FF : Intehaan : The test of love part 16(Final part) updated - Page 6

Srry fr late cmnt. Baldev ran away at the end :-D finally,veeba meet. Veera really needs time to make things right.

Super cute update.
Baldev is adorable, love his flirting and then running scared when she calls his bluff


Ps. When he is un zipping her salwar and she pretends to lift up her salwar do you actually mean kameez ( the top) because salwar is the trousers bit.

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Super cute update.
Baldev is adorable, love his flirting and then running scared when she calls his bluff


Ps. When he is un zipping her salwar and she pretends to lift up her salwar do you actually mean kameez ( the top) because salwar is the trousers bit.

Very nice update.. The last bit was so funny 😆 😆 😆

Friends here is part-12

Part-12

Veera and Baldev were returning form the Gurdwara when the met Ratan on the way...Veera ran up to her and hugged her...

R: Chad mainu...keya lagti hoon main teri...Sauteli Maa hoon na...is liye ek baari bhi socha nahi hoga tune ...hummeh chor ke jaane se pehle...

V: Beeji...[she hold her ears...] ...please mainu maaf kardo...Beeji...yeh 6 mahine...pal pal tarpi hoon main...baas eh baari aap sabki sakal dekn ne ke liye...lekin beeji...kon sa muh lekar aati aap ke pass...keya kehti...

Baldev walked up to them...and touched Ratan's feets...She put her hand on his head

B: Aaccha Veera main office ja raha hoon...

R: Rook Baldev...dekh puttar...juzre waqt main piche ja kar koye kooch nahi...badal sakta...lekin keya tu hummeh kabhi maaf nahi karega...

B: aisy koye baat nahi Chachiji...aab toh Veera wapas aagayi hain...aab mainu kisi se koyi sikayat nahi...par chachiji...kuch batain main sayad kabhi bhi bhoola nahi paunga...

R: Ek baat kahoon puttar...waqt se bara kaoyee marham nahi hota...waqt ke saath saath tere zakm bhi bhar jayenge...

B: Chachiji...mere taraf se Veera ko na kabhi koyee rok tok thi...na kabhi hogi...aur aap bhi dil peh koyi bojh maat rakhna...main thik hoon.

R: Baldev...main janti hoon puttar...beh gunah hokar bhi...tune bohot kuch saha hain...

B: Main chalta hoon Chachiji...kooch batain daabi rahe...ehi aacha hain...

R: Main tere ghar hi aa rahi thi...tere Papaji ko niwata dene...jin halation main tum dono ki shaadi huwi thi...koye rasam puri nahi ho payi thi...

B: Mainu maaf karna chcachiji...papaji, Beeji aur Veera sab aajayenge...

R: Baldev ...meri baat soon puttar...

B: sastiya-kaal chachiji...[he left...Ratan kept looking at him]

V: Beeji...apne khood hi kaha waqt se bari koyee marham nahi...hummeh Baldev ko thora waqt dena hoga...aur niwta den eke liye to saari zindagi pari hain...aap chalo mere saath, mainu chaiji aur Gunjan bhabi se milna hain...

Veera reached SS house and saw chiji was chopping Vegetables...

V: mooti chajiii...she ran up to her and hugged her...

C: chadd mainu...bohot bari ho gayee hain na tu chichri...

V: chaiji...please mainu maaf kardo...mainu aur kuch sujhi nahi thi...

C: pata nahi hummeh bhi yeh baat kiun nahi sujhi ke tu Delhi main ho sakti hain...par keya karti thi wahan kaha rehti thi...

V: wahan ek school main parati hoon chaiji...dher saare bachoo ko...

C: parati hoon matlab?...tu wapas gana chahti hain ki?

V: nahi chiji...who key hain ki istifa dene se pehle mainu ek mahine ka notice deni paregi...to bass ek mahine ke liye wapas jauoongi...phir hamesha ke liye aab sab ke pass...

C: Ratan puttar ki kaha Balwant ne who sab ayenge na...phir toh hummeh taiwaari bhi karni hogi...aakhir pehli baar humara Daama ghar aa raha hain...

