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@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1171

the up good and also very romantic

so finally raj aur naina ke shaadi ho gaye aur raj aapne suhaagrat maane aaya par naina jee usse toh gift chaheye

aur raj usnne woh naina ko satne laaga aapne baato se bacchare kitna darr gaye

par jab raj ne usse sach mein gift tab naina gets really happy

the ring is really

the honeymoon gift which naina's dad gave them is so sweet

raj nainai se toh gussa hone laaga par jab woh log darjeeling gaye they made their honeymon perfect

i loved the whole part but feeling lil sad that it is ending koi gaal nahin tu aase he dusre koi new fic suru kar de aapne hero heroinee par

plz cont soon and pm me

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#1172

Happy Holi
Brilliant, beautiful part. loved it.
missed this ff.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1173

Arre wah...tumne to mera 'reserved' hi 'like' kar liya...then now I dont need to comment!! 😆😆

Aisa ghalti se bhi mat sochna...apne iss Raj ko praise karne ka ye aakhri (😭) mauka main chhor dungi 😈...Achha pehle...Raj ko meri taraf se bahut se hugs and kisses 😳😳...he is the sweeetest heart!! 😆

I knew the suhaag raat scene is gonna be a lil hatke...as its Priya wid the pen...I mean keyboard!! 😆😆 And meri hassi to Mr. Noorani ke naam lete hi shuru ho gayi...😆😆...and then watever followed was aweeesum!! I wud not really say much abt it all...but tumne jitna kiya mujhe utna hi achha laga...(ab tum to janti ho main khud romantic scenes likh nahi pati hu...thats why its perrfectly f9 for me 😉)...

Next day Raj ki naughtiness shuru ho gayi...wid "Kahani sunao"...🤣..ye Raj bhi na...Bada CUTE hai!! 😳😳😳😳😳

And wo khane ke table wala scene...awww...mere Raj ke khilaaf wo log gang up kaise kar sakte hai?? 😲😲 Dekha duniya kitni zalim hai...itnaaa cute sa to hai mera Raj...uske khilaf bhi sharyantra??😲😲😲😲 Very bad...very bad!! 😆 But uska sab kuch khaake ruth kar chale jana...😆...that was SMART!! 😉 As I always say...he is born smart along wid being handsum, cute, adorable, dashing...😆😳😳😳😳

And next Darjeeling wali segment...again very beautiful!! 👏👏 Raj kitna pyaara hai na...I mean...why on earth he is sooo lovable?? 😳 And hey...am not saying this coz of Rajeev...its the character u see..😳 Kabhi kabhi sochti hu (and mann hi mann janti hu) ki tum bhi bahuuut sweet si ladki hogi...isiliye to itne sweet characters create kar sakti ho!! 😳😳

Ending was superb...but of course leaves me wid the fact that its the END!! But again...I do have sum other Rajveer to relish...😉😆

And well...aapko main yaad ayi Adil ki wajah se...😲...meri pehchan ab bas Adil se??? 😲😲

WAH!! 😆😆Adil se pehchan hona is a gud thing!! 🤣

Achha now...over all fic pe...main ek aur reply karne wali hu...at the end...chk that now!! 😉😉

Luv, (for Raj)
Sumi.😳😆😆😆😆😆

Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1174

First of all Happy holi to you and

How are your exams ????????

now coming to the update ..... finally you did manage to complete the ehsaas and a big congrats for that👏 but i'm gonna miss this fic😭 as it is written wonderfully as it says ehsaas it is written with all the feelings of rn so thnx for writing it very wonderfully from the very first part of their first night till their darjiiling trip 😃

now i'm speechless and writingless😆to write comments on the last update so in short a fab and awesome ending of ehsaas.........

bye cya and take care also

and once again a very happy holi to you......

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1175

That was a very beautiful ud....

am sad that the fic ended.....

net down to itna hi bada comment likh sakti hoon...

vidushi

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1176

Hi Priya

The last part of Ehsaas was just mindblowing and that was very much expected as u took a long time updating it..👏👏

It was through this fiction we became friends and I dont believe that 3 years have passed..Time is really running like anything..😊

Now coming to this part Raj will never change..his nautanki continues even after his marriage.i knew it from the start that he is trying to fool Naina by talking nonsense and she was so very nervous to hear him talk like this😉😆😆😆

He was enjoying Naina's discomfort and he knew the effect of his words on her..😆😆😆 he is too naughty😉

That milk scene was too hilarious🤣..Naina really needed it coz she had to open so many gift wraps to finally reach for that ring..Raj is really a very considerate hubby but he loves to tease Naina a lot..

He embarrassed her infront of all in the morning also but thankfully his mother came forward to rescue Naina..😆😉

This part was just too funny

"Rajveer ko ajeeb lag raha tha...us ne phir kaha:-"dad...aap jo yeh dal chawal aur sabji bagaira kha rahe ho na...voh kya khane ke layak chiz hain...!!! hamesha aap mujh par hukum chalate the...aur aaj dekhiye...aap kahan hai aur main kahan hun... (diwar...film ka dail) ...!!! aaj mere paas sab kuch hai...dum-aloo...badam ka halwa...deshi ghee ke parathe... paneer ke pakode...aur na jane kya...kya...aur aap ke paas kya hai...

us ne Amitabh Bachhan ki tarah bolte hue kaha...

