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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiiiiiiiiii,

This fic is awesome πŸ‘ - hey thanks alot for reading this fic too and enjoying it.
I finished reading all the parts,they r truly amazing πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - thanks so much
Raj is so naughty in this fic 😳 - yes he surely is
the scene between gehlot n naina is so good,naina is right when she said that raj shararate karta hai but wo bilkul ek bacche jaise hain ............cute sa blot accha πŸ˜‰ - of course wo cute sa baccha jesa hee hai.
Nice to know about rajs child hood - hmmm im glad u liked it
Raj naina scenes r so cute - they are cute i know
The bonding between sameera n raj is so nice - yes the siblings love each other
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 15 years ago

JAY HO...πŸ˜ƒ

arre yaar main A.R.REHMAN ka song nahin ga rahi hun, ise ud kar k jo upkar tumne hum pe kiya hai, us k liye tumhari jay kar kar rahi hun.πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
actually baht dino baad tum ne ud kiya aur main sach me tumhe bahttttttt miss kar rahi thi. hey tumhe nahin mera matlab hai ki tumhare fics ko.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
ab ud par aate hain...vaise kahne ki jarurat toh nahin hai, kyoun ki tumhare uds toh as usall best hote hain.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
toh mr gehlot ne apne dil ki har ek baat bata di, naina ko. vaise sahi kiya hai unhone , kyoun ki aage chal kar naina ko hi toh sambhalna hai na RAJ ko. behtar hai voh sab kuch pahle hi samajh le. yeah raj toh angry young man hai hi. us k gusse se sabhi wakif hain. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
dekha RAJ itna bura bhi nahin hai, naina k liye khana le kar aaya hai. kitna pyar karta hai voh NAINA se, bas thoda sa embarrassed hi toh karta hai, par chalta hai itna toh. vaise raj ne jis tarah se mafi mangi, us se toh koi bhi raj se naraz nahin rah sakta, naina kya chiz hai??? voh toh pahle se hi flat ho chuki hai.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
vaise jab RN ek dushre ko khana khila rahe the, mujhe bada achha lag raha tha. hala ki jo feel papa gehlot kar rahe the, voh mujhe feel nahin ho raha tha. kyoun ki voh papa hain aur main kuch aur...ryt???πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
toh khana peena ho gaya toh raj ko jarurat padi HAJMOLA ki...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†!!! aur HAJMOLA gale me atak gayaπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†, tabhi RN ne aur ek drama kar diya ki raj ki tabiyat kharab hai. thodi der pahle jis ne sab k samne naina ko kiss kiya tha, voh bimar pad gaya. n fanilly un dono ne mrs ahluwalia ko ullu bana diya.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ok sam k case me mujhe lagta hai ki jab tak raj hai us k sath bhi sab kuch thik thak ho jayega. hope ki jaldi hi sam sameer k love ko accept kar leπŸ˜ƒ. phir ek hi mandap me tum bhai-bahen dono k phere karwa dena. ghelot saheb k paise kam kharch honge.πŸ˜†
yeh raj k kitne GF hain, aur kitne aur niklengeπŸ˜›??? bichari naina, phir se naraz ho gayi, voh bhi kya karti, aate jate voh raj k x-gf se takrati hai. vaise is me raj ka koi kasoor nahin hai, kyoun ki use thode hi na pata tha ki aage us ki lyf me NAINA jaisi koi aayegi. agar pata hota toh voh kabhi yeh sab nahin karta.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
nice ud.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
cont soon.πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks a lot

Gehlot is happy as he feels ke Naina ne aake Raj ki zindagi badal di but Naina said badli toh Raj ne uski zindagi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes he is really happy that Raj has changed but Naina knows its the other way around

Naina is right when she said Raj ka dil bilkul ek masoom bacche jaisa hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Ek bahut hi cute sa baccha!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes bohat hee cute sa baccha

Gehlot bared his heart out in front of Naina because he knows that she is the only one who can really take care of Raj!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes she is the only one

He did the right thing kyunki aage chal kar Naina ko hi toh sambhalna hai Raj ko!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - of course yeh osi ka kaam hai

Bethar hai woh sab kuch pehle se hi samajh le!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely

Raj's childhood was not a happy affair at all and somehow Gehlot is responsible for this and he too feels the same!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - ha bohat hee sad tha oska childhood

