AR FF: Last Request.. IMP note on PG 44!Plz read.

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Piya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: meow23
kya intro tha n kya update tha.... super kooool dear.. d first prt was best
(i can't rite more..... sorriee a little busy wid pg classes)
bt luvd d prt.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

Thanks 4ur comment di..Hope u liked it..

love

piya.😊

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

amazing part piya,

i liked how u started it with the lines frm mohabattein, soo cheesy yet cute, typical atul😆 and armaan being his typical cool dude. angie is the perfect sis for armaan. in fact i loved the way you managed to introduce all their characters. and what can i say about ridz's intro except Mind-blowing👏, no wonder armaan was blown away 😉 😆

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 17 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

amazing part piya,
i liked how u started it with the lines frm mohabattein, soo cheesy yet cute, typical atul😆 and armaan being his typical cool dude. angie is the perfect sis for armaan. in fact i loved the way you managed to introduce all their characters. and what can i say about ridz's intro except Mind-blowing👏, no wonder armaan was blown away 😉 😆

Aww Thanks so much di..Till now whatever comment id 4my this FF,ur comment is 1of d best👏Im glad u liked it & give ur comment..Honestly i felt that u read my FF & giving ur so honest comment..

Love u a lot..di..

n Thanks 1s again..................🤗

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

Lovely concept...really liked the intro...very excited to knw more..plzz continue soon...😊

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: swetha10
Lovely concept...really liked the intro...very excited to knw more..plzz continue soon...😊

Thanks..i'll count soon.😊

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Piya

@piya2025

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

Part-2

The girl is came to them & she's none other than Riddhima..

R-Hi every1😊

At-Oh..Hi😊 [Atul shake his hands with Riddima & Said]To tum hi ho dusri new comer😊

R-😊HEHE ..😆Yeah rite..😆😆

At-Tum itni haass ku rahi ho..😕

R-Nahi..sorry😆Dont mind hun..oh tumne aise kaha k mujhe lagha main flim industry mein ayi hu😆😆Sorry..sorry..

An-Yeah so rite..yea Atul to hamesha aise hi batten karta hai..Dont take him seriously..BTW..Hi,IM Anjali😊[Then she stood up & shake hands with Riddhima]

R-Hi😊Im Riddima..[She shake hands with Anji]

S-Hi Riddima😊My name is Sapna..Wellcome to u in our college..

R-Oh Thanks Sapna..Its really sweet of u..😊

M-Arre yaar😛yea kaise baat huyi..main sabse pahele ayi..aur dost pahele Riddizi ko bana lia..not fair hun😛

S-Oh sorry Musskaan..😊Aise koi baat nahi hai😊BTW yea Ridzzi kaun hai?😊

M-Oh yea hai na Riddima😊Actually main isse payaar se Riddzzi bulati hu..hum dono bahene hai na,isslia😊

At-Oh thats nice..To az se hum bhi tumhe Ridzs hi bulayenge..is there any problem?

R-No yaar..its fine..u..actually u all can called me Ridzs..😊

S-Yaar Armaan..Tum to kaherahe the k Tumse zyada accha aur cool koi nahi ho sakta to ab kya kahete ho?😊

Til now Armaan was in Riddima beauti,he heard nothing,said nothing..Just 1thing was in Armaan's thought & that is what a amaging girl😍

Sapna called Armaan again coz she doesnt get any responed 4m him..

S-Armaan kya huya?Armaannnnnn😕

Armaan shaked up..

A-Ha..haa..😛

S-Kaha kho gayye the?Kahi Riddima ne tumhara hosh to nahi ura lia na..😆

At-Ha Armaan Ridzs bohout sundar hai hun..

A-😳😊

An-Shut up u both..Yea mere bhai hai..aur mere bhai per sadi girls fida hote hai..Mere bhai kisipe nahi..Ku bro?😉

A-Fiiiu..!😊Ofcourse ...Armaan kisipe flat ho aise ladki az tak nahi bani hoghi..😊

M-Hey Anji k bro Armaan..Tumhe kya pata kitne ladk fida hai mere bahen per..To aisa waisda kuch maat bolna hun..

