FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Dharam is on his way to chandanpur.Suddenly he finds a bullock cart on the middle of the road.
Dharam shouts,"Kiski bail gaadi hai yeh,hatao isse."
Suddenly he hears a voice frm behind.
"Meri hai"
Dharam looks back.
It's none other than Veer.
Dharam gets down frm his horse and moves towards veer.
Both Dharam and Veer look at each other with anger and hatred.
Dharam:"Humein to pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha ki yeh kaam sirf tum hi kar sakte ho.Bachpan se lekar aaj tak tum hi to hamesha hamare raaste mein aat ho."
Veer:"Main tumhare raaste mein nahi,tum mere raaste mein aa jate ho."
D:"Tumhari himmat ko daad deni padegi veer,ek tum hi ho jo humein ulta jawaab dene ki himmat kar sakte ho.Jee to karta hai ki tumhari zabaan kaat de par na jaane kyun,hamara dil humein tumhe saza dene se rok deta hai."
V:"Mujhe nahi pata tha aryanagar ka maya maharaj itna kamzor hai."
D:"Kaun kisse zyada taaqatwar hai yeh baad mein tai ho jayega.Ek din hum tumhe aisa sabak sikhayenge ki tum zindagi bhar yaad rakhoge."
V:"Maharaj,maine bhi aapko kabhi pasand nahi kiya,yun samajh lijiye ki barso se bahut hisaab kitaab chukana baki hai,aur woh aapko ek din chukana hoga."
D:"Dekhte hain kaun kiska hisaab chukata hai pehle hamare raate se bail gadi hatao,hamare jaane mein der ho rahai hai."
Veer gives him a tough look and gives him side to go.
Dharam goes away.
Just then sia comes.
Sia:"Bhaiya,maine paas ke dukaan se naye kapde kharidekaisi lag rahi hoon main,bahut sundar na."
Veer:"Bilkul bandar lag rahi ho.chalo humein mandir mein jaane ki der ho rahi hai."
All 4,dharam,veer,sia and ananya reach the temple.Sia tells veer she wants to buy some flowers.Veer tells her he will wait for her in the temple.
Meanwhile,ananya reaches the temple gate,was climbing the stairs but suddenly she slipped and was abt to fall down when someone holds her.He is none other than Veer.Veer keeps on looking at her.He has never seen such a beautiful gal like her before.He just kept on glancing at her beautiful,big eyes.Ananya too looked at him but not with love,with disgust and anger.
Ananya:"Chhodo humein."
But veer is not listening.
Ananya:"Humne kaha chhodo humein."
Veer then comes back to his senses and yeh kya,due to nervousness,veer ananya ko zameen pe gira deta hai.
The crowd starts laughing.Ananya gets up.
Veer:"Maaf karna,main aapko jaan bujhkar nahi giraya,aapko chot to nahi aayi."
Ananya is very angry at veer and hen she slaps him.Veer is shocked.
Ananya:"Tumhari himmat kaise hui ananya ko choone ki.Tum jaante nahi ho main kaun hoon,avadhi ki rajkumari hain hum.Agar pitaji ne tumhe humein choote hue dekh liya hota to woh tumhare do haath kaat dete.Dubara agar ananya ko choone ki koshish ki to ananya tumhari jaan le legi."
Ananya then goes inside the temple.Veer looks at her angrily.
Man hi man mein kehta hai,"dekh lunga iss ghamandi rajkumari ko.Iska ghamand to main k din todkar hi rahunga."
Sia is buying flowers and coconut.Suddenly dharam comes there.Both look at each other and then a long eye locking session takes place btw the two.Dharam and sia love each other frm the time they were 5 but dharam always hides his feelings and emotions from her b'coz she is a shramik and he hates them b'coz he feels they had killed his mother.Dharam goes away frm there,leaving sia a little disappointed.
Sia calls him,"maharaj,aap phool nahi lege."
Dharam:"Nahi,hum shramik ke haath se phool to kya,zeher bhi nahi lenge."
In the temple,sia ka dhyaan pooja par kam,dharam par zyada tha.Dharam too was not able to concentrate on the pooja as sia was a little distance away.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
omg!! veer and dharam r like enemies??????😲
their fight was quite interesting........specially when dharam said "hamara dil humein tumhe saza dene se rok deta hai"
this made the part more interesting.... 👏

ananya is sooo ghamandi....😈she was so rude towards veer...
these means there would be more fight between them.....😍
and dharam loves sia but cant express his feeling.....soo sad...

hey very good part dear😳
its very different .....and i liked it😛
plz update it soon....

