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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Aur kitna parakhega ye waqt inn dono ko! Hush! Milke bhi hum na mile,tumse naa jane kyu... Great update jeet! After zaina's ff,this is the 2nd ff in which i fell truely in love. Keep it up!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 7 was great.
Ranvi is still sn idiot
poor balwant and baggi are such good friends-love them.

loved the was veera was being so nosey and people wondered why she kept asking such questions.

Looking forward to the next bit.
split ur time up between ur assignment and writing fanfics. Dont adandon this for a long time lol.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ufff... ab mila b do na dno ko... superb update loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
So good!!!! Read all parts all together!! The way Gunjan decribed Ranvi in one part was awesome and the way Baldev responded to Ranvi calling him haywan was brilliant!! 👏 You're a wonderful writer.. Plz update soon and plz pm if possible 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Friends sorry for this late update. Here is part-8

Part-8

That night...Gunjan's room

G: keya baat hain Veerji...aap bohot paresaan lag rahe ho...

B: Gunjan...mainu lagta hain...jaise aaj...main Veera se mila tha...

G: keya matlab...

B: aaj ek auraat mere jeep se takrate takrate baachi...uski awaaz...bilkool Veera jaisy thi...

G: Awaz se keye hota hain Veerji...uski sakal to dekhi hogi aap ne...

B: Nahi...who burkhe main thi...

G: Who burhtey wali aurat...

B: keya matlab...

G: Aare Veerji who toh Papaji se bhi mili thi...hai rabba...main abhi aarti ke thaal lati hoon aur aap ka nazar utar ti hoon...Veerji aap nahi jaante in burkhewali aurato ko kala jadoo aate hain...tabhi aap ko uski awaz Veera jaisy laagi...hai rabba who toh Papaji ke saath chal kar aa rahi thi...kahi usne...Papaji par bhi koyee jadoo na kar diya ho...she started to get up from the bed...

B: Choop chaap leti rahe...samjhi...aur yeh keya bakwas kiye ja rahi hain tu...yeh kala jadoo...wadoo kuch nahi hota...he paused for a while...Gunjan ek minute...Who aurat Papaji se mili thi...kaha?

G: Papaji keh rahe they ke bagalwale pind se humare pind main Poly House dekne aayi thi...

B: keay...Poly house!...he paused for a while...memories of the moments he spent there with Veera kept coming back to his mind...

G: Dekha...Veerji...aap kaisey baheke bahke se ho gaye ho...yeh zaroor us...

B: Ek pal ke liye choop karegi keya... Who aurat Poly House dekne gayi thi...Papaji se mili thi...aur Jaggi aur Billa neh mainu bataya ke mere company ka office main koyi burkhewali aurat aayi thi...aur mujhe dhoond rahi thi...usne toh yeh bhi pooncha ke main bimaar hoon ki...

G: Hai rabba...veerji main keh rahi hoon uski nazar humare pariwar par...khas kar ke aap par hain...

B: Ab tu maar khayegi Gunjan...ek minute ke liye choop nahi reh sakti...thora thande dimaag se soch..jo aurat Poly House gayee thi...aur Papaji se mili thi...agar wohi aurat jaggi aur Billa se bhi mili thi aur agar...wohi aurat mere jeep se takrayee thi...toh who...Veera ke illawah aur kaun ho sakti hain...mainey use bus stop pe chora...lekin who kaha ke bus peh chari yeh mainey nahi dekha..

G: Veerji... agar Veera aayi hoti toh keya hum saab se nahi milti? Mainey bhi toh use dekha...agar who Veera hoti to mainu is haal me dekh kar keya khoos nahi hoti? Yeh uska pind hain...uska ghar hain use burtha pahen ne ki keya zaroorat...main keh rahi hoon Veerji...yeh sab...

B: Choop kar...Gunjan made a face and stopped...they both kept mum for a while...chaad aeh saab...sayad who koyee aur hi thi...tu so ja...aur soon tere Veerji bilkool thik hain...koye jagoo wadoo nahi chara hain us par...yeh sab ke sochte maat rehna...tere liye sahi nahi hain...thik hain na...main chalta hoon...