R: nahi chaiji...main unke ghar tak jaa nahi payee...raste main Veera aur Baldev mil gaye...Baldev neh mana kar diya chaiji...

V: Beeji, Chaiji...aap log parsaan mat hoyeh...sab thik ho jayega...

G: Veeeraaa

V: Gunjan bhabi...she almost ran up to her, but realized she is pregnant ...she gently hugged her...

G: kaisi lagi mere bandowast...hai rabba...6 mahine ke baad...tum se mile hum...aur hum se mile tum...

V: bhabi...aap bhi na...waise bhabi...aap to bari bahadoor aur bari tez nikli...mere purane dairy se Shivani ka pata nikala...phir uske saath mil kar...

G: kiun na karoon...tu meri nanad yah bhabi hi nahi...meri bachpan ki saheli hain...

Veera bend down and kissed Gunjan's womb

V: oye...main teri buwa hoon...kab ayega tu...jaldi aaja...

G: Doctor neh to aagle mahine ke 10 tarikh ko date diya hain...

V: batao bhabi...aap ko key chahiye...beta yah beti...Veerji ko to pakka beti hi chahiye hogi...

G: mainu toh beta chaiye...

V: bhabi...Veerji kitthey hain...keya abhi bhi naraz hain mujh se...

G: Bazar gaya hain...tu parsaan na ho...waqt ke saath saath sab thik ho jayega...

V: Aacha bhabi main chalti hoon...

G: baith...abhi toh aye hain tu...

V: nahi bhabi...ek toh main 9 baaje neend se uthi...uske baad Gurdwara gayee aur phir inhaan agyee...ghar ke saare kaam subha se aapki beeji hi sambhal rahi hain...main baad main kabhi auoongi.

G: changa...

That afternoon...Baldev's room

B: tainu bohot bura laga hoga na...maineh tere garhwalon ka niwata swikar nahi kiya...dekh Veera itne dino ke baad sab tujhe dekh rahe hain...sab khoos hain...main nahi chahta meri wajah se koyi bhi aisa haal paida ho...jisse yeh khoosi ka mahol bigar jaye...

V: tu kiun khood ko dosi man raha hain...Baldev waqt ke saath saath sab thik ho jayega...lekin tere na jane ka matlab ehi hoga ke jaise tune koyee galti ki hain...

B: tu toh jaanti hain na...main teri beeji ka kitna izzat karta hoon...Veera hum dono neh mil kar unhe aur Nihaal Chcachu ko milane ki har kousis kit hi...lekin unnoh neh bhi...

V: Baldev ...main janti hoon un baton ko bhoolana tere liye asaan nahi hoga...lekin main yeh bhi janti hoon ke waqt ke saath saath tu unhe bhool jayega.

B: Aur tere Veer ka keya...humesha mujh par bharak ta rehta hain...dekh main sacche dil se keh raha hoon tu aur Papaji ga unhe accha lagega...

V: aaj nahi...jab main poori trah se wapsa aa jaoungi tab...

B: tere school main koyi dusra bandowast nahi ho sakta hain keya...tera jana zaroori hain...

V: process ko to complete karna parega na Baldev...aur ek mahine kit oh baat hain...hum dono phone peh baat karenge...aur agar bohot mann kiya toh main Friday evening bus pakar kea a juoongi...mere school main toh Saturday aur Sunday chootti rehti hain...

B: tu ek baar us madamji se baat karn na...wohi jinone tenu us school main bheja tha...keya pata unke nazar main koyi ho jo aaj ke aaj tere jagah peh join kar sake...tab toh ek samzota ho sakta hain na...

Veera put her arms around his neck...

V: toh keya abb tujh se ek din bhi nahi raha jayega mere bina...

B: tujhse raha jayega?

V: nahi...

B: toh phir...

V: thik hain main baat karti hoon...dekti hoon koyi rasta nikal ta hain ke nahi...

B: yeh huwi na baat...[he picked her up in his arms and kept spinning her, Veera got scared, she hold him tightly]

V: Baldev utar mainu...mainu chakkar aa rahe hain...[Baldev put her down on the bed...]

B: chal aaram karle thora...main office hoke atta hoon...

