My VEEBA POLAND OS Col.:OS-4:~YOU Belong To ME..~Prt2(FINALE),pg19..

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Bravehearts

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Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Gosh kya tha yeh uff so romantic
It was hawttt.i loved how cutely she hugged him and nuzzled at his chest and demanded to pic her up.
Veera such naughty girl bichra baldev control to loose hona hi tha.
It was really sxy and romntic.
Loved it .
Ufff ab yeh dimag se niklega nahi.

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

omg..i'm dead🤢..wat was that😡..why do u try new new things t kill me lyk this😭..nw i want u cntinue it pata nahi kaise😕..par plzz continue it😭😭

sina plz meri ardaas suno na😭

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: kinkinikki
Ha ha she also fell asleep, loved the update and it was just the right amount of hotness! !

And dont get disheartened if u aren't getting as many comments, people are probably just being lazy, dont stop updating , because people like me love to read your stories

We look forward to getting your pm's

Stay happy 😛

I second this!

Even when I'm away from IF I can't stay away from your stories...(I get the email prompt that you PM'd me)...Sometimes I silently read your update without signing on cuz it's addictive LOL...but this doesn't happen too often cuz yur stories are awesome bud😃

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Ballu is always hot!😆Its just dt onsceen we cant read his 🤬 thoughts..I m just translating dm!😉

LOL...and I love you for it😃🤗

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

temperature at dangerous level,cant put into words abt my present condition.ballu...naughty☺️

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: princy48
omg..i'm dead🤢..wat was that😡..why do u try new new things t kill me lyk this😭..nw i want u cntinue it pata nahi kaise😕..par plzz continue it😭😭
sina plz meri ardaas suno na😭

Continue it?!!😲🤔Hmmm...Y do I always giv in to dese..😡😆Lemme see if I cn..😳Nd I hate da word ardaas dese days!🤢Reminds me of sm1🤢..But yes bout dis story..🤔

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taararose

@taararose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Enjoyed all yr Poland stories. I ways eagerly wait for new stories or updates from u ;)

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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Continue it?!!😲🤔Hmmm...Y do I always giv in to dese..😡😆Lemme see if I cn..😳Nd I hate da word ardaas dese days!🤢Reminds me of sm1🤢..But yes bout dis story..🤔

waiting😳

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Ok So I am very very late!!😔 But I am sorry I wanted to enjoy your stories and not read them in a rush and hence bookmarked it for later😛...Ok... Wow Tehsina!!!! This was so amazing...let me comment separately on both the OS:

OS-3 Moth to the FLAME: Awesome. Just loved how you integrated the original story in your story with both of them fighting their feelings and confused about the other's reaction. The final part was so hot..☺️ and so beautifully you used the song to describe the situation...and finally he fell asleep😆...this is so typically Baldev style...just mind blowing ending.👏

OS-4 You belong to me: You know 'Everything I do" is very close to my heart and I am so glad you used it🤗...You beautifully portrayed what both of them were thinking...I am so sure Baldev had the same thoughts even in the show though we did not get a glimpse into his thoughts...😆...and Sahil🤣 how did he even think of dropping her off at the cottage...'Meri kudi nu mere paas chadhdh de'....😆 he admitted that she is his girl😳 ...loved it and back at the cottage...☺️...finally the long awaited kiss that was long due and how hot it was☺️...and finally Veera proved that she is his perfect soul mate and feel asleep herself😆 Though I am happy she feel asleep😉..coz otherwise I wouldn't have been able to handle the hotness that would have ensued..☺️...

Thank you Tehsina for the wonderful set of stories🤗 Such a treasure and I am sure I will keep coming back to them to re-read them when I am bored...😳

And sorry sorry for not commenting before...😳...Love you dear...🤗

Edited by ElireEli - 12 years ago