Veera's room

She had kept that litte plant on the table and was looking at it...

V: "Sayad log saach kehte hain...pyaar kabhi nahi marta...is pudehy ko mainey aur Baldev ne ek saath lagaya tha...humamare zindegi main itna kuch ho gaya, hum alag ho gaye...lekin Beldev ke liye mera pyaar nahi mara...aur yeh pudha bhi ...she moved out to the balcony and looked to the sky and kept recalling what had happened through out the day...Balwant taugi ne kaha ke Baldev ek zinda laash baan chukka hain...har pal khood ko saaza deta hain...kiun...keya who khood ko dosti manta hain jo huwa uske liye...Jaggi aur Billa dua karte hain ke main wapas ajaoon...toh keya Baldev bhi yehi chahta hain...aur Baldev ne kaha..meri awaz uske patni ke jaisy hain...to keya who aaj bhi mujhe aapne patni manta hain...aaj bhi mujhse pyaar karta hain...kiun uske choone se aaj bhi mainu itna sokoon mila...jaise main phir se jee uthi hoon...

Baldev's room

He was standing in the balcony...he can't remember when was the last time he stood in that balcony. He looked up to the sky...

B: "kon thi who...sirf uski awaz Veera ke jaisy thi...lekin kiun use choone se mainu itna sakoon mila..aisa kiun laga jaise mainu meri saase wapas mil gaye...who ankhey...kiun un ankhon main ansoo they? Kiun un ankhoon main dekhne se mere ankhoon main bhi ansoo aa gaye...kiun aisa laga who ankhee mainu hi dhoond rahi thi...kiun aisa laga ke un ankhoon main mere liye pyaar aur dard dono hi hain...kaha hain tu Veera...ek baar...baas ek bar samne aja...he allowed himself a sarcastic smile...keya pata main tuhje yaad bhi hoon ya nahi...Shivani ne toh kabhi tujh se sahi se mila bhi nahi...keya pata tu sayad aapne guzre huwe kaal ko piche chor kea age baar chuki hogi...mere liye na sahi...aapne Veerji ke liye hi ek baar wapas aaja...baas ek akhri baar tujhe apne in ankhoon se dekh loon...waise bhi tere bina ek Zinda laas ban chukka hoon...bas ek bari dekh loon tuhje phir maut bhi aajaye to bhi koyee ghum nahi...yaad hain tenu..tu har baat peh rabji ko yaad karti thi aur main hasa karta tha...aaj main tere us rabji se dua mangta hoon baas ek baar tuz se mila de...

Baldev left for Delhi the next Saturday night. From early morning, the next day...he was waiting in the mall...around 4 p.m. he noticed Veera entering the mall. He kept following her from a distance. She indeed came there to take the grossery for the entire month. She kept collecting whatever she needed and Baldev kept a close eye on her from a distance. When she was finally done, she was leaving when she heard a familier voice...

B: "kuch madat kar doon teri..."

She stopped...the bags fell from her hand and sub consciously she uttered..Baldeeev...she then turned around and saw him standing there. She ran upto him and hugged him tightly and Baldev hugged her back...after a while...

B: Ab kiun gale par rahi hain...chalija mainu chor kar...Phir chahe main jeeteji mar kiun na jaoon ...tenu ki fark parta hain...

V: Tu hi to mere pyaar nu parakh na chahta tha na. Tenu hi talak chahiye thi...she tired to break the hug, baldev tightened his grip...

B: jaise ke tenu pata nahi...kitna bara khoteeya hoon main...baas ek bari pichey moorkar to dekhi hoti...kaise tera Baldev ghutne tek kar zamin pe betha huwa tha ...

V: Tu bhi toh mainu rok sakta tha...baas ek baari gale laga leta mainu...us ek pal main, main apni pooree zindagi jee leti...Jab pal pal tere saath reh kar bhi tere nafrat ko meeta na saaki tab piche moor kar aur keya dekhti...kiun sab kooch aise khatam hogaya Baldev...