Raj toh angry young man hai aur uske gusse se toh sabhi wakif hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha sab ne namuna dekh liya hai

He was hospitalised for this attitude of his and then Gehlot had decided ke woh boxing nahi karega!!!! - itna khatarnaak jo hai

Naina is very shocked hearing all this about Raj's past!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - shocking hee tha

Raj's anger is very bad kyunki tab woh apne hosh mein nahi rehta!!!!! - ha hosh o awaaz sab ghul hojaata hai

Naina remembered that Huda was a victim of his anger but Huda really deserved that!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmmmmmm he sure did

I am happy that Raj had given him a good thrashing!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - we all were really happy dear

Raj aur Sameera ek duje pe jaan chirakte thhe and Naina knew how close they were!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha she has experienced the beautiful bond

Naina ne kaha aaj bhi Raj ruth jaata hai bilkul ek bigre huye bacche ki tarah aur uska gussa abhi bhi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - still nothing has changed

Gehlot said ke Naina usse sambhal leti hai aur jabse Naina uski zindagi mein aayi hai Raj sudhar gaya hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes she has worked wonders on him

Naina promised that she would keep Raj very happy and never let him get angry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - pyaar ka waada hai kabhi nahi tute ga

Gehlot made Raj say sorry to Naina and Naina forgave him after he sweetly said sorry!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab os jesa sweet insaan se koun naraaz rehsakta hai

Raj Naina ke liye khana bhi laaya hai kyunki Naina ko bhook lagi hogi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ha wo bohat hee sweet hai

Naina is right ke Raj itna pyaara hai ke usse bhala koun naraz reh sakta hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - of course its impossible

Raj and Naina looked so cute feeding each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - they always look cute together

Gehlot was happy to see them together and prayed that they always remain this way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he just wanted the best for them

Sam is quite upset but hides the fact from her dad and makes up an excuse ke uska ab waha se mann uth gaya hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - she doesnt know how to tell her dad the truth

Raj and Naina are thinking ke Sam ko kya ho gaya hai and Raj said ke lagta hai usse kuch ziada hi bura laga hai!!!! - wo apni behen ko jaanta hai

Raj knows she is disturbed because of his plan magar woh uske bhale ke liye hi yeh sab kar raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course wo oska bhai hai or bohat pyaar karta hai osse

Naina teased Raj ke doctor dekhne aa raha hai ke kahi zyada asar toh nahi ho gaya aur woh pagal toh nahi hogaya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe only Naina can say this to him

Raj and Naina got busy in their romance!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️These two never seem to have enough romance!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - this is something which will never get old and it wud never be enuf

Naina and Raj were about to be caught by Mira in this compromising position as Naina's bracelet had got stuck in Raj's shirt!!!! - again the same situation haha

Mira ke saamne Raj and Naina pretended ke Raj ke sar mein dard ho raha hai and fooled her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - dono ke dono natak baaz jo tehre

Mira ne toh Naina se kaha ke woh Raj ka acchi tarahse khayal rakhe!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she cares for him just like a mother

Naina was about to go when Raj reminded her of it and pulled her on top of him and continued playing around with her!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab wo to oska double meaning hee nikaalega na

Sam was crying and now tried to hide her tears and make up the age old excuse but Raj guessed what she was going to say!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - osee ka bhai hai to oski nas nas se waakif hai

Raj asked her how long she was going to be in denial but Sam said aisa kuch nahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - still in denial abt the denial

Raj and Naina fed Sam and made sure she ate and Sam felt very lucky to have them both in her life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha dono bohat important hai oske liye

Finally Raj's bandage is removed and he kept checking himself in the mirror and complimenting himself!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Narcissism at its best!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is just too much!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - he loves himself too much to kabhi sudrega hee nahi

Sameer Raj ko invite karne aaya hai kyunki shaadi pakki ho gayi hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Magar kiski shaadi aur kiske saath??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - hehe yehi to maze kee baat hai

Maya jaa rahi hai isilye aaj raat ko hi sagai hai!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - everything is last minute

Sameera thinks ke Sameer ki sagai honewaali hai Maya ke saath and she was not going to let that happen!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - osko haath se thori na jaane degi wo

This is definately an extension of Raj's plan!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm possibly

