Seyahat.....Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part.....12/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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jaldi se part 1 post karo na please..😊
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Part-1

Shuruaat hoti hai ek khubsurat se SAK Mension se........ghar ke hall me jake dekhte hai to do aurat baatein kar rahi hoti hai .........

Kripa: Nahi.......Anjali...is baar to hum zaroor kamyab honge.......

Anjali: main janti hoon ki Ritu ko Sujal pasand hai ......lekin Sujal ko kya Ritu pasand hai.......

Kripa: yahi janne ke liye to hum ja raha hai.........

Anjali: kya woh jane ko taiyar hoga..........

Kripa: tum kaho aur woh na kahe aisa ho hi nahi sakta.............

Anjali: kash ab is baar is safar me Sujal ko uski humsafar mil jaye............

Kripa: woh to hum sab chahte hai lekin ek hamare sehjade hai jise koi ladki pasand hi nahi aati...........

Anjali: kya kare unki pasand hi itni unchi hai ..........ab to kahi se rajkumari dhundh ke lani hogi............waise kal ki sari taiyariyaan ho gayi hai.........

Kripa: haa.......hum log Subaah ke aath baje nikal rahe hai......tickets aa gaye hai....maine apna aur Angad ka saman bhi pack kar diya hai........

Anjali: achcha hua........maine bhi apna aur Kavya ka saman pack kar diya hai........kyunki jab Sujal ghar aayega tab hume unki packing bhi karni hogi..........ab to uski biwi aaye aur woh hi use sambhal sakti hai.....

Kripa: woh din ab durr nahi........

Anjali: lekin ek baat ka yaad rahe ki Sujal ko Ritu ke bare me pata na lage.....warna woh kabhi raji nahi hoga.......

Kripa: maine to abhi tak Angad se bhi nahi kaha......lekin woh log abhi aaye kyun nahi........

jab bahar gadi ki aawaz aati hai ............

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Kavya aur Angad andar aate hai.......

Anjali: aa gaye tum dono.......

Kavya: haa....bas kuch zaroori kaam niptane me dair ho gayi......woh kal se do hafte ki chuti hai to..............

Angad: kitne dino bad hum log kahi family tour pe ja rahe hai........

Kripa: woh to hai aur is bar hum jaha ja rahe hai woh jagah bahot hi khaas hai..........

Angad: ab yeh mat kehna ki hum chand per ja rahe hai.........

Kripa: chand pe nahi hum log Sujal ki favorite jagah pe ja rahe hai........

Kavya: Sujal ki..........

Anjali: haa.......bahot maza aayega na is safar me.........

Jab ek handsome, smart ladka andar aata hai jiske haath me file ki dher hoti hai.........

Sujal: kis safar ki baat ho rahi hai.......

Anjali: hum log tumhari favorite jagah jo ja rahe hai ..........family vacation pe....

Sujal; matlab Laddak..............

Kripa: haa..........aur pucho to sahi hum kaise ja rahe hai.......

Sujal: kaise matlab.........

Kripa: hum log Bus me ja rahe hai.............

Angad: kya bus me.....main nahi aa raha.....

Kavya: ab yeh natak bandh kar.....Kripa ne kaha na ki hum bus me ja rahe hai.....to bus me ja rahe hai.........waise kitne baje hum log nikal rahe hai........

Anjali: subaah aath baje......

Sujal: kya.....hum log kal nikal rahe hai aur aap log muje abhi bata rahe hai...........mera kitna kaam pada hua hai......

Angad: Sujal.....kaam ka tum mat socho.......woh Kavya ne sab sambhal liya hai.....so just enjoy like me........

Kavya: teri tarah enjoy karnege to ek din hum sadak pe aa jayenge.........

Sujal: aur phir hamare Angad Khanna ke clubs ka kya hoga...bechare woh bhi to sadak pe aajayenge.......

Angad: Sujal maine shaadi ke dusre din hi club jana chod diya..........

Sujal: achcha hai warna is ghar ki her cheez roz tutti.........

Angad: teri shaadi hone de phir pata chalega........

Sujal: aisa kabhi nahi hoga kyunki abhi tak woh mili nahi..........

Angad: woh nahi milegi to tu shaadi nahi karega.........