B: Kuch khatam nahi huwa...

V: Ab toh sayad court ka final verdict bhi aa chuki hogi...

They broke the hug...Baldev took out pieces of a torned stamp paper and gave it to Veera...

B: "Iski baat kar rahi hain na tu"...she was surprised ...

V: yeh...

B: tu sayad ghar se nikli bhi nahi thi...maine ise phar diya...tere jaane ke kuch hi der baad tujhe dhoond ne nilka tha main...Poly House, Machaan, Mandir, Chaupal har jagah dhoonda tujhe...par tu kahi nahi mili...utni raat ko tu kaha gayee thi...

V: Puraane godown pe baithy rahi...ehi sochti rahi ab mainu keya karna chahiye..Veerji ke paas wapas nahi ja sakti thi...sab ko ehi lagta who log sahi they aur humara pyaar jhuta...kaafi soch ne ke baad maine tai kiya ke main Delhi chali jati hoon... sab se door ...wahan koyi job dhoond loongi...

B: Tere gaane ke baad...dhire dhire sacchayee mere samne aane lagi...pata chal ne laga kis tarh beeji neh humare beech darar paida kiya tha...main khood se nafrat karne laga...ghar chor ke purane tabele main rahne laga...tujhe dhoond ne ki himmat bhi na juta paya...

V: Mainu pata tha sab log mujhe dhoondenge...is liye maine...apne mobile ka SIM card nikal ke fake diya...mere college ke ek Ma'am se mili...unhone mujhe ek school peh bheja jaha English ke teacher ki zarurat thi...mera selection ho gaya...aur main eyhaan Delhi meh rahne laagi...

B: main to jeena hi chor diya tha...aapna karowar bhi band karne wala tha..lekin Papaji aur Jagii-billa neh kaha who log sab sambhal lengey...dheere dheere Gunjan aur papaji ne mainu samjahya khood ko saza dene se tu wapas nahi aa jayegi...agar tujhe wapas pana hain toh hummeh tujhe dhoond na hoga... lekin smaj main nahi aa raha tha tujhe dhoondo bhi toh kaha dhoondo...

V: Mere school ke student neh mujhe sambha liya ...un bachoo ke saath din to kat jaati thi...lekin ek bhi raat nahi gaye jab maine tujhe yaad kar ke roya na ho...woh pal jo humneh sath juzare they..unki yad satati rahi...kit ne raat mainey apne PG ke balcony main beth kar bitaya hain...ek ajeeb sa dard mainu sone bhi nahi deti thi...dil to chahta tha tere paas wapas gaunoo lekin kis haq se jati...humara rista toot chukka tha...

B: Humara rista na kabhi toota aur nahi kabhi tootega...main tujhe lene aya hoon Veera...

V: lene aya hoon matlab...tujhe pata tha main eeha miloongi...

B: Haan pata tha...

V: kaise?

B: Kabhi foor sat main bataunga...ab wapas chal...ab aur raha nahi jata...aur sab koye tarap raha hain sirf ek bar tujhe dekhne ke liye...

V: abhi main kaise wapas ja sakti hoon...mere school main ek mahine ka notice dena parega resign karne se pehle...phir jin bachoo ko main tution deti hoon unke liye bhi koye aur tutor ka intezaam karna hoga...

B: main kuch nahi janta...tu abhi mere saath wapas chalegi...

V: Please Baldev...samjh ne ki kousis kar...eh un bachoo ke carrier ka sawal hain...jaha 6 mahine door rahe hain...waha ek mahina aur sahi...samjh le yeh humare pyaar ka intehaan hain..

B: Pata nahi yeh intehaan kab khatam hoga...tu 1-2 din ka chutti to le sakti hain na...tere school main baat kar...1-2 din ke liye chal phir main khood tujhe leke aunga...