Awesome update jeet! I am glad that baldev didn't forgive the ss parivaar just like that, those ppl ought to feel dead guilty for what and all they put him through 👍🏼 update soon😳

As usual jeet! Veeba had become more stronger now. Don't melt veera for ranvi that easily,unless and until he understands his mistakes.

Loved the update.
Pleased baldev isnt forgiving them so easily but isnt stopping veera from meeting and greeting them and veera understands and isnt pressuring him to go to their house.

they are so cute, hope baldev drops her off in delhi.

friends here is part-13

Part-13

That evening Veera was cleaning up the kitchen after completing the cooking for their Dinner, when she heard...Beep..Beep...Beep...Beep...She picked up her mobile phone...

V: Hooon...Baldev ka message..."pooly house main aaja...jaldi...". Zaroor uske dimaag main kooch pak raha hoga...by God...Baldev ke harek surprise...kitne Cute hote hain...chalo dekhte hain...aaj kon sa surprise hain...[she met Balwant at the front yard of the house and informed him that she is going to the poly house]

When Veera reached the poly house she was simply jaw dropped...the place which looked like a dumping ground an week ago...had changed into almost a dreamland...along the walls many small plants were kept on a table, they were organized in a specific manner, one plant was followed a bunch of roses and then another plant followed it. The poly house was full of rosy fragnance...photos of Baldev and Veera were hanging form the cilling, the walls were covered by red and white ballons..at the centre of room there was a round shaped table, covered with a white table cloth, having a heart shape drawn on it through petals of red roses, a heart shaped candle was glowing on the centre of that table with VeeBa written underneeth it through petals of blue roses. Veera felt she has actually come to a dream land..she knew Baldev was near by, she noticed a paper stuck on one of the bunches of red roses...she picked up the paper and saw "khel khelegi keya?". She remembered she and Baldev used to play a game, when Baldev used to hide and she had to find him...if she will be going towards the right direction he will sa "changa" and if she will be going towards the wrong direction then he will say "phoos"...she turned around and started walking towards the poly house site...and she heard "changa"...she moved a bit forward and again heard "changa"...she then very smartly walked towards a cart and found Baldev there...

B: Oh teri!...tune toh bari jaldi aur bari aasani se dhoond liya mainu...

V: mere pyaare Baldeva...humesha toh ehi chupa karta tha tu... Kam-se kam aaj to kahi aur choopta...

B: maine socha sayad tu bhool gaye hogi...

V: kaise bhool sakti hoon Baldev...humare zindegi ke sabse khoobsurat pal they who...yaad hain...is poly house ke bahane...kam ka kam bhi hota aur kaise dhin bahr hum saath rehte they...maaze karte they...aur kisi ko saq bhi nahi hoti thi...

B: aur jis din Gunjan ne dekh liya...kitna ghabra gayi thi tu...

V: uk ek insaan ko suru se aaj taq humare riste par bahrosa raha hian...kitne utar charav dekhe hum ne lekin Gunjan bhabi...hamesha humare saath rahi...

B: aur ek insaan they Veera...humare pyaar ka eshsaas jinhe hum se pehle huwa tha...jo apne hath se humare pyarr so sajana chahte they...aur humare pyaar ki ...[he could not complete the sentence...tears over powered his voice...Veera touched his shoulders]...main toh unse maafi bhi na maang saka...

V: maineh humesha apne papji ka sirf photo dekha hain Baldev...aur veerji ne mere liye job hi kiya...uske baad bhi...us ek insaan neh mujhe pita ka saya diya tha...kehte they..."tu meri who beti hain jo rab ne mujhe nahi di"...she too broke down in tears...

B: aaj bhi khood ko is baat ke liye kosta hoon Veera kiun main kooch der pehle nahi pauch paya...agar pauch jata to sayad...aaj bhi Nihal Chachu...

V: Honi ko sayad ehi manzoor thi Baldev...[suddenly her eyes fell on the wall, she could notice a huge heart shape drawn on the wall...with their names written in the centre...she remembered they together had drawn it on that wall, some body has tried to erase their names from it, but it was still readable...what shocked her she could notice stains of blood on it]...Baldev yeh keya...dekh ...khoon ke dhabbey...

