##Patched Love## - Page 5

hey ur fan fic is really interesting. cont soon.

awesomeful part!! i really dont have much to say.. lol.. still a bit confused.. .but am sur eu will reveal it all soon!! continue soon!!

awesome ...its really interesting 👏 👏 👏 still trying to figure it out hmmm lolz continue soon 😛 😃

that was a great part the fan fic is very interestion and confusing hope all get relived soon

Chapter Five

The group consisted of [in clockwise order] Aliya, Prithiv, Kripa, Savannah, Angad, Josh, Krishelle, and Daniel. Savannah, was too much of in awe staring at the man's crystal green eyes, she was in a deep daydream. Kripa muttered to Savannah, twice, but that dufus, so Kripa nudged her five times.

Angad's eyes twinkled with humor as Kripa's eyes got narrower as Savannah went back in her dream world. Angad had never seen such an innocent but gorgeous babe. Angad gave Kripa a weak but sexy smile and then winked and indicated for her to watch.

Angad knowing his cousin and her dream world, he stepped right on Savannah's foot. "Ahh---"began Savannah. But both Angad and Kripa cut her off by saying, "welcome back to the normal world". Angad gave an all knowing smile, he had seen to many girls go wild for Daniel and his little sister of was going loco for Daniel and join the club. Angad was surprised Kripa hadn't fallen over the heels for Josh or Daniel...Yet.

"Hey, Kripa, when are you going back to Kildera?" asked Josh. Josh and Kripa were nothing more or less than good friends.

"Umm…tomorrow...I think. I will be going back with Bhai," replied Kripa insecurely as she faced Prithiv.

"Kripa, you're going to have to go with dad. I am coming back to Kildera in two weeks," stated Prithiv. Kripa smiled turned grim, and both Aliya and Savannah noticed Kripa's facial changes.

"Screw you, prithiv. Kripa, you're staying here in Bayren, with Krishelle." said Aliya.

"Bayren is world's ninth wonder. Ever seen, seven rainbows at once?"asked Savannah.

"I don't think--" Krishelle started with excuses. "No if, no buts and no stuts…you guys are staying. And that's my order."

Said Savannah. Angad teasingly asked, "With what right, honey, how can you command anyone, in my country?" Savannah grimaced…"I have a right, after all I am your cousin sister."

Josh and Angad asked Kripa and Savannah to stay, and both gave in at the end. Daniel reminding them of the urgency quickly departed.

As Josh, Prithiv, Angad and Daniel slipped out of the ballroom like sly foxes. Once Josh, Angad, Prithiv, and Daniel were outside, they headed towards the maze. A group of rich, ravishing, teens around 17-19, saw a harmonic scene of four strong, handsome men, walking in harmony. Their feet were rhythmed into the same pattern, all lifted and placed together. First right, then left, then right...As the girls stood awed at their rhythmic movements, they men disappeared into the night and dissolved into the maze.

As the Queen of Bayren skimmed her eyes around, for four ladies, that's all she needed, in order to perform a traditional gathering for her son's welfare once he wore the crown. It was one of the reasons she had forced Angad to attend the ball. She simply needed four girls who would, wake up every morning and come down to the temple in the Palace and pray for Angad and Bayren.

These girls would have to stay within the borders of Bayren for six months straight.

The four girls: Aliya, Savannah, Krishelle, and Kripa huddled around; filling in the gaps the boys had left. As they, ladies were about to start a discussing Josh, Prithiv, Angad and Daniel. Angad's mom the queen came up to them and asked the girls to follow her to Angad's room.

The girls, at first, wondered what was going on and why this was happening. Why would the Queen of Bayren be taking them to the Royal Prince of Baryen's room? This was extremely odd. It was obviously common knowledge, that Angad was the only child of the Monarch's of Bayren.

Kripa and Krishelle were still racking their brains on what was going on. While savannah and Aliya, being the citizens of Bayren, and being more than well aware of the Bayrenize tradition, just simply, followed.

The Queen budged open Angad's door of this room, Aliya and Savannah let out a giggle through their rosy lips, knowing Angad and his bad habits. Kripa and Krishelle stood shocked at the scene they were witnessing.

The queen was just plain old dumbfounded. She couldn't believe what was going on in Angad's room, and made mental note to talk more like scold him.

WRITERS NOTE:

GUYS I ONLY HAVE ONE REQUEST AND THAT IS.......PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT.....

I saw that you updated, so i was like 'yay!' and i went to pg 6 and read hte first line of of the part on the top page. I was like "wait, i read this before." then im like maybe ur just giving like a quick recap- but then i skimmed over the part and im like "wait wat?!" 😆 i scrolled down and saw the new part and im like "ohhhhhh" 😆. anywho, back to ur part- it was soo good. Wat was in Angad's room?! I want to know! Plz cont soon!

x3 Prakriti

wow. great part.
i wonder wat they saw.

wow that was a great part, still a bit confuseing but it was great continue soon and dont keep me confused for long because i already read a lot of your parts a head of time and i was still confused...dont keep the secret for to long other wises your going to make me rip my hair out 😆

u knw i get confused with al of these charcters sometimes
so kripa staying for 2 wks...wht do u hv in mind
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