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Posted: 15 years ago

Once again a beautiful part

Rajs blackmailing to navin is too good,akhir navin ko to manna hi padana that whole part is so fun

The four couples r so happy n very much in love with each other n the song is so nice

Totally superb update

Update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update....😛

Raj toh blackmailing bhi acche se karta hai.......Raj toh Raj Navin bhaisahab bhi kuch kam nahi....continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

totally awesome part.....👏

loved it....👏👏- thanks alot for loving it

though d part was full nautanki of navin n raj in d begiining and👏😉😆- hehehe yeh i know per dono aise hee hai is fic me

den d part was sweet n lil bit of romantic wid four couples njoying demselves.....😳😳- hmmm had to add the spice in the end.

cool part
😎- thanks once again


Originally posted by: prerna1

that was cool as always
Raj is such a blackmailer
plz continue soon



Thanks a lot for enjoying the part

Oh yes he is a number one blackmailer.

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi


Once again a beautiful part - thanks alot for liking the part

Rajs blackmailing to navin is too good,akhir navin ko to manna hi padana that whole part is so fun - hehee yeh it sure was fun aakhir dono nautanki saath me jo the

The four couples r so happy n very much in love with each other n the song is so nice - they sure are and im glad u liked the song

Totally superb update - thank you very much

Update soon



Originally posted by: vvdn

wonderful update....😛

Raj toh blackmailing bhi acche se karta hai.......Raj toh Raj Navin bhaisahab bhi kuch kam nahi....continue soon.



Hey thanks alot namita for loving the part

hehehe tll me what Raj doesnt do best.

hmmmmm yes wo bhi ek hee company ka nikla
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry yaar main is baar baht late ho gayi...actually meri tabiyat kharab thi...ya yun kah sakti ho ki main SHOLEY ki BASANTI ban gayi thi...😆!!! anyways...yeh part29 k liye hai... 😃
toh sam aur sameer k bich sab kuch thik ho gaya...par sara credet apne HERO ko jata hai...!!! lekin Sam ko Sameer ki bahon me dekh kar us ka bro sentiment jaag gaya...achha hua naina ne use khinch kar le gayi...!!!
ab mandir jane k liye raj ne achhi shart rakhi hai naina k liye n Naveen ko bhi pata liya hai...!!! ab dekhte hain ki Janab ka plan kya hai...??? vaise Raj itna romantic banda hai ki voh jarur kuch na kuch romantic plan hi banaya hoga...!!!
lovely ud.
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello hello hello,
after long time.....
how r u ?
hope evrthing is f9......
waiting 4 ur reply....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome one......
raj ne achha se blackmail kiya naveen ko. voh bichara phass gaya...!!! vaise bhi naveen kuch waqt akele bitana chahta tha reetu k sath...toh voh maan bhi gaya...!!!
raj baht naughty hota ja raha hai, ab RN k shaadi ka intezaar hai...!!!
nyc song.
cont soon.
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was very nice...
Raj ne acha blackmail kiya navin ko. He finally got what he wanted. Navin nautanki karne mein kaam nahi.
The romance between all the couples is growing more and more...
the song was perfect for the occassion.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sorry yaar main is baar baht late ho gayi...actually meri tabiyat kharab thi...ya yun kah sakti ho ki main SHOLEY ki BASANTI ban gayi thi...😆!!! anyways...yeh part29 k liye hai... 😃 - its okay Priya i found out wat happened. Why Sholay's Basanti?????

toh sam aur sameer k bich sab kuch thik ho gaya...par sara credet apne HERO ko jata hai...!!! lekin Sam ko Sameer ki bahon me dekh kar us ka bro sentiment jaag gaya...achha hua naina ne use khinch kar le gayi...!!! - yes after all anything he does is always perfect. Hehehe ab bhai hai to thora to dikha na hee parega na lekin Naina hai na ose sambhaal ne ke liye
ab mandir jane k liye raj ne achhi shart rakhi hai naina k liye n Naveen ko bhi pata liya hai...!!! ab dekhte hain ki Janab ka plan kya hai...??? vaise Raj itna romantic banda hai ki voh jarur kuch na kuch romantic plan hi banaya hoga...!!! - hmmmm for sure. He has everythign planned
lovely ud. - thanks alot

Awesome one......
raj ne achha se blackmail kiya naveen ko. voh bichara phass gaya...!!! vaise bhi naveen kuch waqt akele bitana chahta tha reetu k sath...toh voh maan bhi gaya...!!! - Ha ab seedhee ungli se ghee na nikle to ose teree to karnee hee partee hai na. Yes he got his own medicine back
raj baht naughty hota ja raha hai, ab RN k shaadi ka intezaar hai...!!! - of course and it shall become worse. Yes sab ko osee ka intezaar hai
nyc song. - im glad u liked it
cont soon.



Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

the update was very nice... - thank you very much

Raj ne acha blackmail kiya navin ko. He finally got what he wanted. Navin nautanki karne mein kaam nahi. - ha dono ke dono ek jese hee hai, no1 nautanki

The romance between all the couples is growing more and more...
the song was perfect for the occassion. - yes their love is growing and im glad u liked the song very well.
please continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks alot

Navin refuses to help Raj and does not give in even after much persuasion reminding him of what had happened last time!!!!! - yes this time Navin was being too adamant

Raj is disappointed and wondering what to do next to make his plan successful!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - it wasnt as easy as he thought

Luck was in favour of him and he met Ritu who was worried about Navin has a tummy ache!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - it was like a silver line in the clouds

He understood that Navin is also in his league aur mandir na jaane ka bahana bana raha hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha wo bhi oske jese hee nikla

Raj goes in and taunts Navin who wants Raj to go away!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab chori pakree jaaehgee to aisa hee karega na

Raj even suggests calling the doctor which Navin refuses!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - ab pakka phasa hai Raj ke jaal me wo for sure

Raj blackmails Navin but he refuses which makes Raj insist on taking Navin to the hospital saying it is very serious!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - Raj was not going to give up at all

Navin had to agree as he was trapped and Raj had gotten Navin exactly where he wanted him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yes he sure knew how to play with Navin

Raj did a fabulous job of blackmailing Navin and finally got what he wanted!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - after all he is Raj the genious

Raj offered to take Navin to the hospital and Ritu said she will go with them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin said Ritu ki madad karne ke liye koi hona chahiye na to which Mira asked Naina to stay behind!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - ab plan to yehi tha na ke Naina ke saath rehna hai

Navin bhi nautanki karne mein kam nahi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course not wo bhi ek number ka nautanki hee hai

Mira ke jaane ke baad Navin aur Raj abhi bhi ek dusre ko dhamki de rahe hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 - ab yeh dono kabhi nahi sudher ne waale

Ritu realises whats going on and Navin gets romantic with her!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - aakhir Navin yehi to chahta tha

When Raj coughs to indicate his presence, Navin told him to take Naina before he changes his mind!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha finally Raj got the permission he wanted

Raj left with Naina leaving the two love birds Navin and Ritu alone!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - aakhir onhe bhi to kuch privacy milnee chaheeye

It was New Years Eve and they had organised a party at their house!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳- yes its the time to celebrate

All the four couples are busy enjoying the party and romancing in different corners!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - love is in the air tonight

Raj is praising Naina and saying ke agar aisi mindblowing lagegi then he will get a heart attack!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh thats our charming Raj

Naina gives a shy smile and said ke Raj ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha jab tak wo zinda rahega tab tak wo aisa hee rahega

Raj wants to remain like this all his life and doesn't want to lose this fun and happiness in their life ever!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - for sure after all jeena isi ka naam hai

Naina also wants that and they promise they won't leave each other's side ever in life in any circumstances and held each other tight!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - ha dono ab kabhi bhi ek duje ko khona nahi chahte

Riu said woh janti thi Navin badmaash hai per yaha aake kuch zyada hi hogaya hai and she loves this Navin more!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes kyu ke yeh waala Navin ziada loving hai

Ritu chahti hai ke yeh pyaar unke beech hamesha rahe and both say they can't live without the other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ha in dono me bhi beinteha mohabbat hai

Navin promised woh usse chhod ke kabhi nahi jayega aur agar jaana bhi pade toh Ritu ko apne saath le jayega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yes these two also dont want to live without each other

They held each other tight not wanting to let go!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes they also wanted to stay together forever

Aalekh gave Neelu a wonderful surprise and romantically went down on his knees to give her a rose!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yeh oska naya roop hai

Aalekh asked her for a dance and Neelu agreed and they danced slowly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes he learnt the romantic style at last

Neelu was surprised as she never knew Aalekh could be this charming and she was loving it all!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she wud be after all she got what she wanted

