FF : Intehaan : The test of love part 16(Final part) updated

Very good start and quite intriguing. I wish the CV's had the vision to execute something like this. Rather than the endless trying and crying by Veera, Baldev confused between his heart and head and Bansuri's endless Chaals, something like this would be very interesting to watch. It makes the story edgy again. What they are showing now is just repetitive.

Anyway, please PM when you do the next part!

Veera Miss, a teacher of English in a 10^th standard school in Delhi. An immensely loved and respected character among her students. What separates her from other teachers is the personal care she takes of almost every student and the bonding she shares with them. She even plays with the students of lower classes during their Tiffin time. She gives tuitions to many students in almost a throw away price. All for the sake of engagement only. She stays in a Ladies PG in Moti Nagar of Delhi. Moring 9 to 4 is her school timings and after completing her tuitions she returns to the PG about 9:00 P.M, prepares her food and then tries to sleep, that's her life today.

She hardly sleeps; many a time her neighbours have spotted her fallen asleep sitting on the arm chair on the balcony of her PG. She has stopped questioning her fate and even God himself. She has forgotten she was the pampered Veerakari of her family. The life she dreamt of was thrashed 7 months ago when she made the biggest mistake of her life, she spoke out her heart. Even in her worst nightmare she couldn't have thought the price of telling the truth, the price of expressing your true feeling to someone you love could be that big, no matter how true or correct she was.

It is a full moon today; she was sitting on that arm chair in the balcony and looking at the moon. She don't know why, but today whenever she has got some free time, even for 5 minutes, she felt restless, a feeling of fear was engrossing her, she was feeling something is going to happen, she can no longer expect anything good happening in her life, so she was tensed, and was wondering what more bad can happen to her. It's almost midnight now, the cool breeze was reminding her of her home, but slowly it got stronger and amidst that gusty wind she could clearly hear a very familiar voice "Veera, main tenu bohot pyaar karta hoon". She jumped up from the chair and looked around, she could see no one, she had just got her breath back again she heard the same voice "Veera, main tenu bohot pyaar karta hoon"

She couldn't bear it any more. She covered her ears with her palms, she had started to get sweat, her entire body was shivering, and she ran into the room and jumped to her bed and covered her face with her pillow.

Off late this has been happening to her frequently, she hears this voice whenever she is alone, a voice that was like heartbeats to her, a voice that haunts her today, a voice that tends to squeeze the last bits of life that is remaining in her body today. That's how her nights are today. Every second seemed like an hour to her and once more her bed and her pillow became wet as she kept waiting for the morning...

Next Day- 1:00P.M. The Delhi Mall: the biggest mall in New Delhi, a young couple were doing their shopping. Baldev entered the shop and handed the list Bansuri had given him to another salesgirl, who asked him to wait. He was looking around the shop when he spotted that couple and immediately screamed out "Shivaniii". He ran up to them and holds the girl by her shoulders

"rab sa sukar hain Shivani...tum mil gaye" everyone was stunned by that, the young man pulled him away from her

"Hey, what is this?...yeh koye tarika hain kisi lady se bat karne ki"

"Maaf karna ji, galti ho gayee. Weh meri boti...mera matlab meri patni ke dost hain...bohot dino ke baad inhe dekha...to..." he tried to move closer to her, but the man pulled him back.

"Shivani...do you know him..." the man asked

"No, I don't...koun hain aap?" the man got very angry he was about to slap him when Shivani stopped him.

"Dipak, nooo, please don't make a scene, let me handle this. Koun hain aap, keya main aap ko janti hoon?"

"Shivani...main Baldev...Baldev Singh...Preetampura ka Baldev..."

"Baldev...Preetampura...kaya hain yeh sab"

"Tum bhool gaye...tum, payal, jyoti aur ankur sab preetampura aye they...tumare dost Veera ke gharr...meri behen Gunjan to yaad hain na tumhe...". She was shocked a little and even Dipak also noticed that and calmed down. "Yaad aya ...Veera...tumhari college ka friend...are usbar to tum sab ne milkar..." his word were cut short

"Dekhiye...mera naam Shivani zaroor hain, par mujhe nahi pata aap mera naam kaise jante hain, aur konsi Veera ka baat kar rahe hain...Please leave us alone...aur aap bhi apne raste chale jaiyee".

