetin nxt mornin sorts out many things nd giv them some time alone 2.... hehe i was having a hard time making the mind convo reasonably convincing dont wanamake it sound bolly style!!!😆😆😆so i thto il get them to talk like in words!!!!

thnx for d pm sweets...
nd pls cont soon....m srsly in luv wit it......um so happy u are hun!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet=me

I agree with you...This part definitely had lots of action!! What with Lovely slitting her wrists and the whole scenario in Ridzi's office...Very well written!! You portrayed Lovely's mental disorder very well.It was a striking contrast to the previous part in which she was cradling her "baby".

Ooooh I really like our scheming cupids Ritu and Chirag(do I sense a love story between the cupids themselves?? Lolz). Loved their little scene!!
haha yeh il get them along i guess....good deeds need to be repaid!!!...glad u like the story so fdar...even if its at snails pace...😕😕
Do continue soon and thanks alot for the pm!! Looking forward to more...
Love,
Ananya

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

WOW!!! It definately had a lot of action I must say. Loving the story, but I'm getting very impatient to learn about their past. Please put some of it in flashback. 😳

And I just love CR, although I had thought u'll put RM there instead, fully knowing how much u adore the couple😆😆...waiting for their mission to ACTUALLY begin 😉😆😆
thanx for the pms...
Luv Shivani😳
P.S. Can u put a pic for Lovely for us plzz, coz i cant help myself to stop imagining the one in the show, and that makes me fall on bed rolling..😆

hey shivani...lemesee wat i can do for ur special request i dont have any faces in mind...but ilthink of someone!!!yeh def not the lovely from DMG...plz yar ita bi atyachaar ni kar sakti on ammy!!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ samijan.... thanx hun glad u like the part! 😃
@jia....hey sweetie....finally i see u....how u been hun???hope all going good now....praying for u :) 😊
n thanx for the comment glad u like the part... 😳
Edited by spln - 17 years ago

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