Veera called the principal of her school. Mrs Ahuja gladly sanctioned her leave for 1 week.She also informed the Manager of her PG,that she is going out of station for a week. Baldev called Gunjan and asked her to inform Balwant about Veera returning with him.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Was waiting for the nxt part. As usual,finally veeba met. Temporary hogaya permanent ko ab 1 mnth aur!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update!
Finally,VeeBa met!Loved their conversation!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yayyy!!!! VeeBa met and confessed feelings thanks for pm.. Can't wait for next part!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for the late update friends.Here is part-9.

Part-9

Baldev and Veera returned to Preetampura. All the way Veera kept her head resting on Baldev's shoulder and hold his arm. Baldev drove his jeep slower than usual. On the way the stopped in dhaba and had food. They both fed each other and thanked God for bringing back happiness to their lives. Baldev stopped the jeep near the machaan. Veera was surprised and also happy, she felt Baldev wanted to relive those wonderful moments they spend their together. She got down from the jeep and ran towards the machhan, in no time she climbed the ladder and stood on the machaan. Baldev too was very happy. But he didn't follow her, he stood near the Jeep. Veera put her hand forward from the top of the machhan...Baldev slowly walked up to her and then climbed the ladder holding her hands. Veera could feel some restlessness in him...

V: Ki hoya Baldev...tu paresaan lag raha hain...he could hardly answer...mainu pata hain tu ehi soch raha hain na itne dion ke baad sab mainu dhenge to kaise react karenge...par tu pareshaan maat ho..mainu pata hain sab ehi chahte they ke main wapsa aa jauoon...

B: Nahi...Veera baat who nahi hain...sab log baas ek baar thuje dhekne ke liye taras rahe hain...who toh..

V: Toh keya tu yeh soch kar paresaan ho raha hain ke saab ehi poochenge ke hum ne talak kiun liya?..toh isme pareshaani wali keya gaal hain? Jab tune kabhi us divorce paper ko court main submit hi nahi kiya to iska matlab humara talak bhi nahi huwa...hum do no aaj bhi pati-patni hain...

B: Yeh baat aaj tak sirf mainu pata thi...aur aaj tujhe pata chala...tere gharwale, saare pind wale ehi jante hain ke humara talak ho chukka hain aur mainey thuje majboor kiya tha is ke liye...aur main bhi is baat se inkaar toh nahi kar sakta...ke main neh hi tujhe majhboor kiya tha...

V: Lekin jo kaam huwa hi nahi uske liye...tuje kiun dosh denge...main hoon na tere saath...

B: Baat sirf hum dono ki nahi hain Veera...humarare pariwaar wale...yeh toh punchenge na...ke hum neh aisa kiun kiya...keya kahenge hum...

V: Baas itna hi kahenge ke jo kabhi huwa hi nahi usko leke kiun itna sochna...pati-patni ke beech ke haar baat toh sab ke janne ke liye nahi hoti na...

B: Paresaani who nahi hain Veera...Paresaani kuch aur hi hain...

V: tu eh soch raha hain na, ke teri Beeji ka keya reaction hoga...

B: Nahi...Veera main yeh kabhi nahi bhool pauoonga ke joh bhi huwa usme unki saajish bhi maujood thi...jab se baat pata chali...maine kabhi unse baat tak nahi ki...

V: Keya...tu apne Beeji se baat nahi karta...Baldev who maa hain teri...

B: Yeh kaisy maa hain...jo khood apne bte ka ghar ujjar de...aur toh aur unhe is baat ka kabhi koye pastwa bhi nahi huwa...Veera Ratan chachi toh teri sauteli maa hain lekin unhone bhi kabhi...aisa kcuh nahi kiya...

V: Tu pareshaan maat ho Baldev...mainu to adat par chuki thi...bachpan se tere beeji ki jaali-katti sunti aye hoon main...jab tujhe pyaar huwa tab bhi yeh pata thi...ke mainu zamin asmaan ek karni hogi...unke dil jeetne ke liye...is liye who jo kahti main maan leti thi...yeh bhi pata tha keh who keya chahti hain, key kar rahi hain, kiun kar rahi hain...tab bhi...main is inthaan ke liye taiyaar thi...tu paresaan maat ho...saas bahu main yeh sab chata hain...lekin tu mainu ek gaal daas...jab tujhe yeh pata tha ke humara divorce nahi huwa toh kiun tu is ilzaam ko apne saar pe liye ghoom raha tha...