Sujal: maine aisa to nahi kaha......kya pata kahi pe bhi mil jaye...........

Kavya: iska kuch nahi ho sakta..........

Sujal: main packing karne ja raha hoon..............

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Sujal apne kamre me yaha se waha sara saman dal raha hota hai jab Anjali aur Kripa aate hai........

AnjalI; madad chahiye.......

Sujal: kehna padega.......

Kripa: do muje main kapde rakh deti hoon.........

Sujal: thank you......

Anjali: khud kuch kar nahi sakte to shaadi kyun nahi kar lete.......

Sujal: karunga.....bahot jald karunga .....lekin use milne ke bad........

Anjali: ab tum hume bata do ki tumhe kaisi ladki chahiye taki hum use tere liye dhundh sake...........

Sujal: muje kaisi ladki chahiye........woh dekhne to tum dono ko mere sapno me aana hoga.........

Kripa: ab batao bhi.........kaisi hai woh........

Sujal: kya kahoon uske bare me...........uski aankhoin me ek ajeeb sa dard hai jo muje majbur karta hai uski aur.........uski her ada me ek nasha hai jo muje uski aur khichta hai........uske hothon ki hasi se meri duniya tham jati hai.........uske lehrate balon se hawa ke behne ka ehsaas hota hai........uska chehra aisa hai jise main dekhte hi pehchan sakta hoon..........lekin woh itni khubsurat hai ki main use kagaz pe bhi nahi utar sakta kyunki woh mere dil me bas chuki hai...........

Kripa: aisi ladki to tumhe kahi nahi milegi.......

Sujal: nahi koi na koi to hogi mere liye........upperwale ne mere liye kisi ko to banaya hoga.........aur main janta hoon ki woh bhi mere bare me aisa hi soch rahi hogi..........

Anjali: kab tak unka intzaar karoge............

Sujal: puri zindagi.......

Kripa: tum pagal ho.......aur tumse pyaar karnewali bhi pagal hi hogi.......

Sujal: woh pagal nahi kismatwali hogi jise muj jaisa deewana pyaar karega.........

Anjali: pyaar ke sapne dekhte ho.........kya pata bhi pyaar ka matlab...........

Sujal: pyaar ka matlab jiska na hone ke bad bhi uska ehsaas rehta hai..........jiske aane se khushiyaan aur jane se gumm hota hai.........jiske aankhoin me aap apne sapne dekh sako.............jiske saath main aaj apni puri zindagi bitate huye dekh sakoon.....jiske saath me apne sukh dukh bat saku..........yahi pyaar hai mere liye.........

Anjali: bahot hi muskil hai.........aisi ladki ko pana.........

Sujal: muskil se hi to pyaar milta hai.......aur jab tum dono mere saath ho to muje kis baat ka darr.............kya meri madad nahi karogi use dhudhne me.........

Kripa: tum kaho to abhi nikal jate hai........

Sujal: nahi mera woh matlab nahi tha...........aur waise bhi main aap dono ki palnning ke bare me janta hoon..........

Anjali: planning ke bare me..........

Sujal: pichle do saal me hum teen tour aise kar chuke hai........tum dono ko lagta hai kahi koi safar me muje koi mil na jaye.........aur aaj phir se tum dono apni koshish kar rahe ho........

Anjali; koshish se hi to kaam banta hai......aur mera dil keh raha hai ki is bar to woh tumhe zaroor milegi........kya pata woh waha laddak me tumhara intzaar kar rahi hogi.......'

Sujal: waise sach kahoon.......muje bhi aisa lag raha hai ki yeh safar mere liye aakhri safar hoga kyunki is safar me muje wake hi meri humsafar milne wali hai...........

Kripa: ab tum dono baatein bandh karo........aur kuch packing bhi karo..........

Sab saath milke packing karte hai.............

Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Seyahat ka matlab hota hai JOURNEY
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
i liked the way sujal was describing his dream girl it just sounds like kashish
cant wait 4 their journey 2 begin
the way anjali and kripa are planning 4 sujal 2 get married it surely seems that they believe on this trip sujal will find his bride
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey kashish nice concept and nice title...intro and part 1 was great...i liked the friendship between sujal,kavya and angad and anjali and kripa are also sweet..i am looking forward kashish intro....will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice concept and intro girls.....the first part was great 😊!!!!!!!.....love sujal, angad n kavya friendship they have been always toghter...in bad n good times 👏!!!!!....and that proves their friendship....they can do anything 4 each other 😊!!!.....anjali n kripa are so sweet...planning a trip specially for sujal to find his "humsafar" ....who's not ritu 😆!.....angad is hilarious man...bus main safar nahie karna hay janaab ko lekin kripa nay jo kehdia wo tou karna hie hoga na 😉!!!......love how they r always pulling each other legs....😆!........well finally sujal naiy anpi humsafar ka description kripa aur anjali ko batadia 😊....i agree wt anjali ka pata wo ladhak main uska intezaar kar rahie ho 😉!!!.......awesome part ........do continue soon plzzzzzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely part👏 I really liked the convo between Anjali, Sujal n Kripa...Their relationship is so cute man..... Hey Marvelous writing....Plzz continue soon..looking forward for their meeting...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the first part was very nice.. us ghar ke log share such a sweet , strong bond among each other.. woh sab log ek doosre kii itni izzat karthe hai.. i like it very much... dear the title you have given is very nice... and sabki intro bhii bohat achchi karwayi hai tumne... i liked all the characters.. sabhi bade pyaare hai...very interesting..... a very good start.....👏 dear please continue soon... i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..and also for our heroine's introduction... 😊😛😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-2

Aakhir aaj Seyahat ka din aa hi gaya.........Subaah me sab log taiyaar hoke apna saman gadi me rakhte hai........aur thodi dair bad driver un sab ko Bus Station chod deta hai.........sab log apna saman bus me rakhkar bus me jate hai.........

Sujal: yeh kya........yahaan to koi hai hi nahi.......kya yahi bus hai na Laddak ke liye.......

Kripa: Sujal.........abhi to dus minutes baki hai.........aate hi honge sare passengers......

Angad: aur koi nahi aayega kyunki bus me jana tumhari tarah flop idea hai............

Anjali: Angad.......humne kya tai kiya tha ki is safar main hum sab ek dusre ki baat manenge......

Sujal: tum keh rahi ho to thik hai.......aao betho.......

Karan

(from outside): Sujal.......tum.......

Sujal: Karan.......hey main bas do minute me aaya.........

Kavya: jaldi aana..........

Sujal neeche jake apne dost Karan se milta hai............

Karan: kaha ja raha hai......

Sujal: bas apni family ke saath Laddkh aur tum........

Karan: nahi main Pune ja raha hoon......Nandini ko lene........chal main chalta hoon meri bus ka waqt ho gaya.bye..

Sujal: bye........

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Sujal wapas bas ki aur aake chadne wala hota hai jab piche se ek ladki dhaka deti hai..aur bus me chad jati hai..........

Sujal: hey........dekh ke nahi chal sakti........dakka kyun diya.......

Uske labzo ko sunte hi woh ladki piche mudke dekhti hai......

Girl: maff kijiye....mera yeh irada nahi tha......galti se lag gayi aapko......

uske aage bina kuch kahe woh ladki jake bus ki last seat pe beth jati hai..........Sujal sirf use dekhta hi rehta hai...........

Sujal

(to himself): nahi yeh haqeeqat nahi ho sakti.......shayad main sapna dekh raha hoon......woh anjaan hoke bhi apni si lagti hai..........yahi to hai jise main sapno me dekhta hoon............yahi to hai woh.....haa yahi hai jiski muje talash thi......

Kavya: andar chalo Sujal.....bus ka waqt ho raha hai.........

Sujal: kya kaha.........haa aaya........

Sujal bus me chad ke abhi bhi last seat ko hi dekhta rehta hai.....

Sujal

(to himself): hai to yahi woh.......Sujal aa gayi tere dil ki malika............

Sujal sab ko pass karke piche jane lagta hai.......

Angad: hey ise kya hua..........kaha ja raha hai.......

Kavya: kya baat hai Sujal aur ladki ke pass........

Sab log mudke Sujal ko dekhte rehte hai..........Sujal jake uske pass khada rehta hai........

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Sujal: kya main yaha pe beth sakta hoon........

