Veeba 'spaeak no words' an undefined luv story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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from there veera went to the leather man and after then she went back home and ran to amrit and aisha

Veera-amrit,aisha mennu tum log ko kuch batana hai!

Aisha-kya hua veera tu itni ghabraai hui kyo hai?

Veera-wo mennu market mein yuvraaj mila

Amrit-kyaa?yuvraaj yaha?tu us se kaise mili?

Veera- are wo yuvraaj nhi baldev hai!usne uss din jhuth kaha tha ki wo yuvraaj hai

Aisha-matlab tere bachpan ka dushman bada hot nikala yaar😳

Veera-yaar ek gadbad bhi ho gai!(veera narrated the whole story)

Amrit-veera tune ye kya kiya!bechare ko itna maar diya,mujhe rona aa rha hai


Veera-wohi tou..galti se bahaut zyada maar diya usse..accha dekh raat kafi ho chuki hai hume ab so jana chahiye

Amrit-haa ab tou main bhi baldev se milne ke liye bechain hu

Veera-chup kar aur so jaa

At next morning veera wope up early and took her breakfast

Veera-chaiji ab bas bahut kha liya maine ab jaldi jaldi mil aau sabse pind mein akhir unhe bhipata chale ki veera aa gai hai wapas

Chaiji-haa chichdi unhe bhi pata chale ki pind ka toofan wapas aa gaya

Veera-accha jee main chalti hu

veera met evryone in pritampura one by one and was happily returning home while moving from one lane she met baldev again

Baldev-(smiled)tou itthe hai tu..ab nikaluga main apna badla

Veera-teri sar ki chot zyada tou nhi badh gai na tu ki keh rha hai ab tu mennu chappal se maarega ki?

Baldev-oyee nhi chappal nhi marunga main..aur tu kal ki baat yaad na dila bahut dard hua tha mennu..accha badla nhi nikalunga main..tu mere naal coffe peene chalegi?

Veera-aree wah! mennu tou yakeen nhi ho rha hai ki tu mennu coffee ke liye puch rha hai kahi mennu bina cheeni wali coffee pilane ka irada tou nhi hai na tera?

Baldev-oyee nhi chad na kal ki baat tu!tu itne saalo k baad aai hai isliye puch rha tha main aur pind mein ek nai coffee ki dukaan khuli hai tu ayegi?

Veera-accha tu puch hi rha hai tou theek hai haa aa jaungi!

Baldev-ye hui na baat theek hai tou phir tu aj shaam ko 4 baje nai wali dukaan pe aa jana

Veera-haa theek hai(in her mind)kamaal hai ye banda mennu coffee k liye puch rha hai..





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear .. Thinking wat will ballu do to yake revenge .. Cause he's not gonna leave veera without taking his revenge
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm loving this story!
Continue soon..and a longer update please 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Y do u make new topics of the same topic it scatters ur work and half of us may not read it anyways ur storyb is going great
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry alyna i din't understand what r u trying to tell me!btw thnx hope next time i mark up to ur point😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Iam saying continue by commenting in this thread no need to click on new topic and mess things further
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it...please continue soon!👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Baldev-chal phr theek hai tu mennu nai wali dukaan pe 4 baje aake mil..tu khoj legi na kaha anaa hai

Veera-haa oyee darpok nhi hu main..aa jaungi samay se

veera went home and got ready for the coffee meeting which baldev offered her..when she went to search the coffee shop she din't find and walked towards a wrong way,,,,,after moving soo long she realised that she gost lost and moved very far from pritampura,she found no one to ask for lift,,,it was cloudy whether and wind was blowing cold and the wind messed her hairs everytime she got scared now becoz it was about to rain and she din't knew where to go now,,there baldev kept on waiting for her

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Baldev-kitthe reh gai veera 4 baje bulaya tha abhi tou sadhe 4 baj rahhe hain!kahi raata tou nahi bhul gai?o terii! mennu abhi usse khojna hoga warna sare ilzaam uske khone ke mujhpe hi ayenge

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Veera-rab jee main kitthe fass gai mennu yaha se bahar nikalo,yaha tou dur dur tak koi nazar nhi aa rha ki karu main ab?

suddenly someone caught veera from back and he was baldev

Baldev-mil gai khushi tennu!bada aai kehne wali main darpok nhi hu abhi main nhi ataa tou tu issi raate se sidha delhi pahuch jaati aur tennu pata bhi nhi lagta!

Veera-wo baldev main...

as soon as veera spoke it started raining...

Baldev-baarishh!veera jaldi utthe chalte hain waha uss ghar ke niche

they both ran towards a shed and sat on the stairs of a old and empty house...they spoke nothing till 2 minutes just they were litsening to the beautiful rythem of rain but after 2 minutes baldev started singing...

Baldev-dil mera hai nasamajh kitna,,,besabar ye bevkoof bada,,chahta hai kitna tujhe,khud magar nahi jaan saka..

Veera-(in her mind)kitni gehraai hai iski awwaz mein ki main iske ander jhaank paa rhi hu..kehne ko tou ye wohi bachpan wala baldev hai par iss baldev ne apne andar chupe dil ko dhoond liya hai

Baldev-is darde dil ki sifaarish ab karde koi yaha,,ki mil jayee isse wo baarish jo bhiga de puri tarah...(baldev stoped)

Veera-baldev main ek gal puchu tujhse,ye gana tune kiske liya gaya hai abhi?