B: Hum toh aise hi baadnaam hain...hummeh badnaami ka keya darr...aur tub hi toh nahi thi...mainu begunah sabit karne keliye...

They shared an eye lock and then hugged each other...

B: Soon...Papaji aur Gunjan tere ghar gaye huwe hain...main tenu aas paas chor deta hoon...sab se mil kar ...unke saath waps aa jana...main apne office main rahoonga...sab ek saath ghar challenge...

V: Matlab...tu nahi chalega... Mere naal...Baldev shaked his head in disagreement...Baldev main jaanti hoon tu kiun nahi aana chahta hain mere ghar...lekin saab ki tarah aab Veerji ko bhi sachhyee ka samna karna hoga...woh is tarah galat phaime main jee nahi sakte...Baldev mai jaanti hoon who tuhe haiwaan samajh te hain...

B: tainu kaise pata who mainu haiwaan kehta hain...

V: kabhi fursaat main batungi...aab chal sab inezaar kar rahe honge...

B: EK baar phir soch ley Veera...In 6 mahinoh main main kabhi ter ghar ke cowkhat taq nahi gaya...tere Veer ka sakal taq nahi dekha...humesa usne is baat ka faida uthaya hain ke who tere Veer hain aur Gunjan ke pati...lekin ab uar bardast nahi hota...

V: Veerji ko bhi saach ka samna karna hoga Baldev...unhe bhi yeh samajh na hoga ke unke galat soch, unki be bajah nafrat ka faal saab ne bhugta hain...tu chaal mere saath...

Although Baldev was not entirely convinced...but he decided to go with her...

SS House

R: Balwant tauji...aaj mainu aap se bohot hi zaroori baat karni hain...

B: Haan puttar...daas na ki gaal hain...

R: Tauji main aab tak intna bara toh nahi huwa hoon ke aap ko kuch samjha sakoon...lekin aap to jante hain na...insaan ki zindegi main kuch riste aisey hote hain jo hum choonte nahi...hummeh kabool karna parta hain...jaise ke Maa-Baap, Beta-Bati, Bhai-Bahen...tauji main pure tarah se ek baap ka dard sayad nahi samjh sakta...lekin Veera ko maineh aapne beti ki tarah pala hain...aur uske Zindegi main jo huwa uske baad main nahi chahta...aab Baldev ka saya bhi uspar pareh...

B: Yeh tu keya keh raha hain Ranvee...Veera aur Baldev ek dhuje ke bina ji nahi payenge...

R: Agar aisa hota toh Baldev kabhi use talak dene peh majhboor nahi karta...aur jo rista toot chukka hain usko..aggey barah ne ka koyee faida nahi hain...

B: Par puttar ek baar dono se baat toh kar na hoga...mainu yehkin hain kocch aisy baat hogi jo hum main se koyee nahi janta...

R: Tauji...mainu kooch nahi janna hain...maineh aap so hamesha pita samman mana hain ...lekin aap neh bhi ek bari mujhe nahi bataya ke Veera ka pata chal chukka hain...is haal main Gunjan ko Delhi leke gaye...kiun tauji...

B: Puttar Bladev ko apne galti ka ehsaas hain...woh pal pal khood ko saza deta gaya...aur pati hain who Veera ka...

R: Pati hain nahi tauji ...tha...lekin main toh aap ka damad hoon...aur Veera meri bahen...aap ne aisa kiun kiya tauji...bohot bari chot pauchaiyee aap ne mujhe...aap log kiun is baat ko smajh nahi pa rahe hain ke Veera ki fiqr mainu Baldev se kaafi jayadah hain...

Balwant was struggling for words...

G: Toh bata na Ranvee Veera ko dhundne ke liye key kiya tune...

