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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

I guess u'll end this fiction on 14th Feb😊

maine bhi yehi socha tha...par phir bhi late ho gayi...xams the na...

Originally posted by: psrn

hi

ven will u update yaar kya hua???????????????/

Originally posted by: psrn

any scene to update....//////

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

we have been waiting.......update soooooon

Originally posted by: psrn

ven wil u update??

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

hy please please please update karo na yaar 😭

3 maheene se nahi kya tum ne update 😭

had ho gai hai ab wait nahi hota mugh se😡

please jo samaghna hai samjho dhamki ya request par update kar do meri maaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭



please!!!!!!!!!!

Dhamki ho ya req...kam se kam aap ne kuch toh likha...😆!!! mere xams chal rahe the...isiliye late ho gayi...main bas abhi ud karne ja rahi hun...

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

hi priya main ab tak ki silent reader thi 😲 but now i want to say please don't close this friction

please we all gonna miss this really badCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

ab her...achhi...buri...aur boring chiz ka END toh hota hi hai na...😆!!! isiliye yeh fiction bhi END ho raha hai...ab kitna khinchti main is fiction ko...ha ha ha...!!! ab rona bandh karo...aur last part padh kar mushkurayo...😃

Originally posted by: psrn

yaar ven wil u update ?? at least inform us...

Originally posted by: psrn

kab karegi update??
at least ny 1mof yr ficccccccccccccccccccccccccc

main bass kuch hi der main last part post karr rahi hun...!!! thanks...itna wait kiya aap sab ne mere liye...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
10 min me ud karr rahi hun dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
update kar jaldi se.....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sumi & Mana...
Sumi... actually maine ise Adil ke liye likha tha...par Adil ko bhi toh tum hi le kar aayi thi na...toh tumhe kaise bhul jati...ha ha ha...!!!kaha tha na tum se ke main apne style se tumhe miss karungi...dekh lo...main tumhe kitna miss karr rahi hun...!!! 😃
Mana... ab tujhe main kya kahun...!!! tere toh darshan hi bandh ho gaye hain...!!! bhagwan toh saal me ek do baar darshan bhi de dete hain...par tera toh koi bhi ata pata nahi hai...!!! upar se MAY se tere exams start ho rahe hain...tu tripple sift me kaam karnewali hai...isiliye koi complaine bhi nahi kar sakte...!!! apne tripple shift ko dil se enjoy karna aur mere ideas ke bare me kabhi kabhi sochna bhi...!!! vaise bhi sochne me kya jata hai...😆
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             EPISODE:-37 (Last Part)
 
Rajveer ne hairani se dekha Naina ko aur pucha:-"gift...kaisa gift...??? aaj toh hamari shadi thi na...!!! toh jahan tak mujhe yaad hai na toh aaj tumhara b'day hai aur na hi mera toh gift kaisa...???"
 
Naina ne muh banate hue kaha:-"mazak mat karo na...plz...batayo kya hai mera gift...???"
 
Rajveer ne same xpression ke sath pucha:-"phir se gift...??? kahe ka gift yaar...!!! kahan main tumhari shadi me aaya tha jo tumhare liye gift le kar aayunga...!!! shadi toh hum dono ki hui na...aur voh bhi ek dushre se...toh gift kyoun lata tumhare liye...???"
 
Naina ne Raj se thoda alag ho kar kaha:-"toh tum mere liye gift nahi laye...??? kaise inshan ho...tumhe nahi pata aaj ki raat dulha apne dulhan ko gift deta hai...???"
 
Rajveer ne hairan ho kar kaha:- "achha...??? mujhe yeh baat pahli baar pata chala...!!! vaise tum ne pahle kyoun nahi kaha...??? main kuch na kuch toh le hi aata...pakka...!!! koi baat nahi agli baar le aayunga...!!!"
 
Naina ka hath thaam kar kaha Rajveer ne...
 
Naina:-"kya matlab...agli baar le ayunga...??? tum phir se shadi karnewale ho kya...???"
 
Rajveer ne Naina ka hath apni taraf khincha...Naina...Raj ke seene se takrai...
 
Rajveer ne dhire se kaha:-"shadi toh ek hi baar kiya hai...par suhag raat toh roz manayunga na...toh gift ka programme phir kabhi...!!! abhi jo karna hai...philhaal voh kaam karte hain...!!! yakeen mano Naina...voh kaam khatam hote hote subah ho jayegi...
 
Naina k paseene chut gaye the...Raj ke muh se yeh sab sun kar...
 
Naina thodi dari hui bhi dikh rahi thi...dhire se us ne kaha:- "main samjhi nahi...!!! matlab...
 
Raj us ke xpressions ka maza le raha tha...
 
Rajveer:-"Naina...jyada matlab ke bare me mat socho...karne ke liye baht kaam hain...samjhi...!!! abhi se suru karenge toh sayad subah tak khatam bhi ho jaye...
 
Naina ke hath pair kaampne lage the...!!! aisa nahi hai ke us ne aisa kuch xpect nahi kiya tha...par aise achanak...use kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha... us ka gala sukh raha tha...
 
us ne apna gala saaf kiya aur dhire se kaha:-"Raj...mujhe pyaas lagi hai...
 
Rajveer ne apna chehra us ke kareeb le jate hue kaha:- "yehi toh main bhi kab se feel karr raha tha...!!! toh kaam suru karen...
 
