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Posted: 17 years ago
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woow lovely update, i just loved veer ananya trying to make each other jealous it was very cute😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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beautiful fanfic. u hv made dv married already.
its brilliant.
i really enjoyed ur updates, i'm a little excited about the precap. pls write soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: starpisces123

oh wow very nice update ...👏👏
👏really liked the conversation between veer and ananya😳...
they both started loving eachother😳...wow!!!😍...and me loving this😍....
the way they both made eachother jealous was just too good⭐️😆...
waiting 4 ur nxt update dear.....

thnk youu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

woow lovely update, i just loved veer ananya trying to make each other jealous it was very cute😆

thnkss
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thnk you Everyone for commentingg

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry For the Late Update Heres the Next Part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hii Everyonee

Part 5

Heres the Next Part

Dharam and Siya are in their chamber.. and Siya is taking of her jewerelly...and Dharam is standing by the window upset...and he is thinking to himself...that will the distance between me n Siya ever get removed and seeing this Siya goes to him and says what is wrong so Dharam says to her.
Dharam: Siya...u might not know. But since childhood you are the only girl I have ever loved.... but.... will the distances that are between u and me ever get solved...
Siya: what distances??
Dharam: the way we are acting after marriage. Like you sleeping there and me sleeping on the sofa. I know is my fault I should have told u before that I love you .but
Siya had tears in her eyes...
Siya: there were never distances between us maybe we were made for each other...that is why I have the same feeling for you in my heart but I was to scared to express it...
lightening strikes and Siya gets scared so she hugs Dharam..

Siya: I love you Dharam

Dharam: I love you too

Then they decided to go to bed together...

The next morning

Dharam wakes up first and then he staring at Siya and then she wakes up

Siya: (smiling) why are u staring at me like that.

Dharam: Im looking at the moon that is on my bed...with me..... and who is so close to me.

Siya gets shy and turns away.

After some time they Dharam and Siya have changed and are sitting on the bed talking

Dharam : siya after we have gotten married we havent gone anywhere together so would you like to go to the mela today

Siya : suree

Then dharam and siya go down to the breakfast table

Dharam&Siya: Good Morning

Aryavardhan& Nivriti: good Morning

They start to have breakfast

Dharam: Father I would like to take Siya to the mela todayy

Aryavardhan: Son that's a great idea

Aryavardhan: I'll make all the arragnements

Niviriti: looks like veer and annaya are still asleep

Mohini: ill go and check on the

Nivriti: Mohini please eat first

Mohini:okk

Jaiwardhans room

Jaivardhan: Agni this is the best chance for us to attack Dharam

Agni: No I have a better plan father...lets kidnap his ladylove Siya

Jaivardhan: how is that going to help

Agni: when Dharam goes to look for Siya and when he finds her we will....oopss I mean our men...will say if u want to save your wifes life...then give up your life.

Jaivardhan: why would he do that for a girl he dont even know!!

Agni: father Dharam loves Siya since childhood.... even I didnt know till last while I was walking past their room I overheard their conversation...they love each other since childhood

Jaivardhan gives out as loud evil laugh
Jaivardhan: a person can do anything for their childhood love

After mohini was done eatingg she went to veer and annaya room

She knocked on the room

And then veer woke up and opend the door

Mohini : Veer how come you didnt cme down as yet

Veer: ahhh ill be there in a whilee

Mohini: is annaya awake

Veer: no she styll sleeping

Mohini:kk but wake her her up kk

Veer:okk

Mohini leaves and veer goes to take a bath

When he comes out he sees tht Ananya is still sleeping so he goes to wake her up

He touches her forhead and its really warm

He checks her temperature and he finds out tht annaya is very sick

Veer: goes to tell Nivriti maa

He goes to her room

Nivrirti: what happened veer why do you so so worried

Veer: mom annaya has a very high fever

Nivititi: Veer go calls the vaid fast

The vaid comes

Vaid: rajkumari annaya has a very high fever so she should rest all day today so

she can get better faster

The vaid leaves and Nvriti get a bowl of cold water and towel and just when she is about to put it on her veer says I will do it

Nvriti: okk

Nvriti leaves

Veer puts the towel on Ananyas head because veer and Ananya both hadnt eaten anything Siya brings food for them

She gives the food to veer

Siya: how is she feeling now?

Veer: her fever is still high

Siya: should I stay with her?

Veer: thats okk Im here with her

Siya leaves to get ready

Veer: Ananya wake up and eat something first

She gets up and Veer feeds her she tells him to eat to

Ananya thinks in her mind Im always so mean to him but hes taking care

(When Veer is about to leave Ananya grabs his hand)
Ananya: thank you for looking after me and Im sorry for being so rude to u
Veer: you dont need to ask me for forgiveness. It happens in every wife/ husband relationship and especially in ours because we got married...without knowing each other properly but I am sure as time passes we will get to know each other better
Ananya: thank u.

Preview: Siya kidnapped

Enjoy and Comment

thnk u seema for helping





Edited by sweetest girl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
it was an romantic part ever loved it yaar plz do cont...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww...veer tkin care of Ananya...loved DS moments...so romantic n finally confessd their love for each other...argh is Agni n JV...dnt Agni no its rude to earsdrop! fool lol...very well put...loved it update soon shweetie mwah
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aweeeeeee this part was so romantic & I m glad mohini is keeping her distance from Veer Ananya & I want some nice romance between veer & Ananya fedup of their fighting & rudeness...no doubt ananya has softened in this part but need more softness from veer's side now...But it was a nice see when veer took care of Ananya by putting cold cloth on her head so that her fever becomes less 😳😃
Edited by meghaparti - 17 years ago

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