Aalekh is so romantic and he tells Neelu that she has taught him ke pyaar kya hota hai and changed his life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ha Neelu kee wajese hee wo itna badal gaya hai

They both say I love you and Aalekh chahta hai ke unke beech yeh pyaar hamesha barkaraar rahe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes they also dont want their love to end ever

Finally they cut the cake and fed each other beginning a new life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - celebrating the new year together

Sameer and Sameera both are happy and Sameer said ke usse Sam ki narazgi mein bhi sirf pyaar hi nazar aata tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakhir wo osse pyaar jo itna karta tha

Sam said Sameer jaisa bhi hai sabse accha hai and does not want him to change ever!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - wo badalke pyaar nahi karna chahti

Both of them prayed and vowed that they would remain together no matter what!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely nahi chahte ke kuch ho ke onka pyaar tute jaaye

All the four couples with the coming new year wanted to start a new life together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes a fresh new beginning

They wanted to put the past behind them and move on to make a better and beautiful future!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - ab ek naya panna shuru karna hai

All the four couple are so happy and very much in love with each other!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - indeed very much in love

They decided to rock the party and danced together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for the occasion!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab party hai to celebration to hoga hee na. I'm glad u liked the song.


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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 31

Everyone were slow dancing now with the soft music and just lost in each other.

Rajveer: Naina chalo yaha se chalte hai

Naina: Raj (surprised smile) sab ke beech me se kaha jaaenge?

Rajveer: tum meri shart bule gayi?

Naina: tum or tumhari sharte (rolls her eyes) naahi wo kabhi band hogi or naahi kabhi tum sudroge (gives him the look) and by the way mister, shart yeh thi ke tum mandir chaloge or me tumhaare saath aaj raat bahaar jaaungi. To mandir to tum gaye hee nahi to phir tumhaari baat ka koi matlab nahi.

Rajveer: dekho wo sab os Navin kee wajese huwa hai. Agar wo apni nautanki nahi karta or seedhee tarhaase maanjaata to phir me tumhaare saath mandir zaroor jaata.

Naina: khamakha bhaiyya ko doshi tehraane kee zaroorat nahi

Rajveer: Naina come on (holds her tighter) dekho tumhe isee din ke liye hee to yaha laaya hu or ab tum maana karahee ho. (sees she is still not ready) Fine do whatever you want.

He became cross and left her from the dancing floor and walked off. She saw him leave and felt bad that she made him upset again.

Naina: (following him) Raj I'm sorry mere kehne ka yeh matlab nahi tha. Per tum jaante ho na ke mere liye kitna mushkil hai

Rajveer: (still disappointed) to me kaha tumhe ab force karaha hu. Tumhare jee me jo aaye karo, I don't care.

Naina: uffffff! (sighs) phirse baccho kee tarha rute gaya. (watches him walk off through the crowd) isse pehle ke ospe ghussa haawee hojaaye mujhe kuch karna hoga.

She follows him through the crowd with the desperate attempt to stop him but it seemed as if he had become deaf ears. She didn't give up and kept following him all the way out of the house, through the grounds, out of the estate and on the main road. She didn't even know where she was going but she kept calling onto Rajveer to stop him.

Naina: aisee choti choti baato pe itna naraaz kyu hojaate ho tum?

Rajveer: kyu ke har baar tum aisee choti choti baato ko baree bana detee ho

Naina: (caught up with him and stopped him) tumhaare liye yeh choti baat hoti hai per mere liye nahi aur tum yeh jaante ho Raj. Jaante ho ke mere Maa baba kese hai phir bhi aisee zidde karte rehte ho (is quite upset) phir bhi maine tumhaaree khushi ke liye her baar onse jhooth bola or ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ke me…(turns away from him)

Rajveer: (feels sad after hearing that) Dekho Naina maine kabhi bhi nahi chaaha hai ke tumhe kisee bhi tarha kee chote lage (turns her around towards him and holds her shoulders) me jaanta hu ke meree wajese tumhe kitna kuch karna para hai or sehna bhi para hai per me waada karta hu tumse aaj ke ab aisa nahi hoga. (kissed her forehead and they hugged each other) ab chalo jaldi kyu ke hamare paas sirf aadha ghanta baaki hai

Naina separated and was still curious as to what he was saying but she didn't get time to think or protest as Rajveer dragged her away with him somewhere. They were going the opposite way so she knew they were not going back home so where? What exactly did Rajveer have in mind?

