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Posted: 14 years ago

#1141

hi

ven will u update yaar kya hua???????????????/

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lallulal2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1142

we have been waiting.......update soooooon

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noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1143

hy please please please update karo na yaar 😭

3 maheene se nahi kya tum ne update 😭

had ho gai hai ab wait nahi hota mugh se😡

please jo samaghna hai samjho dhamki ya request par update kar do meri maaaa😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

please!!!!!!!!!!

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noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1144

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh
hy please please please update karo na yaar 😭

3 maheene se nahi kya tum ne update 😭

had ho gai hai ab wait nahi hota mugh se😡

please jo samaghna hai samjho dhamki ya request par update kar do meri maaaa😭

please!!!!!!!!!!

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1145

sab se pahle...Sumi tune apna ID change kar diya...!!! vaise mujhe pura samajh me aa raha hai...ha ha ha...!!! 16...raj ka b'day...27 tera b'day...10 means...october...ha ha ha...!!! ab main nahi samjhungi toh koun samjhega...😆

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710
Wawawawa.....😭😭😭...I am gonna miss Rajveer!! 😭😭 Uff Pri....this is not gud...why is it ending?? Abhi jaa kar feel ho raha hai yaar!! I actually love Rajveer from TN most....but never realized when this Rajveer also became spl...😳😳...or is it.... a must that we have to fall for Him..😆😆 ab toh tum Ankahi ke Major saab ke piche padi hui ho na...toh chill maro...!!!😆

Chalo lets not get into that....😆....hospital scene was nicely done. Being the lioness....u didnt let the gloomy state take over....and conveyed watever was needed to be said....in the most beautiful and lightest way!! ⭐️👏👏 kya hai na...mujhe RN me interest hai...toh main kisi aur par kyoun tym waste karti...isiliye hamesha aisa hi karti hun...ha ha ha
Naina's words were beautifully written....but do I need to say....I loveeeeed Rajveer's approach towards Pooja. And that slight Raj-Aalekh convo was soooooooo cute!! 😳😳 ha ha ha...ab baat raj ki aati hai toh...sab kuch badhiya hi toh hota hai na...!!! in fact tumhare jaise mere sath bhi kuch aisa hi hota hai...!!!😆

And then shaadi bhi ho gayi...(jisme tumne hamein invite nahi kiya huh😆)....but anyways....reception ka waqt tha...and that Pooja-Naina part was done nicely. But wat was the best was....Rajveer's broad smile during the farewell scene...😆😆....He is actually correct yaar!! (hamesha hi hota hai😍 after all...voh raj hai...aur voh bhi mere fiction ka toh voh kabhi bhi galat ho hi nahi sakta...main jo hun us ke sath...😆)....and then Aalekh ko hata ke khud aa jana....ya phir pipe wali baat kehke Aalekh ko chaunka dena....ya apni Dad ki sir par rakhne wali baat se mahaul ko light kar dena.....it was all Rajveer!! 😍 Muah....sweetu!! 😳😳 (its for Raj😆😆😆).... pata hai...pata hai...yeh raj ke liye tha...😆

And then that scene jab Raj apni maa se kehta hai...room se Naina laa do...awww....I love him yaar!! And next....Aalekh and Nupur ki baat chherna....haii!! He is a sweeeeeeeeeeet heart!! ❤️ koi shaq...😉😛😆

I must say....the last RN scene was very nice...though short tha....and that wasnt much actually....but achha feel hua yaar!! 😳😳 Very well written....and very well executed....in my imagination!! 😆😆😉😳😳 ab tujhe toh aadat ho gayi na meri har faltu chiz ko le kar tarif karne ki...!!! is scene kuch nahi tha...phir bhi tujhe achha laga...??? ab main kya sochun bol...mujh se dosti nibha rahi hai ya raj se apne fan hone ka...😆

Seriously loved the whole part Pri....but wasnt it shorter than usual?? 😕 Pata nahi kyun....laga aisa. 😆😆 nahiii...yeh part bada tha...n last part toh is se bhi bada hoga...!!! hadh hai...main chahe kitna bhi lamba part likhun...tu kabhi bhi nahi kahti ke yeh part lamba tha...😆

Waise....next part to ending part hoga...so will be w8ing for that!! Wud love to see how wonderfully u draw the end to the story....(am sure u will do better than my thoughts😆😳) tere isi line ke chakkar me...main last part likhne me late ho gayi...!!! dimag kharab ho gaya mera...kya kya soch rahi thi tum mere bare me...!!! arey yaar...main kya koi writer hun jo tum mujh se yeh sab xpect karr rahi ho...😆!!! isiliye jyada late hue baigair aur jyada soche baigair maine last part likh diya...ab bhugtne ke liye taiyar ho jayo...😆