Naina...Rajveer se halke se dur jate hue kaha:-"voh mujhe pani peena hai...mujhe pyaas lagi hai...
 
Rajveer:-"ohh...toh yeh baat hai...!!! ek min ruko...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ko vohin chod...bed ke paas gaya...vahan se milk ka glass uthaya...aur Naina ko dete hue kaha:-"peelo...tumhe aaj is ki baht jarurat hogi...!!! badam-wala dudh hai...
 
Naina ne Raj ke hath se glass toh le liya...par us ke chehre se abhi bhi pareshani dikh rahi thi...aur sab se jyada toh nervousness us ke chehre par jyada thi...
 
Naina:-"pani thik hota mere liye...
 
Naina ne kafi dhimi awaz me kaha...
 
Rajveer:-"tumhe kaise pata...??? jyada mat socho Naina peelo...tumhe aaj se takat ki baht jarurat hai...
 
Naina ne muh se glass lagaya...par us ke gale se utar nahi raha tha... badi mushkil se us ne aadha glaas piya hi tha ke Raj ne us ka hath thaam kar kaha:-"bass...mujhe bhi toh peeni hai na...!!! ab kya...sirf tumhe takat ki jarurat hai...mujhe nahi...!!! tum se jyada toh mujhe takat ki jarurat hai...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ke hath se dudh ka glass le jate hue...baki ka milk bhi ek sec me khatam kiya...aur kaha:-"kafi achha feel ho raha hai...nahi...
 
Naina ki chehre par kuch bhi nahi tha...use khud pata nahi tha ke voh kya reaction de aur kaise...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ke kareeb aate hue kaha:-"arre tum hass kyoun nahi rahi ho...hasso na...!!! aaj hamari suhag raat ki suruwat hai...
 
Rajveer ki baat sunn kar bhi Naina nahi hass pa rahi thi...
 
Rajveer:- "arre tum ne toh pahle se hi apna ghughat utha rakha hai...ab main kya uthayun...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ko le ja kar bed par bithya...aur ghughat us ke chehre par dalte hue kaha:-"jis tarah se filmo me pose le kar baithte hain na...tum bhi baitho...main re-entry karta hun...
 
Naina ko kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...!!! voh bas ek doll ki tarah behave karr rahi thi...!!! kyoun ke Raj hi sab kuch kah raha tha aur karwa bhi raha tha Naina se...
 
paas se hi ek red rose le kar Raj ne apne naak ke paas la kar gane laga aur sath hi Naina ke kareeb aata gaya:- "suhag raat hai...ghughat utha raha hun main...simat rahi hai tu sharma ke apni bahon me...
 
Naina ne turant apni ghughat utha diya aur kaha:-"sorry Raj mujh se yeh nahi hoga...
 
Rajveer ne hairani se kaha:-"kya nahi hoga...???"
 
Naina:-"vohi...jo tum...
 
Naina aage kuch bhi kahne se ruki...aur dhire se kaha:-"mujhe darr lag raha hai tumhari baton se...aur main baht nervous bhi hun...!!! par tum nahi samjhoge...
 
Rajveer us ke kareeb aa kar bola:-"kya nahi samjhunga...
 
Naina ne nazar jhuka kar dhire se kaha:- "bass...tum nahi samjhoge...
 
Rajveer:-"achha ek baat batayo...!!! aisa kabhi hua hai...jo tumhare dil me mere liye koi baat aaye...aur main na samjhun...
 
Naina ne Rajveer ke chehre ko dekhte hue kaha:- "is ka matlab tum samajh rahe ho...main kya kahna chah rahi hun...
 
Rajveer:-"sayad...
 
Naina chup si use dekhti rahi...
 
Rajveer aaram se bed par baitha...phir us ke chehre par ghughat dali aur kaha:-" mujhe lagta tha ke tum mujh par trust karti ho...!!! jitna main janta hun...us se bhi kahin jyada...par aaj lagta hai ke main galat hun...
 
Naina ne ghughat ke ander se Rajveer ko dekha...phir kaha:-"aisa nahi hai Raj...!!! bass...tum jaise mujh se baat karr rahe the...main bass thoda sa darr gayi thi...aur kuch nahi...
 
Rajveer:-"is ka matlab toh yehi hua na...ke tum mujh par trust hi nahi karti...
 
Naina ko yeh baat is baar achhi nahi lagi...us ke ankhon me halke se anshu aaye us ne kaha:-"agar tumhe aisa lagta hai toh...' i m sorry'... main tum se aur kuch nahi kahungi...!!! tum jo chahe kar sakte ho...
 
Rajveer:-"nahi Naina...ab aur nahi...tumhe jo kahna tha tum ne kah diya... aur...
 
Naina halke se roti hui boli:- "bola na sorry...
 
Rajveer ne turant us ka ghughat hatate hue kaha:-"yaar...tum ro kyoun rahi ho...!!! aur voh bhi meri baaton se...
 
Rajveer ne us ke ankhon se anshun hatate hue kaha:-"rona bandh karo... aur mujhe apna kaam karne do...!!! varna mujhe phir se lagega ke...tum mujh par trust nahi karti...
 