K.k jee ne use gaur se dekha...phir Sashi kapur ki tarah bole:-"mere paas... mere paas...teri maa...aur tere honewale bachhe ki maa...dono hain...samjha...!!! dekhega..."😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣

he is never going to change but when his parents and Naina made him a fool he was quite upset😆😆

Raj is really different from others but his feelings for Naina r quite sincere..he loves her more than life and Naina is really lucky to have him..his whole life revolves around her..shayad yahi ehsaas un dono ko itne kareeb le aaya..😊

Their romance was indeed beautiful and that song was just perfect with the situation..😊

Naina was too shy to face Raj in the morning and he knew it and thats why he made up that funny dream so she cud b comfortable with him..😆😆

Life is just so perfect if your life partner loves u so much😃😃

Finally the journey of Ehsaas ended on a happy note but I'll really miss it..

Raj's character was so funny in this fiction but he was the only one who brought joy in so many lives..his chirpy self was enough to make anyone laugh..😆😆 But his feelings for Naina were really deep and he completely changed her views regarding love..😊

His relationship with his father was also strange.😆😆😆.They were always fighting like kids but their bond as really strong..😃

Pls do continue writing more Priya..u have a brilliant comic sense👏👏

Bye🤗

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1177

Hi Priya....

Awesome fic darling..... superb ending...

Mai janti hun ki tujhe romantic scenes likhne me problem thi.... tune jitna bhi likha hai na mai usse hi shocked thi ki Priya ne ye kaise likh diya.... par jo bhi likha achha likha.... bahut hi pyaara tha......

Aur kisi bhi writer ko apni fic ki story change nahi karni chahiye....kyunki aisa karne se uski khud ki creativity khatam ho jaati hai.... likhne ka mann nahi karta.... aur agar writer ko likhne ka mann na kare to fir readers ko kaise achha lagega.... Jaisa ki mere saath ho raha hai..... I appreciate ur stand.....

Fic khatam ho gaya iss baat ka dukh hai mujhe.,...... par start karne se jyada shuru na khatam karna hota hai..... bahut hi pyaari story thi...aur bahut hi pyaara sa safar....aur iss story ne hume humari sweet lioness jo di hai.......

Excellent job...... ab baaki ki fics bhi update karti raho......

Love

Guglu

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1178

lovely part ......... 👏👏👏......was waiting for it 😛😛 ....& also for Raj's GIFT 😉😉😉
......lovely end to lovely FF 😃😃.......... wil miss Rajveer 😔........ but no worries ....have other rajveer too 😳😳 (TN & ankahi ) 😆😆.......... but this one was special ..as he was more fun loving & mischevious 😳😳 ..........& made me smile throughout FF 😃😃......... & never made me cry 😊.......

Raj ke gift dene ka tareeka was good 👏👏👏..bechari naina ko pareshaan kar diya 😆😆😆....... packet mein packet .packet mein packet 😆😆😆...... poor girl 😆😆 but must say she got understanding husband 😃😃........

I wonder Raj ki ghadi 5 ghante late kyun thi 😆😆😆..........

Raj was too much 🤣........ naina kahani sunna chahti thi 😆😆............& shadi ke baad bhi KKji & raj ne ek dusre ko tang karna nahi choda 😆😆

bful song in the end 👏👏👏....... & raj's dream was good too 😛😛........

so ab is FF ke liye toh continue soon nahi keh sakti ...... 😆😆....but yes continue ur others sooner 😛😛......... & will be expecting new soon 😛😛

😊

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1179

HY PRIYA !!!!!!!!!!😊

the last update was absolutely rocking, sweet,cute andromantic☺️. i love the gift sene 😍sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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oooooooooooooooooooooooo...........)much !!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣
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i just love happyendingsssssssssssssssssss 👏👏👏👏
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of course i am gonna miss this fiction 😭really bad but as u say har fiction ka end hota hai😭(hmmmmmmm zyada hi emotional comment de diya tha main ne pehle)
but i am happy 😃 because tumhara sirf yeh fic band ho raha hai baki fic to abhi bhi chal rahee hai.😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛 i know ke wo bhi kabhi na kabhi band ho jai ge!!!!!!!!!!😭

take care and a bigggggggggggggggg bye😊

Edited by nainaahsingh - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1180

Hey

Update was too good. How I wish that this was not the last part. I have enjoyed reading this fiction thoroughly...reading about all of Raj's pranks and the humour between him and his father.

Coming to the part

Raj enjoys teasing naina very much. The milk scene was too funny, naina ko uski zarurat thi...to open all those boxes to finally reach the ring. He enjoys seeing all of naina's expressions. He loves and cares for her unconditionally.

Raj apni masti kabhi nahi chodta. He embarrasses naina in front of all'but his mom comes to naina's rescue. Raj apne dad ko chidhane ke liye unke samne sara khana chakh raha tha. But uske dad bhi kuch kaam nahi hai, unhone naina aur sudhaji ki madad se, raj ko phasa liya. He was quite upset about this,

Both of them are very much in love and this is what binds them together. Raj chahe kitni bhi nautanki kare..but his love her naina is very modest.

Raj realizes that naina is feeling shy and nervous in the morning and so he jokes with her to make her comfortable. He will always keep his naina happy.

And so they have started their life together..and finally Ehsaas has come to end.

Thanks for making us laugh with all of Raj's masti. Loved his character.

Waiting to read many more of such stories from you.

Take care.

Nisha