A-Sorry Musskaan..But kya kare jo sacch hai woh to sacch hai,abhi baghawan ne nahi banayi woh ladki abhi tak usmein mere kya ghalti hai..[Armaan said it ..looking Riddima in a 90* anghle with his as always famouse 1sided smile😊]

Till now Riddima was just listening all convo & smiling but now she said:

R-Baghwan ji ko aisa bilkul nahi karna chahiye tha..[Making a naughty & sorry face]

At-Kya huya..kya huya Riddima?

R-Nahi ..he just said naa that God ne abhi tak woh ladki banaya hi nahi jispe he,himself fida ho sake.to kitna bura huya naDekho abhi yea to duniya mein aa gaye per god ko to time laghenge na Armaan the great k lia ladki bana ne mein..chalo mana ..god ne abhi bana v dia..per kya faida,jab woh badi ho jayeghi Armaan to budda ho jayegha aur tab MR.Armaan ki Ms.Right kaheghi..Oh god..yea to budda hai..abhi main isse kaise shadi karu..😛😛To ab tum logh hi batao..issmein Armaan ka kya hogha..😕

Everybody loudly laughs after hearing Riddima's words😆Armaan was also smiling😊

Then Riddima take her hands infront of Armaan & said:

R-Hi Im Riddima😊Nice to meet u😊

A-Hi😊[Armaan again amage with her touch..This's Riddima's 1st touch]

A-Anjali ok guys abhi introduction to ho gaya per abhi padai likhai bhi kare chalo mere class hai..bye..😊

At-Anjali..Ruko..ruko..main bhi aaraha hu..[Atul following Anji & said]Hey guys catch u all later..bye..Anjali ruko to sahi....

Atul & Anjali left..

M-Arre..yea dono to chale gaye..ab,,kya..hey Sapna..humme college nahi dekhaoghi😊

S-Ha ku nahi chalo😊

Riddima stoped Musskaan..

R-Tu kaha ja rahi hai😛College ayi hai pahele books to le le library se..

M-Riddizi tum jake le lo na..main college dekhk ati hu..

R-Arre per mujhe kaha pata library kaha pe hai..tu sath chal na mere..

S-Baas itni si prob hai,😊Hey Armaan tum bhi to library jane wale ho na..to Riddima ko sath leke jana..okk😊

A-Yeah ok..no problem..

M-Chal abhi tere problem solved ho gayi..abhi chal bye..Then she take Sapna along with her & both leave..

Armaan & Riddima is alone now ...Riddima felt lil bit awkward coz she doesnt know Armaan very well & she v to go with him library....

Armaan also a bit confused coz he doesnt know what he needs to say b4takes with her in library..after a long chup chap silent talk..Armaan said:

A-Aaaaa.....Chale..😳Library..deer ho rahi hai..

R-Aaaa..yeah okk..😊😳

Both leave 4m cafeteria 4library..😉

Hey friends..this's my 2nd part..hope u liked it..I know its a very short part..sorry i couldnot write more..coz im not feeling wel..😭😭Let me know u liked my this part or not..& i promise next time i'll give u a long update..

Till then enjoy my FF " Last Request" 's 2nd part & give ur valuable comment..

Love u all

Piya😊

Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

😳WOOOOOOOOOOOOW piya didi 😳

this part was purely amazing i love it 👏sooooooooooooooooooo much toooooooooo goooooood⭐️

it was an amazing part ....... and WOW can't belive armaan is already and kindda falling for ridhima😳

Loved the intoduction on each character....... Hoppe armaan and ridhima get along with each other 👏⭐️😳

Armaan koi lakhi pe fida nahi hota 😉 hmmmmmm well thats abotu to change for him and all his other friends😆😉

Welll i loveeeeeeed the First part

it was totallllly amazing and totallly awesome

plzzzzzzz continue soooooon

u write reallllly gooooood 😊

muskaan is soooooo cute in ur FF didn't get to see much off her but i know the next part is gonna be more mindblowing then ever 😳

plzzzzzzz continue sooon

luv ya and ur FF

swanzzy

Edited by swansea - 17 years ago

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#88

really interstin prts so farpiys! plz do cntd sn and thx 4 d pm!

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kash_lover

@kash_lover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#89

very good!!

keep it up!

update soon!!

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#90

hi😊

thks for the pm

nice part enjoyed it

update asap plzzzzzzzz

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