After a while he halted and then took out a scarf and wrapped it around her eyes. She got a pleasant surprise and kept asking that what was he doing but he didn't reply and said to trust him. After that she didn't ask him anymore questions and just let him lead the way as she would go anywhere with him with her eyes closed. She had full trust in him.

It seemed like the wait wasn't ending but soon she heard noises of wind chimes ringing and she started guessing where exactly she was. Then slowly she felt the scarf slipping off her eyes and she died to open them to find out what was going on.

Rajveer: you can open them now

She followed suite and was awed. She stood looking over the whole of Khandala in the night lights and it looked amazing. The beautiful stars in the sky gave a magical effect and the rest was just unbelievable. Then her eyes fell on all the arrangements Rajveer had made and simply didn't know what to say. There was a canopy built and in between lay a table with candles and flowers. A bucket of champagne was kept and everything was perfect.

Naina: yeh sab kya hai Raj?

Rajveer: yeh sab (goes towards it all and then turns around spreading his arms out) tumhaare liye hai. Nahi let me rephrase that…sab hamare liye hai.

Naina: (goes up towards the edge of the hill to look down) this is really amazing Raj.

Rajveer: (engulfs her in his arms from behind) ha hai per tumse ziada nahi

Naina: Raj I really love you

Rajveer: (laid kisses on the side of her neck) jaanta hu.

Naina: (felt conscious and wanted him to stop) ab choro bhi, koi aajaaehga

Rajveer: yahape hamare ilawa or koi nahi aaehga sweetheart to just relax.

Naina: Kya? (felt a bit chilly and shivered slightly) hamare ilawa yaha pe koi nahi hai

Rajveer: ha (teasing tone) hamare ilawa yaha pe koi nahi hai. Ab me jo chaahu karsakta hu or mujhe koi roke nahi sakta (has a naughty dangerous look in his eyes) tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta

Naina: (is slightly afraid and begins moving back from him) Raj what are you doing?

Rajveer: tumhe kya laga me tumhe yaha kyu laaya hu? (moves towards her making her go back) aaj raat is sunsaan jage pe koi nahi hai. Itne dino ham os ghar me sab ke beech aise ghire huwe the ke hame har waqt koi roke leta tha lekin aaj yaha pe koi roke ne waala nahi hai

Naina: Raj please aisa mazaak karna choro, mujhe bohat darr lagraha hai

Rajveer: mazaak? (still looking at her dangerously) yeh koi mazaak nahi hai Naina. Maine bohat intezaar kiya or bohat roka apne aapko lekin aaj me nahi rukunga. Nahi rukunga (advances towards her but she moves away really afraid of his intentions) Naina mujhse dhoore kyu bhaag rahee ho? Ab koi fiada nahi

Naina: pata nahi aaj tumhe kya hogaya hai Raj, tum apne hosh me nahi ho.

Rajveer: hosh to mujhe itne dino ke baad aaya hai. Ab Naina tumhe mujhse koi nahi bachaaa sakta (gave an evil laugh and ran after her)

She squealed and ran away from him but he chased her and finally caught her from behind and lifted her up as if he was abducting her. She screamed like hell and Rajveer's ears began hurting.

Rajveer: Naina…Naina kya karahee ho. Are meree maa agar itnee jore se chillao gi to sach much yaha pe koi aajehga

Naina: choro mujhe Raj, leave me (she kicked her legs to get free but he didn't let her go. Then she kicked really hard on his shin and he had to let go)

He groaned in pain and fell onto his knees as Naina ran away from him to a distance. She stopped midway and looked back at him and didn't know what to do as she herself didn't understand what he was doing.

Rajveer: lagta hai tumhaara khandaan undertaker se related hai. My God itnee jore se maara (still groaned as it still hurt him)

Naina: (ran towards him and knelt down next to him) I'm so sorry maine tumhe itnee jore se maara. Per Raj you really scared me

Rajveer: Naina tum mujhe itne arse se jaantee ho or phirbhi tum ne socha ke me aisa karunga tumhaare saath. Me to sirf tumhaare saath mazaak karaha tha.

Naina: Pata nahi mujhe kya hogaya tha (holds onto him and helps him get up) I'm really sorry. Chalo waha chalke betho.

She takes him towards the table and then both sit down and he sat with a slight groan. Then they both look at each other and burst out laughing. The situation they were in was so comical that they just couldn't do anything else.

