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Posted: 18 years ago
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so intresting dear try to post soon more 👏 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part
sounds really intresting
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chocolate_luver

i just luv it 👏 😃 😛 continue soon seems really intresting

thanks. i am glad you liked it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: misscool

so intresting dear try to post soon more 👏 👏 😳

ill post the next chapter tommrow or friday.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
sounds really intresting
👏

thanks.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG... i just read ur FF... nd it is AMAZING!!! 👏 👏 👏
👏 i LOVED it!!!
😳 the story is soooo unique & i LOVE the name... poor Angad all the
cute girls r taken!!! 😆 i CANNTo wait to read more... continue soon!!!
😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great

ur fanfic is very cute and unique

i love that name krishelle

continue soon and read my ff: tumse pyaar hua

ishuu 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Ohh kay.

HOLLER: NEXT PART COMING RIGHT UP!

im almost done with it.
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Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19

Chapter Two


Angad groaned as he looked around once again that graceful lady had disappeared. As he wheeled around on his toes, he saw a girl in a red dress calling for him.

"Damn It!" Angad gasped and dashed out into the garden. He heard heels right behind him, looking for an aide he walked straight into the maze.

Angad gave an evil but sexy grin, which stretched from one ear to another ear. He, of course, knew the maze from north to south and east to west. He decided to go ahead and visit his headquarters which held his biggest secret, and which was in the center of the maze…


Kripa had token right mainly because she had heard some hissing sound coming from the left side. As a cool, crisp, gush of wind blew Kripa felt the goose-bumps creep up her spine. She whimpered, as she felt the frosty cold metal against her thigh. "Stupid gun." She thought bitterly.

At once, remembering that the bottom of her dresses silk is detachable. She freed the silk, now her legs were bare from slightly above her knee down to her ankle, leaving her that part see through.

She wrapped the silk cloak around her, it wasn't much of a help but….it would have to work. She kept moving toward the center. Kripa had reached he center. Ugh. She wanted to get out. Not go in. Kripa now tired of walking and getting lost, she just sat there…waiting.

*****


Angad ran...Bang…Thumth...Ugh…"Stupid gun," he whispered into the night. He picked it back up and placed it between his shirt and belt, and hid it with his coat. And pulled out his cell and pressed 8.

"Hey Buddy, is everyone armed? I'm coming in." commanded Angad. Right before Angad's Buddy could even answer, Angad had hung up.

He walked toward the center only to see the graceful lady in the brown sit there on the edge of the water fountain. Angad just stared at her while the moon let Kripa sparkle into the night. "Wow," thought Angad, "I must be the only human who has seen the 8th wonder of the world. She is one elegant babe."


Kripa took a long breath and opened her eyes to only see Angad staring at her. Both mesmerized into each other, when the harsh wind blew, sending Kripa's hair towards Angad and Angad's jacket backwards revealing his gun. And Kripa look at the gun as a shocked expression closed on her face.

WRITERS NOTE: ohh kay. i am going to leave you guys hanging. i am sort of busy and i hope this will sastify you people till then.

love you guys lots.

and also, do comment, the comments are my source of hope and encouragement. thanks.


Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fab Part!! Ah guns?!! OOO!! This must be interestinggg.. cant waitt!! lets just hope ak are together, like not against each other!! lol!! Continue Soon!!

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