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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly, Vibha, you are an amazing writer 👏. I have read few of your other stories too.

Coming to the current one, you have brought out the true sense of Veera, Baldev and the feel of Veeba so nicely that it made me cry😭. It was a bit heartwrenching as the "Pyaar ki jodi" juda hui...💔

I read it thrice to understand though...laga koi Hollywood ki script thi 😆

Do write more and thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Man, everytime I read your writing ... words fail me 😕. I think the Oxford English Dictionary, needs to be updated so that I can praise your work, the way it deserves to be praised!
(Since I can't wait for the new version😆), let's go with OUTSTANDING! 👏👏
I'm always in awe whenever anyone writes from the Protagonist's Point-Of-View ... and when u did it, it took me into another world 😳.
This part really made me cringe ...
Worms, tiny prickly worms were crawling through my skin and blood, or so it seemed. The wrecker of my life or should I say our life, took absolute glee in touching me, running his hand on my face and upper arm.
The end was not surprising , I kinda felt that Veera will kill herself ... because that's the destiny of soul-mates; 1 cannot survive without the other.
Superb OS and needless to say - Spectacular writing 👍🏼!!
Thanks for the PM 🤗 .
PS -
(yes i looove writing stories with a sad/tragic ending😈)
I know 🤣 .
Edited by ...navina... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your the queen of writing sad and tragic fanfics and you write them so well, with so much emotion and empathy you can feel the pain of the characters. Luved it.

Would like to read a happy, passionate oneshot and see how well u write those ( lol) thats a hint for you to write another one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki36

Your the queen of writing sad and tragic fanfics and you write them so well, with so much emotion and empathy you can feel the pain of the characters. Luved it.

Would like to read a happy, passionate oneshot and see how well u write those ( lol) thats a hint for you to write another one.

was just getting bore and thought to read the comments on ur OS Vibha 😆 😛 and here i got intresting comment.. Same thinking as Nikki.. Really like to see how well u write happy and passionate One Shot lol.. Please write one if possible 😳 😆 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: a4aarsh

Sadist...😡,i'm literally in tears,my current condition 😭,But u r an awesome writer,each and evry word of ur's falls right on my heart,very well done my dear 👍🏼



Thank you dear🤗 sorry for making u all cry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu24

Firstly, Vibha, you are an amazing writer 👏. I have read few of your other stories too.

Coming to the current one, you have brought out the true sense of Veera, Baldev and the feel of Veeba so nicely that it made me cry😭. It was a bit heartwrenching as the "Pyaar ki jodi" juda hui...💔

I read it thrice to understand though...laga koi Hollywood ki script thi 😆

Do write more and thanks for the PM 😊



Thanks so much Vindhya🤗😃 sure i'll write another soon and sorry that it was so much confusing😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Man, everytime I read your writing ... words fail me 😕. I think the Oxford English Dictionary, needs to be updated so that I can praise your work, the way it deserves to be praised!

Navina🤗 every time i write an OS, yours is the comment i always wait to read 😉😃
(Since I can't wait for the new version😆), let's go with OUTSTANDING! 👏👏 Thank you so much buddy!!
I'm always in awe whenever anyone writes from the Protagonist's Point-Of-View ... and when u did it, it took me into another world 😳.aww, i actually love writing this way..putting myself into the shoes of the protagonist and feeling what they feel😳
This part really made me cringe ...I wanted to make this particular part as creepy as possible and i think i succeeded! 🥳
Worms, tiny prickly worms were crawling through my skin and blood, or so it seemed. The wrecker of my life or should I say our life, took absolute glee in touching me, running his hand on my face and upper arm.
The end was not surprising , I kinda felt that Veera will kill herself ... because that's the destiny of soul-mates; 1 cannot survive without the other.yup!👍🏼 in VeeBa's love story, they are like flame and wick, one burning the other but not able to exist without each other❤️
Superb OS and needless to say - Spectacular writing 👍🏼!!
Thanks for the PM 🤗 .shouldn't I be the one saying thanks?😉 because despite not being familiar with the show or the couple, you read my creation every time and give me so much support🤗 that means so much to me really 😳
PS -
(yes i looove writing stories with a sad/tragic ending😈)
I know 🤣 .haha😆



Thanks Navina🤗 🤗 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki36

Your the queen of writing sad and tragic fanfics and you write them so well, with so much emotion and empathy you can feel the pain of the characters. Luved it.

Would like to read a happy, passionate oneshot and see how well u write those ( lol) thats a hint for you to write another one.



Thanks a lot Nikki😃 I'm grinning really wide like that emo now..lol😳
actually i began my quest in this forum with happy, cheesy romantic stories but not many read them, so i went back to what i like most😉 making people 😭😆
i do have plans for a Vday special..lets see😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

was just getting bore and thought to read the comments on ur OS Vibha 😆 😛 and here i got intresting comment.. Same thinking as Nikki.. Really like to see how well u write happy and passionate One Shot lol.. Please write one if possible 😳 😆 😛



one of my ISS asks me something and main na bolun aisa nahi ho sakta🤗😳 i do have a Valentines day special in mind😃 i can't promise that it will be good to read😆 but yes it'll be a romantic and a happy ending wali story❤️😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..IshqShava..



one of my ISS asks me something and main na bolun aisa nahi ho sakta🤗😳 i do have a Valentines day special in mind😃 i can't promise that it will be good to read😆 but yes it'll be a romantic and a happy ending wali story❤️😃

yaay.. I'll love to read VDay special 😳 and i know it will be great to read bcz u write so well.. ⭐️ will be waiting for ur VDay special story 😃 😛

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