Naina ne ankhen bandh ki...chup chap baithi rahi...halaki us ke ander rone ki chahat thi...aur pata nahi kyoun par voh rona chahti thi...(pagal hai...yaar😆)...
 
us ne mehsush kiya...Rajveer ne us k chunni ko pura nikala...Naina ke hath tight hue...bed par...
 
phir us ne mehshush kiya Rajveer ne us ke dono hath apni taraf khinche the...
 
thodi der me us ne phir mehshush kiya ke us ke hath me kuch baht bada sa bhari sa chiz hai...
 
us ne turant ankhen khol di...dekha...us ke hath me...ek gift packet tha...
 
Naina ne hairani se Rajveer ko dekha...toh Rajveer ne kaha:-"voh hamre office ke mr Noorani hai na...unhone yeh gift...
 
Naina ne gift ki taraf dekha...phir Rajveer ki taraf dekha...
 
Rajveer ne aage badhte hue Naina ke forehead ko kiss kiya aur dhire se kaha:-"unhone yeh gift nahi di hai...!!! yeh gift tumhare liye hain...!!! vaise mere samajh me nahi aa raha tha ke tumhe kya gift dun...so...yeh le aaya...agar pasand na bhi aaye toh bhi tumhe tarif karna padega...!!! kyoun ke itni mehnat se le kar aaya hun...aur upar se packing bhi maine ki hai...
 
Naina kuch nahi kaha aur na hi gift khola...bas Rajveer ko kuch der dekhti rahi yun hi...
 
Rajveer ne mushkura kar kaha:- "kuch kahna chahti ho...
 
Naina ne sar hila kar 'haan' kaha...
 
Rajveer:- "toh kaho...
 
Naina:-"love you...
 
Rajveer:-"ab lag rahi ho na...typical wife...!!! hath me gift pakda nahi ke...pati ke liye pyar umad pada...!!! pahle toh aise react karr rahi thi... jaise main tumhe kidnap kar ke le kar aaya hun...aur abhi tumhara rape kar dunga...
 
Naina ne gift...halke se phenki...bed ke ek side par...aur Rajveer k seene se lagti hui kaha:-"mujhe gift ki koi jarurat nahi hai...aur na hi ab mujhe darr lag raha hai...!!! sayad main thoda sa over-react karr rahi thi...
 
voh Rajveer se alag hui...phir us ke coller pakad kar boli:- "is ke piche bhi tumhi ho...!!! pata nahi kya kya bakk rahe the...aur phir main yahan nayi hun...tumhare sath...akele is kamre me pahli baar...!!! aur tum mujhe pata nahi kya kya kah kar dara rahe the...
 
Rajveer ne hasste hue kaha:-"toh tumhe ab darr nahi lag raha hai...
 
Naina zor se kaha ..."nahiiiiii...
 
Rajveer ne us ke muh par hath rakhte hue kaha:-"dhire yaar...!!! tumhare is zor se "nahi' bolne se pata hai...bahar jo log hain voh kya kya samjhenge...
 
Naina aur Rajveer...sath me hasse...
 
Rajveer:-"ab apna gift toh dekh lo...
 
Naina ne mushkura kar gift ka packet pakda...kafi bada packet tha...
 
Naina ne khola...toh ander aur ek packet tha...Naina ne use khola... ander ek aur packet tha...
 
is baar Naina ne gusse se Rajveer ko dekha...toh Rajveer ne kaha:-" aise kya dekh rahi ho mujhe...isiliye toh voh badam ka dudh peelaya tha tumhe...ke kitni mehnat karni hai tumhe...aur tum ho ki...bas teen packet khol kar hathiyar dal diya...
 
Naina ko ab ek ek kar ke yaad aa raha tha ke Raj ne kya kya kaha tha...
 
Naina:- "tum ne is ke liye...
 
Rajveer:-"ofcourse isi ke liye...!!! aur nahi toh kya...tum ne kya socha tha ke main kis liye tumhe badam ka dudh peela raha tha...
 
Rajveer hassa zor se...Naina ne muh banaya...kaha:-"mujhe nahi kholni hai ise...
 
Rajveer ne us ka hath thaam kar apne kareeb laya aur kaha:-"aise kaise nahi kholni hai...main itne pyar se le kar aaya hun...aur vaise bhi tum hi abhi kuch der pahle gift maang rahi thi...
 
Rajveer ne voh gift apne hath me liya...aur phir us ne Naina ki taraf badhaya...Naina ne aur bina kuch sawal ke use kholne lagi...use Rajveer par sach me gussa aa raha tha...aur gusse se kahin jyada pyar bhi...
 
par thodi der me...voh bada sa packet ek chote se packet ke rup me us ke hath me tha...voh kafi thaki hui lag rahi thi...us ne Rajveer ki taraf dekha...
 
Rajveer:- "yeh akhiri wala hai...
 
Naina ne phir se us packet ko khola toh...ek jewellery box tha...aur ander ek daimond ring...
 
Naina ke honthon par ek mushkurahat thi...us ne Rajveer ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"tumhare badalne ke kuch chances hain kya...???"
 
Rajveer ne us ke hath se...voh ring lete hue kaha:- "is janam me toh mumkin nahi hai...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ko voh ring pahnate hue kaha:-"yeh rajveer jaisa bhi hai...achha...bura...ya shararati...jaisa bhi hai...sirf tumhara hai...!!! aur ek baat...jitna tum khud ko samajhti ho na...us se kahin jyada main tumhe samajhta hun...!!! tumhare honth bhale hi kuch na kahe...main tumhare bandh hontho ki zuban padhna janta hun...
 