Pehle woh ladki sari bus ko dekhti hai phir Sujal ki aur dekhti hai......

Girl: aap jaha chahe beth sakte hai.......bethiye.........

Sujal: Thanks......

Girl: muje maff karna......maine aapko dekha nahi is liye.........

Sujal: koi baat nahi........waise main Sujal Garewal....aur aap........

Girl: Kashish........

Sujal: Kashish....aage kuch......

Kashish: sirf Kashsih.........

Sujal: bahot hi khubsurat naam hai bilkul tumhari tarah............

Kashish: sukhriya........

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Ek taraf Anjali aur Kripa bethe hai aur dusri aur Kavya aur Angad.............

Anjali: Kripa.........ise kya ho gaya......ladki ke pass beth ke baat kar raha hai........

Kripa: lagta hai ise apni humsafar mil gayi........

Anjali: to phir Ritu ka........

Kripa: abhi uske bare me nahi sochte....waise muje yeh ladki pasand hai......

ANjali: woh to hai...kitni khubsurat hai..aakhir Sujal ko pehli bar koi ladki jo pasand aayi.......

Kripa: woh log saath me achche lagte hai........

Kavya: yeh Sujal ki tabiyat to thik hai na..........

Angad: kuch gadbad to hai.......main puch ke aau......

Kavya: nahi tu un dono ko disturb nahi karega samja tu...........

Angad: hum kya pagal hai jo aapki salah na mane.........waise achchi ladki hai.......

Kavya: haa woh to hai.......

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Jab guide aur driver andar aate hai aur bus shuru hoti hai jiske saath Sujal aur Kashsih ki SIYAHAT.........

Kripa: yeh kya bus me hum sirf che passenger.......

Anjali: achcha hai na Sujal aur uski woh ko koi disturb nahi karega.......

yeh baat sunke sab hasne lagte hai.........chalo chal ke piche dekhte hai kya ho raha hai........

Sujal: to kaha ki rehnewali ho tum........

Kashish: main........main Mumbai ki..........

Sujal: good.....main bhi mumbai me ho hoon........mumbai me kaha.........

Kashish: mumbai me...........

Kashish idhar udhar dekhne lagti hai...........Jab samne kashish ek board ko dekhti hai jaha pe Andheri ka naam likha hota hai......

Kashish: Andheri se.........

Sujal: andheri se ..........main pass me Juhu me rehta hoon.......ajeeb hai na hum kabhi waha nahi mile lekin bus me

Kashish: jee.........

Sujal Kashish se baat karne ki koshish karta hai lekin ya to Kashish uske sawal ka jawab nahi deti aur deti to kuch ajeeb se jawab deti.......Sujal dekhta hai Kashish kuch pareshan lag rahi hai........lekin woh usse puchna nahi chahta kyunki use lagta hai ki yeh bahot hi jaldbazi hogi..........Kashish Sujal ki baatoin se bachne ke liye bahar dekhne lagti hai.........lekin Sujal hai jo abhi bhi Kashish ko dekhe hi ja raha hota hai.........waqt ke saath saath use pakka ehsaas ho jata hai ki yeh wahi ladki hai jise woh sapno me barso se dekhta rehta hai..........

Sujal

(to himself): Kya baat hai Kashish tum me...........tumhare naam ki tarah wake tum me koi Kashish hai.........jo muje tumhari aur khichti hai...........

****Yeh Part ki puri Credits kuhu98pihu ko jati hai.......is liye thanks muje nahi use kariye....****
Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part pihu n kashish 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!!!!!...finally sujal ko uski humsafar milgae 😊 aur uskey liye usko laddak tak nahie chana phara 😉...lekin i know 4 sure that this journey too laddak is going to be really important for both of them 😊!!!....i think kashish lie to sujal that she lives in Andheri 😕..agar wo waha nahie rehti tou kaha?????....sujal ko tou waqen hay key kashish hay wo larkie jou uskey sapno main atie thie 😊!!!!....i soo happy that kavya, anjali, kripa n angad all like her for sujal 👏 😊 👏.....forget abt ritu people 😆!!!!!!......do continue soon plzzz...great going girls 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏....intezaar rahey ga is sujal aur kashish key naey safar ka 😉....

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