FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

In the mahal,JV is searching for Agni.He finds him in the kitchen.
JV(shockingly):"Agni,tum yaha rasoi ghar mein kya kar rahe ho?"
Agni:"Pitaji,dekhiye na yeh dasiyan khana lae mein kitni der kar rahi thi isliye maine faisla kiya ki main khana pakana sikhu taki main khud apne liye khana banau aur khau."
JV:"Kya???"
One of the dasis said:"Jaivardhanji,ab aap ji inhe samjaiye.Inhone sab gdbad kar diya.Chawal mein mirchi,sabzi mein chini aur kheer mein namak daal diya.ab yeh dal banane ki baat kar rahe hain.Jaldi se inhe le jaiye varna agar maharaj ne yeh khana kha liya to pata nahi kya karenge."
Agni:"Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri shikayat karne ki,main chahu to tumhe karagar mein band bhi kar sakta hoon."
JV:"Woh to tum kabhi nahi kar sakte,agni yeh sab kaam chhodo aur mere kamre mein aao."
Agni goes to jv's room.
JV:"Agni beta,tumhare jeevan ka lakshya kya hai?"
Agni:"Pitaji,main iss duniya ka sabse bada bawarchi banna chahta hoon."
JV slaps agni.
JV:"Gadhe,main tumhare aryanagar ke maharaj banne ka sapna dekh raha hoon aur tum bawarchi banne ka sapna dekh rahe ho."
Agni:"Par pitaji,mujhe maharaj banne ki kya zaroort hai,dharam to maharaj ban chuka hai."
JV:"Issi baat ka to rona hai,kai saalon se maine aryanagar ka maharaj banne ka sapna dekh raha tha par mere saare sapne tut gaye.Maine to bahut achhi yojana bhi bani thi arya bhaiya to apne raaste se hatane ke liye aur maharaj banne ke liye par uss soma aur bhabhi ne mere saare kiye karaye par pani pher diya.Un dono ko to unke kiye ki sazaa mil gayi aur aryavrato aur shramiko ke beech mein nafrat bhi paida ho gai,bas ab issi baat ka faida uthana hai mujhe.15 saal pehle jo aag maine lagayi thi ab waqt aa gaya hai ussi aag se dharam aur arya bhaiya ko jalane ki.Ab main kch nahi karunga,jo bhi karenge shramik karenge,main to bas uss aag mein ghee daalta jaunga."
JV then starts laughing loudly.Agni is not able to understand anything.
In Avadhi,Natrajan comes to meet ananya.
Natrajan:"Ananya,aryavardhan ne humein apne mahal bulaya hai kuch din rehne ke liye,ab hum to nahi jaa sakte kyunki hum rajya karobar mein uljhe hue hain,hum chahte hain ki tum kuch din waha rehne ke liye chali jao.Tumhara dil bhi behel jayega aur tu dharam ko achhi tarah jaanne bhi lag jaogi.Tumhe uske saath apni zindagi jo bitani hai.Humne faisla kiya hai iss saal diwali ke din hum tumhari aur dharam ki shaadi kar denge."
Ananya is shocked.She never expected this frm her father.Natrajan had decided that when she will be 18,he will get her married but now she is only 14 and her father has decided to get her married.She couldn't utter a single word in front of her father.After natrajan left,she opened her almarah,took out her mother's portrait and started crying.
Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
oh...poor ananya ..very nice pls. continue.....hope we get to see some nice moments between VA soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
my god! agni sabse bada bawarchi banna chahta hai🤣🤣🤣
it was a really good update. i see, u have a great imagination. i'm dying to know about the suspence.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Oh dear Anaya.... i feel sad for her... 😭
THis was a really good part..... update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
agni bawadchi????
aur sab se mistirious fight arya and shramiks main jaiwardan ka haath tha??
ananya ki shadi????itni jaldi aur veer aur sia ka kya hoga?

are yaar tum to apne FF ke har part main mujhe shock karti ho....
loved ur part.....cant wait update it soon....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏👏wahhh...brill part 3... its quite short bt neva mind! im interestd to no da raaz abt nivi-pari...its probali sumfin to do wid Veer...part 4 was reali gd...quite sad abt Ananya...her dad means a lil odd...gettin her married at da age of 14! shockin lool...dis means dt Ananya will meet Veer n he will teach her sum manners!! 😆😆😆 cnt wait to see wah happends next! fnx xxx
Edited by CutieA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Thanx everyone 4 ur valuable comments.
Will update d next part soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: CutieA