Naina: I can't believe ke maine yeh socha ke tum mere saath…

Rajveer: tumhaare saath kya?

Naina: hatho jao jese ke tum nahi jaante (turns slightly red with embarrassment)

Rajveer: haiiii….kitnee pyaaree lagtee hai jab sharmaati hai

Naina just kept smiling shyly and then she hugged him and both of them just laughed as they were two of a kind.

5 minutes till midnight

They had spent time just lying under the stars and talking about here and there things. They talked about their future and it led to their family life.

Rajveer: you know Naina mujhe bacche bohat pasand hai

Naina: wow! (teasing laugh) khud to bacche se kam nahi to its obvious ke tumhe wo bohat pasand honge

Rajveer: Naina come on I'm serious. Sach me mujhe bacche bohat pasand hai or me yeh chahta hu ke me jisse pyaar karu wo bhi baccho se bohat pyaar kare

Naina: ajeeb zabardasti hai

Rajveer: (becomes stiff) iska matlab ke tum nahi kartee?

Naina: well…maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke tumse pyaar karne me kitnee sharte hongee

Rajveer: kya matlab?

Naina: ab kitnee saaree maange hai tumhaaree. Baapre mujhe to maaf hee karo is sab se. Me tumse pyaar nahi karsakti (gets up and starts walking off)

Rajveer: (following her in desperate haste) Naina! Yeh kya kehrahee ho tum?

Naina: (keeps walking and looks heavenwards) Thank you bhagwaan aapne sahee time pe meree aakhen khol dee warna pata nahi kaha phas jaati

Rajveer: (catches up with her and grabs her elbow to stop her) yeh kya bakwaas kehrahee ho tum?

Naina: bakwaas nahi sach. Raj me tumse pyaar nahi kartee. Tumse pyaar karke me apni zindagi barbaad nahi karsakti

Rajveer: (excited) what do you mean tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti? Naina tumhe achanak kya hogaya hai?

Naina: Sach mere saamne aaya hai aaj (She stared at him with wide eyes and he also was disappointed with her) me tumse pyaar nahi kartee

Rajveer: kyu nahi kartee? Achanak tumhaara iraada kese badal gaya?

Naina: me tumse pyaar isliye nahi karti (saw he was waiting with anticipation and his distraught face was slowly turning into rage) kyu ke me tumse…(she took a long pause and kept looking at his disappointed face) kyu ke me tumse bohat pyaar kartee hu

Rajveer was getting really angry as he was expecting a negative reply and then he stopped midway and thought over what she just said. He stood there dumbstruck as she burst out laughing making fun of him.

Naina: (pulled his cheeks) tum itne pyaare ho ke tumhe chere ne me bara maza aata hai. (continued laughing as Rajveer made a face) Tumhe kya laga ke kya sirf tumhi mazaak karsakte ho. My God your face was a sight to see.

Rajveer: Ha, ha, ha, very funny. (pulled her closer to him) Naina aaj yeh mazaak karliya hai lekin dubaara aisa mat karna (his eyes became misty) Bohat darr gaya tha me. Jee nahi paaunga tumhaare bina.

Naina: (saw the tears and stopped laughing) Or tumhe kya lagta hai ke me jee paaungi tumhaare bina? Isiliye tumhaara haath nahi thaama tha maine ke aise hee beech raaste me chore du tumhe. Ab tumse hi meri zindagi or tumse hee meree maut.

Rajveer: To phir aaj vaada karo Naina ke ab chaahe jo bhi hojaaye, tum mera saath kabhi nahi chorogi

Naina: (smiled and hugged him) Nahi chorungi, chaahe tum jitne bhi sitam karo mujhpar me uff tak nahi karungi.

Both of them laughed and just stayed in each other's arms. Then his watch began beeping as he had set the alarm and he realised that it was midnight and the time had arrived. He pulled out and then quickly grabbed Naina and took her to the edge. She wondered what was he going to do now but he didn't say anything and pointed up towards the sky. It was like a whoosh that altogether the whole city was lit up with fireworks making the whole sky magical. She was awed by the sight and kept getting excited like a small child and Rajveer kept staring at her innocence. Then came the big event which he had planned. Something which Naina hadn't expected. Many fireworks whizzed and flew in the sky and in between them there were a series of them which left all these messages. Messages which were created only for her.