Till then take care....and doooooooooo continue soon. 😳 vohi toh karne ja rahi hun...😃

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

Thanxxxxxxxxx Sumi...😃

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1146

Originally posted by: nisha1984
awesome update

Thanxxxxxxx Nisha...😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1147

Originally posted by: wajiha-1
awesome upxdate
achw kiya shadi k scens ni likhy hehehehe
awesome work
continue soon

thanxxxx Rakhi....!!!😃 kya karti dear...shadi ke scenes mujhe likhne hi nahi aate...isiliye short-cut me khatam kiya...😆

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1148

Originally posted by: lallulal2010
fantastic update.........loved every moment....... Thanqqqqq 😃
looking forward to some sweet r-n moments😛...... ab last part me bas dono hi hain...maine jyada space nahi rakha hai un dono me...!!! kya karti...last part hai na...😆

waise.....ek baat to hai, aaj kal mujhe dedications bahut mil rahe hain.😉...kal sumi di, and today you......u guys r really sweet.........and i am happy that i came across lrl fics.............. Kya hai na...Raj ke chakkar me hum sabhi Sweet bann jate hain...isiliye credit bhi Raj ko hi jata hai...😆

thanx alot......... Thanxxx allowed nahi hai...haan...dhamki allowed hain...jitna marzi chahe de sakti ho...

but jyada maska nahi lagana chahiye na, kahin bhav badh gayer to updates hi nahi milenge🤪........ arey...aise kaise nahi milega...ud...!!! voh toh almost ready hi hai...bas thoda sa editing ka kaam baki hai...par jaldi hi ud post karungi...pakka😃

luv

vidushi

PS:------Update soon please..... vohi toh karne ja rahi hun...

Thanxxxxxxxxx Vidu...😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1149

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Priya hiii Suhana...

Update was really gud as usual👏👏 thanqqqqq

Naina has come to meet her friend Pooja in hospital..she too tried to attempt suicide when Rohit ditched her..yaar ye pyaar mein log jaan dene pe kyun aa jaat hain?? Life is so much more than that but they dont understand this..Naina was so angry on her and Pooja knew that watever she did was wrong.. kuch logon ke paas dimag kamm hota hai...aur Pooja ke dimag ke bare me toh hum sabhi thoda baht jante hi hain...hai na...😆

Alekh was happy to see that Naina has changed so much and it was all due to Raj's love..😃 haan...kahte hain na..pyar sab ko badal deta hai...kabhi achha bana deta hai toh kabhi kisi kisi ko baht bura...

Even Raj was so happy to see her like this.😊 ab yeh sab usi ki mehrbani hai toh voh khush toh hoga hi na...

Shadi to tumne describe ki nahin par baad ke scenes bahut hilarious the..😆 😆typical Priya!! mujhe shadi ke scenes likhne hi nahi aate...bataya tha na...!!!😆 aur bidai ke scene me rona bhi mujhe bada bura lagta hai yaar...!!! main khud baht roti hun...chahe shadi kisi ki ho rahi ho...aur chahe main kisi ke bhi side me rahun...!!!😆

Pooja wass happy with Harshad while Alekh and Nupur ki shadi ki date bhi set ho gayi..Raj kahin par bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hai!!😆😆 Alekh ki to une halat kharaab kar di thi!!!!😆😆 ab dono ek dushre ke saale cum jeeja jo bann gaye hain almost...toh dono hi ek dushre ko tang toh karenge hi...😆

Naina was crying so hard and aajkal itna lamba ghoonghat kaun dalta hai ki bhai ki jagah hubby ke gale lag kar rone lage🤣🤣 ab bechari ke ankhon me anshun the...toh thik se dikhai nahi di hogi na...aur phir use kya pata ke raj ne Alekh ko khishka kar khud vahan khada ho gaya tha...😆

Raj was trying to cheer every1 but har baar woh apne dad ko hi kyun bali ka bakra banata hai???😆😆 kyoun ke samne aur koi nahi hota...!!! aur nihatte par hamesha vaar karte hain...😆

Poor Raj!! apne he room se nikaal diya gaya???😆 He was eagerly waiting to meet his wife..😳😉 haan...yeh baat toh hai...😆

Naina was so happy after all those rituals..seriously they r too tiring.😆😆 mujhe toh nahi pata...par tum kah rahi ho...toh jarur honge...

Raj was finally too happy coz Naina was with him now and always..😊

So only 1 part is left and this fiction will b complete..and 1 more RN fiction wud b completing its journey..I dont want this fiction to end so soon(Raj's character was so chirpy and funny here) but every gud thing comes to an end..😛 kya baat karr rahi ho yaar...??? vaise bhi baht khinch chuki hun main is fiction ko...ab is par toh THE END ka board lagna hi chahiye na...

Pls continue soon

Bye