Yaa toh they are thinking ke Sam sagai rok legi and she will accept Sameer's love and they would get her engaged nahi toh phir engagement Maya ki hai magar Sameer se nahi balki kisi aur ke saath!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe tu or tera dimaag dono bare shaatir hai

At the party Sameer is lost on seeing Sameera but she ignored him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - the typical bhao khaawafying

Raj pulled Naina into a corner and Naina was irritated aur kehti hai ke waha toh sharam dikhaye!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - phirse chaalu hogaya isliye

Raj wanted to kiss her and reminded her of what had happened that morning but Naina resisted and asked him to leave her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - bohat hee tang karta hai ose

Naina was surprised when Raj lets go and Raj then realized that she was teasing him!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - dono ki ek jesee hee khopri hai

Naina runs away from him challenging him to catch her and he naughtily chases after her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Yeh dono yahan bhi shuru ho gaye!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - kabhi nahi sudrenge isliye

Yeh Raj ki kitni girlfriends thi aur kitne aur niklenge??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Har jagah ek tapak padhti hai!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - let me see if i can count....uhhh....nope i give up. ab jo boya hai osne ose seej na parega na

Raj is again in trouble because of his ex-girlfriend and Naina is fuming with anger!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - zaahir see baat hai she doesnt want him with anyone else

Sameer went on stage to get Sam's attention and is now going to sing a song for someone special!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmm he sure knows how to get her attention

Dekhte hai Raj ka plan kya rang laata hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - im sure u'll enjoy it


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

JAY HO...πŸ˜ƒ

arre yaar main A.R.REHMAN ka song nahin ga rahi hun, ise ud kar k jo upkar tumne hum pe kiya hai, us k liye tumhari jay kar kar rahi hun.πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰- hehehe wat a welcome i know i came after some time

actually baht dino baad tum ne ud kiya aur main sach me tumhe bahttttttt miss kar rahi thi. hey tumhe nahin mera matlab hai ki tumhare fics ko.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ - aaaawww thanks alot for both
ab ud par aate hain...vaise kahne ki jarurat toh nahin hai, kyoun ki tumhare uds toh as usall best hote hain.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ im glad u always love them
toh mr gehlot ne apne dil ki har ek baat bata di, naina ko. vaise sahi kiya hai unhone , kyoun ki aage chal kar naina ko hi toh sambhalna hai na RAJ ko. behtar hai voh sab kuch pahle hi samajh le. yeah raj toh angry young man hai hi. us k gusse se sabhi wakif hain. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - for sure wo apni bahu ko puree tarha se prepare karahe hai. sach me bohat hee ghusse waala hai Raj
dekha RAJ itna bura bhi nahin hai, naina k liye khana le kar aaya hai. kitna pyar karta hai voh NAINA se, bas thoda sa embarrassed hi toh karta hai, par chalta hai itna toh. vaise raj ne jis tarah se mafi mangi, us se toh koi bhi raj se naraz nahin rah sakta, naina kya chiz hai??? voh toh pahle se hi flat ho chuki hai.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - of course sab kuch hosakta hai per Raj se koi naraaz nahi rehsakta
vaise jab RN ek dushre ko khana khila rahe the, mujhe bada achha lag raha tha. hala ki jo feel papa gehlot kar rahe the, voh mujhe feel nahin ho raha tha. kyoun ki voh papa hain aur main kuch aur...ryt???πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe jaanti hu ke tum kya feel karahee thee per jo bhi hai acha hee hai na
toh khana peena ho gaya toh raj ko jarurat padi HAJMOLA ki...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†!!! aur HAJMOLA gale me atak gayaπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†, tabhi RN ne aur ek drama kar diya ki raj ki tabiyat kharab hai. thodi der pahle jis ne sab k samne naina ko kiss kiya tha, voh bimar pad gaya. n fanilly un dono ne mrs ahluwalia ko ullu bana diya.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - tumhaare misaal mujhe hamesha hasaate hai πŸ˜†. Ha sach me buree tarha se atak gayee per Raj bhi jaanta hai kese problem ko solve karna
ok sam k case me mujhe lagta hai ki jab tak raj hai us k sath hai sab kuch thik thak ho jayega. hope ki jaldi hi sam sameer k love ko accept kar leπŸ˜ƒ. phir ek hi mandap me tum bhai-bahen dono k phere karwa dena. ghelot saheb k paise kam kharch honge.πŸ˜† - yeh im sure tab maza aaehga to dekhte hai kya hota hai
yeh raj k kitne GF hain, aur kitne aur niklengeπŸ˜›??? bichari naina, phir se naraz ho gayi, voh bhi kya karti, aate jate voh raj k x-gf se takrati hai. vaise is me raj ka koi kasoor nahin hai, kyoun ki use thode hi na pata tha ki aage us ki lyf me NAINA jaisi koi aayegi. agar pata hota toh voh kabhi yeh sab nahin karta.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab kya batao pehle Raj to tha hee aisa awaara. osne thori future planning ki thi. Naina ko to hona hee tha naraaz or kyu na ho, aakhir ab Raj pe sirf oska haq and she wont tolerate anyone else with him. For sure wo kabhi aisa nahi karta
nice ud.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
cont soon.πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 29


