Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 60

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey u updated it...i haven't received pmπŸ˜•


anyways nice update..at last Sameer n Samira r 2gethrπŸ˜› n about RN so they always amazing..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

tooo cute...luved d part.....πŸ˜³πŸ‘- thanks alot for loving it

dat was very nice plan of sameer n raj.......πŸ‘- yeh both of them are too good

finally sameera n sameer r together.......dat part was awesome.....😳- yep finally they have united all thanks to RN

also njoyed rn as usual dey wer damn cute n amazing.....πŸ‘πŸ‘- of course they are always cute and amazing and im glad u luved it


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey u updated it...i haven't received pmπŸ˜•- oh im so sorry i forgot to pm you but im glad u found the update


anyways nice update..at last Sameer n Samira r 2gethrπŸ˜› n about RN so they always amazing.. - thanks. Yep they are together for sure and RN wil lalways remain amazing. Hope u continue enjoying the fic.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b


Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thank you very much

The song is very nice and apt for them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it sure is

Sameer tried to put his feelings in that song and Sameera was quite sure that he feels something for her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes mutual feelings were involved

Sameer went towards Sameera but took Maya's hand and started dancing with her!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - hehe it was part of the game

Sameera could feel the connations in the lines and felt like confessing her feelings once and for all!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - how longer can she deny it

But she was really upset to see Sameer and Maya in each other's arms!!!!! - who wouldnt be seing their love in someone else's arms

Sameer is thinking that the real game is about to begin!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it definitely is

Just when the ring ceremony was about to begin Sameera came and said ke yeh mangni nahi ho sakti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

This was very dramatic and filmy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†- yeh i know comepletely filmy per ham sab bhi to filmy hee hai and it always looks good

Many people were pleased as they had expected this and were waiting for the show to continue!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - sach me aakhir plan jo thera onka

Bilkul and that was Rajveer and the gang jinka yeh masterplan hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - for sure

Yeh Sameer bhi natak kar raha hai when Sameera is reminding him of all that has happened between them over the years!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - he has to keep the game rolling

He is smiling but still pretending not to understand anything!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakhir sach jo nikaal na hai bahaar

Sameera finally confessed that she loved him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - sachai chup nahi saktee banawti baato se

But it all turned out to be a dream and broke with the roar of applause!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - typical Ekta style i know

Sam was shattered to see Sameer getting engaged to Maya and left from there crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - it was too much for her to take

When Sameer followed her and asked her she tried to pretend to be happy!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - itnee aasaani se nahi maanegi

Sameer wants her to look into his eyes and say she is happy but she can't!!!!! - she wont give in

Sameer held her tightly not letting her go and now tears trickled out of her eyes!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Sameer keeps pushing her to admit!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - wo jaanta hai ke sach kya hai

Finally Sameera admited ke woh usse bahut pyaar karti hai aur usse khona nahi chahti!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - kaha tha na ke sach chup nahi sakta ziada dair tak

Raj came at the exact moment with Naina and he is strumming a guitar and singing!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab plan khatam hone per oske master ko to aana hee hai

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes of course

Raj is teasing Sam ke uski chori pakdi gayi and he knew ke woh aaj apne dil ki baat bata hi degi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakhir osee ka bhai hai to ose acchee tarhase jaanta hai

Raj was really happy for Sameera!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is the sweetest brother ever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - the sweetest ever can be

Sameera is now saying ke Maya ka kya hoga and Raj and Sameer are laughing at that!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - baat hee kuch aisee thi ke dono hass pare

Raj introduced Sam to Maya and her fiance Karan!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Sameera was shocked to know it was all their plan!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - sab ke sab hairaan hee hote rehte hai Raj ke plans kee wajese

Sameer aur Sameera ka ruthna manana was very cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - im glad u luved it

Raj of all the people is telling them ke dono ko sharam nahi aati aise sab ke saamne ishq lada rahe hai??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe yeh hairaani kee to baat hai hee

Naina ne sahi kaha ke look who is talking jo khud hi itna bada besharam hai aur dusro ko keh raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - sirf Naina hee ose aise daant sakti hai

