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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank youu
Edited by sweetest girl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hiii Everyone

Part 4

Heres the Next Part

Veer goes to open the door and there he sees his childhood friend Mohini standing before him.

Mohini: Hey Veer!! U got married and didn't even tell me.. What a surprise u gave me and today I've given u a surprise haven't I?

Veer: And what a great surprise it is...he steps forward and hugs Mohini..(At this point Ananya is just staring at both of them with a little jealousy in her eyes)

Mohini : Enters veers room.. "And this must be ur lovely wife, god I must say she is pretty.. Lucky u veer!" Mohini faces Ananya

Mohini: Ananya ...I must say u r indeed very lucky, veer is a very good guy

Ananya: Me and lucky? (Laughs softly) Ananya turns her back on Mohini..

Ananya: I must be getting ready now"

Mohini : Oh yes of course the wedding, i have also been invited, so ill be accompanying you guys!

Veer: Okay Mohini lets go and let Ananya get ready.

Veer & Mohini walk out of the room together hand in hand

Ananya is left alone Thinks to herself..."stupid Mohini

Everyone is now ready and are waiting in the main hall for Ananya to come.

Nvriti: Where is Ananya

Veer: (Looking towards his room) She must be coming. You guys go ahead

Aryavardhan: (Walks towards door) Good idea son Lets go everyone leaves

Ananya enters the living room looking WOW. Veer hears the noise of Ananya high heels and he turns around. And stops dead. She looks SO stunning that he can't remove his eyes from her. Ananya looks towards Mohini and veer. She gets jealous to see the two waiting for her together

They all walk out and Ananya and Mohini goes to sit in their paalki and veer goes to sit

on the horse and while sitting in the paalki all ananya could about was veer and mohini

They finally reach the wedding and they all start walking to the palace when Mohini trips and Veer catches her

Seeing this Ananya is extremely jealous

They all walk in and Ananya goes and sits on the couch sadly

Ananya is still glaring at Mohini and Veer. She notices an old friend Vikram She gets an idea .She walks over to him

Ananya: Vikram you here

Vikram: Oh my god Ananya yea its my brothers wedding [They hug]

Veer see's this and obviously is turning red with jealousy. So he flirts with Mohini more and here Ananya is flirting with Vikram.... both going on and on to make the other jealous

Vikram: Hey you want to dance?

Ananya: Uh.... [Looks at veer, who is staring at her] Of course Vikram, I would love to!!

So off they go to the dance floor.... Dancing away ...Ananya bumps into Mohini ...who is dancing away with Veer. So here they are dancing with the wrong partners....

Veer and Ananya switch sides, so they are back to back, suddenly they turn around and now they are facing each other Ananya after a moment tries to turn away but her duppata gets stuck to his chain...Both stare at each other

Their faces are extremely near, Ananya tries to take her dupatta off the chain, not working.... she again looks at him and then looks away. Veer smiles and slowly takes the duppata off his chain....and slowly walks backwards smiling....Here ananya is still staring at him.

Everyone is dancing but all she can see is him walking away from her, and he's still smiling

As Veer walks away...he crashes into Mohini and then suddenly Ananya's dream also crashes

Mohini: Veer be careful

Mohini: are you ok?

Veer: yes I'm fine

The wedding comes to an end and all head back home including Mohini when they reach home all go to their rooms.

Veer: Hey Mohini you'll be staying in the guest room, ill go and get your luggage and put it there.

Veer leads Mohini into her room and gives her a goodnight hug , Ananya sees this and immediately goes to her room and lies down on the bed, facing the window with tears running down her cheeks.

Veer enters the room, he thinks ananya is asleep, so he changes into his bedtime clothes and gets ready to go to sleep on the sofa.

Veer hears soft crying sobs; he quickly gets up and walks towards Ananya

He sits on the bed beside her...

Veer: you okay?

Ananya: Yea. . I'm fine, {mumbles to herself} its not as if u care, all u seem to care about is Mohini

Veer hears some of this...did you say something?

Ananya: Nothing, she has a sad face

Veer: Look, veer puts his hand on Ananya's shoulder, she takes it away Look me and Mohini, we're just friends nothing else

Ananya: nothing else...I saw u two at the wedding. so close to each other

Veer interrupts. So close what about you and Vikram

Ananya: I only done that to make you jealous shes quickly blurts out..oops

Veer: Laughs, well it didnt seem to work on me but it sure has worked on you. anyways so what if I am more than friends with Mohini why should you care?

Ananya: Exactly. Why should I care...(deep inside she does) Good night!

I know I focused only on Veer and Ananya more in this part but the next part will focus more on Dharam and Siya

Preview: Dharam and Siya admit their love for each other

Next Update: Friday August 29

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
oh Very nice update but did'nt like veer making ananya jealous....I want something to happen which will make veer more caring about ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
i knw yaar thoda aur part likhna chahiye tha

anyways it was great to read it

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

well my 1st reaction wid the name Mohini was...😲🤔😳 isnt it a bit familiar to me..

well, wat can i do... i will comment later in this part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
This update was the best.I just loved it.
Plz continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lol...a nice update..Veer and anaya both trying to make each othere jealous...he wrked for ananya but not veer..lolz

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely update babez...soo shweet dt Ananya is jealous hehe...cnt wait for ur nxt part...ur precap...im excitd hehe...mwah
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was gr8 ananya and veer makin each other jealous was funny plz cont...
esha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh wow very nice update ...👏👏
👏really liked the conversation between veer and ananya😳...
they both started loving eachother😳...wow!!!😍...and me loving this😍....
the way they both made eachother jealous was just too good⭐️😆...
waiting 4 ur nxt update dear.....

Edited by starpisces123 - 17 years ago

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