Sameer: Mera dil jis dil pe fida hai, mera dil jis dil pe fida hai
ek dilruba hai, ek dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
ek dilruba hai
meri ulfat meri wafa hai, meri ulfat meri wafa hai
woh dilruba hai, woh dilruba
ha dilruba hai
woh dilruba hai
mera dil jis dil pe phida hai, mera dil jis dil pe fida hai
ek dilruba hai, ek dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
ek dilruba hai.

Everyone was dancing and Sameera stood with her gaze constantly on him. Her heart was racing because she could feel he was singing for her.

He stepped down and walked towards her but just when she thought he would ask her he took Maya's hand and asked for a dance. He went closer to Sameera on purpose and whilst dancing he stared at her and sang


Sameer: ji karta hai teri zulfo se khelu
ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le lu
ji karta hai teri zulfo se khelu
ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le
ji karta hai teri ankhon ko chumu
ji karta hai tere ishq main jhumu

dil karta hai tera sapna sajalu
dil karta hai tujhe apna banalu
dil karta hai tujhe dil main chupalu
dil karta hai tujhe tujhse churalu
sabse dilkash jiski ada hai, sabse dikash jiski ada hai
ek dilruba hai, ek dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
ek dilruba hai

mera dil jis dil pe fida hai, mera dil jis dil pe fida hai
ek dilruba hai , ek dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai

ek dilruba hai
hai.....


Sameera looked at him intensely then turned away from him.

maine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya hai
sirf tera intezaar kiya hai

He smiled and then took her hand and danced with her.

Sameer: maine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya hai
sirf tera intezaar kiya hai
mujhse nigahein kahin pher na lena
maine to tera aaitbaar kiya hai

She became conscious and left his arms and turned away


Sameer: hai tere khayaalo main khoya rahoonga
tere liye har dard sahoonga
mere liye tujhe bheja hai rab ne
saare jamaane se main yeh kahoonga

She could feel him coming closer to her and her heart was racing and when she thought he would take her in his arms again she was surprised to see he grabbed Maya instead.

Sameer: ho... jiska jaadoo mujhpe chala hai, jiska jadoo mujhpe chala hai
woh dilruba hai, woh dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
ek dilruba hai

mera dil jis dil pe fida hai, mera dil jis dil pe fida hai
ek dilruba hai, ek dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
ek dilruba hai
meri ulfat meri wafa hai, meri ulfat meri wafa hai
woh dilruba hai, woh dilruba hai
ha dilruba hai
woh dilruba hai

beautiful beautiful
you are so beautiful
ja..anam

Eventhough these lines he said to Maya, Sameera could feel the connations in them. His eyes said it all. She began blushing and couldn't control it she left and had an urge to go to Sameer and confess her feelings once and for all.

Everyone applauded after he finished singing. Sameera wanted to go to him but Maya had her arms around him and was kissing him fiercely on the cheek. Sameera was really upset so just walked off. After he got free he saw she had already gone. Now the real game was going to begin and he just hoped it went as planned.

Then the announcement of the enagagement was done and everyone had gathered around the stage. Sameer's eyes were out for Sameera and he was hoping she would be coming anytime soon. The ceremony was announced and the crowd were applauding. Sameer's eyes were out searching for her but she still hadn't come. Then Sameer was going forward with the tray where the ring was and was getting near when…

Sameera: ruk jao!

All eyes turned towards her with amazement. None of them knew what she was doing and why.