Magar Raj pe koi asar nahi pada aur woh keh raha hai ke unki toh baat hi alag hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - kabhi sudhar ne waala to hai hee nahi to aisa hee jawaab dega na

Naina ne accha kiya jo Raj ko waha se le gayi to leave them alone together!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she sure did warna wo to hath ne ka naam hee nahi leta

Everyone knew about their relationship, even Gehlot who had been told everything by Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it was only a secret for Sam

Raj is planning something special for New Year's Eve and he even has Navin on his side now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - Raj hai to kuch special hee hoga

Raj is lying with his head on Naina's lap!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - picturesque moment i know

Naina told him ke unhe mandir jaana hai kyunki uski maa ne mannat mangi thi unke liye but Raj does not want to go!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - wo to aisa hee hai

He instead wants to spend time with her alone as they have got very less time alone with each other since they came here!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - her moke ka fiada utha ta hai

Raj agrees to go on the condition ke aaj raat ke party ke baad Naina uske saath bahar chalegi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - her baar koi na koi shart lagata hee rehta hai oski fitrat jo aisee hai

Naina had to agree to it and also give him his good morning kiss to make him come with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He is really very naughty!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab to aadat see parjaanee chaheeye aise Raj ko dekhte huwe

Raj is surely planning something very romantic for New Years!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he sure is


Edited by arwa72 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Too good dear. 😊 😊 😊
Itne dino baad tum ne is ko update kiya jab mai samajh rahi thi ki shayad ab pata nahi is ka aage kabhi update padhn eko bhi ilega ya nahi.
Anyways thanks a lot for updating it again n keep our hopes high. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Raj n Sameer made really a superb plan to make Sameera confess about her feelings for Sameer. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Nice song selection n i was really laughing so much when that filmy situation came ki ruk jaao ye mangani nahi ho sakti hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. Finally they confessed about their emotions n all r happy 2 see them together. 😳 😳 😳
Sach kaha na Raj ne ki jab se dono yahan aaye hain dono ko kabhi bhi free time nah mila hai na ek saath spend karne k liye.
To jaana to nahi chahta tha Raj temple us ne socha tha accha mauka hai Naina k saath thoda time milega par Naina ne Raj kp mana hi liya ek pyaaroi se rishwat de k. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Now try to update asap.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Too good dear. 😊 😊 😊-thanks very much

Itne dino baad tum ne is ko update kiya jab mai samajh rahi thi ki shayad ab pata nahi is ka aage kabhi update padhn eko bhi ilega ya nahi. - hehehe yeh sabko aisa hee laga tha per im back now

Anyways thanks a lot for updating it again n keep our hopes high. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘- ur welcome

Raj n Sameer made really a superb plan to make Sameera confess about her feelings for Sameer. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰- they sure did aakhir ek hee khopri ke log hai

Nice song selection n i was really laughing so much when that filmy situation came ki ruk jaao ye mangani nahi ho sakti hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. -i know the typical filmy scene so it is funny

Finally they confessed about their emotions n all r happy 2 see them together. 😳 😳 😳 - yes finally onka bhi ho hee gaya

Sach kaha na Raj ne ki jab se dono yahan aaye hain dono ko kabhi bhi free time nah mila hai na ek saath spend karne k liye. - ha to zaahir see baat hai ke Raj ab chahta hai

To jaana to nahi chahta tha Raj temple us ne socha tha accha mauka hai Naina k saath thoda time milega par Naina ne Raj kp mana hi liya ek pyaaroi se rishwat de k. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - wo bhi ose khoob ghooma na jaanti hai isliye

Now try to update asap.

Edited by arwa72 - 15 years ago
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Part 30

Navin's room

Navin: nopes is baar me teree koi madad nahi karunga

Rajveer: Oh come on yaar

Navin: pichlee baar ki baat alag thi kyu ke wo to ham sab ghar pe hee the per yeh...no way man me tujhe itnee raat gai ose le jaane nahi desakta. Or phir pichlee baar wo beach pe jo huwa tha sab yaad hai mujhe, wo haadsa...

