Veeba 'spaeak no words' an undefined luv story - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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was superb! cant wait to read the rest! good work.keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
read al the parts in one stretch... luv it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

read al the parts in one stretch... luv it


😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjanabaldev

was superb! cant wait to read the rest! good work.keep it up.


thank u sanjana 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteBiya

Awww cute and caring baldev hopse so veera ko b jald hi baldev ki qadar ho jay


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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Read all the parts together, nice story 😊 Enjoyed Veera being teased by baldev & him taking care of her. Do continue ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Thanks evry one for ur comments😃
SPEAK_NO_WORDS_hdPART_8

Amrit-veera tu jaldi se fresh ho ja aur naashta kr le thodi energy bhi zaroori hai

Veera-haan amrit ,aisha tum dono bahat jao main bas aati hu ready ho kr

veera by giving an excuse for getting ready she sends amrit and aisha out n she locks her room from inside n calls baldev

Baldev-aree veera ka phone..hello veera ab teri tabiyat kaise hai?

Veera-baldev adhe ghante me tu mennu machan pe aake mil!

Baldev-ki hoya veera?main nhi aa sakta mennu kuch zaroori kaam se bahar jana hai papa je beiji k sath

Veera-main waha tera intezaar karungi ab tu ayee ya na ayee(she cuts her call)

Baldev-(confused)ae ki hoya isse?pehle to jab tabiyat ke bare me pucha to kuch jawab hi nhi diya aur ab machan pe bula pe bula hi phone kaat diya😕 jana to padega abhi iski tabiyat puri tarah theek nhi hui hai machan pe bahaut dhup hogi kahi zyada bimar na pad jayee

veera was waiting gor baldev to come n after few minutes baldev reached at machan!

Baldev-veera dekh jaldi bata ki tu ki kehna chahti hai sach me bahaut zaroori kaam hai mennu

Veera-are!tu do minute ruk nhi sakta ki?ayaa bada zaroori kaam wala🥱

Baldev-zyada nakhre na diya warna yahi se laut jaunga teri puri baat sune bagair tu jaldi bol na ki kehna hai tennu

Veera-wo main tennu kal raat k liye thank u bolna chahti thi,actually tune puri raat mera dhyan rakha aur kisi ko pata bhi nhi chalne diya! so thank u baldev dushman hote hue bhi tune dosti se kam kuch nhi kiya😳

Baldev-ki?tu ye kehne ke liye mennu yaha bula rhi thi?jaanti bhi hai mennu kaha jana tha?,bata dunga to tere hosh udd jayenge kitni mushkil se manaya maine beiji ko ki hum ek ghante der se jayenge sirf ye socha maine ki tennu koi zaroori kaam hoga par tu,,mennu ye baat phone pe nhi keh sakti thi tu?hadd hoti hai😵

Veera-baldev..maine socha ki ye baat phone pe kehne layak nhi thi tune meri madad ki,mera khayal rakha bhale hi kitne jhagde hote ho humare bich aur tu mennu aise bolega?chal bata ki kaha jana hai tennu jaha jane k liye itna chatpata rha hai us jaa rha hai?ya phir london?bata na😡

Baldev-(in low voice)main waha jaa rha hu jaha meri jutti bhi nhi jana chahti par beiji ne kasam de rakhi hai!😔

Veera-ki?aise kaunsi si jageh hai jaha tu bin marzi ke jane k liye itna utsa rha hai zara main bhi janu bata na age😆

Baldev-ladki dekhne vaaste jaa rha hu,beiji mere vaaste ladki pasand kr rhi hain,wo chahti hai ki main ab shadi krlu

veera's ears got blocked she can't believe what baldev said..her eyes got widely opened

Veera-ki?tu shadi kr rha hai?wobhi kisi aur ladki se?😲

Baldev-dekh veera sabki ki shadi kisi aur se hi hoti hai kisi ghar baithe ajnabi se nhi,tu kaise baten kar rhi hai!ki karu beiji ki kasam hai aur papa je bhi chahte hain ki main kabil banu!main to jake mana hi krne wala hu lekin agar beiji ko kudi psand aa gai to phir pakka mennu apni bato me fasayengi,aur phir koi kasam hogi!😭

veera got too angry n frustated hearing this

Veera-urrghh main yaha aai hi kyu?mennu yaha ana hi nhi chahiye tha😡(she left from machan agrily)

Baldev-kamal hai ye gusse me yaha se kyu gai,gussa to mennu anaa chahiye na!😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks so much for the pm.angry veera..ha ha😊,cant wait to read next!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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now its gonna be more fun... btw thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update 😃 Veera is so upset 😆
Thanks for the pm!
Continue soon..

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