Naina ne Rajveer ke ankhon me dekhte hue kaha:-"toh kaho...ab kya kah rahi hai mere honth tum se...
 
she whispered nears his lips...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ke honth ki taraf dekha...par kaha kuch nahi...hath rakha Naina ke ankhon par...Naina ki ankhen bandh hui...
 
"I love you Naina"......
 
Naina:- "love....
 
Before she was to finish her sentence off..her lips were shut...with none other than his lips... 
 
Naina heaved in delight...as she felt him pulled her body right up against his...her eyes came shut...as her hands quickly fastened around his neck...
 
she felt his hand come sharply around her waist...and then one cupping her cheek...as their lips fumbled around each other...
 
she cud feel his tongue entering her lips...cutting it yet so softly...and then suddenly both fighting for dominance...the sweet want of surrender and the deep need of want raced through her...
 
She slowly pulled back...as she stared at him...their faces only inches away...her breathing ragged completely...
 
us ne apni baat puri ki..."love you Raj...
 
next day morning......
 
Naina ki neend jab khuli toh voh hairan hui...kyoun ke khidki ke bahar us ne dekha ke subah ho chuki thi...par bed side ghadi par abhi bhi raat ke 3 bajj rahe the...!!!
 
Naina ne dhyan se dekha...ghadi chal rahi thi...!!! us ke samajh me phir bhi kuch nahi aa raha tha...!!! Rajveer us ke seene par sar rakh kar bade aaram se so raha tha...
 
Naina:-"raj...utho...subah ho chuki hai...!!! aur yeh kya...tumhara ghadi yun piche ki taraf kyoun chal rahi hai...!!!"
 
Rajveer ne ankhen malte hue ghadi ki taraf dekha aur kaha:-"piche kahan chal rahi hai...thik hi toh chal rahi hai...!!!"
 
Naina:-"toh phir...bahar itna ujala hai aur tumhari ghadi me abhi tak raat ke 3 kyoun bajj rahe hain...
 
Rajveer hassa...ankhen bandh thi abhi bhi us ki...Naina ko thoda aur kareeb khinchte hue us ne kaha:-"voh maine hi ghadi ko late mode pe rakha hua tha...5 ghante ke liye...
 
Naina ki badi badi ankhen aur badi ho gayi..."5 ghante...matlab abhi 8 bajj chuke hain..."
 
Naina ek jhatke me uthi...bed par...
 
Naina:- "kyoun kiya yeh...abhi pata nahi...sab mere bare me kya kya sochenge...!!!"
 
Rajveer:- "koi kuch nahi sochega...tumhare sasural me sabhi kafi samajhdar inshan hain...sabhi yehi sochenge ke...bachhe raat bhar thake hue honge...isiliye late tak so rahe hain..."
 
Rajveer ne hasste hue kaha...
 
Naina ne gusse me us par chadar phenki aur bhaag kar washroom ki taraf gayi...
 
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thodi der baad...
 
Naina aur Rajveer khade the...hath jode...un ke samne Sudha jee... bhagwan ki aarti karr rahi thi...!!! phir aarti ki thali Naina ke hath me diya unhone...Naina aur Rajveer ne sath me aarti ki...
 
phir Sudha jee aur K.k jee ka ashrivaad bhi liya unhone...!!! Rajver lamming karr raha tha...
 
Nupur ne puch liya:-"kyoun bhaiya raat bhar soye nahi kya...???"
 
Rajveer:-"teri bhabi ne sone hi nahi diya...
 
Naina ne hairani se aur gusse se dekha...Rajveer ko...
 
Rajveer:- "aise kya dekh rahi ho...??? dekho...mujhe darane ki koshish toh tum bhul kar bhi mat karna...!!! tujhe pata hai Nupur...raat bhar yeh kya karr rahi thi...
 
Sudha jee ne us ke kaan pakad liye aur kaha:-"chup...kabhi toh apni shararat bandh kiya kar...!!! kabhi bhi kuch bhi bolta rahta hai...
 
Rajveer:-"arey...nahi mom...sach me...aap ki bahu ne mujhe raat bhar sone nahi diya...!!! har aadhe ghante me bolti thi...'kahani sunayo'...!!! ajeeb ladki hai...bina kahani sune ise neend hi nahi aati hai...!!! ab lagta hai mujhe bhi ek bachhon ki pic story book khardni padegi...!!! kya item...dhundha hai aap ne mere liye...mom...
 
Sudha jee ne us ke kaan marodte hue kaha:- "khabardaar jo Naina ke bare me kuch galat kaha toh...ghar se nikal dungi...samjha...
 
Naina ne Raj ko tease karne ke liye zuban dikhayi...
 
Sudha jee Naina aur Nupur ko le kar kitchen me chali gayi...
 
Rajveer ne mushkurakar dushri taraf dekha toh...K.k jee use dekh rahe the...
 
Rajveer vahan se khishakna chahta tha...K.k jee ne use pakad liya...
 
