FF : Intehaan : The test of love part 16(Final part) updated - Page 5

Ya very nice update specialy last wala go Gunjan go.tere last wale update me tune jo likha na o padhkar aisa laga mano meri dil ki bhadas nikal gai gunjan through.pls upadte soon i cant wait to see veera's reaction/answer to her veerji.

Tussi toh chaa gaye jeet! Part 8 was the best part of this ff,marvellous. Gunjan nailed it,she nailed it finally. She also interrupted ratan. Veera's dialogue against ranvi was a surprise,gunjan's dialogue was a series of firecrackers. Burst,burst and burst! You used here the childhood philosophy in this part very well. 'hum kisi par apni ungli uthate hai,toh baki 3 humari taraf hi hoti hai.' After such bizarre happened,still baldev is very patient,that he didn't say anything to ranvi,and the regret that 'this time also veera was nt there.' realized his mistake truely. I want this part to happen in the show,specially permanant change of gunjan's character. Overall,in movie language 'paisa wasool' part.

Part-10

R: Pati?...is sabd ka matlab bhi jaanta hain yeh hiwaan...

V: Baas Veerji...kab taq is galat faimy main jiyenge aap?

R : Galat faimy?...Veera jis neh tujhe talak dene paar majhboor kiya...woh tera pati kaisey huwa?

V: Kiun ki usne kabhi us divorce paper ko court main submit kiya hi nahi...humara divorce kabhi huwa hi nahi...

R: Yeh keya keh rahi hain tu Veera...

Ratan: Haan Veera is ne khood kabool kiya tha ke is ne tujhe majboor kiya tha talak dene ke liye...

B: Haan puttar hum sab ko bhi yehi pata tha...

V: Papaji...keya is ke baad bhi Baldev ko haiwaan kehna thik hoga?...Veerji Baldev humesha begunha hoke bhi saza bhookta hain...uske liye woh jurm usne kabhi kiya hi nahi...

R: Beech bazaar apne boti ke saamaan uthana, uspe chillana...ghar peh us par haath uthana...kon sa sarif mard aisa karta hain...Veera tu ne aaj tak ise pehchana nahi...jhoot bol raha hain yeh...zaroor kuch pak raha hain iske dimaag main...

V: Yeh lijiye Veerji...[She handed over the pieces of the torned divorce paper to him]...jaake kisis bhi wakil, yah Judge se pata kar lijiye...yeh kagaz aur isme jo mere aur Baldev ke dastkhat hain who asli hain yah nahi...[ Ranvee could not believe his own eyes...he first looked at Veera and then at Baldev...]...Baldev ne kabhi mujh par hath nahi uthaya Veerji...Veerji hamesha ehi hota aya hain Baldev ke saath...jab use sabse ziyada apne apno ki zaroorat thi tab kis ne uska sath nahi diya...kisi neh uspar bharosa nahi kiya...Veerji Baldev ke sirf do kamzoriyaan thi...ek uska gussa...aur doosra...woh khood se zayada mujhse pyaar karta hain...

R: Agar yeh tujhse itna pyaar karta tha toh pooch na isse kiu is ne tujhe talak dne par majhboor kiya...

V: Kiun ki maine bhi is paar bahrosa nahi kiya tha Veerji...Veerji aap baar baar kehte gay eke aap ne Baldev ko Nihal chachu ka khoon karte huwe dekha tha...main daar gaye thi...mainu laga agar aap gawahi de denge to Baldev ko jail ho gayegi...aur who mujhse bardast nahi hoti...maineh mandir pe Bakdev se beha kiya...usne ek baari bhi yeh nahi pooncha ke aise choop ke, aise acanak beha kiun karna chahti hoon...khoos tha who...lekin jab maine use yeh kaha ke mere Veeji kabhi galat nahi ho sakte...uski dinuya ujar gayee...Veerji main ajj apse poonch ti hoon agar Suhag raat ke din ehi baat Gunjan bhabi ne aap se kahi hoti...toh aap ko kaisa lagta...Veerji...apme mann main toh aap jant te they ke aap ne Baldev ko khoon karte huwe nahi dekha...phir bhi aap ne aisa kiun kaha Veerji...jab Rajveer pakra gaya tab ...apne Magistrate se ehi kaha tha...ke apne sirf...Baldev ko jack uthate dekha tha...kiun Veerji...

R: Main Rajveer ke baton ke ter mere peench ko samajh nahi paya tha Veera...lekin tune apne aap ko kahtre main daal kar isko bejunha sabit kiya tha...toh keya yeh tere us ek baat ko bhula nahi sakta tha..

V: Nahi Veerji...yeh baat ko koyi nahi samjh payega ke us waqt Baldev ke upar keya bit rhai thi...mujhe bhi smajh main nahi aati agar main Baldev se door nahi gaye hoti...Veerji jante hain...aaj mainu keya lagta hain...mujh se bara anpaar gawar koyi hain hi nahi...jo siksha mainu sahi aur galat ka fark karna nahi sikhaya, jo siksha mainu apne har riste sahi se samajh na nahi sikhaya, jo mainu haar riste ko sambhal na nahi sikhaya, who siksha kis kaam ka...