Rajveer: dekh me jaanta hu wo nahi hona chaheeye tha per is baar aisa kuch nahi hoga. Trust me. Dekh itne dino ke baad me Naina ko bahar le ja raha hu. Kuch to rehem kar.

Navin: Bilkul nahi (shakes his head) ab jo bhi romance karna hai wo shaadi ke baad

Rajveer: Navin tu...

Navin: (raises his hand) Mene kehdiya na

Rajveer is dejected and he walks out of the room wondering what next to do to make his plan successful when he saw a worried Ritu rushing around and going straight to Navin's room.

Rajveer: kya huwa Ritu?

Ritu: pata nahi. Aaj subhe se achanak Navin ke pait me dard horaha hai or me oske liye dawai dhoond rahee hu. koi farak hee nahi paraha. Bistar se bhi uth nahi sakta wo. Abhi kuch dair me mandir bhi to jaana hai

Rajveer thought: pait me dard? abhi abhi to mere saat araam se baat karaha tha? samajh gaya. wo bhi mandir na jaane ke bahane bana raha hai. Me bhi dekh ta hu kese wo apnee chaal me kaamyaab hota hai

He walked inside to find Navin in bed and Ritu fussing over him

Rajveer: Kya huwa Navin? abhi do minute pehle to tum mere saat khare hoke baat karahe the

Navin: (innocent laugh) kya Raj tu bhi mazaak karta rehta hai

Ritu: Raj yeh mazaak karne ka waqt nahi. dekhai nahi deta me itnee pareshaan hu

Rajveer: pareshaan to me bhi hu

Ritu: tumhe kya huwa hai

Rajveer: kyu Navin (gives him the look) bata du

Navin became alert and warned him not to say anything

Ritu: kya baat hai?

Rajveer: me iske dard kee waje jaanta hu or ilaaj bhi

Ritu: to jaldi batao na. wese bhi dair horahee hai

Navin: nahi Ritu rehne do. Pata nahi Raj kya kehraha hai. is bechare ko takleef kyu derahee ho?

Rajveer: (goes closer to him) are nahi Navin is me takleef kesee. Wese bhi tumhaara khayaal rakhna mera farz hai

Navin: yeh farz kisee or din nibhaana mere bhai. filhaal me theek hu

Rajveer: Wah! ilaaj ke naam se hee theek hogaya. Hmmm (pats his finger on his chin) mujhe daal me kuch kaala nazar aata hai

Navin: (panics) hehe, tu phirse bakwaas karne laga

Ritu: yeh kya kehraha ha Navin?

Just then Mira entered the room with Naina. Navin immediately began his act of shouting in pain and moaning that his stomach really hurted.

Mira: kya huwa ise (is tensed and sits beside him)

Ritu: pata nahi mummyji aaj subhe se iske pait me dard horaha hai

Mira: tune doctor ko bulaaya?

Rajveer: kaha Maa, Ritu itnee pareshaan hai ke kuch samajh me nahi aaraha. mujhe lagta hai ke phone kardena chaheeye

Navin: nahi, nahi (in between moans) kyu khamakha doctor ko bulaate ho. Maamuleesa dard hai, theek hojaehga

Rajveer: aise kese theek hojaehga? nahi Navin I can't see you like this

Navin: (grabs hold of his hand and presses it really tight. No- one can see it) Mere bhai mujhe pata hai ke tujhe meree itnee fikar hai lekin mene kaha na (gritted teeth) ke me theek hojaoonga.

Rajveer: (comes closer to Navin and speaks low near his ear) tu to theek hojaehga lekin mera dil to bait jaehga na

Navin: kya chahta hai tu?

Rajveer: tu jaanta hai (gives a knowing smile)

Navin: or mera jawaab tu jaanta hai

Rajveer: theek hai (gets up and speaks louder) Maa me to kehta hu ke Navin ko hospital lejaana chaheeye isse pehle ke iska dard barjayeh.

Navin: are nahi nahi iskee koi zaroorat nahi

Mira: kya bacho jesee baat karaha hai Pait me dard hai to oska ilaaj karna zaroori hai

Navin: ha to wo ilaaj (tries to think of something and says the first thing that comes) ha Raj kehraha tha ke oske paas ilaaj hai

Rajveer: (pretends to be oblivious) mene kab kaha?

