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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation:part 5

Next morning gujan wakes up and sees her hands for mehendis colour ...she gets happy seeing the dark colour and remembers ranvi

veera:oh ho bhabi ...aapki mehendi ka rang toh kitna gehra hain
gunjan gets ready ...nd while walking through the corridor flower petals fall on her...she looks up to see ranvi throwing petals on her...ranvi smiles looking at her...the stool trips ... ranvi falls nd he pulls gunjan along😉...both fall down (gunjan on top of ranvi)...he grabs her tightly...following this a basket of flowers fall on them from the shelf above

she opens her eyes nd asks him concerned

gunjan:tu theek toh hai na ranvi
ranvi just nods his head in a yes
they share a eyelock😳

she strts removing petals from his hair while he is busy gazing his wife...his phone strts ringing..he is least bothered abt it
gunjan:ranvi phone aa raha hai

ranvi looking dreamily at her nd says:haa gunjan
she hits him on chest and says phone ranvi...
he comes back to his senses nd leaves her
she gets up ...adjusts her hair nd leaves
ranvi attends the call

haldi ceremony:

The haldi ceremony had begun...ranvi busy attending the guests

gunju gets all decked up and is getting down stairs with a bowl of turmeric ...and her anklets(payal) making lovely sounds...the sounds distracts ranvi nd he turns to see gunjan coming up to him...
he is just awestruck at her beauty and looks at her from top to bottom
he sees that she wore the payal that he has gifted her...
gunjan comes to him nd makes sound with her bangles ...he is back to his senses and smiles at her

gunjan:ranvi main kaise lag rahi hoon

ranvi:tu badi soni lag rahi hai gunjan...par

gunjan:par kya ranvi??

ranvi:kuch kami lag rahi hai ...and adjusts her maang tika
gunjan smiles back

the haldi ceremony in progress
gunjan applies haldi to the would be bride
beeji asks veera to get something from upstairs but gunjan volunteers to go
ranvi finds this oppurtunity to meet her...he grabs a small bowl of turmeric paste and goes upstairs
gunjan goes to wash her hands nd then she too goes upstairs

Ranvi pulls her into the room and closes the door
gunjan about to shout...ranvi closes her mouth with his hand
ranvi:gunjan mein ranvi

gunjan:ranvi tuu tune toh menu dara dala...kya baat hai

ranvi:gunjan hamari shaadi jin halaton mein hui hain hum sab rasm nibha nahi paaye...iss haldi ke rasm mein main tenu sabse pehle haldi lagaana chahtaa hoon
gunjan just smiles...he understands her gesture and he takes some turmeric paste in his hands and applies to her arms

he then reaches her neck removes the strands of hair covering her neck nd face
he smears some turmeric gently over her neck...she closes her eyes
he then applies haldi to her rosy cheeks which hav now turned all red😳
finally he applies some to her nose tip
ranvi:gunjan ab tu menu lagyegi and he turns to look the bowl empty
haldi hogayi

gunjan:koi baat nahi ranvi...main lagadoongi tenu

ranvi:par kaise gunjan
she moves closer to him and rubs her cheeks with his cheek
gunjan says innocently:daadi chub rahi hai ranvi
they both hav a laugh

he again gets lost in her as she looks even more beautiful with haldi on her face...
eyelock
he comes even more close nd now they r only inch away...he could feel her heartbeat rising...he sees that her pink glossy lips are shivering due the close proximity...he is about to kiss her but she puts her hand on his lips and kisses it

her cheeks are adorned with deep color of crimson ...she opens the door and runs away

and he just stands there all smiling nd blushing😳

To be continued...









Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u r fab fabbi. 😆 😳 i just cant say in words hw much admiration u make me give to ur os.as well as ranjan.. it gives such a pleasure to c them like tis as they arent showing it in d show. its lovely .👏 plz continue buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh ma Ranvi haar gaya..😭
OS is gettng really interestng...😉
Gud wrk Fabbi...Continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww the last seen was romantic waisa thanks fardee for writing Ranjan OS just loving the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vckavs

u r fab fabbi. 😆 😳 i just cant say in words hw much admiration u make me give to ur os.as well as ranjan.. it gives such a pleasure to c them like tis as they arent showing it in d show. its lovely .👏 plz continue buddy.


aww thats soo sweet kavs😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashitaiyer

Oh ma Ranvi haar gaya..😭
OS is gettng really interestng...😉
Gud wrk Fabbi...Continue...


ohh dont feel bad kavs
in the next two parts ranvi will get what he wants😉
Edited by fardee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Shivinholic

Aww the last seen was romantic waisa thanks fardee for writing Ranjan OS just loving the story


and i thank u for spending time on reading my os and writing ur review😃
thank u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fardee


thank u bolon for ur valuable comment😛😉








Valuble comment🤢🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: bolonsona



Valuble comment🤢🤢


haa u ppl r spending time reading and commenting abt it
sooo i vaule all ur comments
koi shak???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
very interesting part..love d way d story is progressing...
btw fardee dis is not an os its a ss!!!😉

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