Sameera: (towards them) yeh mangni nahi hosakti

Everyone exclaimed and started chatting amongst themselves about this outrageous demand. Sameer's parents and Gehlot were also asking her what is this but she didn't answer. But many people in that hall were pleased at what was happening as they had expected this and now were waiting for the show to continue.

Sameer: Sameera yeh kya karahee ho

Sameera: wahi jo mujhe bohat pehle kardena chaheeye tha (goes up closer to him) kyu karahe ho aisa?

Sameer: I don't understand what you're saying

Sameera: me jaanti hu yeh tumharee marzi ka faisla nahi to phir kyu apni zindagee barbaad karahe ho? Aisa mat karo Sameer please. (her eyes were moist)

Sameer: to or kya karu me Sameera? Mere paas or koi chaara nahi

Sameera: chaara hai…(Sameer stares at her astonished) ha tumhe yeh karne kee zaroorat nahi

Sameer: ek baar mujhe jo chaheeye tha wo mujhe nahi mila to phirse dubaara mujhse wo cheen rahee ho?

Sameera: or mera kya Sameer? (tears flowed down) maine jo chaaha tha wo tum bhi to cheen rahe ho mujhse.

Sameer: ab kuch baaki nahi raha

Sameera: kitnee aasaanee se kehdiya ke kuch baaki nahi raha (bit angry) agar aisa hai to phir wo kya tha Sameer? Itne saalo se jo tum karte rahe ho wo kya tha? (he looks at her with amazement) ha itne saalo se tumne jo bhi mere liye kiya kya wo sab jhooth tha? Kya wo bus ek mazaak tha? Kya oska koi matlab nahi tha?

Sameer: Sameera tum yeh…

Sameera: Ha Sameer tumne jitna bhi kiya hai mere liye kuch nahi bhulee me. Wo tumhaaree choti choti shararate, tumhaare wo pyaare pyaare cards or soft toys sab kuch hai mere paas.

Sameer: (raises his hand to quieten her and looks upset) bus Sameera ab mere zakmo ko or mat kuredo. Tumne hamesha mera sirf mazaak uraaya hai or mujhe tukhraaya hai. Bus ab mujhe or nahi sunna

Sameera: kya? (tears still flowing) or mera kya Sameer? Itne saalo se jo maine tumhaare liye apne dil me jage banayee hai oska kya Sameer? (this time Sameer was really stunned as his plan was working and the truth was coming out and he needed to push further) jabse tumse milee hu me sab kuch bhool chuki hu or ab tum kehrahe ho ke sab kuch khatam hogaya

Sameer: (turned away smiling but pretended to be oblivious) tum kya kehrahee ho mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaraha

Sameera: (turned him towards her aggressively) it means I LOVE YOU DAMN IT!

The whole hall went silent with shock after that confession. Time stood still and Sameer kept staring at Sameera. Then all of a sudden a roar of applause was heard and Sameera found herself in a strange position. She shook herself and realized that apparently she was imagining all that had happened just now. She was still standing far away from the stage and the engagement announcement had just been made. She looked up and saw that everything was over and people were congratulating each other. Her eyes fell on Sameer hugging Maya and giving her a kiss on the cheek and he looked very happy. Tears flowed out of her eyes as the sight pained her. This couldn't have taken place. She couldn't have lost everything just like that.

Then Sameer turned towards her and saw her crying painfully and he became sad himself as to what happened to her. Then he saw how she just turned away from there and left the hall in a haste still crying. He followed her out too as he needed to know what happened.

She ran into a room crying out loud. Her heart just broke and she couldn't bear the pain. Why did this happen with her?

Sameer: kya huwa, itna ro kyu rahee ho. Tumhe to aaj khush hona chaheeye na ke finally mujhse tumhe chutkaara milgaya

She didn't say anything and just wiped her tears and turned around towards him.

Sameera: (forced smile) ha me bohat khush hu (she tried her best to push the tears behind her eyes)

Sameer: (started coming closer to her) kya sach me tum khush ho Sameera?

Sameera: ha me khush hu (turns her face away from him)

Sameer: (is really close to her now) meree aakho me dekh ke kaho ke kya tum khush ho

Sameera: (can't face him) ha…ha me khush hu

Sameer: (grabed hold of her by the waist and holds her tight alarming her) meree aakho me dekh ke kaho ke tum khush ho

Sameera: (she stares into his blazing eyes and finds a different passion in them. There is this strong emotion almost like rage) me…(turns away again) me khush hu, ab choro mujhe

Sameer: jab tak tum meree aakho me daal ke nahi kahogi, nahi chorunga

Sameera: (struggling) choro mujhe Sameer, leave me (he didn't leave her and she continued struggling and now tears trickled out of her eyes) please leave me Sameer.