Ritu: tumne hee to mujhe pehle bataya tha

Rajveer: Ritu wo to me sirf isse behlaane ke liye kehraha tha but I think this is very seious (makes a pretense worried face) or hame forun action lena chaheeye

Navin: (pulls Raveer closer in again) abhe kyu mere peeche para hai?

Rajveer: mere romance ka patta saaf karke tu apna romance chala na chahta hai. Now how can I let that happen?

Navin: theek hai, me teree madad kar deta hu lekin tujhe bhi meree madad karnee hogee

Rajveer smiled as finally he got Navin where he wanted him.

Mira: (curious) yeh tum dono kya khusur pusur karahe ho

Rajveer: kuch nahi Maa. Navin mujhe oskee madad karne ke liye kehraha tha

Mira: kesee madad?

Both Rajveer and Navin panicked and quickly thought of a cover up

Rajveer: are iskee tabiyat theek nahi hai na, oske liye. me kaam karta hu ke me lejaata hu isko hospital.

Ritu: me bhi saath chaltee hu

Mira: theek hai. Rajveer tum Navin or Ritu ko hospital lejao. Baaki ke ham sab mandir jaate hai

Just as they are leaving Rajveer nudges Navin to help him stop Naina too, as now he wasn't going so he would rather spend time with her.

Navin: Ma (moans) Ritu kee madad karne waala koi hona chaheeye na. Raj to mera khayaal rakhega os darmiyaan Ritu ka koun rakhega khayaal?

Ritu: Navin mujhe apnee nahi, tumhaaree pari hai is waqt

He gives her a stern disappointed look

Mira: tu theek kehraha hai. Wese bhi pata nahi waha kitna waqt lagega to madad kee to zaroorat paregee. Naina tu bhi thairja, hum baaki ke sab mandir chale jaate hai

Naina nodded like a good obedient child

Both Navin and Rajveer waited impatiently for Mira to leave. Everytime she said she was leaving, she still stood there explaining things to Ritu. Giving instructions. As she left both of them sighed with relief.

Rajveer:
maan gaye tujhe Navin, kya acting kee hai tune

Navin: rehne de, rehne de (brushes him off) ab ziyada mazka lagane kee zaroorat nahi. abhi bhi me apna irada badal sakta hu

Rajveer: (looks out of the door) abhi bhi Maa ghar se dhoore nahi gayee hogi

Navin:
(gets off the bed) tu baar, baar mujhe Maa kee dhamkee kyu deta rehta hai?

Rajveer: kyu ke onhee kee wajese mera kaam hota hai

Ritu: yeh sab kya natak chalraha hai Navin? (hands on hips) Tum phirse...

Navin: uffo jaaneman itna khafa kyu horahee ho? yeh sab aaphee ke liye hee to kiya hai (embraces her)

Rajveer: ehem...ehem

Navin: kya besharmo kee tarha hame dekhraha hai? (disappointed) Tera kaam kardiya na? apni Naina ko le or nikal yaha se, isse pehle ke mera irada badal jaaye

Rajveer gave an innocent laugh, grabbed Naina and left the two love birds Navin and Ritu alone.

In the evening

It was New Years Eve and they had organized a party at their house and many people were invited. All the family members were present with all the close friends and business associates and friends. Gehlot was busy receiving everybody and chatting amongst the guests. All the elders were busy in that whilst the children ran around enjoying themselves.

The four couples, Rajveer - Naina, Navin - Ritu, Alekh - Neelu and Sameer - Sameera, were all busy with each other in different corners.