Baldev-(looked towards her)tere liye

Veera couldn't believed what baldev said her eyes got widely opened her heartbeat got faster than never..

Veera-ki???mere liye???😳😕😲

Baldev-(laughed badly)pagal hai ki tu?tere liye aur main gana gaunga!kabhi sapne mein bhi nhi..tu apni shakal dekh(he laughed again)

Veera-baldev!!!😡 (she hit him on his arms)dara diya tune mennu!!

Baldev-darpok kahiki maine tou pehle hi kaha tha ki tu darpok hai par tune hi nahi mana

Veera-main darpok nhi hu

Baldev-ha ha aise hi nahi hai aaj do baar dari hai tu keh hai main nhi hu darpok ek number ki kamli hai tu

Veera-accha baldev tu mennu apni dost maanta hai ki?

Baldev-tu meri dost kam dushman zyada hai aur humesha rahegi samjhi tu?

Veera-accha jee! mennu bata tu ki tennu kisi ladki ne kabhi propose kiya hai?

Baldev-propose kya sidha varmala leke hi pahuch jaati hai kudiya mere naal,par maine sabko mana kar diya

Veera-wo kyu?

Baldev-wo kya hai na meri personelti...

Veera-personelti nhi personality!ullu kahika!😆

Baldev-oyee chup kar hasna mera matlab bhi wohi tha samjhi..ha tou main keh rha tha meri personality na sher ki hai aur mennu sheri chahiye chuhiya nahi...koi mee barabari ki nahi mili isiliye sabko na keh diya maine..

Veera-accha tere pasand ki ladki kaise honi chahiye tere hisaab se?

Baldev-mere pasand ki?uske baal lambe ho,wo angreji bolti ho,shehar ki kudi ho bilkul tez taraar ho jo din bhar chapad chapad kare bas aur khas kar uski pehchaan sabse alag honi chahiye aur sabse badi baat ki wo sherni ho!aise kudi chahiye mennu

Veera-tennu nahi lagta ki jis kudi ki tu baat kar raha hai wo tere bilkul bagal mein baithi hai?

Baldev-mennu pata hai ki tu apni baat kar rahi hai aur maine jitni bhi baate kahi hai wo tere hi gun hai par mennu ladki upar se leke niche tak teri jaise hi chahiye par tuuu...nhi!kyuki na tu mere baare mein kabhi dosti ke aage kuch soch payegi aur na main aur shayad aisa kabhi na soche...

veera was litsening baldev very carefully

Veera-aur agar main tennu pasand kar rahi hoti tou tu ki karta?

Baldev-agar tu mennu pasand kar rhi hoti tou main bhi tere baare mein sochta,,,par aisa hai tou nahi na

Veera-main kamli hu ki?main tennu ye sab sawal kyu puch rhi hu jab mennu pata hai ki aisa kabhi hone nhi wala!

Baldev-mennu laga ki tennu mujhse se pyar ho gaya hai isiliye tu mujhse aise gal kar rhi hai

Veera-chiii baldev tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai?

Baldev-accha chadd ye sari batein aur mitti di khushboo ko soongh..hayee kitni acchi hai na

Veera- haa aur gobar ki khushboo?wo tennu nahi mehak raha?

Baldev-tu kabhi kuch accha nahi soch sakti na!accha chal ab chalte hain kyuki barish ab ruk gai hai phir se shuru ho gai tou phir dikaat ho jayegi aur tere ghar pe bhi sab parshaan ho rahe honge

Veera-haa chalte hain ab

baldev sat on his bike and asked veera to sit ,she sat on his bike leaving some gap in between

Baldev-main chalu tu theek se baith gai?

Veera-haa chal!

while driving he saw a muddy area filled with puddles and muddy water filled in it so he pushed his break and veera's head clashed to baldev's back,baldev stopped his bike

Baldev-oh veera tu theek tou hai na?

Veera-aaah! baldev teri peeth hai ki patthar kitni tez chot lagi mennu!

Baldev-tu ek kaam kar tu mennu kas ke pakad le phit tennu chot nahi lagegi

Veera-tu mera fayda utha raha hai battmise!😡

Baldev-tere khatir hi keh raha tha agar nahi manana hai tou phir theek hai mat pakad mennu ki?waise bhi agee raasta aur bhi kharab hai

Veeera-accha theek hai par tu bike aaraam se chalana mennu koi shauk nahi hai tennu kas ke pakadne ka

Baldev-oyeee chup kar mennu koi shauk nahi hai tennu apni bike pe baithane ka

as veera din't hold baldev tight so all the way veeras head clashed to baldev's back and finaaly baldev reached to veera's house

Veera-hayee mera sar abhi bhi lag rha hai jaise jhatke kha rha ho!baldev tennu bikul bike chalani nahi aati

Baldev-tu mennu kuch mat keh samjhi aaj raasta kharab tha isiliye tu kabhi aur baithna mere peeche tab tennu pata chalega ki mujhse accha pure pind mein kisi ko bike chalane nahi aati

Veera-haa kyuki pure pind mein tere aur mere allawa kisi ke paar bike nahi hai hahaha😆

Baldev-tu challenge laga le

Veera-accha phir theek challenge🥱




Edited by twilight_lover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update yaar!! totally fun, VeeBa nokjoks Loved it! Continue soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u zainab..hope i continue to update like this ony..are u zainab night on fb??

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