"TO THE BEST GIRL IN THIS WHOLE WORLD"

"THE ONE WHO MAKES MY WORLD COMPLETE"

"WHO MAKES ME THE MAN I AM TODAY"

"THE ONE WHO HAS GIVEN ME A NEW LIFE"

"I LOVE YOU NAINA"

"HAPPY NEW YEAR."

She had no words to explain how elated she felt after seeing the sight. He loved her so much that he wanted to show the whole world. She stared at him with love.

Naina: tumne itna sab kuch kiya mere liye

Rajveer: yeh to kuch bhi nahi hai Naina. Ab to mera sab kuch tumhaara hee hai or ab yeh saase bhi sirf tumhaare liye hee chal rahee hai. Jab tum nahi rahogi to yeh saase bhi tham jaaengee

Naina: (hugged him tight and tears of joy came out) mat karo mujhse itna pyaar Raj. Mujhe bohat darr lagta hai, ke kahi me tumhe phirse kho na du

Rajveer: (pulled out and wiped her tears) me aisa kabhi nahi hone dunga Naina. We'll live together and die together. I promise.

Then he captured her lips into a passionate encounter and held her tight not wanting to let go. She also held him tight and didn't want to break out. All of a sudden they felt these light water droplets on their heads which was followed by a heavy downpour. They were shocked that it was raining in this season and they kept staring at each other.

Rajveer: lagta hai upparwala bhi hamare pyaar ke saath hai (looked heavenwards) Thank you
Bhagwaan for making our night even more romantic. Aise moke baar baar thori na aate hai ab to yeh mujhse or chipak ke rahegee

Naina: (slapped his arm) kabhi nahi sudroge tum (wrapped her arms around herself) chalo na Raj waapis chalte hai mujhe bohat thand lagrahee hai

He saw she was shivering so he grabbed her hand and tried to save themselves from the rain. He looked for a shelter but nothing was in sight. He cursed himself for planning something so out and away from the city that they were completely remote. He found his phone but he realized there was no network so he cursed himself further. They kept running when Rajveer saw a faint light shining in the near distance. He smiled and took Naina with him towards there and was glad to find a guest house. They went towards the guest house and knocked on the door but nobody seemed to be answering. After about five mintues they heard the rattle of the lock and the door opened.

Guard: kaun hai aap log?

Rajveer: Ji wo kya hai ke ham dono ghoomne nikle the or raasta bhatak gaye (Naina pinched him for lying but he ignored it) bahaar bohat baarish horahee hai to kya kuch dair ke liye ham yaha teher sakte hai?

The guard kept examining both of them as if he was searching for something. Then he spotted the heavy rain outside and then looked back at them.

Guard: aap dono bohat bheeg gaye hai. Ander aake kapre sukhaa lijye.

Rajveer and Naina followed the guard inside and Naina kept fretting at Rajveer for making up a story. He whispered back that he had to tell him something otherwise he wouldn't have had let them in. they were escorted inside this small passageway and Naina held onto Rajveer as it was dark and scary. It was really late at night and plus the place was freaking her out. The guard kept taking them until he stopped in front of a big hall.

Guard: aap dono yaha per rehsakte hai. (pointed inside) aap ke kapre gile hogaye hai to me kapro ka intezaam karta hu or kuch cheez kee zaroorat ho to mujhe bata dijyega.

After the guy left Naina's nerves were still high.

Naina: Raj mujhe yeh jage theek nahi lagrahee

Rajveer: come on Naina ab bahaar is thand me rehne se yaha per hee theek hai. Or phir me hoon na tumhaare saath. (lightning struck and Naina got really scared and she hugged Rajveer. He laughed) Kya tum bhi bilkul ek chote baccho kee tarha darrti ho

She got annoyed and freed herself from his grip and made a face. She hated it when he constantly made fun of her.

Then the caretaker came with some clean clothes for them to change into and he also brought water.

Guard: agar kuch or chaheeye aap ko to bata dijye

Rajveer: ha actually kuch or chaheeye tha (he went to the guard and said something quietly to him and then the guard left)

Naina: kya kehrahe the tum osse

Rajveer: kehraha tha ke jaldi se tumhaari mummy ko phone laga le kyu ke bechaari bacchi bohat darr gayee hai

Naina: Very funny (goes to charge on him) Ab to me nahi chorungi tumhe (she literally chased him around the room and then finally grabbed hold of him and pinned him down against the floor and sat on top of him scrunching his wet shirt in both her hands.