Rajveer: wow aaj to tum is pink dress me kamaal ki lagrahee ho. (holds onto his heart) darr ta hu ke kahi aaj raat khatam hone tak kahi me hospital na pohoch jaao

Naina: (slaps his arm) kya Raj kesee baate karahe ho

Rajveer: or nahi to kya (pulls her closer) agar aisee mind blowing lagogee to phir kise heart attack nahi aaehga

Naina: (gives a shy smile and slaps his chest) you're just too much Raj or tumhaara kuch nahi hosakta

Rajveer: jaanta hu or me zindagee bhar aise hee rehna chahta hu (hugs her) I don't want to loose this fun and happiness in our life ever

Naina: me bhi yehi chahtee hu Raj or hum dono ise sach zaroor banaenge. Ek saath.

They held each other tight vowing that they won't leave each other's side ever in life in any circumstances.

In the other corner Ritu was quite impressed with Navin.

Ritu: you know me jaantee thi ke tum bhi kaafi badmaash ho per yaha aake tum kuch ziada hee hogaye ho

Navin: (mischievious look) well ham to pehle se aise hee the. Yeh baat alag hai ke yeh parda tumhaare saamne ab jaake khula hai

Ritu: (puts arms around his neck and smiles) jo bhi ho per mujhe yeh Navin ziada pasand hai. Aisa hee natkhat, thora shaitaan or bohat pyaara

Navin: kya baat hai aaj to kuch ziada hee pyaar aaraha hai madam ko hamper

Ritu: yes or me chahtee hu ke yeh pyaar hamare beech hamesha rahe. I don't think I'll be able to live without you now Navin.

Navin: (kisses her forehead) me bhi to nahi jee paaunga tumhaare bina. Don't worry Ritu me tumhe chore ke nahi jaaunga or agar jaana bhi pare to tumhe apne saath hee lekar jaaunga.

Ritu: (embraces him) Promise?

Navin: pakka promise.

Both of them also held on tight not wanting to let go.

In the next corner there was a surprise waiting for Neelu.

Alekh: (removed his hand away from her eyes) ab dheere se apni aakhe kholo

She opened her eyes and exclaimed as she couldn't believe the sight. Alekh had brought her in another room which was completely lit by candles. It was so beautiful that she covered her mouth with her hand out of amazement.

Neelu: Oh my god Alekh this is so beautiful

Alekh: yes it is, per tumse ziada nahi (then he kneeled down on one knee and looked up at her holding a rose) aaj is haseen raat me ek haseen sa tohfa, ek haseen si larki ke liye

Neelu: (laughed and accepted the rose) wow Alekh maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke tum yeh sab bhi karsakte ho

Alekh: (puts hand out towards her) may I have the pleasure of dancing with the pretty lady

She kept laughing as this was all new for her. She never knew that Alekh could be this charming and she was loving it all. She agreed and gave him her hand and then he pulled her closer and danced with her slowly. Swaying from this side to the other and just making her fall in love with him all over again.

Then he took her towards a table in the center of the room where there was a cake. It had on it 'Alekh and Neelu forever'.

Alekh: me jaanta hu ke maine kabhi bhi istarha se apne pyaar ka izhaar nahi kiya tumse and I know how many times you've been disappointed. To aaj raat maine socha ke ab nayi shuruaat honi chaheeye. Jese kal ka suraj ek nayee subha or naya saal laaehga wese hee hamara rishta bhi ek naya janam lega. I'm really sorry for all the neglections per ab me sab theek kardunga.

Neelu: (had tears of joy in her eyes) Alekh itnee pyaaree pyaaree baate karnee kaha se sikhee tumne

Alekh: (holds her hand) sach bolu to yeh sab tumne hee sikhaaya hai mujhe Neelu. Pehle me nahi jaanta tha ke pyaar kya hota hai per jabse tumse mila hu sab samajh me aaya hai mujhe. Aur phir her din mujhe ehsaas huwa ke tum kya ho mere liye or yeh zindagee tumhaare bagair adhuree hai. Thank you Neelu for changing my life.

Neelu: (kisses him on the cheek) I really love you Alekh

Alekh: I love you too or chahta hu ke yeh pyaar hamare beech hamesha barkaraar rahe

Neelu: bhagwaan chaahega to aisa hee hoga

Then both of them cut the cake together and feed each other beginning a new life.

Now left were the fourth couple who sat together on one of the sofas in the secluded corner.