K.k jee:-"ab toh suruwat hai...!!! dekh main tera kya kya halat banata hun...!!! Sudha ne toh yun hi kah diya ke tujhe ghar se nikal degi...par main...huh...tu bass dekhta ja...!!! aaj tak ki hui teri sari shararat ka badala aise lunga ki...tu sochta reh jayega...
 
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shadi ke ek hafte tak koi na koi rasham chalti rahi...phir ek din sham ko Naina ke father aaye...aur Naina aur Rajveer ke liye koi gift bhi le kar aaye the...
 
un ke jane ke baad Rajveer ne gift kholi toh us me dono ke liye Darjeeling ka holiday package tha...ya yun kaha jaye ke...honeymoon package tha...
 
Rajveer ne dhire se Naina ke kanon me kaha:-"sasur jee...bilkul mere pe gaye hain...dekho na...apne damad ke dil ki baat kaise fauran jan gaye aur intezam bhi kar diya...
 
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raat ko khane ke table par K.k jee aur Rajveer baithe hue the...!!! table par kafi tasty khana rakha hua tha...jis me se aadhe khane par K.k jee ko banned tha...doc ne mana kiya tha...vaise bhi doc hote hi aise hain... har achhi chiz par bann laga dete hain...khair...
 
kitchen me Naina aur Sudha jee...kuch karr rahi thi...
 
Rajveer ko phir se kuch sujha...apne dad ko tang karne ke liye...
 
Rajveer ne sare khane ko chakh liya aur jo bhi dish K.k jee ko allowed nahi tha...voh sab ek plate me le jate hue...unhi ke hi samne khane laga... aur bich bich me comment bhi karr raha tha ke khana kitna tasty hai...
 
K.k jee kuch nahi bole...chup chap khana kha rahe the...
 
Rajveer ko ajeeb lag raha tha...us ne phir kaha:-"dad...aap jo yeh dal chawal aur sabji bagaira kha rahe ho na...voh kya khane ke layak chiz hain...!!! hamesha aap mujh par hukum chalate the...aur aaj dekhiye...aap kahan hai aur main kahan hun... (diwar...film ka dail) ...!!! aaj mere paas sab kuch hai...dum-aloo...badam ka halwa...deshi ghee ke parathe... paneer ke pakode...aur na jane kya...kya...aur aap ke paas kya hai...
 
us ne Amitabh Bachhan ki tarah bolte hue kaha...
 
K.k jee ne use gaur se dekha...phir Sashi kapur ki tarah bole:-"mere paas... mere paas...teri maa...aur tere honewale bachhe ki maa...dono hain...samjha...!!! dekhega...
 
unhone ne halke se awaz lagai...
 
"Sudha...Naina beta...achanak meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai...pata nahi kyoun...dil ki dhadkan thodi si badhi hui lag rahi hai...aur...aur...
 
aage voh kuch nahi bole...aur rukk gaye...kitchen se bhaagti hui Naina aur Sudha jee aayi...
 
dono ne K.k jee ko thamte hue...un ke bed room me le gaye...
 
Rajveer ki taraf turn kar ke K.k jee ne ankh mari...
 
Rajveer:- "mom...dad...natak karr rahe hain...unhe kuch nahi hua hai...
 
Naina ne gusse se kaha:-"Raj kabhi toh serious raha karo...yahan dad ki tabiyat kharab hai aur tumhe mazak sujh raha hai...
 
Sudha jee ne bhi kah diya:-"dekh Veer...hamesha mazak achha nahi hota...
 
Rajveer irritate ho kar bola:-"par mom...
 
koi bhi us ke baat sunn ne ko taiyar nahi tha...!!! Naina aur Sudha jee... K.k jee ko le kar chale gaye un ke room me...bahar dinner table par Rajveer muh bana kar baitha hua tha...phir khud se bola:-"kam se kam ek aur chapati toh de kar ja sakte the na...dad ke natak ko sambhalne ke liye...
 
phir kisi ke hassne ki awaz aayi toh us ne dekha...samne...K.k jee khade the...un ke right side par Naina aur left side par Sudha jee khadi hass rahi thi...
 
Rajveer ko ab samajh me aa raha tha...
 
Rajveer:-"toh yeh sab aap sab ki mili-bhagat hai...hai na...
 
Naina:-"hmmm...Chetan Bhagat ko toh main janti hun...par maa...yeh Mili Bhagat koun hai...kahin Raj ki purani girl frnd toh nahi...
 
Naina...Sudha jee aur K.k jee sath me hassne lage...
 
Rajveer gusse se vahan se chala gaya...
 
Naina:-"arey...khana toh kha kar jayo...
 
Rajveer bina kuch kahe chala gaya...apne room me...
 
Naina us ke piche ja rahi thi...K.k jee ne use rok liya...
 
K.k jee:-"kahan ja rahi hai...dinner kar ke ja...!!! us ka natak toh har din chalta rahta hai...
 
Naina:-"par...unhone bhi toh khana nahi khaya...
 
K.k jee:-"kis ne kaha tujhe...??? mujhe chidhane ke chakkar me ek cup pulav...do chapati...ek plate dum aloo...aur pata nahi kya kya kha chuka hai...nalayak...!!! aur tu us ke liye bhuki rahna chahti hai...!!! chal baith aur khana kha...
 
Naina ne Sudha jee ki taraf dekha...
 