Sameer: agar tum khush ho to phir yeh aasoo kis liye? Kis liye ha?

Sameera: mujhe dard horaha hai isliye

Sameer: jaanta hu kitna dard horaha hai tumhe, per yeh iski chote nahi (referring towards her held arms) per iski chote hai (points towards her heart) tum chaahe kitna bhi chupa lo Sameera per me jaanta hu ke tum kyu ro rahee ho. Tum khush nahi ho, nahi ho tum khush

Sameera: me khush hu (still crying) bohat khush hu (gradually she lowers down and rests her head on his shoulders and cries her heart out) bohat khush hu me, bohat khush….

Sameer: (engulfs her in his arms) bus karo Sameera, bus karo. Tum maan kyu nahi leti ke tum khush nahi ho. You don't like me going away from you. (she continues crying and holding him tight) tum maan kyu nahi leti Sameera ke tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho

Sameera: (still teary) bohat pyaar karti hu, bohat pyaar karti hu me or tumhe khona nahi chahti

Sameer: (pulls her out and cups her face in his palms) to phir itnee dair kyu lagadee yeh kehne me? Kyu kabhi mujhse nahi kaha ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho

Sameera: darr lagta tha Sameer. Darr lagta tha ke kahi me tumhe kho na du. Lekin ab jab meri aakho ke saamne yeh horaha tha to mujhse bardaasht nahi huwa. I really love you Sameer and I can't live without you.

He kissed her forehead and then both of them hugged each other again holding on tight. Finally the confession had been made and yet another pair of two lovers had united.

Then they heard a strum of strings of a guitar and they separated with surprise. Their eyes fell on the door way and there they saw a smiling Rajveer playing a guitar with Naina leaning on the otherside.

Rajveer: do dil milrahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Sabko horahee hai, ha sabko horahee hai

Khabar chupke chupke

He went up near them and encircled them

Rajveer: do dil milrahe hai, magar chupke chupke (stops and then keeps giving them teasing looks) kyu aakhir me chori pakri gayi na

Sameera: uh…kya kehrahe brother I don't understand

Rajveer: acha? (pulls her ear) bari bholi bantee hai per yeh mat bhool ke me bhi tera bara bhai hu or tujhe acchi tarhase jaanta hu. Or jaanta tha ke hona ho aaj tu apne dil kee baat bata hee degi

She couldn't say anything and just gave a shy smile and Rajveer just hugged her as he was really happy for her.

Rajveer: me bohat khush hu tere liye

Sameera: (remembered something so pulled out) oh no Sameer ab Maya ka kya hoga

Sameer: (smiled) kyu osko kya hogaya hai?

Sameera: Sameer tum aise kese kehsakte ho. Aaj to tumharee or oski mangni huwi hai or tum…

Both Rajveer and Sameer burst out laughing confusing Sameera even more. She couldn't recall anything which was funny that she said so why were the two laughing so much.

Sameera: koi mujhe bhi bataehga ke isme hasne kee kya baat hai?

Rajveer: sure, infact tujhe dikhaate hai (looks towards Naina) Naina zara Maya ko to bulaana

She obliged and called Maya inside. Sameera kept giving confused looks and then she was alarmed when she saw Maya walk inside hand in hand with another man.

Rajveer: (went towards them) Sam yeh hai Maya or yeh (puts hands on the man's shoulders) hai Karan, oska mangetar.

Sameera: (finding it unbelievable) kya? Yeh iska mangetar hai to phir tum (towards Sameer)

Rajveer: yeh sab hamara plan tha. Jaan bujke maine or Sameer ne yeh naatak kiya tere saamne. Warna pata nahi kab tak tu aise hee bethee rehtee or phir Sameer sach much tere haato se nikal jaata.

