New FF AR/AK Secret Romance- Part 10 Pg. - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy I just read your character sketch...
haha armaan and anjali and ridz and angad??..hehe nice...this should be interesting!! I can't wait till you post your first part...i'm soo excited!! lolz
Please add me to your pm list! =)
Update as sooon as you can!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH


Heyy I just read your character sketch...
haha armaan and anjali and ridz and angad??..hehe nice...this should be interesting!! I can't wait till you post your first part...i'm soo excited!! lolz
Please add me to your pm list! =)
Update as sooon as you can!

luv mira

Thanks a lot for the comment but its actually Ridz and Angad+ Armaan and Kripa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys for those who left comments I really appreciate them.This part isn't as exciting lolz but next part you will DEFENITLY meet Kripa and Angad I can gurantee you that!
Part 1

''Armaan wake up! Wake up!'' said voice so close to his ears.

''Hmm...I don't want to...let me sleep mom'' saying this he promptly turned and went back to sleep. To ward off the nuience of the voice he covered himself from head to toe with his comforter.

''You idiot I am no your mother! And if you don't wake up this instance you are in very big trouble'' Yuck, she thought, I would die if I were your mother.

'' If you don't wake up with in the next 30 seconds I will do something...unpleasant'',she said with a smirk on her face. She went and sat on a chair placed by the bed and counted to 30 out loud.

''Your seconds are up Mr. Malik'' The thing that was annoying her was that he wasn't even listening to her. With that she angrily got up and pulled the comforter off of his muscular body and through a pitcher of ice cold water on his face.

'' Heyyy!!!!!!!''' he cried out and looked at the beautiful face standing across him. She wasn't exactly a ''classic'' beauty but there was something in her-something special- an angelic feauture- that made her seem beautiful to him. He had a massive headache and wondered how he got here out of all the places.

He wiped the water off his face and looked at her.

''Do you have an asprin? My head is hurting like hell from yesterdays party.He looked at her with soulful eyes and expected some sympathy from her. Not only because he really needed soem asprin but because he had a special affect on girls. Any girl he wanted always ended up in his arms or sleeping with him within two meetings.

Suddenly his thoughts were broken by a big and frank ''NO''! from the girl. ''Even if I had it i wouldn't give it and you wouldn't get it'', she said with a big smirk on her face.

He was surprised at the girl's hospitality. Nobody-especially girls- had ever said no or ever refused what he had ever said. And with that he didn't even know this girl properly. He was confused and needed tp find out where he was and who this pretty girl was, but first he really needed an asprin.

'' Hey, where's all the hospitality coming from? I'm a very nice guy, I'm sure people have told you that before'' he said with a wink and was testing his magical charm on her. Surely she will cave in and give me an asprin, and maybe even something more than that, he smirked to himself. This girl was like any other girl- give into him and would soon be sleeping with him.

He winced as his head started wincing in pain again.

'' Hey! I said please! My head is really hurting'', he said with genuine pain.''Just because I don't know your name doesn't mean I am not one of the nice guys''he did an inward smirk, he wasn't ''exactly'' one of the nice guys in life

''Liar! You and nice a definetly two words that don't go together'' the girl said in a nastier tone.

''Look, as much as I want to continue this converstaion'', he said with a wink which got the girl even more angry, ''I really need an asprin so please get me it''

''I'll give it to you but you better leave the second you take it Mr.Malik!''

''Woah woah, whats with the formalities,please call me Armaan'' he said trying to show her he was a ''nice'' guy.

This guy was bothering her more evry second. First off, he was talking as if nothing happened yesterday, and now he is saying no formalties! How dare he!

''And who are you to me to say we have no formalties? Heck, you don't even know my name'' she said in a sarcastic manner.

That was true. He didn't know her but he would soon find out who she was and how he got here. But he didn't say that-instead he said''But it seems as if we have spent the night together'' he said purposely to get some expression from her. He thought she looked very pretty when she was angry. Woah,Armaan,first think about catching the mouse, he thought with a grin.

''Shut up Mr. Malik!!!'' she shouted

''Okay sorry...I was only kidding...chill''

''Whatever'' she mumbled ang gave him the asprin.

He took his asprin and was about to get out of bed when he realized he was only wearing his boxers!Oh gosh,how embarassing,he thought.

''Where the hell are my clothes?'' he asked.

''Where are your clothes? Where you left them last night Mr.Malik!Don't you remember a thing from yesterday?'' she asked with disgust.