Sudha jee:-"ye sahi kah rah hain...use gussa bhi khali pet nahi aata...!!! pet bhara hua hai tabhi gusse se chala gaya...apne room me...ya phir yun soch le ke...natak karr raha hai...!!! tu kha le...
 
thodi der me dinner khatam hua...
 
Naina...room me pahunchi...dekha...Raj ko book padh raha tha...par na toh Naina ki taraf dekha aur na hi uss se kuch kaha...!!! next day unhe honeymoon ke liye jana tha...
 
Naina ne mushkurate hue kaha:-"arey...tum abhi tak soye nahi...
 
Rajveer abhi bhi chup tha...
 
Naina:-"achha zara meri help kar do...!!! aur kuch saman lena hai toh voh bhi de do...main pack kar leti hun...!!!"
 
Rajveer:-"nahi...kuch aur nahi lena hai mujhe...
 
itna kah kar Rajveer so gaya...!!! Naina ko hassi aayi...
 
us ne change kiya aur thodi der me jab bed room me aayi toh dekha ke Raj so chuka tha...!!! Naina ne Rajveer ko jagaya nahi...aur voh bhi us ke kareeb hi so gayi...
 
                            *********
 
Darjeeling...
 
Rajveer aur Naina...sham ko uss hotel me pahunche...jahan un ki booking thi...!!! Rajveer rashte me bhi kafi chup tha...rashte me jab unhone khana khaya tab bhi Rajveer chup tha...!!! Naina ne kafi manane ki koshish ki thi...par Rajveer uss se kam hi baat karta tha...
 
Naina haar kar chup ho gayi...
 
use bhi baht gussa aa raha tha...us ne khud se kaha:-"jab khud mazak karte ho toh thik...aur jab main karun...toh voh galat...!!! thik hai...koi baat nahi...main bhi tum se baat nahi karungi...!!! jo marzi aaye karo...
 
us ne turn kar ke dekha...us ke paas koi nahi tha...!!! Naina ne hairani se idhar udhar dekha...yahan par bhi koi nahi tha...na us ka saman aur na hi Rajveer...
 
ek lady aayi kuch hi der me...Naina ko ek chabi deti hui boli:-"maam aap ka saman room me pahuncha diya gaya hai...aur aap ka room no hai... 102...first flore...
 
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...chabi le kar room me aayi...door khola... ander andhera tha...!!! wall par switch ko dhundhte dhunte us ka hath kisi se takraya...
 
us ne sahi guess kiya tha...yeh kisi ka hath hi tha...voh darr kar chilanewali thi...!!! par kisi ne us ke muh par hath rakha...aur darwaza ander se lock hua...
 
Naina chup ho gayi...ab voh dari hui nahi thi...is perfume ko voh achhe se janti hai...
 
us ne dhire se kaha:- "chodo mujhe...
 
us ki awaz se...us ki narazgi samajh raha tha Rajveer...us ne lyt on ki...
 
Naina ki ankhen hairan hui...voh room flowers aur candels se saza hua tha...kafi dhimi aur aur halki si khushbu thi us room me...charon taraf halki si gulabi roshni...
 
Rajveer ne dhire se us ke kanon me kaha:-"khud ko parakh raha tha kal se...ke kya main tum se bina kuch kahe...bina tumhe apne kareeb laye... reh sakta hun ya nahi...!!! yakeen mano Naina...yeh mere liye sab se jyada mushkil tha...!!! main chahe kitna bhi koshish kar lun...par kabhi bhi tum se alag nahi rah sakta...
 
she looked at Rajveer...then thought about his words full of love and confidence. she smiled at his word...feeling the love in his each word.
 
suddenly she hugged him agressively hiding her head in his chest.
 
11:00 p.m
 
Naina khidki ke bahar jhaank rahi thi...bahar sirf barf hi barf the... dur dur tak...
 
Naina ne turn kar ke dekha...Rajveer fone par baat karr raha tha... apne parents se...(raat 11 baje ke baad relience to relience free call hota hai...😆)
 
Naina ko hassi aayi khud ki soch par ke 'voh yeh soch rahi thi ke Raj us se gussa hai...jab ki baat kuch aur hi thi...'
 
us ne phir se bahar jhanaka...apne atit ke kuch panno ko yaad kiya...jis me sirf Rajveer tha...jo dhire dhire us ki zindagi me Raj ban kar aaya tha...aur hamesha ke liye us ki zindagi ka hissa ban gaya tha...
 
aaj use Raj ko khone ka darr nahi hai...kyoun ke voh toh khud bhi us ki ho chuki hai...!!! jo use khud se bhi jyada chahta hai...jis ki bahon me voh khud ko hamesha khoya hua mehshush karti hai...
 
zindagi achhi thi...par khubshurat use Raj ne banaya...!!! zindagi voh ji rahi thi...par mohabbat karna Raj ne sikhya...!!! mushkurati toh voh pahle bhi thi...par us ke honthon ki hassi Rajveer bana...
 
Rajveer came from her back...interrupting her chain of thoughts... wrapped his arms around her stomach...putting his chin on her shoulder...they remain like that for somtime...they felt satisfied stuck to each-other not letting any space between them...
 
Naina ki ankhen bandh thi...us ne dhire se pucha:-"Raj...khubshurat kya hota hai...??? kisi se pyar karne ka ehsaas ya hamesha hamesha ke liye us ko pane ka ehsaas...
 