Sameera: I don't believe this. To tumne mujhe jaan bujke itna rulaaya (glares at Sameer)

Sameer: kya karta or koi chaara hee to nahi tha. (folds arms across his chest) or phir tum ne bhi to mujhe itne saal kitna rulaaya hai

Sameera: to kya sirf tum akele roye ho? Me bhi to royee hu tumhaare saath. I really hate you Sameer (turns away crossed with him)

Sameer: (smiles with mischief) acha theek hai to phir me jaake kisee or ko dhund leta hu (atempts to go)

Sameera: (grabs his collar from behind) agar mere ilawa kisee or ke baare me socha bhi na to chorungi nahi tumhe

Sameer: wo to wese bhi mujhe pakra hee huwa hai (she becomes shy again and releases her grip and turns away from him hiding her flushed cheeks. He goes to her and turns her towards him) Sameera maine hamesha se sirf tumhe hee chaaha hai or sirf tumhaaree hee jage banayee hai apne dil me. Ab osme kisee or ke liye jage nahi hai or naahi kabhi hogi. Me tumhaara tha, tumhaara hu or tumhaara hee rahunga.

She is really awed by this guy and tears of joy come out of her eyes as she hugs him again. She couldn't believe it that finally she got the guy she always wanted and now her life was complete.

Rajveer: ehem…ehem…tum dono ko sharam nahi aati aise sab ke saamne ishq lara rahe ho

Naina: look who is talking mister (nudges him) khud to kitne bare besharam ho or dusro ko kehrahe ho

Rajveer: (held onto her side ways) are sweet heart hamaree baat hee alag hai

Naina: acha? (gives a pretense smile and then scrunges her mouth into a cross expression) ab chalo yahase and leave them alone

Before Rajveer could protest or say anything she pulled him out with him. Maya and Karan also left and Sameera and Sameer were left alone with each other.

Later on Sameera was surprised that every one knew about their relationship especially her father. He told her that after he saw her upset in the morning he went and met Rajveer and he told him everything that was going on. Everyone were happy about the new alliance asd the two families were friends anyways and Sameer was a great guy. The perfect choice for his daughter. Sameera was really happy and Rajveer was really happy to find her so happy. Finally this chapter was over.

Next day

It was 31st December and Rajveer was making plans for the evening. He knew spending the New

Years Eve with Naina alone wasn't going to be easy but that was the whole reason for why he had made this trip. Now he knew that Navin was on his side so he would be the only one to help him.

Naina: Raj aaj ham sab mandir jaarahe hai

Rajveer: (with his head in her lap) kyu aaj kounsa occasion hai?

Naina: oho Maa ne mannat maanee thi hamare liye or wo bus puree karne jaarahee hai

Rajveer: to ham sab ko jaane kee kya zaroorat hai or wese bhi mujhe or dusra bohat kaam hai

Naina: acha (makes a crossed face) subhe se yehi mere kamre me pare ho or ab jab mandir kee baat aayi to kehrahe ho ke bohat kaam hai

Rajveer: yeh baat nahi hai Naina (plays with her hair) lekin jabse ham yaha aaye hai tabse tumhaare saath akele me kitna kam waqt guzaara hai maine to bus soch raha tha ke yeh moka accha hai.

Naina: me kuch nahi sunna chahtee Raj, yeh maa kee shradda ke baat hai or me oski bohat izzat kartee hu

Rajveer: to me bhi karta hu per kya mandir jaana sach me zaroori hai

Naina: ha (pushes his head off her lap) ab chalo utho or tayaar hojao (gets off the bed and tries to go forward but he holds her back)

Rajveer: chalo na Naina aisa moka dubaara nahi milega

Naina: (pulling him) Raj please utho na

Rajveer: theek hai theek hai (finally gives up) chalo. Per meree bhi ek shart hai

Naina: (bites her tongue) kesee shart?

Rajveer: aaj raat party ke baad tum mere saath bahaar chalogee

Naina: are you mad? Yaha pe din me tumhaare saath akele jaane kee permission nahi miltee or tum itnee raat ko jaane kee baat karahe ho?

Rajveer: itnee baar hum bahaar jaa chuke hai kya kisee se permission lee?

Naina: os waqt kissee ko kuch pata hee nahi chala tha per is baar pata chal jaaehga or phir maa or baba…

Rajveer: (encircles his arms around her neck) to apne humraaz kab kaam aaenge?

Naina: bhaiyya?