''Where I left them?'' he asked confused. Dammnit I don't remember a thing! By the way where am I?'' he asked with curiousity as he looked around the plain hotel room.

''Mr. Armaan Malik you are in my hotel room. Let me emphasize the point-that you are in MY hotle room! So get going!''

This girl was different than other girls he'd met before. She had a natural beauty to her- somehing that most girls he went out with lacked. And she had defenitly not tried to ''impress'' him with sweetness or anything like that. Infact she had frankly been upright cold to him. The girl noticed him looking at her r=weirdly and started feeling uncomfortable. Armaan noticed this and for some unknown reason felt etremely happy that this chick who seemed extremely unfriendly and cold-or atleast to him- had just felt uncomfortable at his gaze.

She broke the awkward moment and spoke.''Get going Mr.Malik''!

He simply ignored her demand.''What's your name?'' he asked

''I have no interest in telling you my name'' she replied coldly. ''So please leave my room ASAP! I will be waiting in the sitting area.'' she said and with that left her bedroom.

Armaan got himself out of the bed and walked towards the bathroom and washed his face and looked at himself at the mirror. Flashes of what happened yesterday night came back to him.

He was at a Business Dinner Gala hosted by the All India Business Corporation. He had just wond Businessman Of The Year Award. He had been fine until he had his first drink. Kripa Sharma,his girlfriend,had been withhim at that point. His mind went blank after that.

Who was this strange girl? He didn't remember seeing her at the party. Or even if he did of course he wouldn't remember her.

Man she was pretty, he thought remembering her angered expression as she scolded him for unknown reasons. Why was she so hostile towards him? What had he done? He was drunk--maybe he should ask her,he thought.

I'll have to fix my mess with her once I get downstairs,he thought.He didn't earn the name of Casanova for nothing. He enjpyed woman without any emotional ''crap'', as he called it. Armaan always had and always will have only one opnion about love- it doesn't exist. To him women wer enothing more than time-pass. He was a typical casanva/playboy. He liked playing the feild.

And now his aim was set on this girl who wasn't giving him the time of day. He loved challenges-and this beautiful yet beautiful girl was a great challenge for him.

He got ready and was looking hott as ever in blue jeans and a crisp buttoned down white shirt. He was about to leave the room when soemthing caught his attention. He turned to see a purse that he figured the girl left behind. He knew it was wrong to dig through a ladies handbag but still he had a sudden urge to know her name.

He got her wallet out as her drivers license fell out of it.

'' Riddhima Gupta,'' he said aloud. ''Interesting name''.

So guys plz leave ur comments o what u thought abt it. Any confusin or doubts plz leave on ur comments will make it very clear here. But just in case u guys are confused AR seemed to ave woken up in the same room.......ooooh....so does that mean...??
Wait and read
the more comments I read the more soon I will update
Edited by sweet_JAY_FAN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys please please comment
that's part one
if u guys like dit and want me to cont them plz leave a comment and I will cont ASAP
I can update withing 20 mins lol if i get lots and lots of comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
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BTW guys to make it easy for u uys I added an index on fist page so u can find next parts easily

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_JAY_FAN

Thanks a lot for the comment but its actually Ridz and Angad+ Armaan and Kripa


woah, i dont know where i real anjali kapoor from..but i was thinking if theres angad then wheres kripa? lolz
but now i know i just read wrong lolz😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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absolutely nicely put together.....liked it alot..............already i can see the pairing jumbling..........lolzzzzzzzzzzzzz
will we get another update in 20 mins..................wow...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy
I just read your first part...it was soooo good
it seriously doesn't seem like its your first fan fic lol
And woah..armaan and ridz spent a night together? i wonder what happened...i mean after all she is engaged to angad.....
hmm soo armaan after ridz...too bad she's already taken armaan lolz
I can't wait till hte next part,..so we cna know wat actually happened btwn armaan and ridz!!!
thanks soo much for the pm!
luv mira

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH


woah, i dont know where i real anjali kapoor from..but i was thinking if theres angad then wheres kripa? lolz
but now i know i just read wrong lolz😳

Its okay probably got mixed with another FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttimpy

absolutely nicely put together.....liked it alot..............already i can see the pairing jumbling..........lolzzzzzzzzzzzzz

will we get another update in 20 mins..................wow...........

well actually now I'm slepy but if by moring I seem to get atleast 5 positive comments u can count on an update
It all depends on ur guys' comments
I'm not gonna kee writing if nobody like it😆
but anyways back tur comment
thanks so much for liking it
yes Ridzi is quite mad😆
gotta wait and see

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