My VEEBA POLAND OS Col.:OS-4:~YOU Belong To ME..~Prt2(FINALE),pg19.. - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

Awsmmm

Originally posted by: krock

Wow tj it was lovely hope serial main bhi yeh scen ho.
The way veera cared for hin and shirtless baluu sighh it was intense.i love last line he need to be near her to survie it was really good update

Originally posted by: sladjana333

Nice update.

Originally posted by: sunny303

Awww bichara Ballu...he's fighting with himself...come on Veera just admit it gurrrl!!!

Loved the story bud, amazing once again:)))

Originally posted by: anuramesh26

Oh Goodness! Part 2 so soon? Raat ko soiyi thi?😆 Superb update dear! Awww... She couldn't stand him getting hurt and went after him on an unsaddled horse? This kind of stuff shld happen in the episode. I mean - baldev hurt and Veera being disturbed bcos of that will bring out some of her feelings and ofcourse she wld question herself. 🤗 Shitless balu😈 -abhi mar dalogi kya?😉

The last part was sooo awesome - reminds of the intense, calm and composed Baldev (too much to handle)😉. And yes once again being true to the original track- baldev trying not to break the friendship bond, disturbed by her closeness yet doesn't want to cross his limits. All of this written and presented in your style.

Thanks once again for taking us to Veeba wala Poland😉

Originally posted by: niki795

nice update

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

sina joh hum veeba fans show mein dekhna chahte hein aur cv's nahi dikhate voh tum hume tumari os ke dariya dekha deti ho

everyone tells its nice awesome wonderful hot yahi words aata hein sab ko likhne keliye but u really take us into veebaland with ur writings hats off girl

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Aww bichara baldev. y cant veera confess her love 😡

mind blowing update...🥳 thank you...😳

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

fabulous os!

the end was really touching...loved it!

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

This was just brilliant!

So heart touching, the way Bakdev bears everything to just be near his Sherni😳

Loved your OS 😊