Rajveer: or nahi to kya. Dekho ab to wo saala bhi maagaya hai to is baar wo hame zaroor help karega

Naina: lekin wo…

Rajveer: maine kaha na Naina just leave it up to me. Tum bus haa kaho

Naina: (sighs) theek hai. Per osse pehle you've got to come to the mandir. Chalo ab

Rajveer: (doesn't let her go) aise nahi

Naina: (saw the naughty glint in his eyes) Raj…choro dair horahee hai

Rajveer: Mujhe meree good morning kiss deeye bagair jaane nahi dunga (holds her tighter)

Naina: (struggles) tum bhi na Raj kabhi nahi sudhroge (she gives up and gives him a loud kiss on his lips) ab khush ho

Rajveer: haaaaiiii…sach me maar daalegee mujhe ek din

Naina: ab yeh saaree baate choro or chalo.


End of part

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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

The song is very nice and apt for them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sameer tried to put his feelings in that song and Sameera was quite sure that he feels something for her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sameer went towards Sameera but took Maya's hand and started dancing with her!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Sameera could feel the connations in the lines and felt like confessing her feelings once and for all!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But she was really upset to see Sameer and Maya in each other's arms!!!!!

Sameer is thinking that the real game is about to begin!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Just when the ring ceremony was about to begin Sameera came and said ke yeh mangni nahi ho sakti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

This was very dramatic and filmy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Many people were pleased as they had expected this and were waiting for the show to continue!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bilkul and that was Rajveer and the gang jinka yeh masterplan hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Sameer bhi natak kar raha hai when Sameera is reminding him of all that has happened between them over the years!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

He is smiling but still pretending not to understand anything!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sameera finally confessed that she loved him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But it all turned out to be a dream and broke with the roar of applause!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sam was shattered to see Sameer getting engaged to Maya and left from there crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

When Sameer followed her and asked her she tried to pretend to be happy!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Sameer wants her to look into his eyes and say she is happy but she can't!!!!!

Sameer held her tightly not letting her go and now tears trickled out of her eyes!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Sameer keeps pushing her to admit!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Sameera admited ke woh usse bahut pyaar karti hai aur usse khona nahi chahti!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj came at the exact moment with Naina and he is strumming a guitar and singing!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is teasing Sam ke uski chori pakdi gayi and he knew ke woh aaj apne dil ki baat bata hi degi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj was really happy for Sameera!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is the sweetest brother ever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sameera is now saying ke Maya ka kya hoga and Raj and Sameer are laughing at that!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Raj introduced Sam to Maya and her fiance Karan!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Sameera was shocked to know it was all their plan!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Sameer aur Sameera ka ruthna manana was very cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj of all the people is telling them ke dono ko sharam nahi aati aise sab ke saamne ishq lada rahe hai??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina ne sahi kaha ke look who is talking jo khud hi itna bada besharam hai aur dusro ko keh raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Magar Raj pe koi asar nahi pada aur woh keh raha hai ke unki toh baat hi alag hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina ne accha kiya jo Raj ko waha se le gayi to leave them alone together!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone knew about their relationship, even Gehlot who had been told everything by Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is planning something special for New Year's Eve and he even has Navin on his side now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj is lying with his head on Naina's lap!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina told him ke unhe mandir jaana hai kyunki uski maa ne mannat mangi thi unke liye but Raj does not want to go!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

He instead wants to spend time with her alone as they have got very less time alone with each other since they came here!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj agrees to go on the condition ke aaj raat ke party ke baad Naina uske saath bahar chalegi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had to agree to it and also give him his good morning kiss to make him come with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He is really very naughty!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is surely planning something very romantic for New Years!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey such a cute update..Raj is so naughty..i am waiting to see raj's surprise..what has he planned for naina....continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow.....Raj is the sweetest brother n the sweetest lover....oh he's just so sweet!!! Raj aur Sameer ne milke engagement enact kiya....achha hua....warna Sameera to kabhi kuch nahi kehti....SS scenes were also very gud.

And Raj's planning New Year Eve....hmm....it must be sumthing gud. W8ing to knw dat. Pls continue soon n thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Cute part...!!!⭐️
Glad that everything worked out properly between Sameer and Sameera...!!!! 😳 Names bhi kitne similar hai...!!! πŸ˜†

Now what is Raj upto...cant wait for the next part..!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
really lovely parrt
chalo sam aur sameer ki story ka final confession ho hi gaya.
waiting for next ud

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