-My Painfull Life- AK/AR story Part 1 B p3 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great part hun...very interesting...so kripa likes angad but he likes angeline...interesting...and i think the guy diya bumped into is shabd...really like the relationship between KA and the sharma family..its very sweet...great job..continue soon
lol...by the way this is smileyface....im on the wrong id...this one is for our fanfic...but i forgot to log off...sorrie
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
gr88 ff
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dat was a terrific update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks a lot everyone for ur comments i'll post the part in a bit😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part1 b:

The guy was none other than Shabd Sareen. He was lost seeing a beauty like Diya where she was getting annoyed of being stared like this. She freed herself from Shabd and walked away leaving a smiling Shabd.
S(in his mind) wow what a beauty, she has to be my next week model
He smiled again and then left. Next day, we see a Ridhimma drinking hot chocolate and reading a book in a coffee shop. All of sudden, she accidentally made her hot chocolate fall on her white dress while trying to pick up her phone which was next to her glass. She headed toward the washroom taking her handbag and book in it leaving all her mobile on the table. At that moment, a guy entered the coffee shop wearing white baggy jeans and white sleeveless top. He has a french bend in his hair and was walking with style. All the girls were starring as him and about to fin seeing such a a hot dude walking. We see his light grey eyes, then his smirking lips and finally his whole face it's none other than Arman Khanna. He went to sit on the same table where Ridhimma. He put his mobile on the table and ordered hot chocolate for him. Ridhimma came out of the washroom and left quickly forgetting about her mobile phone whereas Arman who was enjoying his hot chocolate got disturbed by a strange ringtone. He looked around him and finally hi eyes fell on Ridhimma pink cell phone. He made a suprised face then picked up the phone and before he could say he heard Diya who was screaming on the phone.
D: you idiot, stupid, duffer, monkey i'm freezing waiting for you outside and you're not even coming. where the h*** are you?
Arman was first taken aback but then got a mischievous idea. He smiled and then answered at Diya question.
A: sweety , gussa kyun hoti ho? i'm here na in you heart
D: what? Ridz what happened to you voice it feels like you're a man yaar
A: aww sweetheart you are so caring i love you (he kiss the phone and made noise)
D: eww Ridz you're sick! i think you're drunk
A: aww come at home tonight, i'll be ready to get drunk if you make me drink
D: okay that can't be Ridz, who the h*** are you?
A: me? well i'm Arman Khanna the hottest guy on earth
D: yeah right, how come you've my sis mobile?
A: i don't know, i came to coffee shop and found it and i must say it's my really good luck that i found it
D: really? and why that?
A: because i got to hear your sexy voice dude
D: sick man you're sick! you don't even know me, never saw me and you're saying this
A: but i do
D: who am i?
Arman looked at the screen of the mobile and smiled: You're Diya right?
D: huh
A: see i told you i know you
D: go to h***
Saying this she disconnected the phone. Arman on the other side was laughing like crazy but he stoped laughing as soon he saw an angel standing in front of him starring at him in anger. This angel was none other than Ridhimma.
A: wow you're so hot
R: thank you for the compliment now give me my phone back (in anger)
A: why should i?
R: because it's my phone that's why
A: okay then take it
Arman took the mobile on the table without looking at it, he gave it to Ridhimma who didn't look at it too and left running. Once she left, Arman coudn't stop thinking about her, he sat back on his chair and was surprised to see Ridhimma mobile on the table and his mobile nowhere. He smilled and understood what just happened and jumped in joy.
A: yes, now i'm dead sure i'll meet her again
Arman kept smilling and thinking about Ridhimma and on the other side we see Diya walking on the street alone wearing blue shorts and white short sleeveless top. She soon got into a big building, and headed toward the receptionist.
D: hello, I've an apointement with Mr Shabd Sareen
R: you can go inside his cabin he'll be here in a minute
D: Where is his cabin?
R: third floor first door
D: okay, thank you
She walked took the stairs to go to the third floor. Once she got there, she saw Shabd Sareen name plate on the first door and went in without knowing. She saw no one so she just went to sit on the chair and at that moment, Shabd came in wearing blue jeans and baby pink Levis top. He was again memorized by Diya beauty who was actually surprised to see Shabd. He smiled at her and went to sit on the chair opposed to hers.
S: welcome miss Diya Sharma, i'm Shabd Sareen
D: thank you, now may i know why did you call me here?
S: well i'm a photographer and i'm looking for a model. Yesterday after you fell in my arms i kept on thinking about you and i understood that you're the one for me
D(raise her eyebrow) what?
S: i mean my next model and that's why i called you here
D: hmm
S: you'll have to be our model for a whole week and you'll have to sign an agreement that you'll have to wear and do what ever we say you to do without any objection is it okay?
D: ok, sure
S: great then here are the papers sign them
Diya took out a pen from her purse and sign the papers. Once she was done she got up, smilled to Shabd and turned to leave but Shabd stoped her. She turned back surprised, Shabd smilled and walked toward her, he got close to her, Diya whose legs started to shake was about to fall but Shabd held her tightly by putting his arm around her waist. Diya was completly lost in his eyes, Shabd stared at her then brought his lips close to her cheek. Diya closed her eyes, which made Shabd smile he then said " You forgot your mobile". Diya opened her eyes in shock, she was so embarassed that she just took her mobile and run from there as fast she could leaving a smilling Shabd behind.

Sorry for late part, hope you like it😳

Love, Laiba
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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha i wonder what a french bend is? 😆 anyways whatever it is im sure armaan looks good in it nontheless.
great update.
question. is this just an AK/AR fanfic or it includes the love stories of all the other characters as well?
o please pm me if possible on your next update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz continue it was awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part laiba
loved it sooooooooo much
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww dat was great cute updte
luved n already
luved the ar parts lool
really nice updte
continue sooon
nizma x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good job Laiba! lil confused with mix n match pairing..I'm poor in remembering names other than AK😛.
liked pics and outfits.
Waiting for next part

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