B: Veera ...main tere aur tere pariwarwalon ke beech main nahi bolna chata...lekin main yeh bhi nahi chahta...ke tu aur Gunjan hamesha chakki ke dono taraf se pisti rahe...tera Veer aur main paani aur sarso ke teel ke jaise hain jo kabhi mil nahi sakte...main tujh par koye dwab nahi daloonga Veera...lekin itna zaroor kahoonga...bohot bardast kar lie maine...bohot jhail liye...sabke nooske...aab aur nahi...ab main apne pariwar, aapna pyaar aur apne boti ke saath who zindagi jiyoonga jiske liye maine zindegi ke haar intehaa ko paar kiya hain...koyi kanoon, koyi bhi adalat mainu majhboor nahi kar sakti apne boti se alag hone ke liye...aur Gunjan tere liye tere Veerji ka jaan bhi hazir hain...jab chahe baas ek baar awaz de dena...main daura chala aunga...aapne appne maike aur saural ko kaise sambhalo ge yeh faisala apne taraf se main tun dono par chorta hoon...itna wada karta hoon ke mere wajah se Sampooran Sinhgji ke pariwar ko koye paresaani nahi hogi...nahi tenu hogi Veera...lekin is se pehle mere ander ka haiwaan saach main jag jayee...main bahar jeep main tera intezaar kar raha hoon...Papaji aap ko bhi paidal jaane ki zarorat nahi hain...aur Gunjan agar tere gharwalr izazat dain toh tub hi aa jana...[he left...]

R: Dekh tune Veera...ratti bahr ka bhi pastawa nahi hain use...itna sab khooch hone ke baad bhi ek baari humare pariwaar se maafi nahi maangi usne...

V: Keya apne mere sasural walon se maafi mangi thi Veerji...jab ki galti humari thi...Veerji Baldev humesha kehta tha...Rajveer ka nazar tujh par hain...main use larti thi...ehi samajh ti thi who Rajveer se jalta hain...kiun ki aap use pasand karte they...Veerji aap ne toh kabhi Baldev ko apke saala hone ka bhi..samman nahi diya...lekin usne humesha apka maan rakha hain Veerji...aap ne kahi bari uspe haath uthaya...kabhi socha hain Veerji...agar palat kar Baldev jawab deta toh keya hota...kiun har baar who aap ke saamne jukh jata tha...kiun ki aap mere Veerji hain aur uska Jeeja...Veerji aaj bhi waqt hain apne aankhoon se nafrat ki is patti koh utar fakiye...nahi toh sayad aapke Veerakari ka ghar kabhi bhi poori tarah se bas nahi payegi...

R: Toh keya hum log koye mainey nahi rakhte tere liye...

V: rakte hain Veerji...bohot mainey rakhte hain...Veerji mainey bohot bara mol chukka kar har riste ko barabar ke nazar se dkhna sikha hain, unhe sambhal na sikha hain...aap mere liye ma-baap hain...aur Baldev mera pati...do no mujh se bohot pyaar karte hain...lekin mere liye dono ka alag alag gagah hain Veerji...koyi kisi se kamm nahi...koyi kisi se zayadah nahi...

R: sayad mere parwarish main hi koyi kami reh gayi thi Veera...

V: Nahi Veerji...aapke yah Beeji, Chaiji ke parwarish main koyee kami nahi thi...Veerji aaj bhi aap is baat ko nahi man pa rahe hain ke aap ki Veerakari itni bari ho gayi hain ke khood apne liye sahi jiwan sathi dhoond liya...apne dil is nafrat ko meeta dijiye Veerji...isse pehle ke bohot der ho jaye... Chaiji, Beeji...abhi kaafi raat hochuki hain...main kaal subha aungi...Papaji chaliye...

G: papaji main ek do din baad aungi...

B: changa puttar...[Veera left with Balwant]

When Veera, Baldev and Balwant reached B3 house, Balwant handed over the keys of the room to Veera...when she and Baldev opened the door...they were both jaw dropped...the entire room was decorated with red and white heart shape balloon...their bed was covere with petals of red roses..a big poster size photo of Veera nad Baldev(which was taken during their Sangeet ceremony) was hanging on the wall, the room was full of flowery fragnanace. They loked at each other and entered the room holding each other's hands...

B: Yeh Gunjan bhi na...bilkool pagal hain...is halat hain usne...

Veera noticed a card was placed on the bed side table...it was sealed, but her name was written on the envelope...she opened it up...there was a beautiful card inside it with a message written on it..."meri nanad uurf bhabhi...mubarak ho...kaisi lagi meri sajawat...jaanti hoon bechainey toh bohot hogi...lekin sambahl ke..." she blushed after reading the message...

B: Who keya hain Veera...

V: Yeh kuch nahi...she tried to hide it...sunna...main keya keh rahi thi...pehle tu mu haat dhoke aaja, phir main bhi thora fresh ho lungi...saach main bohot thak gaye hoon Baldev

Baldev could notice her nervousness, he himself was also very nervous...he went to the toilet and took a shower...afterwards Veera also freshened up...they both kept looking at the bed from two sides, both waiting for the other to get into the bed first...Baldev walked up to Veera and picked her up in his arms and then slowly placed her on the bed...he then got into the bed...Veera turned her back toward him...Baldev grabed he by her waist and turned her around...then tightly hugged her...Veera too hugged him back...

...to be continued...

Friends ...I know it's very short. Somehow managed to write this during my lunch break, but you all know what's coming up...

go gunjan go... want some kadwe bol from veera too for ranvi...

As usual,expected from ranvi,he is such an idiot. Only me,me,me! Liked veeba's attitude. P.S. - take your own time jeet,work comes first :-)

Wow!! Awesome story jeet just read all the parts together, Amazing yaar 👍🏼

Just read last updates together.

Read last two parts together!! Loved the end of part 9.. The way Veera stood by Baldev ❤️ ...and your story makes me hate Ranvi more than I already do!!...didn't know it was possible to hate someone so much!! 😛

Friends, here is Par-11. It's short, but please bear with me

Aww!! This update was just Awesome jeet, just perfect 👍🏼 update next part soon 😳