Sameer: Sameera tum sach me khush hona

Sameera: (hugs his waist and rests her head on his shoulder) agar tumne yeh sawaal mujhe kuch din pehle poocha hota to me yehi kehtee ke me nahi hu per aaj me dil khole ke kehsakti hu ke me bohat khush hu. Kya tum khush ho?

Sameer: (patts her head) tumhaaree khushi me hee meri khushi hai. Maine hamesha yehi chaaha hai or hamesha wahi chahunga

Sameera: kitna pyaar karte ho tum mujhse or maine kabhi bhi oski sahi tarhase qadar nahi ki

Sameer: (smiles) tumhe pata hai Sameera tumhaaree os naraaz gi me bhi mujhe sirf pyaar hee nazar aata tha. Isilye to tumhaara peecha kabhi chora nahi.

Sameera: (pulls out and pulls his cheeks in a loving way) tum itne acche kyu ho Sameer?

Sameer: ab kya karu (grins) aisa hee hu main

Sameera: (links her hand through his arm and rests her head on his shoulder again) jese bhi ho sab se acche ho. I don't want you to change ever Sameer.

Sameer: or me bhi roze yehi praatna karunga ke hamara rishta bhi aisa hee rahe or kabhi na badle.

Both of them prayed and vowed that they would remain together no matter what.

All the four couples had the thing in common in the end that they all knew they had made many mistakes in the past but with the coming new year they all wanted to start a new life together. They wanted to put the past behind them and move on to make a better and beautiful future.

After a while the party was still in full swing but love was in the air and it was blooming by the second. The four couples were on a high and decided to rock the party.

Rajveer and Naina rushed their way in the crowd hand in hand alerting everybody and the other three couples followed suite. All eyes went on them and they saw how all of them were on top of the moon and totally and completely in love.

Rajveer: hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

Naina: Aa ha ha ha ha aha

Navin: Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho

Ritu: Aaa haha ha ha haaaaa

All the four had gathered together in the centre with their beaus.

Rajveer: Mohabbat

Naina: Dil ka sukoon hai aitbaar

Navin: Mohabbat

Ritu: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

Alekh: Mohabbat

Neelu: Dil ka sukoon hai aitbaar

Sameer:Mohabbat

Sameera: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

Rajveer took Naina's hand and pulled her closer

Rajveer: Ho dekha hai aaj hamne sanam

Naina: Aapki aakho me pyaar

Mohabbat

Rajveer:Dil ka sukoon hai aitbaar

Navin: Mohabbat

Ritu: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey aaaaaahhaaaaa

Aaaah aaaah aaaaaa

All of them danced together with the onlookers cheering and clapping for them.

Naina: Ishq hai chaahat ka nasha, tujhko nahi hai pata

Rajveer: Jisne kiya wo jaane hai, kesa hai iska maza

Sameera pulled Sameer forward

Sameera: Isme Milan ki hai bekhudi, ismein judaai bhi hai

Sameer: Isme wafao ka rang hai, bewafai bhi hai

Alekh and Neelu made their way through

Neelu:Pyaar me jeete, marte hai ham aashiq deewane

Alekh: Pyaar me jeete, marte hai ham aashiq deewane

Neelu: Mohabbat

Alekh: Dil ki ada hai yeh ikhtiyaar

Rajveer and Naina returned

Naina: Mohabbat

Rajveer: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

All of them were lost in each other and in the magic of love.

Aa aa aa aaa aaaaaaaaaa

Aa aaa aaaa aaaaaaaaaa

Aa aaaa aaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho

Suddenly Naina remembered many things of the past and she felt sad and didn't want it all to repeat

Naina: Ismein haqeeqat hai chupi, ismein kahani bhi hai

Oh, iske labo pe haseen hai to, aakhon me paani bhi hai

Rajveer saw her tears so he wiped them and shook his head for her not to cry

Rajveer: Isme to hai bechainiya, isme karaar bhi hai

Navin also came to console her

Navin: Jeet hai jo is khel me, isme to haar bhi hai

Ritu: Isme jalke marte hai ulfat ke parwaane

He took her away

Navin:Ho isme jalke marte hai ulfat ke parwaane

Sameera: Mohabbat

Sameer: Karti hai dil ko beqaraar

Neelu: Mohabbat

Alekh: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

Navin: Mohabbat

Ritu: Dil ka sukoon hai aitbaar

Rajveer: Mohabbat

Naina: Dil ki tarap hai yeh intezaar

Rajveer: Ho dekha hai aaj hamne sanam

Naina: Aapki aakho me pyaar, pyaar

All the ladies ran towards their men and the men lifted all of them up and twirled around till the end.

