VeeBa One Shot- Eulogy of Love.. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Awesome yaar!!!beautifully written as always 👍🏼❤️ got a bit confused though and had to read it once again to clear it 😆 btw baldev shot himself first then shot veera?🤔 But if he shot himself first, that too if its in the head then shouldn't he be already dead? So how did he shoot her? 😕😆



Thank you so much Zainab😳 lol no, he didn't shoot her..actually it was my mistake that one last sentence got left out while copying from file to IF😆 she shot herself because she couldn't bear to live after him..i added that sentence now😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sophiewonzer14


Really well written and awesome👏 The eternal love of Veera and Baldev, together forever. :)❤️



Thanks Sophie🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Im speechless vibha... Just loved it to the core.. The way u explained veera's emotions just awesome ❤️ u t too gud in writing feelings, emotions ⭐️ keep writing more like this 😳



Thank you behna🤗😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

even im surpriesd 😆 ISS's Rocking IF too 😉



Yes!! we rock everywhere!!🥳 ISS FTW!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Jenvita_Neha.

That was beautifully written !❤️

I have the same doubt as zainab's😆

Keep writing more !



Thank u so much Jen🤗
by mistake i missed copying the last sentence to the IF reply box..lol but now i edited that😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lost of words,sorry,bt still try to comment. You expressed all true feelings of veera at the time of russian roulette. Yes veeba's love is like that only. Obviously its satisfying for veera that she'l get her end by beloved one(she truely loved him)bt her badluck follows here also. Sadistic writer great job! Thats why i m crazy for ur stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonmusk

Lost of words,sorry,bt still try to comment. You expressed all true feelings of veera at the time of russian roulette. Yes veeba's love is like that only. Obviously its satisfying for veera that she'l get her end by beloved one(she truely loved him)bt her badluck follows here also. Sadistic writer great job! Thats why i m crazy for ur stories.



Thanks Sheetal🤗😃 Saidistic writer..haha😆 mere liye bilkul correct naam hai😳 lolz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't have any problem with reading stories having tragic ending as long as you are the one writing those 😃 Coz you've portrayed all the emotions beautifully!Very well written!
Even death couldn't separate VeeBa ❤️😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Jammy...

Don't have any problem with reading stories having tragic ending as long as you are the one writing those 😃 Coz you've portrayed all the emotions beautifully!Very well written!

Even death couldn't separate VeeBa ❤️😭



so sweet! Thank you so much Jammy🤗 nothing can separate VeeBa coz they're a jodi made in heavens❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sadist...😡,i'm literally in tears,my current condition 😭,But u r an awesome writer,each and evry word of ur's falls right on my heart,very well done my dear 👍🏼

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