Rajveer halke se mushkuraya aur kaha:-"dono mayne rakhte honge sayad...??? par ahem baat yeh hai ke...ehsaas kya hai...voh feelings kya hain...jo kisi khaas ke liye dil me achnak se aa jate hain...!!! kyoun kisi ko be-inteha pyar karne ko dil karta hai...kyoun use...hamehsa hamesha ke liye apne dil me kaid karne ka dil karta hai...!!!
 
Naina ne turn kiya Rajveer ki taraf...phir kaha:-"tum kaho...
 
Rajveer:-"ehsaas...yehi hota hai...!!! kuch samajh me na aaye aur kisi ko tut kar chah na...use sayad ehsaas kahte hain...kuch achanak se dil ko chu jaye...sayad use ehsaas kahte hain...!!! jo maine itne dino tak tumhare liye is dil me kaid kar ke rakhe hain sayad unhe ehsaas kahte hain...
 
suddenly...to his surprise Naina...cupped his face and capture his lips in her...he was surprised by her sudden act...but when he found Naina deepened the kiss...he gave in...their lips locked..she moaned as she felt his tongue in her mouth tasting her...he sucked on her lower lips....and she was busy licking his upper one...
 
Meri aankhon main raho
mere mohabbat ke har ek Ehsaas me raho,
Roshni ban k mere dil me raho...
 
Tera Ehsaas bhi na paraya ho,
Ab fazaon me na judai ho
mere her ek lafzon me raho...
 
Naina...rajveer se alag hui...apne uljhi sanshon ko samette hue voh us se thodi dur hui...nazrain jhuki hui thi us ki...us ne apne kadam piche hataye...par voh jyada dur tak nahi ja payi...
 
Rajveer ne us ka hath thaama...apne bahon me uthaya...and walked over the bed...he throw her gentely there making sure she doesn't get hurt...
 
she felt more nervous feeling him coming closer and closer...she cluched the bed sheet...Rajveer was aproching with a smirk as he noticed that...that state of hers was arousing him more. Rajveer walked slowly upto the bed...he kept looking at her never take his eyes off...his Naina...
 
Naina couldn't bear this anymore...his intense gaze...arousing her feelings...she couldn't move or meet his eyes...she felt his lips on her forehead...putting a soft kiss there...caressed her cheeks with his fingers...bringing his face near her neck...he kissed her eyes...her cheeks...he brought his mouth near her lips...sealing them...caressed her back...when he undressed her...as she felt that...she clutched his kurta due to nervousness...
 
Choo k kadmon ko her khushi guzre,
ab se yun hi zindagi ka her Ehsaas guzray
tere bina tanha ab na ho zindagi
ab tere sath hi her ek Ehsaas guzre...
 
Tum mere sath mere din meri raaton main raho,
Meri aankhon me raho
mere dil ke her ek Ehsaas me raho...
 
when he saw her shoulder exposed to him...he traced a kisses line from her nape to her collar bone...Naina felt very exposed even thought she still wear some clothes...Naina was having a hard time controling her nervousness...
 
he encircled his arms once again around her this time enjoying her bare skin...her smell was intoxicating him...while she was lost in the fragrance of his masculin cologne...
 
she closed her eyes tighly as she felt his intense gaze on her...he smiled at her sweet gestures...then he drop his gaze down...he was mesmerised by her inner beauty...
 
she feels...his lips inside her entire skin...he is sucking on it and swilrled it around...even his teeth sometimes nibbling her skin...almost biting it...he was not in his sense...he was lost in her body's beauty... that he was descovering for the first time...
 
yeh Ehsaas mera tujh se kahta hai,
Dil ki her dhadkan me tu hi tu rehta hai

tere ishq ke ehsaas me kho jaon,
teri her ek chahat ban kar
tujh me hi shama jayun...
 
Ban k khushbu tum meri sanshon me raho
Meri aankhon main raho,
meri mohabbat ke her ek Ehsaas me raho...
 
now before the last step...he wanted to make her lost in his eyes... moved his face closer to her such that she can feel the warmth of his breath...he kissed her forehead...he was happy feeling her heart's beatings growing faster...
 
he was very gentle...very caring...taking her comfort as a priority before his pleasure...he kept kissing her to ease all her pain...their room was of the moaning sound and the music made by...wind chimp...
 
After making a love...he made her lay down and closer to him... he encircled his arms around her hugging her very tight... without talking...he stroked her hair...caressing her arms. they remain like that...enjoying the feeling of being close to each other...
 
Tujhe chaha hai tujhe chahungi,
Mohabbat ke is pahle ehsaas ko
zindagi banaye rakhungi...
 
Teri ulfat k jhule me jhulun,
tere Saath aasman ko chu lun,
Gungunaon main tujhe,
dil k taron main raho,
Meri aankhon mein raho,
Meri mohabbat ke her ek Ehsaas mein raho...
 
next day morning...
 
halki si suraj ki kiran se Rajveer ki neend khuli...voh thodi der aur sona chahta tha...!!! neend se bhari hui ankhon ko halke se kholte hue us ne dekha...Naina khidki se parde hata rahi thi...
 
last night ki baat yaad karte hue Rajveer ke chehre par ek mushkaan aayi...us ne dhire se kaha:-"good morning Naina...
 