End of part
Edited by arwa72 - 15 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Navin refuses to help Raj and does not give in even after much persuasion reminding him of what had happened last time!!!!!

Raj is disappointed and wondering what to do next to make his plan successful!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Luck was in favour of him and he met Ritu who was worried about Navin has a tummy ache!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

He understood that Navin is also in his league aur mandir na jaane ka bahana bana raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj goes in and taunts Navin who wants Raj to go away!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj even suggests calling the doctor which Navin refuses!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Raj blackmails Navin but he refuses which makes Raj insist on taking Navin to the hospital saying it is very serious!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin had to agree as he was trapped and Raj had gotten Navin exactly where he wanted him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj did a fabulous job of blackmailing Navin and finally got what he wanted!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj offered to take Navin to the hospital and Ritu said she will go with them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin said Ritu ki madad karne ke liye koi hona chahiye na to which Mira asked Naina to stay behind!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Navin bhi nautanki karne mein kam nahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mira ke jaane ke baad Navin aur Raj abhi bhi ek dusre ko dhamki de rahe hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Ritu realises whats going on and Navin gets romantic with her!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

When Raj coughs to indicate his presence, Navin told him to take Naina before he changes his mind!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj left with Naina leaving the two love birds Navin and Ritu alone!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was New Years Eve and they had organised a party at their house!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

All the four couples are busy enjoying the party and romancing in different corners!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is praising Naina and saying ke agar aisi mindblowing lagegi then he will get a heart attack!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina gives a shy smile and said ke Raj ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wants to remain like this all his life and doesn't want to lose this fun and happiness in their life ever!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina also wants that and they promise they won't leave each other's side ever in life in any circumstances and held each other tight!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Riu said woh janti thi Navin badmaash hai per yaha aake kuch zyada hi hogaya hai and she loves this Navin more!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ritu chahti ke yeh pyaar unke beech hamesha rahe and both say they can't live without the other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Navin promised woh usse chhod ke kabhi nahi jayega aur agar jaana bhi pade toh Ritu ko apne saath le jayega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

They held each other tight not wanting to let go!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Aalekh gave Neelu a wonderful surprise and romantically went down on his knees to give her a rose!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Aalekh asked her for a dance and Neelu agreed and they danced slowly!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Neelu was surprised as she never knew Aalekh could be this charming and she was loving it all!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is so romantic and he tells Neelu that she has taught him ke pyaar kya hota hai and changed his life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They both say I love you and Aalekh chahta hai ke unke beech yeh pyaar hamesha barkaraar rahe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Finally they cut the cake and fed each other beginning a new life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sameer and Sameera both are happy and Sameer said ke usse Sam ki narazgi mein bhi sirf pyaar hi nazar aata tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sam said Sameer jaisa bhi hai sabse accha hai and does not want him to change ever!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both of them prayed and vowed that they would remain together no matter what!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

All the four couples with the coming new year wanted to start a new life together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

They wanted to put the past behind them and move on to make a better and beautiful furture!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

All the four couple are so happy and very much in love with each other!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

They decided to rock the party and danced together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for the occasion!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow......Raj did a fabulous job by blackmailing Navin.....kya scene tha!!! Awesum!!! I luv this side of Raj the most.

And all the couples had sweet sweet scenes.....that was also very nice.

A very gud part indeed.....gr8 job Dii. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!! Nice update!!
Raj ne kya blackmail kiya Navin ko!!πŸ˜†
Navin bhi bahot chalu cheez niklaπŸ˜†
The four couples are very much in love😳
Nice song!!😊
continue soon😊

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