My VEEBA POLAND OS Col.:OS-4:~YOU Belong To ME..~Prt2(FINALE),pg19..

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Great story!😊

When are you updating your older FFs? I love that you continue to give us such great stories...but don't forget about your earlier works. Your readers are eagerly waiting for conclusions of those stories.

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Wow tj it was lovely hope serial main bhi yeh scen ho.
The way veera cared for hin and shirtless baluu sighh it was intense.i love last line he need to be near her to survie it was really good update

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awww bichara Ballu...he's fighting with himself...come on Veera just admit it gurrrl!!!

Loved the story bud, amazing once again:)))

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Oh Goodness! Part 2 so soon? Raat ko soiyi thi?😆 Superb update dear! Awww... She couldn't stand him getting hurt and went after him on an unsaddled horse? This kind of stuff shld happen in the episode. I mean - baldev hurt and Veera being disturbed bcos of that will bring out some of her feelings and ofcourse she wld question herself. 🤗 Shitless balu😈 -abhi mar dalogi kya?😉

The last part was sooo awesome - reminds of the intense, calm and composed Baldev (too much to handle)😉. And yes once again being true to the original track- baldev trying not to break the friendship bond, disturbed by her closeness yet doesn't want to cross his limits. All of this written and presented in your style.

Thanks once again for taking us to Veeba wala Poland😉

Edited by anuramesh26 - 11 years ago

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

sina joh hum veeba fans show mein dekhna chahte hein aur cv's nahi dikhate voh tum hume tumari os ke dariya dekha deti ho

everyone tells its nice awesome wonderful hot yahi words aata hein sab ko likhne keliye but u really take us into veebaland with ur writings hats off girl

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Radhika

@Radhika03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Aww bichara baldev. y cant veera confess her love 😡

mind blowing update...🥳 thank you...😳

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: princy48
res..will unres after 12am😳

Princy ki bachchi!!!😡😡😡Abhi bhi unres nahi kya!!!😭Main aur teri req nai sunungi!😡😒

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

fabulous os!

the end was really touching...loved it!

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

This was just brilliant!

So heart touching, the way Bakdev bears everything to just be near his Sherni😳

Loved your OS 😊

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ElireEli
Finally I was able to read the story in one go...And all I can say is that I was just mesmerized...thank you for this story dear🤗...OMG your stories are becoming so amazing day by day...I could so well imagine the scene being enacted in front of my eyes. Veera's concern and trepidation when Baldev was riding the wild horse was beautifully portrayed...in fact along with Veera I too was tensed what would happen...the way she confronted Neil sir after they returned......and then in the cottage☺️...the intensity was superb...and I really love how you are making it so sensuous without any one of them crossing the limits. I just loved it...bas..no more essays...Amazing, superb,stupendous...ebar dictionary niye boste hobe😕...porer story kobe asbe??😳 You were supposed to write on the Kupala right? Am waiting...till then let me drool over his musky scented shirtless Baldeva...
P.S. Sorry for not commenting earlier...but logged in at midnight just to post this reply😆 So I think I can be forgiven😆

Awww!Thank u so much!!!Dis one for such a big and delicious comment!!!And dis 1 for logging in so late for me!Love u so much!!!😳