Rajveer: Are bacchao! Bacchoa meri izzat khatre me hai (he struggled and laughed like hell) Naina kuch to reham karo mujhper aise kyu barbaad karahee ho mujhe

Naina got more annoyed with him and continued attacking him. Then finally Rajveer stopped her assailing hands and rolled her over which brought him on the top and her underneath. Then both stared at each other dreamily as their wet bodies pasted against each other.

Saason ko saason me dalne do zara

Dheemi si dharkhan ko bhadne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aajaye

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum Tum

He lowered down and fit his head in the crane of her neck and kissed the silky water off her neck making her shudder.

Aankhon me hamko utarne do zara

Baahon me hamko pigalne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aajaye

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum tum

Saason ko saason me dalne do zara

She turned away from him but he didn't let her go and held her close.

Salwatein kahi karwatein kahi

Phel jaaye kaajal bhi tera

Nazron me ho guzar tha hua

Khwabo ka koi kaafila

He wanted her to surrender to him completely as being so close to her had made him loose all control. He wanted to posses her again as his body had been depreived for too long.

Jismo ko ruho ko jalne do zara

Sharmo haya ko machalne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aajaye

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum tum

Saason ko saason me dalne do zara

She felt his cold hands reaching inside her wet dress making the hairs of her neck stand up. A fire ignited inside her.

Choolon badan magar iss tarha

Jaisa surila saaz ho

Her lips were sealed under his whilst his hands played with her dress drawing it's hem up her thigh for better access.

Hum hai re chupe tere zulf me

Kholo ke raat azaad ho

Her hands raked through his bush of a hair holding his head tight against her as she continued savouring the sweet nectar of his lips. He successfully lowered the top of her dress and laid kisses down her collar bone reaching her cleavage.

Aanchal ko seene se dhalne do zara

Shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aajaye

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum tum

Both of their breaths were heavy as they spent time loving each other. Rajveer's skin contact with her was doing wonders and she forgot the world around her. All she wanted was to love him continuosly and never stop.

Saason ko saason me dalne do zara

His lips rested on her soft mounds as his fingers played around her navel. She urged for him and wanted him to stop teasing her like this and satisfy her once and for all. But he wanted to take it slow and show her how he can love her bit by bit making her want more and more.

Baahon me hamko pigalne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aajaye

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum tum

Hum…Hum tum

Tum…Hum tum

Hum…Hum tum

It was as if they had melted in each other becoming one and it was time for the next step when Naina heard her stomach rumble which brought her out of this ecstatic moment and back into the plain world.

Naina: (breathing heavily) Raj…Raj…

Rajveer: Sssssssh…(put his hand on her lips) don't ruin the moment or mere pyaar ko sirf mehsoos karo.

It was as if she all of a sudden lost interest.

Naina: Raj please choro mujhe. Mujhe bohat bhook lagrahee hai

Rajveer: (halted what he was doing and stared at her with disbelief) Ache khaase romantic moment ko kharaab karna koi tumse sikhe.

He rolled off her and she straightened her dress and sat up.

Naina: I'm sorry Raj per aaj raat party me bhi maine kuch nahi khaaya or phir tum mujhe bahaar legaye or phir…(saw he was disappointed and felt guilty) ab mujhe bhook lagrahee hai to me kya karu. Theek hai agar tum hamesha apni hee manmaani karna chahte ho to karo. (she lay back down as if telling him he can have her again)

He saw what she was doing and shook his head with disagreement. This is not what he only wanted so he took her hand and lifted her back to the sitting position.

Rajveer: Naina maine tumse pyaar kiya hai, tumharee aatma se pyaar kiya hai. Tumhaare jism se nahi. Jabhi maine tumhe chuha hai wo isliye tha kyu ke me apni mohabbat nishaawar karsakhu. Koi vaasna ya hawas ke liye nahi. (cupped her face in his palms) to phir tumne kese soch liya ke tumhaari marzi ke bagair me aisa qadam bhi uthaunga? (shook his head) nahi Naina kabhi nahi

Tears appeared in her eyes as she hug him fiercely. She felt so glad to have Rajveer in her life and she knew then that if there was a safe place in this world then it was in his arms. Near him.

Rajveer: Are Naina ab chore do mujhe warna mere ander ke jaanwar ko koi nahi roke sakhega

She pulled out and slapped his forearm playfully and Rajveer pretended to be hurt. They just continued playing around with each other forgetting the rest of the world.

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