👏👏wahhh...brill part 3... its quite short bt neva mind! im interestd to no da raaz abt nivi-pari...its probali sumfin to do wid Veer...part 4 was reali gd...quite sad abt Ananya...her dad means a lil odd...gettin her married at da age of 14! shockin lool...dis means dt Ananya will meet Veer n he will teach her sum manners!! 😆😆😆 cnt wait to see wah happends next! fnx xxx

😆😆yeah...........
well subah brilliat script
ekdum hatke............👏jhakaassssssss
with thrill,suspense,exitement n i hope romance will enter soon 😳😆
plz post update asap 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just love your script lot of suspence there plz cont soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Part 5

In the Avadhi mahal,all the dasis are packing ananya's clothes.One dasi was ironing ananya's dress and suddenly by mistake she burnt her dress.When ananya noticed this she shouted at her,"Yeh ananya ki sabse man pasand vastr thi.Tumne himmat kaise ki isse jalane ki."
The dasi got scared.She asked for forgiveness but ananya ordered the soldiers to burn both her hands.
Ananya:"Le jao isse aur iske dono haath jalte hue koyle ke andar daal do."
Dasi:"Mujhe maaf kar dijiye,rajkumariji,meri itni chhoti si galti ke liye mujhe itni badi sazaa mat dijiye.Mere do bachhein hain aur agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to mere do bachhe mar jayenge."
Ananya didn't listen to her.
The next day she left for aryanagar.After she reached aryanagar,everybody welcomed her.Dharam was happy to see her.
AV:"Dharam,ab tumhe jyada se jyada waqt ananya ke saath gujarna hoga,tum jaha bhi jao,isse apne saath le jao."
Dharam(unwillingly):"Ji pitaji."
He took her to the place where shramiks are building their new mahal.
D:"Ananya,yeh hamara naya mahal hai,kuch mahino mein yeh poori tarah ban jayega aur phir hum yaha rahenge.'
A:"Dharam,tumhe ananya ko yaha lana hi tha to yeh banne ke baad laate.Kitni gandi jagah hai yeh aur yeh log kitne gande hain."
Dharam kept quiet.He very well knew ananya's nature.
D:"Ananya,humein pyaas lagi hai,hum pani peekar aate hain."
Dharam left ananya there.He told one of the soldiers to fetch water for him.
Sia was working there and she saw him.Dharam was sitting on a small rock there.He was feeling very thirsty.
Sia went there.
Sia:"Maharaj,pani."
Dharam:"nahi chahiye humein tumhara pani."
S:"Maharaj,yeh saaf pani hai pi lijiye."
Sia sprinkled the water on dharam's hands and dharam started drinking it.While drinking,both of them looked at each other and kept on looking.The water from the pot got over but they were in the same pose for quiet some time.Other shramiks were surprised looking at them.
Suddenly dharam got up and without thanking sia left the place.Sia felt hurt.
Ananya was waiting for dharam.She was watching the shramik's work in disgust.
One old man was carrying a huge log and suddenly fell down on a keechad.The keechad fell on ananya's dress.Ananya got angry,grabbed a hunter from a soldier and started hittinf the old man mercilessly.Suddenly,one person stopped her by holding her hand.He was veer.
A:"Tum?"
V:"Yeh tumhare avadhi ka mahal nahi hai jaha jo chahe manmani kar sakti ho.Tumhe sharam nahi aati inhe maarte hue woh bhi itni bedardi se."
A:"Ananya ke kapde kharab karne ki yehi sazaa hai.Aur tumhari himmat kaise hui ananya ko phir chune ki,tum jaante nahi ho main kaun hoon."
V:"Hum sab ki tarah ek insaan,oohh maaf karna mujhse galti ho gayi tumhe insaan kehkar,tum to jaanwar ho."
Ananya raised her hand to slap veer but this time veer holds her hand.
A:"Haath chodo mera."
V:"Pehle inse maafi maango."
A:"Maafi aur main,hargiz nahi,sainik,isse itna maaro ki iski nani yaad aa jaye."
Soldiers start thrashing veer.
Dharam comes there.
D:"Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"
One shramik said:"Main batata hoon,yeh ladki ne ,mere baba ko maara,veer ne sirf usse roka."
D:"Ananya,kyun in logo se ulajh rahi ho tum,in logo ko waqt aane par main sabk sikhaunga."
V:"Dekhte hain kaun kisse sabak sikhata hai."
DV look at each other angrily.Dharam was abt to arrest veer when a soldier came and told dharam that AV wants to meet him.
Both dharam and ananya leave.
Veer:"Achha hua yeh ghamandi rajkumari yaha aa gayi,ab main iske ghamand ko todkar hi rahunga."
Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago

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