Edited by starpisces123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
oh my god ananya slapped veer oh my god but veer will make her realise her mistake anyway btw it was ver good i mean aik dum jhakkass tha yaar plz cont...
esha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
every thing is just brilliant👏
i luv ur dialouges.it has a total new flavour.
i really like the part that u have made d and v enemies. it is very different frm the real story. i'm waiting for the next part.
i luv ur Veer and ananya. ananya is just perfect.
and i really really really really luv dharam and sia. it's so sad, that they can't express their feelings, but i always had a liking for tragic luv stories u know.
i'm eagerly waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
loved ur ff...its so interestin n diff frm DV...DV alreadi enemies...Ananya is rude as always hehe... ur dia is very good as well...cnt wait for ur nxt part xxx
Edited by CutieA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
Very very well written and a well planned update subha.. I repeat myself.. its soo different and new, your fan fic is ..😊 I love every single one of ur characters and the mystery of Veers moms madness and Dharams moms murder.. Do update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Hey subah.... 🤗
what a fan fic...⭐️
so different yet so beautiful......👏
lolz whatever i wanted to say has been already said by all..bhuvi,nisha,kiran,hiri and cutie...😛
Well this ananya is so..ufffff bigdi..nakchedi billi.........😈 😆
n veer so cute..😳
i m sure he is definitely gona make her get on her feet in front of himm..😉 but how? 😕 anyways would love to see it 😍
wah kya maza aayega badla dekhne mein....😆
n yes i can now imagine where would the story go 😉😛 ....but still confused 😕😆
oh goshhhhhhhhh what a suspense........😆
Loved it...👏
plz do continue..😛
when would be ur next update dear...😍
🤗
Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Part 3

Dharam and ananya meet and talk to each other.
Sia looks at them and wonders,"yeh ladki kaun hai?"
Just then veer comes and tells her,"chale"
Sia:"Haan chalo."
Both leave d temple.After some time,dharam and ananya also leave.
In veer's house,pari starts screaming again.
"Rani maa,mujhe maaf kar do."
Soma comes there running and asks her,"Pari kya hua?"
Pari: "Rani maa,mujhe maaf kar do."
Soma:"Pari kya hua,aisa kya kar diya tumne rani maa ke saath,kyun tum baar baar yehi shabd dohra rahi ho."
Pari keeps quiet.
Soma:"Pari,aaj to tumhe mujhe batana hi hoga,pihle 15 saal se main yehi sunte aa raha hoon,pari tumhe meri kasam,batao pari."
Pari:"maine...maine..."
Soma:"haan batao pari."
Just then veer and sia enter.
Veer:"Baba kya hua maa ko phir se daura pad gaya kya?"
Sia:"main abhi maa ko dawai de deti hoon."
Sia gives her medicines and after some time,pari sleeps.
Veer and soma come out.
Veer:"Baba,aap chinta mat kijiye,maa jaldi theek ho jayegi."
Soma:"pichle 15 saalo se yehi sunta aa raha hoon,ab mujhse pari ki haalat dekhi nahi jati."
Soma then hugs veer.
Veer:"yeh sab un aryavrato ke wajah se hua hai,unhone aap par jhoota ilzaam lagake aapke haath kaat diye,tab se maa ki yeh haalat hui hai,main un aryavrato ko chodunga nahi."
Soma thinks:"tum chahe kuch bhi keh do,main jaanta hoon pari ki haalat ki wajah kuch aur hai,iska sambandh kahi na kahi rani maa se hai.kaash main rani maa se mil sakta
."
Edited by subha2601 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
hi subha😊
wow!! what a suspense dear😍
u created a good suspence.👍🏼.....i really liked this...
update it soon yaar😳..... cant wait.....😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hmmmm seems intressting ..... do continue soon

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