My VEEBA POLAND OS Col.:OS-4:~YOU Belong To ME..~Prt2(FINALE),pg19.. - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Awww!Thank u so much!!!Dis one for such a big and delicious comment!!!And dis 1 for logging in so late for me!Love u so much!!!😳


OMG I just loved the emoticons...😆..they are hilarious...thank you dear and love u too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: kinkinikki

Suddenly the temperature in the room seemed to have raised by notches


Thats what happened to me when I read ur shirtless baldev bit 😉

I thought vthis story was great. Now go and write another one , I hope you have veeba flu for a long time! I hear there is currently no vaccination for it. Lol.



😳So glad u r enjoyn da side effects of my Veeba flu!🤗Nd I hope u seriously wnt get tored soon as more stories r gonna be forced onto u!Nd last but not da least thank u so much for kipn me going wid such awesome comments everytym!Love u Nikki!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Oh Gosh! That was so romantic and touchy! Poor Baldev got hurt and Veera is so tensed! I love how she was blaming herself for wht happen to Dev! This line is beautiful...


"Because if it broke he would lose all means of getting close to her..And he did not want that..He could not survive if something like that happened..Being near her in any way was his soul means of survival now..And if for that he had to fight his inner demons he would do just that.."

This can happen in the show too...baldev would never break his friendship wid veera! So he would have to fight wid his inner self!



😳Thank u so much Muna!!!Ur request ones r cumn up too!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhakhan

nice one

ok so he is controlling his feelings
thanks for this os



Thank u so much dear!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

The end? What does that mean? U have to write more di. Oh god. I loved the way veera yelled at neil. The save by baldeva!haye haye! And trust me i was imagining the shirt removal scene! Now i sure wont get any sleep. Good one di!



Awww dnt worry sweet sis!Although it's da end of dis one dere r more continuations coming..😉Odr OSs following!Keep readn to know more!Love u so much!😃❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TasriS

Amazing update...I simply loved it.



Thank u so much!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..

Finished it in one breathe!! It was dreamy, and perfect . I am quite sure that they are definitely not gonna show it in the show because then all the VeeBa fans worldwide will be dead!!😳 But I so expected a kiss at the end!!! Eta tumi thik korlana!! 😔



😆M sure we will die!But I wish to die!😭😆Kiss?Eto taratari na!😉M goin in da serial line hence still no kiss yet!Let's see if I cn force dm to kiss!😳😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neetu2825

Great story!😊

When are you updating your older FFs? I love that you continue to give us such great stories...but don't forget about your earlier works. Your readers are eagerly waiting for conclusions of those stories.



Awww!😆I know m being a lazy lump!I will update aftr m done wid dese new OSs..Maybe dis Saturday or Sunday..😳

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