B: [Baldev got very nervous] who kuch nahi...tu chal na ...tune mainu dhoond liya...chal ander chalte hain...aur bhi surprise hain tere waste...[he started to move...Veera pulled him back and straightaway took his hand and put it on her head]..

V: ab bata Baldev...inhaan khoon ke dhabbe kaise aye...[Baldev tried to snatch his hand away...]

B: keya pagalpan hain Veera yeh...

V: mainu saach gan na hain Baldev...

B: toh aur keya karta main...koyeley se mitana chaha to miti nahi...paani se dhona chaha to dhooli nahi...soocha sayad mere khoon se dhak jaye...to bhi dhaki nahi...

V: Baldeeev...is had tak khood ko saza deta gaya tu...jabki galti meri thi...

B: Galti tere akele ki nahi thi Veera...meri bhi thi...kiun nahi dekh paya main tere pyaar ki sacchyi ko...uski gehriyee ko...[they shared an intense eyelock and hugged each other...suddenly they heard...]

...hum neh kooch nahi dekha...humne kooch nahi dekha...

J: who parjaiji...aap ke pati ne akele aap ke lie duwa nahi maangi...hum ne bhi maangi thi...

V: Jaggi-Billa...[she ran toward them...]

Bil: Parjaiji...aap to jaise hummeh bhool hi gayi...subha praji aye they prasadi lene...aap ne toh ek baar bhi hummeh yaad nahi kiya...

V: Nahi...Jaggi-Billa...yekin maan ...kaal subha main zaroor aati...woh ki hain na gahr me sabse mil ne main hi din nikal dayi...

J: Aacha wullu banaya aapne saab ko...burkha pahen ke...

Bil: [extending a small gift box to her]...yeh loh parjaiji...hum dono ke taraf se...aap ke aur praji ke liye...Who praji aap ko newta dena hoga keya...aa jao...[ Veera and Baldev took the gift together]

B: pata nahi kab maineh itne aache kaam kiye jo, mainu tum jaise dost mile...

J: woh praaji ab sarminda na karo...

Bil: Hum chalte hain praaji...kaal office main milte hain...sastiya kaal parjaiji...[they left...]

V: inhe dekh kar samajh main nahi aata...aakhir kon sa rista bara hota hain...khoon ke riste ya dosti ke riste...

B: saach main...pata nahi agar mera koyi bhai bhi hota toh bhi inke tarah bina swarth ke har halat main mera...saath deta bhi yah nahi...[they kept mum for a moment...]..oye ander chal...aur bhi surprise hain...

They sat on either side that table. Veera could see all her favourite dishes on the table...Baldev clapped and all the lights went off and a gentle music started to play...they could see each other's face only in that candle light. They kept feeding each other till they were full. Baldev carried Veera on his arms all the way till his home. They sat on the front yard of the house. Baldev was leaning on a piller and Veera was leaning on him. The silvery moon light made this world a deram land...

B: ek chand wohan hain...ek chand ehaan...pata nahi sab uski tareef kiun karte hain jab ki is chand ko mian chuu sakta hoon aapne har saans main mehsoos kar sakta hoon...veera allowed her head to rest on his shoulders and soon both of them fell asleep.

Aww! You reminded the old memories. Firstly,kudos to the creative part. The way u designed the polyhouse part,was really really really dreamy. The way baldev become nervous,abt the name on wall,and veera helped him to speak out. Yes these are true 'veeba' in which we all fell in love with, hopelessly. Jaggi billa part its a treat to watch and read abt them,seriously. Seriously,these both had done so much,even our blood sis or bro can't do. This is the fact,that friends are only our true relatives. These frndshp will always remain and idol for me now. Then veeba's hide n seek play, 'changa' 'phoos' was so cute baldeva. He thought she forget,bt veera remembered yaar,she remembered each n every memory. The whole scene flashed before my eyes. Then they fed each other,reminded the machaan date. He picked her in arms. Then at their house,'ek chaan vaha aur ek chaand yaha',most favourite one. Just awesome update. This was just 'deja vu' update. Awesome!