FF:Ek Anokha Rishta part 24 pg.48 Note on Pg.49

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

wooow...lovely update...cnt wait for veer to teach Ananya a thing or two...plz update sn xxx

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Posted: 17 years ago

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yah lovely update as usual me too cant wiat what veer will do to teach him a lesson

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ghamandi ananya kitna ghamand,gussa aur kiti akdoo hai ye...😈
pehle ek dasi ke haath jaladiye aur ab ek boda shramik ko marrahe hai...😡
lekin ab uska pala veer se pada hai ...mujhe pata hai ki ab veer use acha sabak sikhayega
btw nice update yaar.....👏

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esha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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i loved it yaar do cont...

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: starpisces123
great story.....⭐️i loved it😳plz update it soon.....

Thanx a lot dear. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: heaven princess
Woow that is great i liked ure idea of changing around the characters roles.....looking forward to read ure fanficc keep it upp

thanx a lot dear.

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: hiri
i just love your script lot of suspence there plz cont soon...

esha

thanx a lot yaar.

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Subha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 6
Dharam reaches the darbar.
Sainik:"Maharaj,ek buri khabar hai.Kuch shramik aryavrato ke anaaj ghar mein ghuskar anaaj ki boriyon mein ched kar diya jiske wajah se kaafi nuksaan ho gaya.Saara anaaj zameen par gir gaya."
D:"Kya?Shramik?Par woh aisa kyun karenge?"
JV:"Maharaj,in shramiko ki harkaten din ba din badti ja rahi hai.In logo ko aap kadi se kadi saza dijiye."
D(to sainik):"Tumhe pura yakeen hai woh shramik hi the?"
Sainik:"Ji maharaj.woh log shramik ke kapde mein the aur humein dekhkar bhaag gaye."
D:"Un logo ko jald se jald dhoond nikao.Hum unhe kadi se kadi saza denge."
JV:"Mahraj,mujhe pura yakeen hai yeh sab un saare shramiko ne yojana banakar kiya hai."
D:"Aap itni yakeen se kaise keh sakte hain?"
JV:"Maharaj aapko yaad dilana padega kya 15 saal pehle kya hua tha."
Dharam got very angry.
D:"Sainik,aaj raat shramiko ki basti mein chula nahi jalega.Aaj sab bhooke soyenge.Kisi ke bhi ghar mein anaaj nahi jan chahiye.Shramiko ke anaaj ghar mein tala laga do."
Dharam left.
JV called d soldiers in his room.
JV:"Shabaash,yeh raha tum logo ka inaam.Bas issi tarah tum log mera kaam karte rehna aur main tum logo ko malamaal karta rahunga."
JV(to himself):"Maharaj,aapko jo karna tha woh kar diya.Ab hai shramiko ki baari."
In the shramik basti,all are hungry.Everybody is angry with dharam but no one has the guts to go and ask dharam why he stopped the food supply.Veer decied to go to mahal to talk to dharam.Everybody stopped him but he didn't listen.
He entered the mahal,the guards and soldiers stopped him but he didn't listen to anyone.He straight away went inside the mahal.
V:"Maharaj dharam kaha chupe hain aap,baharaaiye."
The soldiers tried to stop him,some even started beating him to stop him but he didn't stop.He kept on calling dharam.
Suddenly he heard a voice frm behind.
"Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?Kyun maar rahe ho isse?"
He looked behing.A lady came out of a room.Veer has never seen her before.There was a glow on her face and eyes which veer liked.
She was nivriti,AV's younger sister.
Nivriti:"Kya ho raha hai yaha?"
Soldier:"Rani maa,yeh shramik andar ghuse aa raha tha,humne isse kita roka par phir bhi yeh.."
Nivriti:"To iska matlab yeh nahi tum log isse itni bedardi se maroge.Tum log jao yaha se."
The soldiers leave.
Nivriti:"Tum theek to ho na beta"
Veer liked the word 'beta'frm her mouth.Till today,no one called him beta ever before,not even his own mother.
Veer:"Rani maa,maharaj ne shramiko ki basti mein anaaj pahunchana band kar diya hai."
Nivriti:"Zaroor tum logo en kuch galti ki hogi jiske wajah se dharam ne aisa kadam uthaya.Kya kiya tum logo ne"
Veer:"Humne kuch galti nahi ki."
Nivriti:"Dharam bina wajah aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta.Zaroor kisi shramik ne kuch kiya hoga."
Veer:"Yehi jaanne ke liye main yaha aaya hoon.Itn jaane ka hak to hai na mujhe."
Nivriti:"Iss waqt bhaiya aur dharam mahal se bahar gaye hain.Unke aate hi main unse pooch lungi.Tum jao aur pehle kisi vaidji se apna ilaaj karvana.Kitna khoon beh raha hai,jao."
Veer left there but before leaving,he looked at nivriti,smied at her and left.Nivriti too smiled back and went back to her room.

Edited by subha2601 - 17 years ago