"Main haar gayee Baldev...mera pyaar haar gaya...socha tha is ek mahine main aapni galti ko sudhar lungi...aapne baaki ristoh ko sambhal ne main, main itna ulajh gayi thi ke kabi is baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi hua, ke tera -mera rista bhi utna hi ehem hain jitney ke mere baaki ristey. Kabhi tujhe woh pyaar, woh importance nahi de payi jo tera haq tha, kabhi tujh par who bharosa nahi kar payee jiske tu layak tha. Hamesha tu aapna sab kuch bhoola kar sirf mere naal rehna chahta tha, aur main tujhe intezaar karati rahi...jab ehsaas huwa to din raat ehi kaushish karti rahi ke tujhe who sab kuch doon jo tera haq hain...lekin sayad bohot der ho chuki thi...aaj jab main apna sab kuch bhoola kar sirf tere naal rehna chahti hoon, tu mujh se door jana chahta hain...socha tha tere gussey ke piche chupa huwa tere pyaar ko phir se pa loongi, who zindagi jiyoongi, jisa sapna hum dono neh sath mil kar dekha tha, jiske liye itna kuch saha tune...lekin kismat ko sayad yeh manzoor na thi...jitni bhi main kausis karti jayee, har baari kuch na kuch ulta hota jaya...aur tu mujh se aur door jata raha...leh Baldev...aaj ek mahina poora huwa...mainey is divorce paper par sign kar di hain...".

His hands were shivering while taking that...he has been fighting with his inner self for a month now. She was right, every time he wanted to trust her, embrace her something happened that pull him away from her. Poor souls, they never knew it was not fate; it was someone who never wanted them to be together and happy. He never knew when his anger had turned him into a devil. His soul was inching to embrace her, his heart was saying don't let her go, she is your soul, you will never manage to live without her, but something was instigating him to be rigid and stick to his decision.

"Baas ek akhri ehsaan kar de mujh par Baldev...humara rista rahe yeha na rahe ...koye bhi kuri is mangal sutra ko apne aap nahi utar sakti...apne maanj ka sindoor nahi mita sakti...inhe mita de "

His legs were shaking, his hands were shivering, his vision became blurred because of tears, he felt like dropping on the floor any second...but some unknown force took his hands to her, as he untied the mangal sutra from her neck and wiped off the sindoor from her forehead...

"Veeeraaa"... he srecamed...

"praji...the truck driver was shocked...he first controlled the truck and then stopped at one side of the road...Praji...ki hoya ...aap thik ho na...yeh...yeh paani...pilo praji"

He took some water and then splashed his face with some water...he got his breath back slowly.

"main thik hoon...aap chalate raho"

"Baldeeev" she screamed and sat up on his bed, she was struggling for breath, her entire body was shivering...a lady came running in..."veera keya huwa?...tum...yeh paani pilo Veera..." she drunk some water and slowly got her breath back

"keya huwa Veera...koyee bura sapna dekh keya...aaj tumne darwaza bhi band nahi kiya...aachanak tumare chikne ki awaz aye toh main dowra chala ayaa...keya huwa...koyee bura sapna dekha tumne...dhire dhire so jao...sab thik ho jayega...she affectionately moved her fingers through her hairs...Veera laid down on the bed...

Perhaps that lady was right...one of the biggest truth of their lives is their biggest nightmare today. Neither Veera nor Baldev knew they had the same nightmare that night and screamed at the same time taking each other's name. Their souls were still together, but their bodies were not, the name of each other was still on their lips, but their voice was not audible to each other.

Its very sad to see Veeba like this. Their love for each other couldn't get them along together, instead separated them. I actually thought that they both might bump onto each other just for a moment though.

Good going, the pain of separation is depicted nicely, continue with the next update soon.