R: Gunjan tu andarja...mainu tujhse koye baat nahi karni hain...

G: Kisi ki taraf ungli uthane se pehle yeh soch lena chahiye ke tin unhliyaan apne taraf hoti hain...bata na keya kiya tune?

R: kaha na main neh...mainu tujh se koyee baat nahi karni hain...yeh sila diya tune mere bharose ka...

G: Mianu koyee pastawa nahi hain, nahi kabhi hogi...kiun ke Veera Sirf meri Nanad, yah Bhabhi hi nahi, mere Bachpan ki saheli bhi hain...maine job hi kiya apne saheli ke liye kiya...

R: Apne pati ke bharose ka galat faidya uthana...wah...

G: Sachayee ka samna karna sikh Ranvee...kabtak bahta rahega?

R: Gunjaaan...he screamed out...

B: Gunjan choop hoga puttar...[Ratan and Chaji came running in]

C: Chota chaand keya huwa...Gunjan key huwa puttar...

G: Kooch nahi Chaiji...main baas Ranvee ko aina dikha rahi thi...Jaab dusto ki taraf ungli uthayega na toh...sunne ki himmat bhi rakha kar...bohot bardaast kar liya hum sab neh...sirf aur sirf tere galat soch aur teri nafrta ke karan lekin...aab aur nahi...

R: Agar tune is baar Baldev ka saath diya Gunjan toh...

G: Toh key karega...haan keya karega tu...chor dega mainu...talak de dega?

Ratan: Gunjan...choop kar...keya anap sanap bole ja rahi hain...

G: Maaf karna beeji...lekin yeh kaam bohot pehle hi aap ko yah Chaiji ko karna chaiye tha...isse keya lagta hain yeh kuch bhi karta rahega aur hum saab bardast karte rehenge...nahi Ranvee...is galat faimy main maat rahena...aur mainu bebas yah besahara sochne ka galti bhi maat karna...mere papaji aur mere Veerji aaj bhi zinda hain...agar tune mere Veerji aur Veera ke beech ane ki koushish ki toh is baar toh tujhe main adalat taq le jaungi...phir joy eh ter chera hain na pind da achha puttar Ranvijay Sampooran Sing uska keya hoga tu dekh lena...

R: Tu apne pati ke khilaaf jayegi...apne us haiwaan Veer ke liye...

G: Haan jaungi...pati agar galt hoga toh zaroor jaungi...aur rab ka sukr kar ke mere Veerji ki haiwaniyaat aaj taq tu ne dekhi nahi...who chahe to kisibhi waqt tujhe keere ki tara marror sakte hain...lekin ristoon ke lihaaza karn aata hain unhe...[Veera entered the house]...

V: Veerji...

R: Veera...{he hugged her} tu aa gaye... Veera...kitthey chali gayee thi...apne Veerji par bhi bharosa nahi raha tujeh...he noticed Baldev behind her...wohi peh ruk jaa...is ghar ke chukhat ko bhi paar maat karna...

V: phir toh mainu...bhi jana parega Veerji...gis ghar ke chaukhat ko paar karne ki izzazat mere pati ko nahi hain...unha main kaise aa sakti hoon...

...to be continued..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read both parts together...nice update
sabse pehle toh bahut khushi hui ki Veeba mil gaye 🤗
Dono ke dil main kitni saari baatein thi, gile-shikwe the, sab dur ho gaye...par aur ek mahine ki doori...😭...koi nahin yeh pal bhi bas guzar jayega.

Veera finally apne Baldev ke saath kuch hi dino ke liye sahi Pind toh waapas lauti...

Ab bas iss Ranvi ko thodi akkal aa jaye, Gunjan ne toh usse acha sunaya...ab Veera ki baari...go for it and iss baar apne pati ka saath de Veerakadi...

Ranvi...apne dimaag ke kachre ko saaf karo aur Ballu ko pehchaano, aisa pyar karne walan pati milna mushkil hi nahin, namumkin hain teri Veerakadi ke liye...

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