Naina ne us ki taraf bina dekhe hi dhire se...'good morning'... bola...
 
Rajveer samajh raha tha...Naina us se sharma rahi thi...us se nazrain nahi mila rahi thi...
 
Rajveer ne dhire se kaha:-"tumhe pata hai...aaj subah subah maine baht hi bura sapna dekha...
 
Naina ne vaise hi us ki taraf bina dekhe...vash me flowers arrenge karte hue boli:-"kya dekha...
 
Rajveer uth kar baitha...khidki ke bahar dekhte hue kaha:-"maine dekha ke...hum dono ek boat me baithe hue the...samander ke bichon bich...aur main pani me gir gaya...tum chilla rahi thi...par aas paas koi nahi tha...mujhe bachane ke liye...
 
Naina ne us ki taraf dekha aur kaha:-"phir...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ke chehre ko dekha...voh thodi si ghabrai hui thi...
 
Rajveer:-"subah ka sapna sach hota hai kya...???"
 
Naina:-"haan...sabhi yehi kahte hain...!!! tum batayo...aage kya hua...
 
Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...Naina dhire se us ke paas aayi aur us ke paas khadi ho kar kaha:-"batayo na aage kya hua...
 
Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"phir pani me tum kud gayi aur mujhe bacha kar boat par le aayi...
 
Naina ke chehre par mushkurahat thi...
 
Rajveer:-"phir tum ne mujh se kaha ke...tum mujhe kabhi akela nahi chodogi...hamesha mera sath dogi...aur hamesha mere sath rahogi...7 janam tak...
 
Naina ki mushkaan thodi aur badi ho gayi...aur us ne kaha:-"yeh sapna sach hi hai...main tumhara sath kabhi nahi chodungi...7 janam tak hum aise hi sath rahenge...
 
Rajveer:-"yehin par sapna thode hi na khatam hua...
 
Naina:-"toh aage kya hua...???"
 
Rajveer:-"tum ne jaise hi kaha ke...tum 7 janam tak mera sath rahogi... toh main is baar jaan bujh kar pani me kud gaya...
 
Naina...hairan si Rajveer ko dekh rahi thi...aur Rajveer us ke xpressions dekh kar zor se hass utha...
 
Naina muh fulaye vahan se janewali thi...Rajveer ne us ka hath thame... apni taraf khinch liya...bed par...
 
Naina...niche thi...aur Rajveer us ke upar...
 
Rajveer:-"7 janam kya...main toh yehi chahta hun ke...her janam me tum mere sath raho...her khushi me...her ghum me...her ehsaas me...mere her ek junun me...bas tum hi raho...!!! main na toh tumhe kabhi kho sakta hun...aur na hi tumhare bina ek pal ke liye ji sakta hun...If you lived to live 100 years...I would like to live 100 years minus one day, so I would never spend a day without you..."
 
he whispered along her lips...as he captured them...
 
 
                ~THE END~
 
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Hiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee All
yeh raha 'Ehsaas...feelings for someone special' fic ka last part...!!! thode se dissappoint toh hue hi hoge aap log...kyoun ke maine RN ke romantic scenes ko jyada describe nahi kiya hai...!!! par prob yeh hai ke main yeh nahi kar payi...mujhe thoda ajeeb feel ho raha tha... matlab main comfortable feel nahi kar pa rahi thi...isiliye nahi likh payi...!!! hope ke...aap sab samajh rahe hoge...😊
yeh fictioh maine sep 2008 me start kiya tha... 2 saal se jyada ho gaya hai is fiction ko...aur galati bhi meri hi hai...main itna late ud jo karti rahti thi...!!! par aaj ke baad koi nahi kahega ke...'cont soon'...😆
yeh mera first fiction tha RN par...jise maine apni marzi se likha...!!! bich me kuch prob hue the...par maine is ki story change nahi ki...vohi likha...jo maine pahle se soch rakha tha...aur is baat se main baht khush hun...!!! 😃
aap sabhi ne her ud pe mera sath diya...achhe dost ki tarah...!!! ab kahte hain na ke agar aap achhe ho toh aap ko achhe dost bhi achhe milenge...!!! isiliye main achhi hun...isiliye aap jaise caring aur loving frnds bhi mile mujhe...hai na...😃
aaj is fiction ke khatam hone par thoda sa dukh ho raha hai...par khushi ek baht badi baat ki hai ke...is fiction ki wajah se mujhe aap sab mile...Thank you all🤗
love you
Priya😃
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Holi Festival
With my,
1 heart...
1 nose...
1 stomach...
1 Dimag with less of x-factors...
2 eyes...
2 Ears...
2 lips...
2 hands...
2 legs...
7 liter Blood...
206 bones...
4.5 million Red cells...
60 Trillion DNA's...
and above all my BATTISHI...
All wishing you a "VERY VERY HAPPY HOLI"😆
Holi Hai Bhai Holi Hai...Bura Na Mana Holi Hai...😛
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awesoome.
superb.
fab.
loved it...
this was one of my fav. FF'S......loved it to the core...
thanx for penning down such a wonderful FF....👏
HAPPY HOLI....
thanx for the pm....
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WISH U AND YR FAMILY

HAPPY HOLI....

RANG DO SAB KO AUR KHUD KO BHI

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